Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8WZH9R1FQMGAWNAX58MGG4

Run Details

Duration:
7.8s
Cost:
$0.002263
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed, casting a sickly pallor over the damp Soho bricks. Rain smeared the city lights into streaks of orange and blue. Rory pushed inside, the scent of stale ale and pipe tobacco hitting her like a physical weight. Silas stood behind the mahogany bar, polishing a crystal glass with a cloth that had seen better decades. He caught her eye, his gaze lingering on the crescent scar visible where her sleeve rode up. He nodded once, a silent anchor in the dim room. Rory scanned the shadows, seeking the solitude of the back corner. Then, she stopped. A man sat at the lone booth beneath the map of partitioned Europe. He wore a charcoal suit that cost more than Rory’s annual rent, his posture rigid, shoulders squared as if expecting a blow. Sunlight wouldn't have touched him, yet he wore dark glasses, folded in his breast pocket. He traced the rim of an amber-filled tumbler with a manicured finger. The man looked up. His face, once soft and prone to easy laughter, now mirrored the jagged edges of the broken world pinned to the walls. Rory, you look exactly like the ghost I spent three years trying to bury. She kept her distance, her boots clicking rhythmically against the floorboards. The air between them sharpened, thinned by the oxygen they both struggled to find. She slid into the opposite bench, the leather groaning under the shift in weight. Evan. You always did have a penchant for lurking in the dark. The amber liquid sloshed as the glass hit the wood. The click was final, a gavel coming down in a courtroom she’d fled. He leaned forward, eyes searching for the girl who used to braid flowers into his hair near the Cardiff docks. He found only the woman who delivered Chinese takeout for a living and knew exactly how to dismantle a lock in silence. I didn't come to lurk. I came to see if the stories about the girl who vanished into the London fog were true. You look tired, Rory. The city doesn't agree with you. She traced the crescent mark on her wrist, skin flushing white under the pressure. Silas’s gaze flickered from the tap to their table, his hand resting on the polished wood near the silver signet ring he always wore. He stayed silent, a sentinel observing a changing of the guard. The city is the only place honest enough to show its grime, Evan. Better that than the sanitised misery you peddled back home. You haven't changed the brand of scotch, and you still hold your glass like it’s a weapon. He let out a short, hollow laugh that didn't reach his eyes. He tapped a cigarette against the edge of the table, though he didn't light it. The silver frame of his glasses rested beside the drink, cold and clinical. Everything changed. The law office, the house on the hill, the quiet mornings. I sold it all. I trade in different debts now, Rory. Much higher stakes. I thought I might find you, offer a hand, see if you still harbored that pathetic streak of altruism you used to hold so dear. She leaned back, feeling the bite of the dark wood against her spine. Beyond the bar, a siren wailed, fading into the rhythmic pulse of Soho. I’m not the woman you shackled. I’m not the one who cried at the train station because you promised the sun couldn't rise without your permission. Look at my hands, Evan. See the grease? The scars? That’s honest labor. You’re just a suit looking for a shadow to haunt because you can't stand the sight of your own face in a mirror. His jaw tightened, a muscle jumping beneath his cheek. He stood, his height dwarfing the small table. He blocked the light, throwing a long, distorted silhouette across the faded map behind her. He didn't look like the man who once whispered poetry to keep her awake; he looked like a man who spent his nights recalculating the cost of ruined lives. You think you’re free because you run errands for an old spook in a dive bar? You’re still living in a cage, Rory. The bars are just made of different materials now. I came to offer you a way out, a chance to stop pretending you haven't forgotten how to be human. She didn't blink. She thought of the hidden room behind the bookshelf, the files Silas kept on men like Evan, the network of secrets that made the world turn. She had stopped being prey three years ago. The only thing I’ve forgotten is why I ever thought you were worth saving from yourself. Evan reached out, his hand hovering near hers for a fraction of a second before he pulled back, the movement sharp and self-conscious. He shoved the glasses onto his face, hiding the flicker of raw, jagged recognition. We’re both broken, Rory. You just pretend the glue holds better. He tossed a crisp banknote onto the table, the paper landing like an insult. Silas didn't move as Evan walked toward the neon-drenched door, the hinges groaning as he stepped into the rain. The door clicked shut, sealing them in the quiet hum of the bar. Rory remained at the table. She stared at the amber remnants in his glass. Silas approached, his limp barely audible against the floorboards. He cleared the glass, his signet ring catching the dim light. Hard men make for bad memories, Rory. He didn't ask if she was okay. He knew the answer was etched into the tension in her shoulders. She looked up at the maps on the wall, the borders shifting under the flicking light of the green sign. He was never the memory, Silas. He was the anchor. I’m just glad I learned how to swim. She stood, her legs steady. She turned toward the back of the bar, toward the bookshelf and the room beyond where the real work waited. She didn't look back at the booth. The shadow he had cast was already dissolving into the darkness, leaving no room for the ghosts of the past to linger. She reached the hidden latch, her fingers finding the familiar groove in the wood, and let the wall slide open, stepping into the dim sanctuary of the future.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"traced"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"sentinel"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"crystal"
2"scanned"
3"traced"
4"silence"
5"flickered"
6"sentinel"
7"rhythmic"
8"pulse"
9"flicker"
10"etched"
11"tension"
12"familiar"
13"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
60.76% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"look"
1"see"
2"think"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1065
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1065
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Europe1
Rory10
Cardiff1
Chinese1
London1
Evan6
Silas6
You7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Europe"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if expecting a blow"
1"looked like a man who spent his nights re"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1065
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean39.44
std21.45
cv0.544
sampleLengths
091
114
262
326
414
539
612
765
833
949
1040
1140
1252
1326
1462
1561
1652
1737
1816
1937
2011
2146
2234
237
2439
2518
2682
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs191
matches
0"was already dissolving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences87
ratio0.011
matches
0"He didn't look like the man who once whispered poetry to keep her awake; he looked like a man who spent his nights recalculating the cost of ruined lives."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1068
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.028089887640449437
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00749063670411985
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean12.24
std6.73
cv0.549
sampleLengths
018
111
217
318
417
510
611
73
813
922
1015
1112
124
1322
1414
1511
1614
1714
181
1911
2010
2113
2220
2322
245
2518
264
276
2814
2924
3011
3113
3210
3317
3412
3515
3613
372
3811
394
407
413
4225
4313
4413
456
4620
475
483
492
31.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.25287356321839083
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners22
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"Then, she stopped."
1"Much higher stakes."
ratio0.024
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences84
matches
0"He caught her eye, his"
1"He nodded once, a silent"
2"He wore a charcoal suit"
3"He traced the rim of"
4"His face, once soft and"
5"She kept her distance, her"
6"She slid into the opposite"
7"You always did have a"
8"He leaned forward, eyes searching"
9"He found only the woman"
10"I didn't come to lurk."
11"I came to see if"
12"You look tired, Rory."
13"She traced the crescent mark"
14"He stayed silent, a sentinel"
15"You haven't changed the brand"
16"He let out a short,"
17"He tapped a cigarette against"
18"I sold it all."
19"I trade in different debts"
ratio0.607
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences84
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rain smeared the city lights"
2"Rory pushed inside, the scent"
3"Silas stood behind the mahogany"
4"He caught her eye, his"
5"He nodded once, a silent"
6"Rory scanned the shadows, seeking"
7"A man sat at the"
8"He wore a charcoal suit"
9"Sunlight wouldn't have touched him,"
10"He traced the rim of"
11"The man looked up."
12"His face, once soft and"
13"Rory, you look exactly like"
14"She kept her distance, her"
15"The air between them sharpened,"
16"She slid into the opposite"
17"You always did have a"
18"The amber liquid sloshed as"
19"The click was final, a"
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Silas stood behind the mahogany bar, polishing a crystal glass with a cloth that had seen better decades."
1"He wore a charcoal suit that cost more than Rory’s annual rent, his posture rigid, shoulders squared as if expecting a blow."
2"He didn't look like the man who once whispered poetry to keep her awake; he looked like a man who spent his nights recalculating the cost of ruined lives."
3"She thought of the hidden room behind the bookshelf, the files Silas kept on men like Evan, the network of secrets that made the world turn."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.2266%