| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1180 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 11.02% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1180 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "echoes" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "quickened" | | 12 | "tracing" | | 13 | "racing" | | 14 | "synchronized" | | 15 | "loomed" | | 16 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1177 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.14% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1157 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.04 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Rory | 12 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 0.981 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 61.76% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like bleached bone" | | 1 | "looked like open mouths, their petals cur" | | 2 | "sounded like a child, but the pitch was wr" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.85 | | wordCount | 1177 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the trees, but from the ground" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 26.16 | | std | 17.14 | | cv | 0.655 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 45 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | |
| 70.55% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "were emerging" | | 1 | "were drumming" | | 2 | "wasn't coming" | | 3 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 8 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "No wind stirred the leaves; no birds called from the canopy." | | 1 | "It didn't echo; the forest swallowed the sound instantly, leaving a void that felt wider than before." | | 2 | "As she moved, she caught a flicker of movement—a smudge of charcoal grey darting behind a wide trunk." | | 3 | "But the fog didn't roll; it crawled." | | 4 | "It sounded like a child, but the pitch was wrong—too wide, sliding from a giggle to a guttural rasp in a single breath." | | 5 | "It wasn't the gentle warmth of a portal; it was a warning." | | 6 | "They didn't grab; they just tapped." | | 7 | "It opened like a lidless eye, the iris a bright, piercing blue—exactly the color of her own." | | 8 | "They didn't move with haste; they moved with a slow, inevitable certainty." | | 9 | "They didn't fall; they unfolded like the legs of a spider." | | 10 | "It was no longer a necklace; it was a garrote, pulling tight against her throat." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1163 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03697334479793637 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01117798796216681 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 9.65 | | std | 5.76 | | cv | 0.597 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 36.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.19672131147540983 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 30.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the standing stones, now" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 56.36% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "It sat heavy and humid," | | 1 | "She checked her watch." | | 2 | "It lingered in the air," | | 3 | "She had come for the" | | 4 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 5 | "It pressed against her eardrums" | | 6 | "She reached up and gripped" | | 7 | "It remained cold." | | 8 | "It didn't echo; the forest" | | 9 | "It was faint, like fingernails" | | 10 | "She tilted her head back." | | 11 | "It wasn't a leaf." | | 12 | "It was a piece of" | | 13 | "She felt a sudden, prickly" | | 14 | "It clung to the ground" | | 15 | "It sounded like a child," | | 16 | "She forced her breathing to" | | 17 | "She turned to head back" | | 18 | "She didn't look." | | 19 | "She stepped forward, pushing through" |
| | ratio | 0.409 | |
| 5.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 100 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped over the boundary" | | 1 | "The air in the Fae" | | 2 | "It sat heavy and humid," | | 3 | "Wildflowers, vivid and unnatural in" | | 4 | "She checked her watch." | | 5 | "The second hand jerked once," | | 6 | "Rory exhaled, a plume of" | | 7 | "It lingered in the air," | | 8 | "She had come for the" | | 9 | "The Grove promised a sanctuary" | | 10 | "A sharp snap echoed from" | | 11 | "Rory spun around." | | 12 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 13 | "The forest stood still." | | 14 | "The silence wasn't a lack" | | 15 | "It pressed against her eardrums" | | 16 | "She reached up and gripped" | | 17 | "It remained cold." | | 18 | "The word felt too loud." | | 19 | "It didn't echo; the forest" |
| | ratio | 0.909 | |
| 45.45% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "If time moved differently here," |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't echo; the forest swallowed the sound instantly, leaving a void that felt wider than before." | | 1 | "It clung to the ground in long, finger-like tendrils that reached toward her ankles." | | 2 | "The fog had risen, swirling around her waist, obscuring her view of her own feet." | | 3 | "It didn't have a face, only a smooth, featureless surface that reflected Rory’s terrified expression back at her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the tree whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |