Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8WG8AER8J72QKFYN34H53F

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Duration:
56.0s
Cost:
$0.000686
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The smell of ozone and rotting cabbage clung to the damp air of the abandoned Tube station. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a rusted turnstile, her boots clicking against the grime-slicked tiles. A single fluorescent bulb flickered overhead, casting rhythmic, jolting shadows across the platform. She stopped, her sharp jaw tightening as she surveyed the scene. In the center of the platform lay a man. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that cost more than Quinn’s annual pension, but his chest had been ripped open with surgical precision. No blood pooled on the concrete. Instead, a fine, iridescent powder shimmered in the open cavity of his torso, swirling slowly despite the lack of wind. Detective Miller stood over the body, his notebook open. He looked pale, his eyes darting toward the dark tunnel mouth. "Homicide," Miller muttered. "Looks like a ritual killing. Some cultist got lucky with a blade." Quinn ignored him. She leaned down, the worn leather watch on her left wrist ticking in the heavy silence. She didn't touch the body. She noticed the victim's fingers. They were curled tightly, clutching something. She used a pen to pry the hand open. A small, carved piece of yellowed bone rolled across the tile. "A bone token," Quinn murmured. Miller scoffed, shifting his weight. "Probably a trophy. The killer left a calling card. We’ve got two witnesses who saw a group of teenagers fleeing the Camden entrance. Probably some occult-obsessed kids playing dress-up." Quinn stood up, her military precision evident in the way she scanned the perimeter. She didn't look at the body; she looked at the dust. The iridescent powder wasn't just in the chest. It formed a perfect, unbroken circle around the victim, exactly three feet in diameter. "The witnesses saw them leaving," Quinn said. "But look at the dust, Miller." "It's glitter. Some weird drug or chemical." "It's a boundary." Quinn walked to the edge of the circle. She dropped a spent shell casing from her pocket. The brass hit the powder and bounced back violently, as if hitting a rubber wall. It skittered five feet away. Miller blinked, leaning in. "What the hell was that?" "The evidence doesn't add up. No blood. No footprints leading into the circle. No signs of a struggle." Quinn knelt again, her brown eyes narrowing. She spotted something glinting beneath the victim's shoulder. She reached out, her fingers grazing the cold concrete, and pulled out a small brass compass. The casing bore a heavy patina of verdigris, and the glass face was etched with jagged, protective sigils. The needle didn't point North. It spun in a frantic, clockwise blur. "A compass?" Miller leaned over her shoulder. "Maybe he was a hiker. Or a collector." "The needle is reacting to something," Quinn said. "And this isn't a standard crime scene. This is a doorway." "A doorway to where? It's a dead-end station, Harlow." Quinn stood and walked toward the tunnel. The air grew colder, smelling of old parchment and sulfur. She stopped where the light of the flickering bulb ended. On the wall, scratched into the soot, was a symbol: a weeping eye entwined with a serpent. "You see a ritual," Quinn said, her voice flat. "I see a transaction gone wrong." "A transaction? He's gutted!" "Look at the wound again." Miller looked. He frowned, squinting at the cavity in the man's chest. "It's clean. Too clean." "There are no jagged edges from a knife," Quinn observed. "The skin didn't tear; it dissolved. Someone didn't kill him for a god. They took something out of him." She held up the brass compass. The needle suddenly snapped still, pointing directly at the bone token on the floor. "The token is the key to the Veil Market," Quinn said. "The compass tracks the rifts. The victim wasn't a target. He was a courier. He was carrying something inside his chest that wasn't biological." Miller laughed, though it sounded nervous. "You're drifting into the weird stuff again, Harlow. Just like with Morris. This is a gang hit. The 'Market' is just a local legend for the Camden freaks." Quinn’s expression didn't flicker, but her hand tightened around the compass. The memory of Morris—the way his body had vanished into a seam of air three years ago—pulsed in her mind. "The legend doesn't leave iridescent powder that repels physical matter," Quinn replied. She walked back to the bone token and carefully bagged it. As she did, she noticed a smudge of red hair caught in the victim's cufflinks. A single, curly strand of vivid crimson. "We have our lead," Quinn said. "The teenagers?" "No. Someone who knows exactly how to open a door that isn't there." She looked down the tunnel. The darkness seemed to breathe, the shadows undulating like liquid. She felt a prickle on the back of her neck, the sensation of being watched by something that didn't have eyes. "Call the forensics team," Quinn ordered. "Tell them to bring an airtight container for the powder. And tell them not to step inside the circle." "Why?" "Because if that boundary collapses while they're standing in it, I don't think they'll come back in one piece." Miller opened his mouth to argue, then looked at the shell casing that had bounced off the dust. He stepped back, his face pale. Quinn stared at the compass. The needle began to spin again, faster this time, humming a low, vibrating frequency that rattled her teeth. She didn't see a crime scene anymore. She saw a map. The victim was a landmark, the token was a key, and the crimson hair was a trail. She turned toward the exit, her stride rhythmic and purposeful. "Where are you going?" Miller called out. "To find someone who reads books about things that shouldn't exist," Quinn said. She stepped over the turnstile, leaving the flickering light behind. As she emerged into the gray London drizzle, she felt the weight of the brass compass in her pocket. It felt warm, almost pulsing, as if it were heartbeat-syncing with her own. She didn't believe in magic, but she believed in evidence. And the evidence suggested that the city she served had a basement, and someone had just left the door unlocked.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.371
leniency0.743
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1040
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"tightly"
2"suddenly"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1040
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"standard"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"rhythmic"
2"shimmered"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"scanned"
6"perfect"
7"glinting"
8"etched"
9"standard"
10"flicker"
11"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences76
matches
0"felt a prickle"
86.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1038
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount715
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.66
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn19
Miller9
North1
Morris1
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
3"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.171
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if hitting a rubber wall"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1038
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"suggested that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean21.63
std17.79
cv0.823
sampleLengths
056
158
220
315
444
511
65
75
829
947
1013
117
123
1337
144
155
1618
1761
1815
1919
209
2144
2215
234
245
2512
264
2729
2820
2935
306
3128
3231
3312
3433
356
362
3713
3836
3925
401
4119
4224
4351
4410
457
4613
4772
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences76
matches
0"been ripped"
1"were curled"
2"was etched"
3"being watched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
55.39% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences98
ratio0.031
matches
0"She didn't look at the body; she looked at the dust."
1"\"The skin didn't tear; it dissolved. Someone didn't kill him for a god. They took something out of him.\""
2"The memory of Morris—the way his body had vanished into a seam of air three years ago—pulsed in her mind."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount719
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.031988873435326845
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.011126564673157162
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean10.59
std5.9
cv0.557
sampleLengths
017
115
213
311
49
523
66
720
89
911
103
1112
123
1316
145
155
166
179
1811
195
205
2129
2214
2311
248
2514
267
276
287
293
308
319
3215
335
344
355
3618
377
388
3916
4018
415
427
437
448
458
4611
479
487
4910
44.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.32653061224489793
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners32
51.28% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"Instead, a fine, iridescent powder"
ratio0.015
47.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences65
matches
0"She stopped, her sharp jaw"
1"He wore a tailored charcoal"
2"He looked pale, his eyes"
3"She leaned down, the worn"
4"She didn't touch the body."
5"She noticed the victim's fingers."
6"They were curled tightly, clutching"
7"She used a pen to"
8"She didn't look at the"
9"It formed a perfect, unbroken"
10"She dropped a spent shell"
11"It skittered five feet away."
12"She spotted something glinting beneath"
13"She reached out, her fingers"
14"It spun in a frantic,"
15"She stopped where the light"
16"He frowned, squinting at the"
17"She held up the brass"
18"She walked back to the"
19"She looked down the tunnel."
ratio0.431
13.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences65
matches
0"The smell of ozone and"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"A single fluorescent bulb flickered"
3"She stopped, her sharp jaw"
4"He wore a tailored charcoal"
5"Detective Miller stood over the"
6"He looked pale, his eyes"
7"Quinn ignored him."
8"She leaned down, the worn"
9"She didn't touch the body."
10"She noticed the victim's fingers."
11"They were curled tightly, clutching"
12"She used a pen to"
13"A small, carved piece of"
14"Miller scoffed, shifting his weight."
15"Quinn stood up, her military"
16"She didn't look at the"
17"The iridescent powder wasn't just"
18"It formed a perfect, unbroken"
19"Quinn walked to the edge"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The needle began to spin again, faster this time, humming a low, vibrating frequency that rattled her teeth."
1"It felt warm, almost pulsing, as if it were heartbeat-syncing with her own."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice flat"
35.71% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Miller muttered (mutter)"
1"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
2"Quinn observed (observe)"
3"Quinn ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.314
leniency0.629
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.229
77.9358%