Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8X1AGY2Z530W6GMMDKSY2Q

Run Details

Duration:
7.8s
Cost:
$0.002219
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The fog clung to the ground in Richmond Park like a damp, suffocating shroud. Rory stepped over the twisted roots of an ancient oak, her boots sinking into the wet earth. The Heartstone Pendant sat heavy against her sternum, the silver chain biting into the sweat on her neck. It pulsed—a rhythmic, feverish heat—as she approached the boundary. Here, the oaks stood in a tight, unnatural circle. They looked less like trees and more like petrified sentinels, their bark scarred with deep, gnarled grooves that caught the weak moonlight. The grove doesn't belong here, not at this hour. She pushed past the stones. The transition felt like walking through a curtain of ice. The humid, heavy London air vanished, replaced by a scent of ozone and bruised lavender. The ground beneath her feet softened into a carpet of unnatural wildflowers. They weren't growing; they appeared to be embroidered into the dirt, their petals unnaturally vibrant in the dim light. Silence settled over the clearing, a thick, pressurized quiet that made her ears hum. If I stay until midnight, the trail reveals itself. Rory scanned the perimeter. Her fingers traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit that kept her grounded. Shadows stretched long and spindly across the grass, reaching toward her ankles like fingers. She glanced at her watch. The digits blinked erratically before flickering out entirely. The air shifted. A twig snapped—not a dry, brittle crack, but a wet, sickening sound of cartilage popping. Nothing should move out here but the wind, and there is no wind. She spun around, her eyes straining against the heavy indigo gloom. A shadow detached itself from the base of a standing stone, sliding into a darker patch of fog. It lacked substance, moving with a jerky, disjointed fluidity that turned her stomach. She reached for the small canister of pepper spray in her pocket, her knuckles white. You’re just rattled, Aurora. It’s the dark, just the dark playing tricks on your head again. Voices began to bleed into the silence. They were soft, overlapping whispers that sounded like glass grinding against glass. She couldn't distinguish words, only the tone—a hungry, invasive cadence that seemed to vibrate inside her skull. The Heartstone erupted with heat, the crimson gem glowing an angry, pulsing red that cast long, distorted silhouettes against the clearing’s edge. She felt the warmth radiating through her coat, a frantic heartbeat against her own. Something is breathing behind me. She didn't turn. The air at the nape of her neck grew frigid. A breath, smelling of stagnant water and old copper, brushed against her skin. She forced her body to remain still, her lungs burning as she held her breath. A long, slender shadow crossed the ground in front of her. It possessed too many joints, bending in impossible angles as it mimicked her posture. She saw it peripheral to her vision—a pale, translucent shape that shimmered like oil on water. Stop looking at the shadows. Find the marker. She took a slow, measured step toward the center of the grove. The wildflowers crunched under her boots like dry bone. Every step echoed, amplified by the heavy atmosphere until it sounded like a drumbeat. The whispers grew louder, sharper, coalescing into a single, dissonant pitch that made her nose bleed. She wiped the copper warmth from her lip and squinted. A stone pedestal sat in the center of the clearing, cracked down the middle. Within the fissure, a faint, rhythmic flicker of light mirrored the behavior of her pendant. It’s calling to the stone. A sudden, violent tremor shook the ground, throwing her off-balance. She braced a hand against a low-hanging branch, but the wood felt soft, almost pliable, like rotting meat. She recoiled, gasping, and looked at her palm. A smear of thick, black ichor coated her skin. The sensation of being watched heightened, shifting from a mere prickle on the back of her neck to a physical weight pressing against her backbone. The entity was inches away now. It didn't have a face, only a vacuum of light where eyes should have been. Whatever is in this grove, it doesn't want me to leave. Rory reached the pedestal. She pulled the Heartstone from beneath her shirt, the chain snagging on her clothes. The pendant burned, searing her skin, but she ignored the pain and pressed the red stone against the gap in the pedestal. The clearing groaned. The ground buckled, sending ripples of earth toward the perimeter. The whispers vanished, replaced by a singular, piercing frequency that shattered every silence in a mile radius. The entity shrieked—a sound of tearing metal and failing lungs—as it lunged for her. She clamped her fingers over the pendant. The heat flared, white-hot and blinding. The world turned inside out. Gravity clawed at her stomach. She felt the ground tear away, the air rushing into a vacuum as the gate groaned shut. For a split second, the veil thinned entirely, revealing the true nature of the space—a sprawling, jagged architecture of shadows and teeth, all reaching for the pulse of the Heartstone. She squeezed her eyes shut, clinging to the cold stone of the pedestal. I am not going to be a ghost in this clearing. The pressure intensified until her bones ached. Then, the sound of a London siren cut through the haze like a scalpel. She slammed back into reality, the damp grass of Richmond Park beneath her knees, the midnight fog pressing in from all sides. The stillness returned, but it was heavy, suffocatingly normal. She looked up at the circle of oaks. They stood static, indifferent, devoid of the earlier hunger. She stood, her legs trembling, and clutched the pendant. The gem remained dark. Cold. She wiped the black ichor from her hand onto her trousers, shivering as the damp chill of the park settled into her marrow. Her phone buzzed in her pocket, the screen miraculously lit, displaying a barrage of messages from Eva. She walked toward the edge of the grove, refusing to look back, though the weight of a thousand unseen eyes tracked her every step until she reached the iron gates of the park.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1040
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1040
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"sentinels"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count2
8
word"warmth"
count2
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"measured"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"weight"
count2
14
word"searing"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"pulse"
count1
17
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"rhythmic"
2"sentinels"
3"silence"
4"scanned"
5"traced"
6"gloom"
7"stomach"
8"warmth"
9"shimmered"
10"measured"
11"echoed"
12"flicker"
13"weight"
14"searing"
15"shattered"
16"pulse"
17"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
76.41% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1032
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1032
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.39
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone4
Pendant1
London2
Aurora1
Eva1
Rory3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
7.14% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like walking through a curtain of"
1"sounded like glass grinding against glass"
2"cadence that seemed to vibrate inside her skull"
3"sounded like a drumbeat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.969
wordCount1032
matches
0"not a dry, brittle crack, but a wet, sickening sound of cartilage popping"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean46.91
std35.15
cv0.749
sampleLengths
089
19
275
39
466
513
657
716
872
95
1082
118
1290
135
1491
1511
1684
177
1876
1911
2069
2187
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs170
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences86
ratio0.081
matches
0"It pulsed—a rhythmic, feverish heat—as she approached the boundary."
1"They weren't growing; they appeared to be embroidered into the dirt, their petals unnaturally vibrant in the dim light."
2"A twig snapped—not a dry, brittle crack, but a wet, sickening sound of cartilage popping."
3"She couldn't distinguish words, only the tone—a hungry, invasive cadence that seemed to vibrate inside her skull."
4"She saw it peripheral to her vision—a pale, translucent shape that shimmered like oil on water."
5"The entity shrieked—a sound of tearing metal and failing lungs—as it lunged for her."
6"For a split second, the veil thinned entirely, revealing the true nature of the space—a sprawling, jagged architecture of shadows and teeth, all reaching for the pulse of the Heartstone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1043
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.023969319271332695
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.00862895493767977
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12
std6.13
cv0.511
sampleLengths
014
117
218
39
49
522
69
75
810
915
1012
1119
1214
139
144
1517
1614
175
188
193
2015
2113
2211
2318
2413
2515
264
2712
287
2912
3017
3122
3214
335
343
3510
3613
3715
3811
3914
4016
415
423
4312
449
4514
4616
4710
4814
4915
38.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.29069767441860467
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners25
39.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then, the sound of a"
ratio0.012
50.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences85
matches
0"It pulsed—a rhythmic, feverish heat—as"
1"They looked less like trees"
2"She pushed past the stones."
3"They weren't growing; they appeared"
4"Her fingers traced the crescent"
5"She glanced at her watch."
6"She spun around, her eyes"
7"It lacked substance, moving with"
8"She reached for the small"
9"You’re just rattled, Aurora."
10"It’s the dark, just the"
11"They were soft, overlapping whispers"
12"She couldn't distinguish words, only"
13"She felt the warmth radiating"
14"She didn't turn."
15"She forced her body to"
16"It possessed too many joints,"
17"She saw it peripheral to"
18"She took a slow, measured"
19"She wiped the copper warmth"
ratio0.424
1.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences85
matches
0"The fog clung to the"
1"Rory stepped over the twisted"
2"The Heartstone Pendant sat heavy"
3"It pulsed—a rhythmic, feverish heat—as"
4"Here, the oaks stood in"
5"They looked less like trees"
6"The grove doesn't belong here,"
7"She pushed past the stones."
8"The transition felt like walking"
9"The humid, heavy London air"
10"The ground beneath her feet"
11"They weren't growing; they appeared"
12"Rory scanned the perimeter."
13"Her fingers traced the crescent"
14"Shadows stretched long and spindly"
15"She glanced at her watch."
16"The digits blinked erratically before"
17"The air shifted."
18"A twig snapped—not a dry,"
19"Nothing should move out here"
ratio0.918
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"If I stay until midnight,"
ratio0.012
50.26% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"They looked less like trees and more like petrified sentinels, their bark scarred with deep, gnarled grooves that caught the weak moonlight."
1"Her fingers traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit that kept her grounded."
2"It lacked substance, moving with a jerky, disjointed fluidity that turned her stomach."
3"She couldn't distinguish words, only the tone—a hungry, invasive cadence that seemed to vibrate inside her skull."
4"She saw it peripheral to her vision—a pale, translucent shape that shimmered like oil on water."
5"The whispers grew louder, sharper, coalescing into a single, dissonant pitch that made her nose bleed."
6"The whispers vanished, replaced by a singular, piercing frequency that shattered every silence in a mile radius."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.3998%