| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1160 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.48% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1160 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "racing" | | 5 | "tangible" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "stark" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "reminder" | | 12 | "unreadable" | | 13 | "magnetic" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "oppressive" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "churn" | | 18 | "sense of" | | 19 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 57.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1154 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.55% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 972 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.75 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 17 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Shade | 5 | | Isolde | 5 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 2 | | London | 2 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Half-Fae" | | 6 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.626 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "blooms that seemed to pulse in time with her own heartbeat" | | 1 | "felt like a garment that no longer fit" | | 2 | "sounded like ancient distaste" |
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| 26.69% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.733 | | wordCount | 1154 | | matches | | 0 | "not green, but a deep, bruised purple" | | 1 | "not the silver forests of the Fae, but something far more oppressive" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 42.74 | | std | 26.29 | | cv | 0.615 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 64 | | 5 | 84 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 90 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 87 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 85 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 50 | | 23 | 66 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 39 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 63.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "was drumming" | | 1 | "were absorbing" | | 2 | "was jarring" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.108 | | matches | | 0 | "The grass beneath Rory’s boots didn’t crunch; it hummed." | | 1 | "She didn't look back at them; she simply drifted deeper into the grove, her pale lavender eyes fixed on a horizon that shouldn't have existed within the confines of a London park." | | 2 | "She was a creature of law and logic—or at least, she had been trained to be." | | 3 | "They reached a clearing where the trees peeled back to reveal a shimmering distortion in the air—a ripple, like heat rising from asphalt, but iridescent and swirling." | | 4 | "She could see shapes through the distortion—not the silver forests of the Fae, but something far more oppressive." | | 5 | "The contrast was jarring—the purity of the grove clashing with the decadent, heavy musk of Hel." | | 6 | "She felt small—insignificantly small—caught between a Shade of a forgotten sorcerer and a Half-Fae exile." | | 7 | "She had survived the wreckage of her life in Cardiff and the shadows of London; she could survive a rip in the universe." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 985 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar." |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.026395939086294416 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006091370558375634 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 15.59 | | std | 7.8 | | cv | 0.5 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 68.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.43243243243243246 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled back, her fingers" | | 1 | "They were a silhouette carved" | | 2 | "Her silver hair trailed behind" | | 3 | "She didn't look back at" | | 4 | "She was a creature of" | | 5 | "She instinctively reached for the" | | 6 | "She felt a prickle of" | | 7 | "She looked down at her" | | 8 | "It was a grounding ritual," | | 9 | "They reached a clearing where" | | 10 | "She stopped before the distortion," | | 11 | "She could see shapes through" | | 12 | "She caught a glimpse of" | | 13 | "She felt a sudden, visceral" | | 14 | "She felt small—insignificantly small—caught between" | | 15 | "She had survived the wreckage" | | 16 | "She stepped toward the shimmering" |
| | ratio | 0.274 | |
| 40.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The grass beneath Rory’s boots" | | 1 | "The sound wasn't a voice" | | 2 | "Rory paused, her hand hovering" | | 3 | "She pulled back, her fingers" | | 4 | "The crimson gem was drumming" | | 5 | "Rory asked, her voice sounding" | | 6 | "The Shade moved beside her," | | 7 | "They were a silhouette carved" | | 8 | "Every time Nyx stepped, the" | | 9 | "The Half-Fae didn't leave a" | | 10 | "Her silver hair trailed behind" | | 11 | "She didn't look back at" | | 12 | "Isolde murmured, her voice melodic" | | 13 | "Rory followed, her mind racing." | | 14 | "She was a creature of" | | 15 | "Pre-law at Cardiff had taught" | | 16 | "Isolde replied without turning" | | 17 | "Trees with bark like polished" | | 18 | "The light shifted from a" | | 19 | "A sudden, sharp chill spiked" |
| | ratio | 0.839 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left, a stream" | | 1 | "Yet, as the pendant pulsed" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 43.19% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, the familiar, muted greys of Richmond Park vanished, replaced by a saturation of color that made her eyes ache." | | 1 | "Rory paused, her hand hovering inches from a cluster of iridescent blooms that seemed to pulse in time with her own heartbeat." | | 2 | "To her left, a stream flowed upward, the crystal-clear water defying gravity to form a floating ribbon of liquid that spiraled toward the canopy." | | 3 | "She caught a glimpse of a sky the color of warm amber and the distant, sprawling silhouette of vineyards that stretched for miles, smelling of overripe fruit an…" | | 4 | "She felt a sudden, visceral sense of greed emanating from the rift, a hunger that didn't want food, but essence." | | 5 | "She stepped toward the shimmering tear, the cold silver of the blade in one hand and the burning crimson of the stone in the other, walking deeper into a wonder…" |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her voice melodic and distant" | | 1 | "Rory asked, her hand gripping the Fae blade" | | 2 | "Rory said, her voice firm" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "the Shade whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 6 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.619 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.538 | | effectiveRatio | 0.538 | |