| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1154 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1154 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "oppressive" | | 2 | "synthetic" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "intensity" | | 6 | "racing" | | 7 | "glint" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "profound" | | 10 | "spectral" | | 11 | "calculating" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.49% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1151 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.27% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 958 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.77 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 17 | | London | 2 | | Underground | 1 | | Sergeant | 1 | | Miller | 7 | | Morris | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Sergeant" | | 4 | "Miller" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.613 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like the result of a fall or a str" | | 1 | "It was as if the man had simply materialized three feet above the ground and fallen straight down" | | 2 | "something like this once before, three years" | | 3 | "geometries that seemed to shift if she looked at them too long" | | 4 | "felt like she finally had the map to fi" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.869 | | wordCount | 1151 | | matches | | 0 | "not of a hand, but of a shoe" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 35.97 | | std | 26.73 | | cv | 0.743 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 78 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 88 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 75 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 40 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 88 |
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| 71.15% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "was dressed" | | 1 | "been scorched" | | 2 | "was vitrified" | | 3 | "was etched" | | 4 | "were treated" | | 5 | "were involved" | | 6 | "been murdered" | | 7 | "been discarded" |
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| 75.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't pointing" | | 1 | "was spinning" | | 2 | "was chasing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.098 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't like the smell—it wasn't just the typical subterranean rot of the London Underground; there was a metallic tang to it, something sharp and electric that made the hair on her arms stand up." | | 1 | "She didn't look at the body; she looked at the dust." | | 2 | "The brick wasn't burned; it was vitrified, turned into a smooth, dark glass that reflected the flickering overhead lights." | | 3 | "Instead of cardinal directions, the dial was etched with protective sigils—strange, interlocking geometries that seemed to shift if she looked at them too long." | | 4 | "She was thinking of the rumors she'd been chasing for months—the whispers of a \"Veil Market,\" a place where the laws of physics were treated as suggestions and where the city's occult underbelly traded in things that shouldn't exist." | | 5 | "She moved closer to the glass-like surface and noticed a smudge—a partial print, not of a hand, but of a shoe." | | 6 | "He hadn't been murdered in a struggle; he had been discarded." | | 7 | "For the first time in years, Quinn didn't feel like she was chasing a ghost; she felt like she finally had the map to find one." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 964 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.029045643153526972 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01037344398340249 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 14.04 | | std | 9.09 | | cv | 0.648 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 52.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3902439024390244 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "More importantly, there was no" | | 1 | "Instead of cardinal directions, the" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 56.36% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't like the smell—it" | | 1 | "He was a career policeman" | | 2 | "She walked past him, her" | | 3 | "She stopped three feet from" | | 4 | "He wasn't a transient." | | 5 | "She didn't look at the" | | 6 | "It was as if the" | | 7 | "She glanced at her left" | | 8 | "She was forty minutes behind" | | 9 | "She reached into the victim's" | | 10 | "It was a piece of" | | 11 | "She had seen something like" | | 12 | "She began to pace the" | | 13 | "Her eyes caught a glint" | | 14 | "She reached in and pulled" | | 15 | "It was a compass, though" | | 16 | "She held the compass in" | | 17 | "It was spinning slowly, erratically," | | 18 | "She was thinking of the" | | 19 | "She had suspected a certain" |
| | ratio | 0.409 | |
| 28.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off" | | 2 | "She didn't like the smell—it" | | 3 | "Detective Sergeant Miller was already" | | 4 | "He was a career policeman" | | 5 | "Miller said, gesturing toward the" | | 6 | "Quinn didn't answer." | | 7 | "She walked past him, her" | | 8 | "She stopped three feet from" | | 9 | "The man lay sprawled across" | | 10 | "The man was dressed in" | | 11 | "He wasn't a transient." | | 12 | "There should have been a" | | 13 | "Quinn said, her voice a" | | 14 | "Quinn knelt, the fabric of" | | 15 | "She didn't look at the" | | 16 | "A fine layer of gray" | | 17 | "It was as if the" | | 18 | "She glanced at her left" | | 19 | "She was forty minutes behind" |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 51.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Sergeant Miller was already there, standing beside a perimeter of yellow tape that looked absurdly bright against the oppressive gray of the tunnels." | | 1 | "Morris had disappeared into a void that shouldn't have existed, leaving behind nothing but a lingering scent of ozone and a similar piece of carved bone." | | 2 | "The brick wasn't burned; it was vitrified, turned into a smooth, dark glass that reflected the flickering overhead lights." | | 3 | "Instead of cardinal directions, the dial was etched with protective sigils—strange, interlocking geometries that seemed to shift if she looked at them too long." | | 4 | "She turned away from the body, her mind already calculating the coordinates, her gaze fixed on the dark, yawning mouth of the tunnel that led deeper into the be…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn said, her voice a low, controlled rasp" | | 1 | "Quinn said, her voice hardening" | | 2 | "Quinn ordered, her voice snapping back to its military precision" |
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| 13.64% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Miller suggested (suggest)" | | 2 | "Quinn ordered (order)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.273 | |