Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8WV39FG447ZVEE0NQXK554

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4.3
Duration:
31.6s
Cost:
$0.007018
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Toby pushed through the door of the Raven's Nest and the neon green glow from the sign outside slid away as the wood swung shut behind him. The place smelled of lemon polish on old oak and the faint smoke from a fireplace at the back. Maps and photographs pressed against the walls. He scanned the line of stools for an empty one near the taps. At the far end, Rory sat with her fingers wrapped around a half-pint of bitter. Her straight black hair brushed her shoulders, the same length she had worn it at twenty. Her bright blue eyes lifted when he reached the stool beside her. "Last person I expected to find here," Rory said. She set the glass down and turned fully toward him. The small scar on her left wrist showed when her sleeve slid up. Toby settled onto the stool and ordered the same bitter without looking at the chalkboard. The bartender poured and moved away. "Been years, Rory," Toby said. "I came down for a job interview that fell through this morning. Thought I would sit one out before the train." She nodded once and traced the rim of her glass. A new tightness lay in her jaw that had not been there when they shared late nights in Cardiff corridors and cramped student flats. "How long has it been since Cardiff?" Rory asked. "Four years and three months," Toby said. He kept his hands flat on the bar. Rory lifted her glass again. The liquid caught the low light. "You finished the law degree. I left halfway." Toby watched her drink. The muscles in his forearm tightened under the rolled cuff of his shirt. "You left with Eva. I heard you never went back for the finals." Rory's mouth tightened at one corner. "Eva needed the space. Evan made it impossible to stay in the flat by then. The move to London came at the right moment." Toby drank. The bitter left a trace of hops on his tongue that lingered after the swallow. He set the glass down carefully. "You got the scar fixed yet?" he asked, eyes on her wrist. "It never bothered me enough to fix," Rory said. She turned her hand palm up so the crescent showed clearly. "Fell off the bike the week before first exams. You were the one who wrapped it with your tie." Toby's shoulders dropped an inch. "I remember the knot came loose in the rain on the way to the lecture hall." Rory let the wrist rest again on the bar. Quiet settled between them, broken only by the low murmur from two men at the far table and the occasional clink of glass from the taps. The bartender wiped the counter without looking their way. "You still live above this place?" Toby asked after a moment. Rory gave a small nod. "Silas owns the building. I deliver orders from the Golden Empress by day. The flat sits above the bar. Cheap rent and a lock that works." Toby studied the bar surface. The wood held old rings from previous glasses. "I looked you up once. Your mother said you had not answered calls in six months at the time." Rory's fingers stilled on the glass. "Mum wanted me to finish the exams and sit the bar. She did not count on Evan staying past the final warning. I answered when I could." Toby shifted on the stool. The leather seat creaked under his weight. He kept his voice low. "He hit you the night before you left, didn't he? The night I called and you said everything was fine." Rory met his gaze. Her blue eyes held the same intensity, only harder. "You called from the airport. I stood in the kitchen with my phone to my ear while he slept in the bedroom. I left two hours later." Toby swallowed. The bitter no longer covered the dryness in his throat. "I stayed on the line until you hung up. I thought you sounded tired. I flew to Dublin anyway for the summer contract." Rory pushed her empty glass toward the bartender. A fresh one appeared without her asking. She lifted it but did not drink immediately. "You never asked about him again," Rory said. "When we spoke after that, you talked about cases and the firm in Dublin. I never corrected the silence." Toby's left hand curled into a loose fist on the bar. "I wrote three letters. Burned two of them before mailing. The third came back marked 'moved' six weeks later." Rory set the glass down once more. Her voice stayed steady. "Eva kept the flat for three months until her parents found another place in south London. I moved the boxes in the rain wearing your old university jumper. It still smelled of your aftershave." Toby let out a breath through his nose. The sound disappeared into the low chatter around them. "I gave that jumper to charity the week after graduation. I could not wear it once I knew you were not coming back." Rory lifted the fresh glass. Condensation ran down the side and pooled on the wood in a tiny circle. "I work deliveries because the pay comes weekly and the routes keep me moving. I do not sit still long now." Toby reached into his pocket and placed a folded paper on the bar between them. The edge of the paper showed printed text and an official stamp. "The job interview was for a junior barrister spot near Gray's Inn. I did not get it because the panel decided my references were too old-school." Rory glanced at the paper but did not unfold it. "What will you do next?" "Train home tomorrow," Toby said. "Call the recruitment line for another round of interviews. My flat in Manchester is paid through the end of the month." Rory tapped one finger on the bar near his hand. "You always planned to stay in Cardiff. The firm there offered you the training contract first." Toby nodded once. "Plans changed when the woman I knew stopped answering the letters and moved without forwarding an address." Silence stretched again. The bartender replaced a bottle on the shelf. The two men at the far table laughed at something one of them had said. Rory traced another slow circle on the glass with her thumb. "I kept the letters you sent to the old address," Rory said. "They sit in a shoebox under the bed above this bar. I open the box once a year on my birthday." Toby picked up his glass and finished the remaining bitter in one swallow. He placed the glass back on the coaster exactly where it had stood. "I stopped writing after the third one. I figured you had a new life here that did not include old Cardiff mistakes." Rory's eyes softened for the fraction of a second before the tightness returned. "Evan found the shoebox the night before I left. He tore two letters open and burned them in the sink. The rest stayed hidden until Eva carried them out in a black bin bag." Toby pushed his empty glass away. The coaster slid an inch across the wood. "I told Evan where you worked when he came to the law library looking for you. He said he needed to return your books. I believed that." Rory inhaled once through her nose. Her shoulders stayed square. "He returned with a black eye the next day. You never told me you hit him." Toby looked down at his hands. The knuckles on his right hand showed faint white lines from old scrapes. "I never told you because you had already gone. I left Cardiff two weeks later for the Dublin contract." Rory drank again, deeper this time. The glass left another wet ring. "I heard you made partner track within eighteen months. Your mother sent a clipping from the paper." Toby straightened on the stool. "Partner track ended when the senior partner asked why I missed three client dinners. I missed them because I was on the phone with a moving company in London to see whether anyone had forwarded mail from a flat that no longer held your name." Rory reached across the bar and laid her hand briefly over his closed fist. The touch lasted two seconds before she drew back. "I could have written back. I chose not to because every sentence started with an apology I did not want to write." Toby turned his hand palm up on the bar. The palm lines crossed in patterns that had not changed since university nights spent passing notes across library tables. "I carried the last unsent letter in my briefcase for two years. It sits in the Manchester flat in the bottom drawer under tax receipts." Rory studied the curve of his wrist where the cuff ended. "What did it say?" Toby kept his gaze on her eyes. "It said I should have asked you to stay the night you packed the last box. It said I should have followed the first train you caught." Rory pressed her lips together once. She lifted her glass again and took the final swallow. The bitterness lingered in the air between them when she set the glass down empty. The bartender collected both empty glasses without a word. He replaced them with fresh pours and moved to the next customer. Toby watched the new glass settle on its coaster. "You never asked why I never called again after the summer." Rory kept her hands in her lap now. "I stayed busy with routes and rent payments. Calls would have meant explaining the shoebox and the nights I sat awake above this bar listening to the music downstairs." Toby nodded. He lifted his new glass but did not drink yet. "I sat in the Dublin flat the day I found out you lived above Silas' bar. Silas sent me a card after he helped you with the first deposit. The postmark showed the London address." Rory's eyebrows drew together for a moment. "Silas does not discuss tenants. He let me take the key without questions." Toby drank. The fresh bitter tasted colder than the last. He lowered the glass. "I booked a ticket twice. Canceled both times when the reality of walking into the bar and seeing the woman who used to steal my lecture notes felt thinner than the memory." Rory lifted her chin slightly. "I walk past the Gray's Inn area every Monday when the Empress route runs that way. I tell myself I will stop for coffee and look for a familiar name on the letter boxes." Toby's fingers tightened on his glass. "The name would still be the same. The address changes every six months now." Rory looked at the far wall where a black-and-white photograph of the Thames showed a boat passing under a bridge. "Time pushes names and addresses until they stop matching what they once were." Toby released the glass. He placed both palms on the edge of the bar. "I should leave before the last train. The platform gets crowded after eleven." Rory stood first. She placed coins on the wood beside her empty coaster. She did not reach for the door. "The night train leaves Paddington at midnight. There is still time for one more pour." Toby remained seated. He watched her stand without moving his hands. RichtextThe text stops when Rory stands and places the coins, ready for possible next beat with her invitation spoken.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:12:24.247Z" 5/10/2026, 12:12:24 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.185
leniency0.37
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1930
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1930
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"traced"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"traced"
2"weight"
3"intensity"
4"silence"
5"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1930
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount938
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory30
Cardiff1
Toby28
Thames1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Toby"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Thames"
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1930
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
60.37% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean32.17
std11.62
cv0.361
sampleLengths
066
143
232
321
426
534
69
715
819
930
1030
1123
1212
1339
1421
1544
1611
1731
1832
1933
2037
2140
2235
2323
2427
2530
2645
2740
2840
2953
3015
3126
3226
3320
3437
3533
3648
3747
3841
3926
4038
4129
4250
4345
4453
4515
4634
4731
4821
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences153
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount941
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.02975557917109458
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009564293304994687
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean12.61
std8.12
cv0.644
sampleLengths
027
119
27
313
415
516
612
79
810
913
1015
116
125
1321
1410
1524
169
177
188
195
206
218
224
2313
2413
256
2624
272
2815
296
3012
319
3211
3319
345
3516
369
3726
389
3911
405
4126
425
438
4419
456
4627
475
487
495
46.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.21568627450980393
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences97
matches
0"He scanned the line of"
1"Her straight black hair brushed"
2"Her bright blue eyes lifted"
3"She set the glass down"
4"She nodded once and traced"
5"He kept his hands flat"
6"He set the glass down"
7"he asked, eyes on her"
8"She turned her hand palm"
9"He kept his voice low."
10"Her blue eyes held the"
11"She lifted it but did"
12"Her voice stayed steady."
13"He placed the glass back"
14"Her shoulders stayed square."
15"She lifted her glass again"
16"He replaced them with fresh"
17"He lifted his new glass"
18"He lowered the glass."
19"He placed both palms on"
ratio0.237
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences97
matches
0"Toby pushed through the door"
1"The place smelled of lemon"
2"Maps and photographs pressed against"
3"He scanned the line of"
4"Her straight black hair brushed"
5"Her bright blue eyes lifted"
6"She set the glass down"
7"The small scar on her"
8"Toby settled onto the stool"
9"The bartender poured and moved"
10"She nodded once and traced"
11"A new tightness lay in"
12"He kept his hands flat"
13"Rory lifted her glass again."
14"The liquid caught the low"
15"Toby watched her drink."
16"The muscles in his forearm"
17"Rory's mouth tightened at one"
18"The bitter left a trace"
19"He set the glass down"
ratio0.979
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A new tightness lay in her jaw that had not been there when they shared late nights in Cardiff corridors and cramped student flats."
1"The palm lines crossed in patterns that had not changed since university nights spent passing notes across library tables."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.185
leniency0.37
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.6848%