Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8WQA1CQ3KDRV7FVFXK4B04

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Duration:
3m 2s
Cost:
$0.000637
Provider:
DekaLLM

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gravel path of Richmond Park vanished beneath a carpet of emerald moss. Aurora stepped past the twin sentinel oaks, the boundary stones that marked the entrance to the Grove. The transition felt like a sudden shift in altitude, a heavy pressure settling against her eardrums. The ambient noise of London—the distant hum of traffic, the occasional siren, the rustle of wind through common park trees—died instantly. In its place came a silence so absolute it felt physical. She adjusted the strap of her bag, her fingers brushing the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant. The crimson gem sat heavy against her chest. Under the silver-blue light of the moon, the gemstone flickered with a faint, internal pulse. The wildflowers here ignored the seasons. They bloomed in a riot of colors that seemed to vibrate against the dark soil. Pale, translucent bells hung from low-slung branches, and thick, fleshy petals of indigo and bruised gold sprawled across the ground. They did not sway in the wind, because there was no wind. Instead, they shuddered. Each blossom twitched with a rhythmic, slow-motion tremor, as if the plants themselves breathed. Aurora walked deeper into the clearing. Her boots sank into the soft earth, making no sound. She reached up to rub the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she could not shake. The skin felt tight. The light in the Grove behaved erratically. Shadows pooled in the hollows of tree roots, but they did not stretch away from the moon. They bunched together, dense and ink-black, appearing to move independently of the light source. When she turned her head, a flicker of movement caught the corner of her eye—a dark shape darting behind a gnarled trunk. She froze. The shadow vanished. The wildflowers continued their rhythmic shuddering. The warmth from the Heartstone intensified. The crimson glow bled through the fabric of her shirt, painting a small, bloody circle on her skin. It was not the gentle heat of a summer afternoon; it was a thrumming, insistent warmth that signaled proximity. A sound broke the stillness. It was not a snap of a twig or the rustle of leaves. It was a wet, sliding noise, like a heavy weight being dragged across damp silk. It came from the dense thicket of ferns to her left. Aurora held her breath. Her eyes scanned the darkness, searching for a silhouette, a pair of eyes, any sign of a living thing. The silence returned, but it was no longer empty. It felt occupied. The air grew thick with the scent of ozone and rotting nectar. She took a step backward. The sliding sound stopped. She took another step, her heel catching on a protruding root. As she stumbled, she caught sight of the oak standing stones again. They looked different from this side. They seemed taller, their bark etched with patterns that had not been there when she entered. The knots in the wood looked like lidless eyes, staring down at her. The pendant pulsed. A sharp, rhythmic heat mirrored the thudding in her ribs. Scrape. The sound came from directly behind her. It was low, guttural, and unmistakably deliberate. It sounded like something heavy scraping against the bark of a tree, moving downward. Aurora spun around, her flashlight beam cutting a frantic arc through the gloom. The light hit the ferns, the moss, the twisted roots of the oaks. Nothing. The beam swept over the wildflowers, their indigo petals shivering in her presence. She lowered the light, her breath coming in short, controlled bursts. The temperature dropped. A chill seeped through her jacket, settling in her bones. The warmth of the Heartstone was the only thing keeping the cold at bay, but even that felt insufficient now. The glow of the stone had turned from a soft pulse to a frantic, stuttering flicker. She looked toward the center of the Grove, where the trees grew most densely. The shadows there were not merely dark; they were voids. They seemed to absorb the moonlight, creating a pocket of absolute nothingness in the heart of the clearing. A soft, whistling breath drifted past her ear. It was not the wind. It was too rhythmic, too controlled. It carried the unmistakable cadence of lungs expanding and contracting. Aurora reached for the heavy delivery bag at her hip, her knuckles white. She did not move. She did not scream. Her mind, trained for the quick logic of a crisis, searched for a rational explanation. A stray animal. A trick of the light. The strange atmospheric pressure of the Grove. But the logic failed when the scent changed. The sweetness of the lilies vanished, replaced by the sharp, metallic tang of old blood and the sulfurous stench of a guttering candle. The sliding sound resumed. This time, it was closer. It moved in a wide arc around her, circling the perimeter of her light. Slither. Drag. Pause. She turned in a slow circle, her flashlight trembling slightly. Each sweep of the beam revealed more of the impossible landscape. The wildflowers were taller now, their stalks leaning toward her as if drawn to her heat. The indigo petals seemed to have deepened to a shade of black. The Heartstone flared. A brilliant, angry crimson light erupted from the pendant, illuminating the immediate area in a harsh, bloody hue. In the sudden glare, she saw it. At the edge of the light, just where the moss met the shadow of an ancient oak, a hand rested against the bark. It was not a human hand. The fingers were too long, possessing extra joints that bent at unnatural, sickening angles. The skin looked like wet parchment stretched over bone, translucent and grey. It did not move. It simply gripped the wood, the long, needle-like nails digging deep into the bark. Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs. She stared, unable to look away, her eyes locked on the pale, spindly digits. The hand retreated into the darkness, but the weight of the gaze remained. She felt it pressing against her skin, a heavy, unseen presence that occupied the space between her and the trees. A low vibration began to hum through the ground. It was not a sound, but a sensation, a tremor that traveled up through the soles of her boots and settled in her marrow. The very earth seemed to be shivering in anticipation. She shifted her weight, her eyes darting between the darkness and the glowing stone at her chest. The crimson light was dimming again, returning to its rhythmic, warning pulse. The whistling breath returned, louder this time. It came from directly above. Aurora tilted her head back, the flashlight beam climbing the trunk of the oak she stood beside. The bark was rough, wet with dew. She searched the canopy, the twisted limbs, the heavy leaves. The beam caught something. Not a face. Not a body. A single, pale eye, larger than a saucer, stared down from a knot in the wood. It did not blink. It held her gaze with a terrifying, static intensity, the pupil a vertical slit of absolute black. The eye vanished. The silence snapped. The sound of a thousand wings beating at once erupted from the trees, a deafening cacophony of rustling leaves and frantic, fluttering movement. The wildflowers did not just shudder; they whipped violently, their petals striking the ground like tiny, organic lashes. The Heartstone went cold. The warmth vanished instantly, leaving her chest feeling hollow and exposed. Then, the dragging sound returned, coming from all sides at once. Scrape. Slither. Drag. The shadows began to detach themselves from the trees. They did not walk; they flowed, spilling across the moss like spilled ink, converging on the small circle of light provided by her flashlight. Aurora backed away, her eyes wide, her breath hitching in her throat. She hit the edge of the standing stones. The oak bark felt cold and ancient against her spine. She was trapped between the boundary and the encroaching dark. A shadow stretched across her boots. It was long, thin, and ended in the silhouette of a pointed, multi-jointed finger. The flashlight flickered. Once. Twice. The beam died.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"sentinel"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count3
4
word"rhythmic"
count5
5
word"flicker"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count4
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"gloom"
count1
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"anticipation"
count1
15
word"intensity"
count1
16
word"cacophony"
count1
highlights
0"sentinel"
1"silence"
2"flickered"
3"pulse"
4"rhythmic"
5"flicker"
6"warmth"
7"weight"
8"silk"
9"scanned"
10"etched"
11"pulsed"
12"gloom"
13"chill"
14"anticipation"
15"intensity"
16"cacophony"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences136
matches
0"g in anticipation"
79.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences136
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1365
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1365
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Grove4
London1
Heartstone5
Aurora8
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"felt like a sudden shift in altitude, a"
1"colors that seemed to vibrate against the dark soil"
2"seemed taller their bark etched with patterns that had not been there when she entered"
3"looked like lidless eyes, staring down at"
4"sounded like something heavy scraping agai"
5"looked like wet parchment stretched over"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.733
wordCount1365
matches
0"not a sound, but a sensation, a tremor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean25.28
std19.43
cv0.769
sampleLengths
067
111
240
370
440
560
62
79
843
95
1039
1147
125
134
1458
1513
161
1728
1840
1911
2049
2142
228
2321
2451
2531
2626
2749
2821
297
3023
3150
3220
3333
3442
3529
3612
3734
384
396
4037
413
423
4341
4415
4511
463
4733
4840
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences136
matches
0"being dragged"
1"was trapped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs209
matches
0"was dimming"
16.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences136
ratio0.044
matches
0"The ambient noise of London—the distant hum of traffic, the occasional siren, the rustle of wind through common park trees—died instantly."
1"When she turned her head, a flicker of movement caught the corner of her eye—a dark shape darting behind a gnarled trunk."
2"It was not the gentle heat of a summer afternoon; it was a thrumming, insistent warmth that signaled proximity."
3"The shadows there were not merely dark; they were voids."
4"The wildflowers did not just shudder; they whipped violently, their petals striking the ground like tiny, organic lashes."
5"They did not walk; they flowed, spilling across the moss like spilled ink, converging on the small circle of light provided by her flashlight."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1373
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.032046613255644577
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.010196649672250545
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean10.04
std6.1
cv0.607
sampleLengths
013
117
216
321
411
517
68
715
86
915
1020
1112
123
1314
146
1510
1620
174
187
1917
2014
2122
222
233
246
256
2618
2719
285
2913
3015
3111
324
3319
349
353
3612
375
384
3911
4012
416
4216
4313
443
4510
461
477
487
4914
29.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats28
diversityRatio0.19852941176470587
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners27
80.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences125
matches
0"Pale, translucent bells hung from"
1"Instead, they shuddered."
2"Then, the dragging sound returned,"
ratio0.024
79.20% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences125
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"They bloomed in a riot"
2"They did not sway in"
3"Her boots sank into the"
4"She reached up to rub"
5"They bunched together, dense and"
6"It was not the gentle"
7"It was not a snap"
8"It was a wet, sliding"
9"It came from the dense"
10"Her eyes scanned the darkness,"
11"It felt occupied."
12"She took a step backward."
13"She took another step, her"
14"They looked different from this"
15"They seemed taller, their bark"
16"It was low, guttural, and"
17"It sounded like something heavy"
18"She lowered the light, her"
19"She looked toward the center"
ratio0.352
8.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount113
totalSentences125
matches
0"The gravel path of Richmond"
1"Aurora stepped past the twin"
2"The transition felt like a"
3"The ambient noise of London—the"
4"She adjusted the strap of"
5"The crimson gem sat heavy"
6"The wildflowers here ignored the"
7"They bloomed in a riot"
8"They did not sway in"
9"Each blossom twitched with a"
10"Aurora walked deeper into the"
11"Her boots sank into the"
12"She reached up to rub"
13"The skin felt tight."
14"The light in the Grove"
15"Shadows pooled in the hollows"
16"They bunched together, dense and"
17"The shadow vanished."
18"The wildflowers continued their rhythmic"
19"The warmth from the Heartstone"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Aurora stepped past the twin sentinel oaks, the boundary stones that marked the entrance to the Grove."
1"Each blossom twitched with a rhythmic, slow-motion tremor, as if the plants themselves breathed."
2"It was not the gentle heat of a summer afternoon; it was a thrumming, insistent warmth that signaled proximity."
3"She felt it pressing against her skin, a heavy, unseen presence that occupied the space between her and the trees."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.3313%