Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8WGF9M27PWVCVZZ3XZXGBJ

Run Details

Duration:
10.3s
Cost:
$0.003077
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The heavy deadbolts clicked in rapid succession, a jagged rhythm of steel against metal. Rory pulled the door open, her palm still damp from the lukewarm dishwater she had been scrubbing for ten minutes. The scent of stale cumin drifted from the downstairs curry house, mingling with the sharp, dusty smell of Eva’s scattered research notes. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing. He leaned against the peeling wallpaper with a calculated ease, his charcoal suit absorbing the dim, flickering orange of the hallway bulb. The ivory handle of his cane caught the light, gleaming like a brittle bone. One amber eye tracked the movement of her throat while the pitch-black void of the other seemed to pull at the very air in the corridor. He didn't offer a greeting. He simply adjusted his obsidian cufflinks, the motion smooth and predatory. Move aside, Rory. The hallway isn't the place for a conversation of this weight. Rory felt the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist prickle—a phantom itch that flared whenever her pulse hit a certain frantic pitch. She stayed braced against the doorframe, her feet planted firmly on the threadbare carpet. The proximity of him felt like a localized heat wave, radiating from his shoulders and the scent of expensive sandalwood and something metallic, like ozone before a storm. You haven't changed much in six months, Lucien. Still arriving at hours when honest people are either sleeping or doing something better with their lives. He stepped forward, effectively crowding her threshold. His height forced her to crane her neck, and the sudden shift in gravity made her dizzy. He didn't step inside, but he didn't retreat either. He bridged the gap, his eyes scanning the chaotic interior of the flat, his gaze skirting past the stacks of crumbling scrolls to land back on her face. Honesty hasn't served either of us well, especially not in London. I didn't come to discuss the time, Aurora. I came because the currents shifted yesterday. Someone whispered your name in a room where names are supposed to remain buried. Ptolemy the tabby cat slinked out from behind a pile of textbooks, winding his tail around Lucien’s perfectly creased trouser leg. Lucien froze, his jaw tightening just enough to betray a flicker of annoyance, though he reached down to steady the creature with a gloved hand. The sight of him—the man who brokered secrets for the city’s worst entities—fondling a stray cat while his own life hung in the balance of their past decisions, sent a sharp pang through Rory’s chest. You think showing up here fixes the silence? You think you can just walk back into this flat and expect me to pivot? Her voice lacked the bite she intended. She stepped back, finally allowing the door to swing wide enough for him to enter. He moved past her, his cane clicking against the floorboards with rhythmic precision. He bypassed the only clear chair and stood by the window, looking out toward the glow of Brick Lane. The street lamps turned his platinum hair into a halo of frost. Silence was a mutual agreement, not a failure. You were busy hiding from ghosts in Cardiff, and I was busy maintaining the status quo of a city that would eat you alive if you stayed in the light. He turned around, his movements fluid and precise. He didn't look at the mess of her life spread across the floor; he looked at her. He caught her sleeve, his fingers brushing against her skin just above the scar. The contact was brief, a spark of electricity that made her muscles lock, but he withdrew before she could pull away. I didn't come to argue about what we failed to say. I came because the people following you aren't the ones you ran from, Rory. These are the ones who trade in things you can't outrun with a delivery bike and a sharp tongue. She crossed her arms, anchoring herself to the kitchen counter. The wood felt cold, grounding her. She watched him, really watched him, noting the faint hollows beneath his cheekbones and the way he held his left shoulder, as if he carried a weight invisible to everyone else. The attraction had always been a quiet, burning thing, buried under the logistics of survival, but with him standing in the cramped kitchen, it flared into something suffocating. You always did love the theatrics of a warning, Lucien. If you wanted me to listen, you should have started with why you actually left the bar that night. He laughed, a dry sound with no mirth in it. He walked to the shelf, picking up a heavy tome and running a gloved thumb over the spine. He was trying to occupy his hands, trying to keep from reaching for her. She saw the tremor in his fingers—barely a ripple—and it told her more than his words ever could. The truth is a luxury I stopped being able to afford when I realized who was waiting for you outside that flat. Do you remember the night in Marseille? The fire? Rory gripped the edge of the counter until her knuckles turned white. Of course she remembered. The smell of burning cedar, the way his hand had felt against her ribs as he pushed her through the back alley, the weight of the silver coin he’d pressed into her palm. She had spent years trying to scrub that memory from her skin, but it had stayed, a permanent stain. Why bring that back now? Because you’re being hunted again. And this time, there is no back alley to crawl through. He closed the distance between them in two long strides, his presence dominating the cramped space. He placed his cane on the table, the metallic clatter sounding like a gunshot in the quiet flat. He leaned in, his face inches from hers. The heterochromatic eyes were unreadable, a clash of fire and shadow. His skin was pale, smooth, and entirely too close. I’ve spent the last six months ensuring no one could track you. Every contact I had, every favor I owed, I spent it making sure you stayed ghost-white. Now, someone has broken the seal. Rory searched his face for the lie, for the manipulation she had learned to expect from a broker of his caliber. All she found was the same raw, jagged exhaustion that he usually kept hidden behind tailored suits and polished manners. He looked like a man who had been shattered and glued back together with spite. If they found me, why aren't you running? Why waste your time here if I'm already marked? He reached out, his hand hovering near her face before he finally committed, cupping her jaw. His thumb traced her lower lip, his touch cool and intoxicatingly familiar. The world narrowed down to the pressure of his palm and the scent of sand and secrets. Because I spent six months keeping you alive in my head, Rory. I’m not going to let a bunch of amateurs rewrite the ending. She stood frozen, the breath hitching in her throat. The anger was still there, a hot coal in her gut, but it was being eclipsed by the terrifying, magnetic pull of the man who had promised to protect her only to abandon her in the wreckage. She looked at his lips, then back up to the fractured depths of his eyes. You think you can just show up and become my savior again? He leaned down, his forehead resting against hers. His breath was shallow, shaky. I don't want to save you, Rory. I want to be the reason you survive. The air in the flat felt electrified. Outside, the sounds of Brick Lane were muffled by the thickness of the walls, leaving them in a private, claustrophobic vacuum. She could push him away; she could take his cane and demand he leave; she could walk out the door and never look back. Instead, she leaned into his touch, her fingers curling into the fine wool of his lapel. The fabric felt expensive, solid, real. You always did demand the impossible. He let out a long, ragged exhale, the first sign of his own composure finally fracturing. He didn't wait for permission; he crowded her against the counter, his other hand finding the small of her back. The physical pressure was a relief, an aching necessity that had been denied to them for too long. The impossible is the only thing we've ever been good at, Aurora. He didn't pull her closer, but the way he looked at her made the air shimmer. She felt the weight of his gaze, an invitation to a fight or a reconciliation she wasn't sure she could survive. She looked at the ivory handle of his cane, then up to the dark, impossible eye that held the secret of their shared ruin. She shifted, her hand sliding up to the back of his neck, her fingers tangling in the slick hair she had dreamed of pulling in moments of pure, unfiltered friction. Then show me, Lucien. Show me how we get out of this without burning everything down.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:06:36.092Z" 5/10/2026, 12:06:36 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1536
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"perfectly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1536
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"calculated"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"weight"
count4
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"firmly"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"pang"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"ensuring"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
14
word"traced"
count1
15
word"familiar"
count1
16
word"magnetic"
count1
17
word"fractured"
count1
18
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"calculated"
1"gleaming"
2"weight"
3"pulse"
4"firmly"
5"scanning"
6"chaotic"
7"flicker"
8"pang"
9"silence"
10"rhythmic"
11"unreadable"
12"ensuring"
13"shattered"
14"traced"
15"familiar"
16"magnetic"
17"fractured"
18"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
88.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1531
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1531
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Moreau1
Rory9
Lucien6
London1
Aurora2
Brick2
Lane2
Cardiff1
Marseille1
You7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"You"
places
0"London"
1"Aurora"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"Cardiff"
5"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
98.45% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a localized heat wave, radiat"
1"looked like a man who had been shattered"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1531
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"bring that back"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean42.53
std24.69
cv0.581
sampleLengths
056
184
214
363
425
561
640
781
823
966
1038
1160
1244
1375
1429
1560
1631
1768
185
1916
2062
2134
2256
2317
2445
2524
2661
2712
2813
2915
3074
316
3254
3312
3491
3516
88.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences105
matches
0"are supposed"
1"being hunted"
2"been shattered"
3"were muffled"
4"been denied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs263
matches
0"was trying"
1"was waiting"
2"was being"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences105
ratio0.057
matches
0"Rory felt the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist prickle—a phantom itch that flared whenever her pulse hit a certain frantic pitch."
1"The sight of him—the man who brokered secrets for the city’s worst entities—fondling a stray cat while his own life hung in the balance of their past decisions, sent a sharp pang through Rory’s chest."
2"He didn't look at the mess of her life spread across the floor; he looked at her."
3"She saw the tremor in his fingers—barely a ripple—and it told her more than his words ever could."
4"She could push him away; she could take his cane and demand he leave; she could walk out the door and never look back."
5"He didn't wait for permission; he crowded her against the counter, his other hand finding the small of her back."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1539
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same raw, jagged exhaustion"
adverbCount61
adverbRatio0.0396361273554256
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.011046133853151396
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean14.58
std7.52
cv0.516
sampleLengths
014
120
222
36
422
514
626
75
811
93
1011
1121
1214
1328
148
1517
167
1717
189
1928
2011
218
227
2314
2421
2525
2635
278
2815
297
3015
3113
3219
3312
348
3530
368
3717
3814
3921
4011
4114
4219
4310
446
4531
4628
4710
4819
4910
33.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences104
matches
0"Still arriving at hours when"
1"Of course she remembered."
2"Instead, she leaned into his"
3"Then show me, Lucien."
ratio0.038
8.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences104
matches
0"He leaned against the peeling"
1"He didn't offer a greeting."
2"He simply adjusted his obsidian"
3"She stayed braced against the"
4"You haven't changed much in"
5"He stepped forward, effectively crowding"
6"His height forced her to"
7"He didn't step inside, but"
8"He bridged the gap, his"
9"I didn't come to discuss"
10"I came because the currents"
11"You think showing up here"
12"You think you can just"
13"Her voice lacked the bite"
14"She stepped back, finally allowing"
15"He moved past her, his"
16"He bypassed the only clear"
17"You were busy hiding from"
18"He turned around, his movements"
19"He didn't look at the"
ratio0.529
46.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences104
matches
0"The heavy deadbolts clicked in"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"The scent of stale cumin"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"He leaned against the peeling"
5"The ivory handle of his"
6"He didn't offer a greeting."
7"He simply adjusted his obsidian"
8"The hallway isn't the place"
9"Rory felt the crescent-shaped scar"
10"She stayed braced against the"
11"The proximity of him felt"
12"You haven't changed much in"
13"He stepped forward, effectively crowding"
14"His height forced her to"
15"He didn't step inside, but"
16"He bridged the gap, his"
17"Honesty hasn't served either of"
18"I didn't come to discuss"
19"I came because the currents"
ratio0.827
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences104
matches
0"If you wanted me to"
1"Because you’re being hunted again."
2"Now, someone has broken the"
3"If they found me, why"
4"Because I spent six months"
ratio0.048
35.23% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences73
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Rory felt the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist prickle—a phantom itch that flared whenever her pulse hit a certain frantic pitch."
1"He bridged the gap, his eyes scanning the chaotic interior of the flat, his gaze skirting past the stacks of crumbling scrolls to land back on her face."
2"The sight of him—the man who brokered secrets for the city’s worst entities—fondling a stray cat while his own life hung in the balance of their past decisions,…"
3"You were busy hiding from ghosts in Cardiff, and I was busy maintaining the status quo of a city that would eat you alive if you stayed in the light."
4"She watched him, really watched him, noting the faint hollows beneath his cheekbones and the way he held his left shoulder, as if he carried a weight invisible …"
5"He was trying to occupy his hands, trying to keep from reaching for her."
6"He reached out, his hand hovering near her face before he finally committed, cupping her jaw."
7"The anger was still there, a hot coal in her gut, but it was being eclipsed by the terrifying, magnetic pull of the man who had promised to protect her only to …"
8"The physical pressure was a relief, an aching necessity that had been denied to them for too long."
9"She looked at the ivory handle of his cane, then up to the dark, impossible eye that held the secret of their shared ruin."
10"She shifted, her hand sliding up to the back of his neck, her fingers tangling in the slick hair she had dreamed of pulling in moments of pure, unfiltered frict…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.6281%