| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1152 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 13.19% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1152 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "echoing" | | 9 | "dancing" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "desire" | | 12 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.29% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1148 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "We are early, Nyx whispered, their voice a dry rustle of dead leaves against stone." | | 1 | "The guest brings the heat of excess, she said, her voice melodic and unsettling." | | 2 | "Follow the scent of overripe fruit and rot, Isolde said, stepping forward." | | 3 | "This is Dymas, Nyx murmured, their voice sounding clearer here, as if the realm of shadow amplified their existence." | | 4 | "Watch your step, Rory, Nyx warned, pointing to the periphery of the path." | | 5 | "Discovery is a heavy burden, Isolde said, her eyes fixed on the dark tunnel ahead." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1148 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.96 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 11 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Nyx | 6 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | London | 3 | | Seer | 2 | | Dymas | 3 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Dymas" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 97.95% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 45.92 | | std | 22.63 | | cv | 0.493 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 99 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 78 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 68 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 83 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 85 |
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| 87.72% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "was made" | | 1 | "been carved" | | 2 | "is paved" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "was like walking" | | 1 | "was pulsing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "She took a step, and where her feet touched the earth, the grass remained undisturbed—no bent blades, no displaced soil." | | 1 | "This was it—the thin place." | | 2 | "Dymas does not give; it only consumes." | | 3 | "The air didn’t just smell like fruit; it was thick with the cloying, fermented stench of decaying grapes and honey." | | 4 | "It wasn't just static; it was sentient, hungry." | | 5 | "The silence was the worst part—a heavy, suffocating quiet that made the sound of her own shallow breathing feel like a shout." | | 6 | "Despite the rot, despite the predatory shadows, there was a terrible magnificence here—a world that lived at the extreme edge of desire." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1161 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.024117140396210164 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012058570198105082 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 14.35 | | std | 6.78 | | cv | 0.473 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 42.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3375 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 84.39% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the world exploded into" | | 1 | "Everywhere they looked, there were" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "It pulsed against her collarbone," | | 2 | "She didn't turn as they" | | 3 | "She took a step, and" | | 4 | "We are early, Nyx whispered," | | 5 | "She didn’t like the way" | | 6 | "She reached into her pocket," | | 7 | "They pulsed with a bioluminescent" | | 8 | "It is a beautiful tomb," | | 9 | "She walked carefully, the Heartstone" | | 10 | "They have teeth." | | 11 | "It wasn't just static; it" | | 12 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 13 | "They approached a clearing where" | | 14 | "She had not touched a" | | 15 | "She held a wand of" | | 16 | "She thought of Cardiff, of" | | 17 | "She thought of the fear" | | 18 | "She offered that fear to" | | 19 | "She clutched the Fae blade," |
| | ratio | 0.291 | |
| 42.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The heavy iron gate of" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "It pulsed against her collarbone," | | 3 | "The shadows under the trees" | | 4 | "Isolde waited for them near" | | 5 | "She didn't turn as they" | | 6 | "She took a step, and" | | 7 | "We are early, Nyx whispered," | | 8 | "The Veil isn’t fully permeable" | | 9 | "Isolde turned, her pale lavender" | | 10 | "The guest brings the heat" | | 11 | "The threshold hungers for what" | | 12 | "Rory tightened her grip on" | | 13 | "She didn’t like the way" | | 14 | "She reached into her pocket," | | 15 | "The moonsilver blade felt unnaturally" | | 16 | "Isolde raised a hand toward" | | 17 | "The air began to warp," | | 18 | "This was it—the thin place." | | 19 | "The crack in the world" |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 63.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "To pass, you must leave" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 17.54% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed against her collarbone, a steady, rhythmic warmth that mirrored her own accelerated pulse." | | 1 | "Beside her, Nyx stood like a jagged tear in the fabric of the evening, their silhouette shifting and blurring as they moved past the park boundary." | | 2 | "The air began to warp, shimmering with a distortion that reminded Rory of heat haze rising off the pavement in mid-July." | | 3 | "They pulsed with a bioluminescent sap, dropping iridescent liquid that pooled on the ground in sluggish, glowing rivers." | | 4 | "This is Dymas, Nyx murmured, their voice sounding clearer here, as if the realm of shadow amplified their existence." | | 5 | "The ground here was made of cracked obsidian, inlaid with mosaics of gold and mother-of-pearl that depicted scenes of unending, gluttonous feasts." | | 6 | "A silver ring, tarnished and oxidized, lying near a patch of thorns that resembled ivory daggers." | | 7 | "Piles of exotic, shifting meats sat on silver platters, and goblets of wine bubbled as if still fermenting." | | 8 | "The amber light of the briar gate shivered and parted, revealing a narrow path that descended into a cavernous, wine-stained hollow beneath the vineyards." | | 9 | "Despite the rot, despite the predatory shadows, there was a terrible magnificence here—a world that lived at the extreme edge of desire." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |