| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 90.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1536 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.13% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1536 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "calculated" | | 1 | "gleaming" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "firmly" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "chaotic" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "pang" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "ensuring" | | 13 | "shattered" | | 14 | "traced" | | 15 | "familiar" | | 16 | "magnetic" | | 17 | "fractured" | | 18 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "knuckles turned white" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1531 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1531 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.59 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Lucien | 6 | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | You | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Marseille" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 98.45% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a localized heat wave, radiat" | | 1 | "looked like a man who had been shattered" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1531 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 42.53 | | std | 24.69 | | cv | 0.581 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 84 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 81 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 75 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 60 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 68 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 62 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 56 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 61 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 74 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 54 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 91 | | 35 | 16 |
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| 88.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "are supposed" | | 1 | "being hunted" | | 2 | "been shattered" | | 3 | "were muffled" | | 4 | "been denied" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 263 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "was waiting" | | 2 | "was being" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.057 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist prickle—a phantom itch that flared whenever her pulse hit a certain frantic pitch." | | 1 | "The sight of him—the man who brokered secrets for the city’s worst entities—fondling a stray cat while his own life hung in the balance of their past decisions, sent a sharp pang through Rory’s chest." | | 2 | "He didn't look at the mess of her life spread across the floor; he looked at her." | | 3 | "She saw the tremor in his fingers—barely a ripple—and it told her more than his words ever could." | | 4 | "She could push him away; she could take his cane and demand he leave; she could walk out the door and never look back." | | 5 | "He didn't wait for permission; he crowded her against the counter, his other hand finding the small of her back." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1539 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same raw, jagged exhaustion" |
| | adverbCount | 61 | | adverbRatio | 0.0396361273554256 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011046133853151396 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 14.58 | | std | 7.52 | | cv | 0.516 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 33.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.2857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Still arriving at hours when" | | 1 | "Of course she remembered." | | 2 | "Instead, she leaned into his" | | 3 | "Then show me, Lucien." |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 8.46% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned against the peeling" | | 1 | "He didn't offer a greeting." | | 2 | "He simply adjusted his obsidian" | | 3 | "She stayed braced against the" | | 4 | "You haven't changed much in" | | 5 | "He stepped forward, effectively crowding" | | 6 | "His height forced her to" | | 7 | "He didn't step inside, but" | | 8 | "He bridged the gap, his" | | 9 | "I didn't come to discuss" | | 10 | "I came because the currents" | | 11 | "You think showing up here" | | 12 | "You think you can just" | | 13 | "Her voice lacked the bite" | | 14 | "She stepped back, finally allowing" | | 15 | "He moved past her, his" | | 16 | "He bypassed the only clear" | | 17 | "You were busy hiding from" | | 18 | "He turned around, his movements" | | 19 | "He didn't look at the" |
| | ratio | 0.529 | |
| 46.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "The heavy deadbolts clicked in" | | 1 | "Rory pulled the door open," | | 2 | "The scent of stale cumin" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 4 | "He leaned against the peeling" | | 5 | "The ivory handle of his" | | 6 | "He didn't offer a greeting." | | 7 | "He simply adjusted his obsidian" | | 8 | "The hallway isn't the place" | | 9 | "Rory felt the crescent-shaped scar" | | 10 | "She stayed braced against the" | | 11 | "The proximity of him felt" | | 12 | "You haven't changed much in" | | 13 | "He stepped forward, effectively crowding" | | 14 | "His height forced her to" | | 15 | "He didn't step inside, but" | | 16 | "He bridged the gap, his" | | 17 | "Honesty hasn't served either of" | | 18 | "I didn't come to discuss" | | 19 | "I came because the currents" |
| | ratio | 0.827 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "If you wanted me to" | | 1 | "Because you’re being hunted again." | | 2 | "Now, someone has broken the" | | 3 | "If they found me, why" | | 4 | "Because I spent six months" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 35.23% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist prickle—a phantom itch that flared whenever her pulse hit a certain frantic pitch." | | 1 | "He bridged the gap, his eyes scanning the chaotic interior of the flat, his gaze skirting past the stacks of crumbling scrolls to land back on her face." | | 2 | "The sight of him—the man who brokered secrets for the city’s worst entities—fondling a stray cat while his own life hung in the balance of their past decisions,…" | | 3 | "You were busy hiding from ghosts in Cardiff, and I was busy maintaining the status quo of a city that would eat you alive if you stayed in the light." | | 4 | "She watched him, really watched him, noting the faint hollows beneath his cheekbones and the way he held his left shoulder, as if he carried a weight invisible …" | | 5 | "He was trying to occupy his hands, trying to keep from reaching for her." | | 6 | "He reached out, his hand hovering near her face before he finally committed, cupping her jaw." | | 7 | "The anger was still there, a hot coal in her gut, but it was being eclipsed by the terrifying, magnetic pull of the man who had promised to protect her only to …" | | 8 | "The physical pressure was a relief, an aching necessity that had been denied to them for too long." | | 9 | "She looked at the ivory handle of his cane, then up to the dark, impossible eye that held the secret of their shared ruin." | | 10 | "She shifted, her hand sliding up to the back of his neck, her fingers tangling in the slick hair she had dreamed of pulling in moments of pure, unfiltered frict…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |