Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8X5AVJSM25R51XP9RVVQG6

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Duration:
1m 3s
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DekaLLM

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain didn't just fall in Soho; it reclaimed the city. It turned the asphalt into a black mirror, reflecting the fractured neon of bar signs and the rhythmic, amber pulse of streetlights. Detective Harlow Quinn felt the moisture seeping through the collar of her coat, a cold, persistent weight that mirrored the ache in her joints. She didn't slow her pace. Her boots struck the pavement with a rhythmic, military cadence, cutting through the chaotic splashing of late-night revelers and the distant drone of traffic. The suspect was twenty yards ahead, a dark silhouette weaving through the crowd with an unnatural fluidity. He didn't run like a man fleeing the law; he moved like a shadow slipping between folds of fabric. Quinn tightened her grip on the heavy Maglite in her coat pocket, her eyes locked on the back of his hood. Every time he drifted toward a corner, she adjusted her angle, her movements precise, calculated to intercept rather than merely follow. She wasn't a patrol officer chasing a shoplifter. She was a predator tracking a ghost. As they passed the Raven’s Nest, the distinctive green neon sign cast a sickly, emerald glow over the wet sidewalk. For a fleeting second, the light caught the suspect’s profile—a sharp, jagged movement that suggested he was looking back. Quinn felt a jolt of adrenaline, the kind that sharpened her vision and silenced the persistent hum of doubt in the back of her mind. She thought of Morris. She thought of the way his eyes had looked in that final, inexplicable moment three years ago—wide, terrified, and seeing something that shouldn't have existed. The man ahead of her carried the same frantic energy, the same scent of something fundamentally wrong. The chase veered away from the main thoroughfares, ducking into a narrow alleyway that smelled of wet cardboard and old grease. The walls closed in, slick with grime. The suspect didn't hesitate, plunging down a set of concrete stairs that led toward the subterranean guts of the city. Quinn followed, her breath coming in controlled, shallow bursts. She checked her watch—a worn leather thing on her left wrist—not to see the time, but to ground herself in the physical reality of the moment. The ticking was a heartbeat. The stairs descended deep, past the level of the subway lines, into a damp darkness that the city’s streetlights couldn't reach. The temperature dropped sharply. The air grew heavy, smelling of ozone and something metallic, like copper left out in the rain. When she reached the bottom, she found herself in a service tunnel, the brickwork weeping with moisture. The suspect was gone. Quinn slowed, her boots crunching on grit. She reached for her radio, then hesitated. The Metropolitan Police had protocols for chases, for suspects fleeing into unauthorized zones, but there were no protocols for the sense of dread pooling in her stomach. This wasn't a derelict basement or a squat. The tunnel opened up, the walls widening into the vaulted, soot-stained architecture of an abandoned Tube station. She stayed low, pressing her back against the cold tile of a pillar. Her eyes adjusted to the gloom. This wasn't the derelict ruin she expected. Ahead, the platform was bathed in a low, flickering light—not the harsh electric hum of the London Underground, but something softer, more organic. It was a marketplace, but not one that appeared on any city map. The Veil Market breathed. Small, huddled clusters of people moved between makeshift stalls constructed from salvaged wood and rusted iron. They weren't the usual Camden drifters. There was a stillness to them, a way they moved that suggested they were part of the shadows rather than mere visitors to them. Quinn watched, her heart hammering against her ribs, as a man in a heavy, tattered cloak approached a vendor. He reached into a pouch and produced a small, pale object—a token carved from bone. The vendor took it with a nod, and in exchange, handed over a vial of liquid that shimmered with a rhythmic, internal light. Quinn’s jaw tightened. This was it. The periphery of the world she knew, the edge of the shadow that had swallowed Morris. The suspect she was chasing had disappeared into this throng, heading deeper into the belly of the station, toward a cluster of stalls where the air seemed to ripple like heat over asphalt. She felt the pull of her duty, the iron-clad instinct that had driven her through eighteen years of service. She needed that man. He was a link, a thread in the tapestry of whatever madness had turned her life into a series of unanswered questions. But as she watched a woman with eyes that reflected too much light barter with a merchant selling what looked like preserved, pulsing organs, a primal part of her brain screamed to turn back. To go down there was to leave the law behind. The Metropolitan Police had no jurisdiction in a place that didn't technically exist. If she crossed that threshold, if she stepped onto that platform, she wasn't just a detective anymore. She was an intruder in a realm where the rules of physics and morality seemed to have been discarded like trash in a gutter. She thought of the files on her desk, the cold cases, the unexplained forensic anomalies from the Morris investigation. She thought of the way the light had died in his eyes. Her hand drifted to the grip of her sidearm, but she didn't draw it. A gun felt useless here, a toy against the ancient, heavy atmosphere of the market. She took a breath, tasting the copper and the incense, and stepped out from behind the pillar. Her boots made a soft, heavy sound on the platform. The closer she got, the more the sounds of the market intensified—the low murmur of voices in languages she didn't recognize, the clink of strange metals, the unsettling sound of something sliding across the floor. The suspect was visible again, a dark shape moving through the crowd near a stall draped in heavy, velvet fabrics. He was moving with purpose, toward the darker recesses of the tunnel where the station ended in a jagged maw of broken tracks. Quinn didn't run. She moved with the same military precision she had used on the streets, her eyes scanning for exits, for threats, for the moment she might need to strike. She felt the weight of her leather watch, the steady ticking a reminder of the world she was leaving behind. She was stepping into the dark, and for the first time in her career, she wasn't sure if the light would ever find her again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"calculated"
count1
6
word"predator"
count1
7
word"fleeting"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"constructed"
count1
13
word"shimmered"
count1
14
word"tapestry"
count1
15
word"velvet"
count1
16
word"maw"
count1
17
word"scanning"
count1
18
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"rhythmic"
2"pulse"
3"weight"
4"chaotic"
5"calculated"
6"predator"
7"fleeting"
8"sense of"
9"stomach"
10"gloom"
11"electric"
12"constructed"
13"shimmered"
14"tapestry"
15"velvet"
16"maw"
17"scanning"
18"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences70
matches
0"felt a jolt"
1"the sense of dread"
61.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1114
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1114
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn8
Maglite1
Raven1
Nest1
Morris3
Metropolitan2
Police2
Tube1
London1
Underground1
Veil1
Market1
Camden1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
4"Police"
5"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like preserved, pulsing organs, a"
20.47% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.795
wordCount1114
matches
0"not to see the time, but to ground herself in the physical reality of the moment"
1"not the harsh electric hum of the London Underground, but something softer, more organic"
71.43% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"needed that man"
1"crossed that threshold"
87.39% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean65.53
std29.87
cv0.456
sampleLengths
086
193
2110
388
459
54
666
762
84
9103
1055
1179
1264
1331
1446
1588
1676
90.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"was gone"
1"was bathed"
2"been discarded"
40.32% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was looking"
1"was chasing"
2"was leaving"
3"was stepping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences70
ratio0.114
matches
0"The rain didn't just fall in Soho; it reclaimed the city."
1"He didn't run like a man fleeing the law; he moved like a shadow slipping between folds of fabric."
2"For a fleeting second, the light caught the suspect’s profile—a sharp, jagged movement that suggested he was looking back."
3"She thought of the way his eyes had looked in that final, inexplicable moment three years ago—wide, terrified, and seeing something that shouldn't have existed."
4"She checked her watch—a worn leather thing on her left wrist—not to see the time, but to ground herself in the physical reality of the moment."
5"Ahead, the platform was bathed in a low, flickering light—not the harsh electric hum of the London Underground, but something softer, more organic."
6"He reached into a pouch and produced a small, pale object—a token carved from bone."
7"The closer she got, the more the sounds of the market intensified—the low murmur of voices in languages she didn't recognize, the clink of strange metals, the unsettling sound of something sliding across the floor."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1124
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.019572953736654804
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005338078291814947
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean15.91
std8.17
cv0.513
sampleLengths
011
122
224
35
424
517
619
721
821
98
107
1120
1219
1325
144
1525
1617
1721
187
1920
209
2126
225
2321
244
2517
2617
274
287
297
3027
318
3217
3313
346
357
3623
3713
384
3916
406
4124
4219
4315
4423
453
463
4716
4833
4919
28.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences70
matches
0"It turned the asphalt into"
1"She didn't slow her pace."
2"Her boots struck the pavement"
3"He didn't run like a"
4"She wasn't a patrol officer"
5"She was a predator tracking"
6"She thought of Morris."
7"She thought of the way"
8"She checked her watch—a worn"
9"She reached for her radio,"
10"She stayed low, pressing her"
11"Her eyes adjusted to the"
12"It was a marketplace, but"
13"They weren't the usual Camden"
14"He reached into a pouch"
15"She felt the pull of"
16"She needed that man."
17"He was a link, a"
18"She was an intruder in"
19"She thought of the files"
ratio0.4
24.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences70
matches
0"The rain didn't just fall"
1"It turned the asphalt into"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn felt the"
3"She didn't slow her pace."
4"Her boots struck the pavement"
5"The suspect was twenty yards"
6"He didn't run like a"
7"Quinn tightened her grip on"
8"Every time he drifted toward"
9"She wasn't a patrol officer"
10"She was a predator tracking"
11"Quinn felt a jolt of"
12"She thought of Morris."
13"She thought of the way"
14"The man ahead of her"
15"The chase veered away from"
16"The walls closed in, slick"
17"The suspect didn't hesitate, plunging"
18"Quinn followed, her breath coming"
19"She checked her watch—a worn"
ratio0.871
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"To go down there was"
1"If she crossed that threshold,"
ratio0.029
42.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn felt the moisture seeping through the collar of her coat, a cold, persistent weight that mirrored the ache in her joints."
1"Quinn felt a jolt of adrenaline, the kind that sharpened her vision and silenced the persistent hum of doubt in the back of her mind."
2"She thought of the way his eyes had looked in that final, inexplicable moment three years ago—wide, terrified, and seeing something that shouldn't have existed."
3"The chase veered away from the main thoroughfares, ducking into a narrow alleyway that smelled of wet cardboard and old grease."
4"The suspect didn't hesitate, plunging down a set of concrete stairs that led toward the subterranean guts of the city."
5"She felt the pull of her duty, the iron-clad instinct that had driven her through eighteen years of service."
6"But as she watched a woman with eyes that reflected too much light barter with a merchant selling what looked like preserved, pulsing organs, a primal part of h…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.1394%