| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.654 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1336 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "nervously" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1336 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "oppressive" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "intensity" | | 4 | "amidst" | | 5 | "synthetic" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "gloom" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.65% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1332 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1063 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.63 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 28 | | Miller | 5 | | Morris | 2 | | North | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Kowalski | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Miller" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Kowalski" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.183 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1332 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 36 | | std | 23.33 | | cv | 0.648 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 78 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 92 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 48 | | 28 | 63 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 47 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 55 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 64 |
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| 93.44% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "were curled" | | 1 | "was etched" | | 2 | "been rejected" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 10 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "was breathing" | | 1 | "was staring" | | 2 | "wasn't wearing" | | 3 | "was watching" | | 4 | "was clutching" | | 5 | "was trembling" | | 6 | "was spinning" | | 7 | "wasn't pointing" | | 8 | "was frantically gathering" | | 9 | "was starting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't just the damp or the oppressive weight of the city pressing down from above; it was the feeling of the place." | | 1 | "She felt a flicker of something cold in her chest—a memory of a case from three years ago, the smell of sulfur and the sight of DS Morris vanishing into a space that shouldn't have existed." | | 2 | "He wasn't wearing a watch, but there was a distinct, pale band of skin where one had been—freshly removed." | | 3 | "Quinn didn't call out; she didn't reach for her weapon." | | 4 | "In the dim light of the police floodlamps, she saw a figure slipping away—a woman with a mass of curly red hair and round glasses that reflected the artificial light like two silver coins." | | 5 | "She had heard the rumors in the darker corners of the precinct—whispers of an underground exchange for things that didn't exist, a market that moved with the moon." | | 6 | "The needle wasn't pointing North; it was spinning violently, humming with a vibration that Quinn could feel in her teeth." | | 7 | "The man hadn't died of heart failure; he had been rejected by whatever door he had tried to open." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1071 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "absolute, wide-eyed terror." |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.026143790849673203 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014939309056956116 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 13.59 | | std | 9.08 | | cv | 0.668 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 57.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.37755102040816324 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 42.19% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she looked at the" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 93.42% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't like the location." | | 1 | "It wasn't just the damp" | | 2 | "It felt thin, as if" | | 3 | "She stopped, her brown eyes" | | 4 | "She didn't look at the" | | 5 | "His fingers were curled tightly," | | 6 | "It was a small, carved" | | 7 | "She felt a flicker of" | | 8 | "She was staring at the" | | 9 | "He wasn't wearing a watch," | | 10 | "She shifted her gaze to" | | 11 | "They were concentric circles, faint" | | 12 | "she commanded, pointing to the" | | 13 | "She stood up and walked" | | 14 | "She checked the worn leather" | | 15 | "She simply froze, her senses" | | 16 | "She stumbled, the satchel spilling" | | 17 | "She was trembling, her breath" | | 18 | "she whispered, her voice trembling" | | 19 | "She was young, maybe mid-twenties," |
| | ratio | 0.316 | |
| 23.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over" | | 2 | "She didn't like the location." | | 3 | "It wasn't just the damp" | | 4 | "It felt thin, as if" | | 5 | "Sergeant Miller said, gesturing toward" | | 6 | "Quinn didn't answer." | | 7 | "She stopped, her brown eyes" | | 8 | "The victim lay sprawled across" | | 9 | "That was the first thing" | | 10 | "The man looked as though" | | 11 | "Miller continued, chewing on the" | | 12 | "Quinn knelt beside the body," | | 13 | "She didn't look at the" | | 14 | "His fingers were curled tightly," | | 15 | "It was a small, carved" | | 16 | "She felt a flicker of" | | 17 | "The official report had called" | | 18 | "Quinn had spent three years" | | 19 | "Quinn asked, her voice low" |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "It felt thin, as if the walls were merely a suggestion and something else was breathing just behind the brickwork." | | 1 | "The victim lay sprawled across the platform, a man in an expensive charcoal suit that looked jarringly out of place amidst the filth." | | 2 | "The man looked as though he had simply stopped mid-stride and collapsed, his face frozen in a mask of absolute, wide-eyed terror." | | 3 | "She felt a flicker of something cold in her chest—a memory of a case from three years ago, the smell of sulfur and the sight of DS Morris vanishing into a space…" | | 4 | "They were concentric circles, faint and shimmering, as if someone had dragged a heavy weight in a perfect orbit around the body." | | 5 | "In the dim light of the police floodlamps, she saw a figure slipping away—a woman with a mass of curly red hair and round glasses that reflected the artificial …" | | 6 | "A cascade of old books and handwritten journals slid across the floor, along with a small, brass object that skittered across the tiles with a metallic ring." | | 7 | "She was young, maybe mid-twenties, with a freckled complexion that looked pale in the gloom." | | 8 | "And as she glanced back at Eva Kowalski, who was frantically gathering her books, Quinn realized that the official version of the world was a lie, and she was t…" |
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| 36.76% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn asked, her voice low and rasping" | | 1 | "she whispered, her voice trembling" | | 2 | "Eva whispered, her eyes wide behind her glasses" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 11 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Miller continued (continue)" | | 1 | "Quinn snapped (snap)" | | 2 | "Quinn ordered (order)" | | 3 | "Quinn shouted (shout)" | | 4 | "Quinn hissed (hiss)" | | 5 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "Quinn demanded (demand)" | | 7 | "the woman stammered (stammer)" | | 8 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 9 | "Quinn stated (state)" | | 10 | "Quinn roared (roar)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.615 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.688 | | effectiveRatio | 0.688 | |