| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1040 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1040 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "measured" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "shattered" | | 16 | "pulse" | | 17 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.41% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1032 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1032 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.39 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 7.14% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking through a curtain of" | | 1 | "sounded like glass grinding against glass" | | 2 | "cadence that seemed to vibrate inside her skull" | | 3 | "sounded like a drumbeat" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.969 | | wordCount | 1032 | | matches | | 0 | "not a dry, brittle crack, but a wet, sickening sound of cartilage popping" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 46.91 | | std | 35.15 | | cv | 0.749 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 72 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 82 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 90 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 91 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 84 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 76 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 69 | | 21 | 87 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.081 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed—a rhythmic, feverish heat—as she approached the boundary." | | 1 | "They weren't growing; they appeared to be embroidered into the dirt, their petals unnaturally vibrant in the dim light." | | 2 | "A twig snapped—not a dry, brittle crack, but a wet, sickening sound of cartilage popping." | | 3 | "She couldn't distinguish words, only the tone—a hungry, invasive cadence that seemed to vibrate inside her skull." | | 4 | "She saw it peripheral to her vision—a pale, translucent shape that shimmered like oil on water." | | 5 | "The entity shrieked—a sound of tearing metal and failing lungs—as it lunged for her." | | 6 | "For a split second, the veil thinned entirely, revealing the true nature of the space—a sprawling, jagged architecture of shadows and teeth, all reaching for the pulse of the Heartstone." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1043 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.023969319271332695 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00862895493767977 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 12 | | std | 6.13 | | cv | 0.511 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 38.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.29069767441860467 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 39.22% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 50.59% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed—a rhythmic, feverish heat—as" | | 1 | "They looked less like trees" | | 2 | "She pushed past the stones." | | 3 | "They weren't growing; they appeared" | | 4 | "Her fingers traced the crescent" | | 5 | "She glanced at her watch." | | 6 | "She spun around, her eyes" | | 7 | "It lacked substance, moving with" | | 8 | "She reached for the small" | | 9 | "You’re just rattled, Aurora." | | 10 | "It’s the dark, just the" | | 11 | "They were soft, overlapping whispers" | | 12 | "She couldn't distinguish words, only" | | 13 | "She felt the warmth radiating" | | 14 | "She didn't turn." | | 15 | "She forced her body to" | | 16 | "It possessed too many joints," | | 17 | "She saw it peripheral to" | | 18 | "She took a slow, measured" | | 19 | "She wiped the copper warmth" |
| | ratio | 0.424 | |
| 1.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The fog clung to the" | | 1 | "Rory stepped over the twisted" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant sat heavy" | | 3 | "It pulsed—a rhythmic, feverish heat—as" | | 4 | "Here, the oaks stood in" | | 5 | "They looked less like trees" | | 6 | "The grove doesn't belong here," | | 7 | "She pushed past the stones." | | 8 | "The transition felt like walking" | | 9 | "The humid, heavy London air" | | 10 | "The ground beneath her feet" | | 11 | "They weren't growing; they appeared" | | 12 | "Rory scanned the perimeter." | | 13 | "Her fingers traced the crescent" | | 14 | "Shadows stretched long and spindly" | | 15 | "She glanced at her watch." | | 16 | "The digits blinked erratically before" | | 17 | "The air shifted." | | 18 | "A twig snapped—not a dry," | | 19 | "Nothing should move out here" |
| | ratio | 0.918 | |
| 58.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "If I stay until midnight," |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 50.26% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "They looked less like trees and more like petrified sentinels, their bark scarred with deep, gnarled grooves that caught the weak moonlight." | | 1 | "Her fingers traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit that kept her grounded." | | 2 | "It lacked substance, moving with a jerky, disjointed fluidity that turned her stomach." | | 3 | "She couldn't distinguish words, only the tone—a hungry, invasive cadence that seemed to vibrate inside her skull." | | 4 | "She saw it peripheral to her vision—a pale, translucent shape that shimmered like oil on water." | | 5 | "The whispers grew louder, sharper, coalescing into a single, dissonant pitch that made her nose bleed." | | 6 | "The whispers vanished, replaced by a singular, piercing frequency that shattered every silence in a mile radius." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |