Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8X13W6138AGPMCEP9X1D4H

Run Details

Duration:
7.7s
Cost:
$0.002795
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed, casting a sickly flicker over the wet Soho pavement. Inside, the air tasted of stale hops and the metallic tang of old copper. Silas stood behind the mahogany bar, his silver signet ring clinking against a tumbler as he poured a measure of scotch for a regular. He wiped the counter, his left leg dragging slightly as he moved to the end of the aisle to stock the shelves. The door groaned on its hinges. A woman entered, shaking a damp black umbrella. She wore a heavy trench coat that hung loose on her frame, the collar turned up to obscure her face. She navigated the maze of stools with a familiarity that made Silas pause, his rag halfway through a circle on the wood. She pulled a stool out at the far end, away from the low-hanging maps and the heavy shadows of the corners. Rory climbed onto the stool, her bright blue eyes scanning the room before locking onto the man behind the bar. She pulled her hair back, revealing the sharp, clean lines of her jaw. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the dim amber light as she reached for a napkin. "It’s been a long time since I’ve seen that particular brand of misery poured into a glass, Silas." Silas froze, his eyes narrowing as he took in the woman. He set the bottle down with a soft thud. He walked the length of the bar, his limp rhythmic and heavy, until he stood before her. The grey streaks in his auburn hair seemed to pull at his face, pulling the skin tight against an aging bone structure. He shifted his weight to his good leg, leaning his forearm on the bar. "Cardiff was a long time ago, Aurora. You look like you’ve been running a marathon through a storm." "London isn't exactly the haven I painted it to be in my head, but at least the rain here feels honest." She slid a crumpled ten-pound note onto the scratched surface. Her fingers looked thin, the knuckles prominent. There was a hard, angular quality to her movements now, a stark departure from the girl who used to spend afternoons debating case law in his study back home. She watched the condensation bead on the side of a glass he hadn't yet filled. "You left a lot of ghosts in that house, Rory. Brendan didn't stop asking about you for three years." "Brendan loved the idea of a barrister more than he loved his daughter. Every time he spoke, he was just counting down the days until I became a trophy for his mantle. I’m not playing judge and jury anymore." Silas poured the scotch, pushing the glass toward her. His gaze remained fixed on her face, searching for the child he remembered beneath the layers of guarded solitude. He saw the way her shoulders stayed locked high, defensive, ready to bolt at the sound of a raised voice. "You were going to be brilliant. The top of your class. I read the letters you burned in the fireplace before you packed that bag." "Brilliance is a luxury for people who aren't constantly looking over their shoulder. I deliver takeout now. I ride a scooter through alleys to make sure people get their fried rice while it’s still hot. It’s quiet. No one expects a speech out of me." She took a long, sharp pull of the whiskey. It burned, she could tell by the way her throat tightened, but her expression didn't soften. She stared at a framed photograph on the opposite wall, a black-and-white print of a field station in the Balkans. "Eva told me you were here. Said you were ‘managing a legacy.’ I didn't realize the legacy was just holding up a bar for people who want to forget their own names." "Some memories don't carry the weight of a guilty conscience, Aurora. Yours do. That’s why you’re sitting in the darkest corner I own." Silas moved to pull a shelf of bottles, his hand hovering over the wood that concealed the entrance to his back office. He didn't look at her, but his voice dropped into that low, professional register he used when he was extracting information from a mark. The air in the bar seemed to thicken, pressing the silence into the gaps between the clink of glasses and the low murmur from a nearby booth. "Evan came looking for you, twice. He wasn't the man I wanted to talk to, but he was certainly the man you should have feared." Rory’s hand went instinctively to her wrist, her thumb tracing the crescent scar. She didn't flinch, but her blue eyes clouded, hardening into arctic chips of light. She didn't look at Silas; she looked at the reflection in the mirror behind him, at the rows of labels and the dust settling on the history of his life. "I didn't leave because I was scared of him. I left because I realized I was becoming him. Every time I mimicked my father’s tone, every time I used logic to dismantle someone just to feel powerful, I felt him under my skin. I couldn't stay in the house that built me." "So you chose a ghost life instead? Working for Cheung, hiding above my bar, letting the city grind you into the pavement piece by piece?" He reached out, his hand resting on the counter near hers. His skin was worn, mapped with the capillaries of a man who had seen too many secrets. She didn't pull away, but she didn't offer any comfort either. The tension between them was a taut, vibrating wire, hummed by the frequency of the fridge in the back. "I’m alive, Silas. That’s a significant upgrade from where I was going. In Cardiff, I was a corpse that just hadn't stopped breathing yet." "You were a firebrand. You walked into a room and you demanded the air. Now you’re so thin I’m worried a stiff breeze will take you out of Soho entirely." She stood up, her coat billowing around her. The stools scraped against the floor, a jagged sound that cut through the low jazz playing from the speakers. She finished the remaining drops in her glass, her movements precise, lacking any wasted motion. "The fire burnt out, Silas. I put it out with water and delivery shifts and silence. Don't go looking for the girl in the books. She’s buried under a flat in Soho." "None of us ever really leaves home, Rory. We just change the decor." Rory adjusted her shoulder bag, the leather strap digging into the heavy fabric of her coat. She glanced toward the bookshelf at the back, sensing the weight of the room behind the hidden door, the secrets Silas still held tightly in his grip. She turned back to him, a ghost of a smirk touching her lips before vanishing just as quickly. "If you ever need a delivery, call the restaurant. I’m fast, I don’t ask questions, and I don't give a damn about your past." "I don't need food, Aurora. I need to know you’re not going to let him find you." "He already did. He just doesn't know where to look anymore." She walked to the door, the bell chiming as she pushed it open. Rain surged inward, frantic and cold, swirling around her ankles before she stepped out into the night. Silas gripped the edge of the bar, his knuckles white, staring at the empty glass left behind. The hum of the sign flickered once, twice, then steadied, leaving the bar wrapped in an oppressive, absolute quiet. He looked at the bookshelf, then back to the door, the distance between the two points feeling like a canyon that had widened over the years. He picked up the glass, the ghost of her presence still lingering in the lingering scent of her perfume over the damp city air. He turned the sign to closed and retreated into the dim light of the back room.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"tightly"
3"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"navigated"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"structure"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"oppressive"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"navigated"
2"scanning"
3"rhythmic"
4"structure"
5"weight"
6"stark"
7"silence"
8"tracing"
9"tension"
10"flickered"
11"oppressive"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences50
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences50
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1349
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount856
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Silas8
Balkans1
Rory3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Balkans"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1349
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean42.16
std25.47
cv0.604
sampleLengths
078
177
251
318
473
518
621
761
819
939
1048
1125
1245
1345
1432
1523
1673
1725
1857
1952
2025
2158
2224
2330
2442
2532
2613
2761
2824
2917
3011
31132
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs126
matches
0"was extracting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences69
ratio0.014
matches
0"She didn't look at Silas; she looked at the reflection in the mirror behind him, at the rows of labels and the dust settling on the history of his life."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount861
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.019744483159117306
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005807200929152149
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean19.55
std8.33
cv0.426
sampleLengths
018
114
224
322
46
58
620
722
821
920
1013
1118
1218
1311
149
1517
1622
1714
1818
1921
2010
217
2229
2315
2419
2539
269
2719
2820
2925
3045
319
3216
3320
3432
3523
3622
3724
3827
3925
4013
4114
4230
4352
4425
4511
4617
4711
4819
4924
47.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.34782608695652173
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences50
matches
0"He wiped the counter, his"
1"She wore a heavy trench"
2"She navigated the maze of"
3"She pulled a stool out"
4"She pulled her hair back,"
5"He set the bottle down"
6"He walked the length of"
7"He shifted his weight to"
8"She slid a crumpled ten-pound"
9"Her fingers looked thin, the"
10"She watched the condensation bead"
11"His gaze remained fixed on"
12"He saw the way her"
13"She took a long, sharp"
14"It burned, she could tell"
15"She stared at a framed"
16"He didn't look at her,"
17"She didn't flinch, but her"
18"She didn't look at Silas;"
19"He reached out, his hand"
ratio0.6
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences50
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Silas stood behind the mahogany"
2"He wiped the counter, his"
3"The door groaned on its"
4"A woman entered, shaking a"
5"She wore a heavy trench"
6"She navigated the maze of"
7"She pulled a stool out"
8"Rory climbed onto the stool,"
9"She pulled her hair back,"
10"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
11"Silas froze, his eyes narrowing"
12"He set the bottle down"
13"He walked the length of"
14"The grey streaks in his"
15"He shifted his weight to"
16"She slid a crumpled ten-pound"
17"Her fingers looked thin, the"
18"She watched the condensation bead"
19"Silas poured the scotch, pushing"
ratio0.96
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She navigated the maze of stools with a familiarity that made Silas pause, his rag halfway through a circle on the wood."
1"There was a hard, angular quality to her movements now, a stark departure from the girl who used to spend afternoons debating case law in his study back home."
2"Silas moved to pull a shelf of bottles, his hand hovering over the wood that concealed the entrance to his back office."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.8714%