Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8X83CBEPWNQ4P2XT5F1SH5

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Duration:
2m 2s
Cost:
$0.000525
Provider:
DekaLLM

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of the sign hummed above the door, casting a rhythmic, emerald pulse across the damp pavement of the Soho alley. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air tasted of cedarwood, stale gin, and the heavy scent of old paper. Shadows clung to the corners of the room, dancing between the framed black-and-white photographs and the yellowed edges of maps that lined the walls. Aurora sat at the far end of the mahogany bar, her fingers tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The condensation from her glass left a damp ring on the wood. She watched the way the light caught the silver signet ring on Silas’s hand as he polished a highball glass. Silas moved with a measured, rhythmic cadence, his slight limp a constant companion in his gait. He didn't look up, but his presence anchored the room, a quiet authority that kept the dim space from feeling hollow. The heavy door creaked open, admitting a gust of chilled London air and the muffled roar of the city. A man stepped inside, shaking a black umbrella. He paused, letting his eyes adjust to the emerald gloom. Aurora froze. The glass slipped a fraction of an inch in her grip. The man straightened. He wore a charcoal overcoat that spoke of bespoke tailoring and silent boardrooms. His hair, once a chaotic nest of chestnut curls, now sat in a precise, disciplined sweep. He looked like a man who had never known a day of hunger or a night of uncertainty. "Rory?" The voice carried the ghost of a Cardiff accent, stripped of its softness by years of something harder. Aurora forced her hand away from her wrist. She turned her head, meeting eyes that had once looked at her with nothing but uncomplicated warmth. Now, they held the guarded sheen of polished stone. "Julian." He pulled out the stool beside her, the heavy wood scraping a harsh note against the floorboards. He didn't sit so much as occupy the space, his posture rigid, his movements efficient. "You're a long way from the coast." She took a slow sip of her drink, the liquid burning a path down her throat. "London has a way of pulling people in." "It looks like it caught you." A shadow of a smile flickered on his lips, but it didn't reach his eyes. He signaled to Silas, a sharp, practiced motion of his hand. "The usual, Silas. And whatever she's having." Silas glided toward them, his hazel eyes flicking between the two of them with the clinical precision of a man who had spent decades reading people. He poured a measure of amber liquid into a clean glass and set it before Julian. "A bit heavy for a Tuesday, isn't it?" Silas's voice was a low rumble. He didn't wait for an answer, moving back toward the far end of the bar to tend to a flickering lamp. Julian picked up the glass, swirling the liquid. The ice clinked—a lonely, sharp sound in the quiet bar. "I didn't think you'd still be in this kind of place." "It suits me." "It suits a version of you I remember." She turned her body toward him, her shoulder-length black hair catching the green light. "The version of me you remember died in Cardiff, Julian. You should know that. You were there when the funeral happened." "I didn't mean it like that." He set the glass down with a definitive click. "I saw your name in a delivery log once. A long time ago. I thought, 'There she is. Somewhere in the sprawl.'" "And now you've found me. Congratulations." The silence that followed stretched, thick and suffocating, filled only by the distant thrum of a bassline from a club down the street. Julian reached into his coat, pulling out a slim leather wallet. He laid a note on the bar, the paper crisp and white against the dark wood. "You look tired, Rory. Not the kind of tired a night's sleep fixes." "I'm working. I'm living. That's more than some people manage." "Is it? You're delivering food for a restaurant in Chinatown and living above a pub. Is that the plan?" She felt the heat rise in her neck, but her expression remained a mask of cool indifference. "It's a life. It's quiet. It's mine." "It's small." "Small is safe." Julian leaned in, the scent of expensive sandalwood and cold rain drifting from his coat. "I thought we were going to do more than this. When we were nineteen, standing on the pier, you said the world was too wide to stay in one zip code." "Nineteen-year-olds say a lot of things when they're terrified of the future." "I wasn't terrified. I was waiting for you." She looked away, her gaze landing on an old map of the Mediterranean pinned to the wall. The edges were curled, the ink faded. "You waited for a ghost. I had to move. I had to breathe." "And now? Do you feel like you're breathing?" She gripped the edge of the bar, her knuckles turning white. "I'm breathing just fine." "You're surviving. There's a difference." He stood up, the movement sudden and jarring. He smoothed the front of his coat, the perfection of his silhouette a direct insult to the cluttered, lived-in warmth of the Nest. "I'm staying at the Savoy. If you ever decide you want to talk about something other than survival." "I think I've had enough talk for one lifetime." He lingered for a moment, his hand hovering near the bar as if considering reaching out. His fingers twitched, then curled into a fist. "Goodbye, Rory." He turned and walked toward the door. His stride was long and confident, the walk of a man who owned the pavement beneath his feet. The door swung shut, the bell chiming a lonely note as he disappeared into the Soho night. The green neon continued its rhythmic pulse. The silence rushed back into the room, heavier than before. Silas approached, a damp cloth in his hand. He began to wipe the spot where Julian had sat, his movements slow and deliberate. "He's a polished one." "He's a stranger." "The ones who change the most usually are." She stared at the empty stool. The amber liquid in Julian's glass remained untouched, a small, glowing puddle of wasted intent. She reached up, pulling her hair behind her ear, and felt the slight tremor in her fingers. She picked up her glass and drained the rest of the drink, the ice rattling against her teeth.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1096
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1096
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count3
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"chilled"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count2
9
word"efficient"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"pulse"
2"dancing"
3"tracing"
4"measured"
5"chilled"
6"gloom"
7"chaotic"
8"warmth"
9"efficient"
10"flickered"
11"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
92.73% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tend to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1095
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount801
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven1
Nest2
Silas6
London1
Cardiff1
Julian6
Mediterranean1
Aurora3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Julian"
2"Mediterranean"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a man who had never known a d"
1"as if considering reaching out"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1095
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean17.95
std14.6
cv0.813
sampleLengths
065
153
237
337
413
550
61
718
834
91
1032
117
1216
138
146
1526
167
1742
188
1927
2018
2111
223
238
2414
2521
266
279
2822
296
3050
3113
3210
3319
3417
357
362
373
3815
3931
4012
418
4224
4313
448
4511
464
475
4831
4918
99.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"were curled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences90
ratio0.011
matches
0"The ice clinked—a lonely, sharp sound in the quiet bar."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount807
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.011152416356877323
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0037174721189591076
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean12.17
std6.48
cv0.532
sampleLengths
023
118
224
321
412
520
616
721
819
98
1010
112
1211
133
1413
1516
1618
171
1818
198
2017
219
221
2317
2415
257
2616
278
286
2915
3011
317
3226
3316
348
356
3621
378
3810
3911
403
418
4214
4321
446
459
4622
476
4823
4911
37.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.23333333333333334
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences56
matches
0"She watched the way the"
1"He didn't look up, but"
2"He paused, letting his eyes"
3"He wore a charcoal overcoat"
4"His hair, once a chaotic"
5"He looked like a man"
6"She turned her head, meeting"
7"He pulled out the stool"
8"He didn't sit so much"
9"She took a slow sip"
10"He signaled to Silas, a"
11"He poured a measure of"
12"He didn't wait for an"
13"She turned her body toward"
14"He set the glass down"
15"He laid a note on"
16"She felt the heat rise"
17"She looked away, her gaze"
18"She gripped the edge of"
19"He stood up, the movement"
ratio0.518
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences56
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"Shadows clung to the corners"
2"Aurora sat at the far"
3"The condensation from her glass"
4"She watched the way the"
5"Silas moved with a measured,"
6"He didn't look up, but"
7"The heavy door creaked open,"
8"A man stepped inside, shaking"
9"He paused, letting his eyes"
10"The glass slipped a fraction"
11"The man straightened."
12"He wore a charcoal overcoat"
13"His hair, once a chaotic"
14"He looked like a man"
15"The voice carried the ghost"
16"Aurora forced her hand away"
17"She turned her head, meeting"
18"He pulled out the stool"
19"He didn't sit so much"
ratio0.964
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Now, they held the guarded"
ratio0.018
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Shadows clung to the corners of the room, dancing between the framed black-and-white photographs and the yellowed edges of maps that lined the walls."
1"He didn't look up, but his presence anchored the room, a quiet authority that kept the dim space from feeling hollow."
2"He wore a charcoal overcoat that spoke of bespoke tailoring and silent boardrooms."
3"He looked like a man who had never known a day of hunger or a night of uncertainty."
4"Silas glided toward them, his hazel eyes flicking between the two of them with the clinical precision of a man who had spent decades reading people."
5"The silence that followed stretched, thick and suffocating, filled only by the distant thrum of a bassline from a club down the street."
6"He lingered for a moment, his hand hovering near the bar as if considering reaching out."
7"His stride was long and confident, the walk of a man who owned the pavement beneath his feet."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.4700%