Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8WZEMKBHSV7JN768QFHC8C

Run Details

Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.000775
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest flickered, casting a rhythmic, sickly emerald glow over the rain-slicked Soho pavement. Inside, the air tasted of stale hops and old tobacco. Aurora slid a stack of delivery receipts across the mahogany bar, her fingers grazing the crescent scar on her wrist. Silas leaned over the counter, his hazel eyes scanning the slips. He shifted his weight, his left knee popping with a dry sound that echoed in the quiet afternoon. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light as he tapped a rhythmic beat against the wood. "Yu-Fei is complaining about the timings again, Rory." "The traffic on Wardour Street is a nightmare. She can scream into the void for all I care." Aurora leaned back, her black hair clinging to her neck. She reached for a glass of water, but a sudden movement at the door froze her. A man stepped inside, shaking a black umbrella. He wore a charcoal suit that cost more than Aurora’s yearly rent. His shoulders were broad, his posture rigid, and his eyes—cold, calculating eyes—swept the room with a precision that felt like a threat. The air in the bar curdled. Aurora’s heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird in a cage. "Evan." The man stopped. He turned slowly, his gaze locking onto her. A smirk touched his lips, though it didn't reach his eyes. He looked older, the softness of his youth replaced by sharp, hungry angles. "Aurora. Or is it Rory now?" He walked toward her, the click of his polished Oxfords sounding like a countdown. He stopped three feet away, invading her space. The scent of expensive sandalwood and cold rain clung to him. "I heard you vanished. London is a big city, but not big enough to hide a coward." Aurora didn't flinch. She gripped the edge of the bar, her knuckles turning white. "I didn't hide. I left." Evan chuckled, a dry sound that grated like sandpaper. He looked around the dimly lit bar, his lip curling at the old maps and yellowed photographs peeling from the walls. "This is where you ended up? Delivering noodles in a basement? Your father would have a stroke if he saw you now." "My father isn't here. You are. Why are you in Soho, Evan?" "Business. The kind of business that requires a certain level of... discretion." He reached out, his hand hovering near her shoulder. Aurora stepped back, her movement sharp and instinctive. Evan’s hand dropped, his expression flickering from amusement to a sudden, jagged irritation. "Still jumpy. Still the same fragile little thing I had to keep in line." Silas cleared his throat. The sound was low, a warning rumble. He stepped between them, his larger frame blocking Evan's view of Aurora. He didn't smile. He simply stood there, the quiet authority of a man who had seen things far worse than a corporate shark in a tailored suit. "She's with me. And you're blocking the flow of traffic." Evan looked Silas up and down, unimpressed. "And who is this? The landlord? The protector?" "The man who owns the place," Silas replied. His voice remained flat, devoid of emotion. "And the man who suggests you find another establishment for your drinks." Evan shifted his gaze back to Aurora. The aggression vanished, replaced by a mask of faux-concern that made her skin crawl. "I didn't come here to fight, Rory. I wanted to see if you'd grown up. If you'd realized that the world is a cruel place without someone to guide you." "I've learned plenty about cruelty. You were a fantastic teacher." Evan’s eyes narrowed. The mask slipped, revealing a flash of the volatility that had once turned her home into a minefield. "You think you're strong now? Because you live in a flat above a pub? You're a ghost, Aurora. A shadow of the girl who actually had a future." "The girl with the future was terrified of her own reflection." Aurora stepped out from behind Silas. She met Evan's gaze, her blue eyes hard and clear. "I remember the way you used to talk about 'potential.' You used it as a leash. You told me I was nothing without your direction, and for three years, I believed you. I spent every waking hour trying to fit into the mold you built for me." Evan shrugged, glancing at his watch. "It was for your own good. You were chaotic. You needed structure." "I needed a life." "You have one. It looks miserable." He stepped closer again, his voice dropping to a whisper that only she could hear. "You always were a disappointment, Laila. Even when you tried your hardest." The use of the old nickname felt like a physical blow. Aurora felt the familiar surge of panic, the phantom pressure of his grip on her arm. But then she looked at Silas. The older man wasn't moving, but his eyes were locked on Evan, calculating, reading the man's posture, the twitch of his jaw, the weakness in his stance. Silas wasn't just a bar owner; he was a predator watching a scavenger. Aurora breathed out, a long, slow exhale. The panic didn't vanish, but it settled, becoming a cold weight she could carry. "I'm not that girl anymore, Evan. I don't care about the potential you saw in me, and I certainly don't care about the disappointment you feel now." Evan stared at her, searching for the flicker of fear he usually relied on. He found nothing. The silence stretched, filled only by the hum of the neon sign and the distant roar of Soho traffic. "You've become boring," Evan decided. He stepped back, straightening his tie. "I expected a tragedy. Instead, I found a delivery girl." "The delivery is complete," Aurora said. "You can leave now." Evan sneered, turning on his heel. He didn't look back as he pushed through the door, the emerald light swallowing him for a moment before he vanished into the rain. The door clicked shut. The silence that followed was heavy, thick with the residue of a decade of resentment. Aurora stayed frozen for a moment, her chest heaving. Her hand drifted to her wrist, rubbing the crescent scar. Silas didn't offer a hug or a platitude. He simply reached under the bar and pulled out a bottle of something dark and amber. He poured two glasses. "He's a small man, Rory." "He felt like a giant for a long time." "That's the trick of the trade. They make themselves big by making everyone else feel small." Silas pushed a glass toward her. "You didn't blink." Aurora looked at the amber liquid, then at the door where Evan had disappeared. Her hands were still shaking, but only slightly. "I wanted to." "You didn't. That's the part that matters." Aurora took a sip. The liquor burned her throat, a sharp, grounding heat. She looked around the bar—the peeling maps, the dim lights, the smell of old wood. It wasn't the life her father had envisioned, and it certainly wasn't the one Evan had tried to dictate. "I forgot how much I hated the way he smells," she muttered. "Sandalwood," Silas noted, his eyes returning to the delivery receipts. "A classic choice for people who want to hide the scent of desperation." Aurora leaned against the mahogany, watching the rain streak against the window. The emerald glow of the sign continued to pulse, steady and rhythmic, like a heartbeat returning to a normal pace.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.135
leniency0.27
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count3
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"calculating"
count2
6
word"potential"
count2
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"structure"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"predator"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"silence"
count2
14
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"rhythmic"
2"scanning"
3"weight"
4"echoed"
5"calculating"
6"potential"
7"chaotic"
8"structure"
9"whisper"
10"familiar"
11"predator"
12"flicker"
13"silence"
14"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences76
matches
0"the flicker of fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1252
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount826
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Aurora16
Oxfords1
Evan14
Silas10
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Oxfords"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.531
windowScore0.333
70.63% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a threat"
1"felt like a physical blow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1252
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean21.22
std15.9
cv0.749
sampleLengths
050
149
28
318
468
518
61
735
86
933
1017
1114
125
1330
1422
1512
1612
1730
1814
1950
2010
217
228
2327
2421
2530
2610
2721
2828
2911
3016
3147
326
3312
344
356
3615
3712
3873
3921
4027
4136
4221
4310
4430
4538
4628
475
489
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"were locked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs141
matches
0"were still shaking"
63.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences108
ratio0.028
matches
0"His shoulders were broad, his posture rigid, and his eyes—cold, calculating eyes—swept the room with a precision that felt like a threat."
1"Silas wasn't just a bar owner; he was a predator watching a scavenger."
2"She looked around the bar—the peeling maps, the dim lights, the smell of old wood."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount831
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03369434416365824
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01444043321299639
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean11.59
std7.05
cv0.608
sampleLengths
020
110
220
311
418
520
68
718
810
916
108
1112
1222
136
1412
151
163
178
1811
1913
206
2114
228
2311
2417
253
2611
275
289
2921
3022
3112
3212
339
348
3513
3614
374
387
3912
403
4124
4210
437
448
458
467
4712
487
4914
42.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2037037037037037
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences72
matches
0"He shifted his weight, his"
1"She reached for a glass"
2"He wore a charcoal suit"
3"His shoulders were broad, his"
4"He turned slowly, his gaze"
5"He looked older, the softness"
6"He walked toward her, the"
7"He stopped three feet away,"
8"She gripped the edge of"
9"He looked around the dimly"
10"He reached out, his hand"
11"He stepped between them, his"
12"He didn't smile."
13"He simply stood there, the"
14"His voice remained flat, devoid"
15"She met Evan's gaze, her"
16"He stepped closer again, his"
17"He found nothing."
18"He stepped back, straightening his"
19"He didn't look back as"
ratio0.361
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences72
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora slid a stack of"
2"Silas leaned over the counter,"
3"He shifted his weight, his"
4"The silver signet ring on"
5"Aurora leaned back, her black"
6"She reached for a glass"
7"A man stepped inside, shaking"
8"He wore a charcoal suit"
9"His shoulders were broad, his"
10"The air in the bar"
11"Aurora’s heart hammered against her"
12"The man stopped."
13"He turned slowly, his gaze"
14"A smirk touched his lips,"
15"He looked older, the softness"
16"He walked toward her, the"
17"He stopped three feet away,"
18"The scent of expensive sandalwood"
19"Aurora didn't flinch."
ratio0.972
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He shifted his weight, his left knee popping with a dry sound that echoed in the quiet afternoon."
1"His shoulders were broad, his posture rigid, and his eyes—cold, calculating eyes—swept the room with a precision that felt like a threat."
2"He simply stood there, the quiet authority of a man who had seen things far worse than a corporate shark in a tailored suit."
3"The aggression vanished, replaced by a mask of faux-concern that made her skin crawl."
4"The mask slipped, revealing a flash of the volatility that had once turned her home into a minefield."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas noted, his eyes returning to the delivery receipts"
95.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Silas noted (note)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.108
leniency0.216
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.108
75.6164%