| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1184 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1184 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "echoing" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "synchronized" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "grave" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "cacophony" | | 15 | "comforting" | | 16 | "chaotic" | | 17 | "symphony" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "knuckles turned white" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 121 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 1183 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "You brought the stone." | | 1 | "The stone opens the way," | | 2 | "But the way requires a weight." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1168 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Pendant | 4 | | One | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | Flash | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 1.19% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a fingernail tapping on glass" | | 1 | "looked like a snap" | | 2 | "tasted like iron" | | 3 | "felt like wet clay" | | 4 | "oaks that seemed to shift their positions as she ran" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 23.2 | | std | 14.8 | | cv | 0.638 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 42 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 44 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 30 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 99.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | | |
| 72.02% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 121 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "A sound drifted from the treeline—a sharp, rhythmic clicking." | | 1 | "It didn't walk; it flowed, sliding across the flowerbeds without disturbing a single petal." | | 2 | "The crimson light didn't just glow now; it strobed, illuminating the grove in jagged bursts." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 793 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.03656998738965952 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007566204287515763 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 121 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 121 | | mean | 9.78 | | std | 5.56 | | cv | 0.569 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 33.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.19834710743801653 | | totalSentences | 121 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.64% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached for the Heartstone" | | 1 | "They didn't sway." | | 2 | "It sounded like a fingernail" | | 3 | "She pivoted, the flashlight in" | | 4 | "They remained motionless." | | 5 | "She looked back toward the" | | 6 | "They looked further away than" | | 7 | "She whipped the flashlight toward" | | 8 | "It moved with a fluid," | | 9 | "She gripped the flashlight until" | | 10 | "It felt occupied." | | 11 | "She began to walk back" | | 12 | "She avoided looking to the" | | 13 | "It wasn't a single source." | | 14 | "It synchronized with her footsteps," | | 15 | "She held her breath, listening." | | 16 | "She turned her head slightly." | | 17 | "It didn't have a face," | | 18 | "It didn't walk; it flowed," | | 19 | "It tilted its head, a" |
| | ratio | 0.391 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 102 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak stones of" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped between the two" | | 2 | "The air shifted." | | 3 | "The distant hum of London" | | 4 | "She reached for the Heartstone" | | 5 | "The crimson gem pulsed." | | 6 | "A rhythmic, thumping warmth radiated" | | 7 | "The warmth felt misplaced in" | | 8 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing, their" | | 9 | "They didn't sway." | | 10 | "Aurora walked deeper into the" | | 11 | "A sound drifted from the" | | 12 | "It sounded like a fingernail" | | 13 | "She pivoted, the flashlight in" | | 14 | "The beam hit a cluster" | | 15 | "They remained motionless." | | 16 | "The clicking stopped the instant" | | 17 | "Aurora rubbed the crescent-shaped scar" | | 18 | "The skin there itched." | | 19 | "She looked back toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.927 | |
| 45.45% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "*But the way requires a" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 74.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora walked deeper into the grove, her boots sinking into loam that felt too soft, like stepping on damp flesh." | | 1 | "Beneath the stillness, a low vibration thrummed through the ground, a subterranean purr that vibrated in her teeth." | | 2 | "The words materialized inside her mind, a wet, sliding sound that tasted like iron." | | 3 | "The pale skin of its chest was translucent, revealing dark, pulsing veins that mirrored the patterns of the roots beneath the soil." | | 4 | "The path she had taken was gone, replaced by a labyrinth of towering ferns and leaning oaks that seemed to shift their positions as she ran." | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant flared one final time, a blinding explosion of crimson light that pushed the creature back." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |