| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.611 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1246 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1246 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "chilling" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "kaleidoscope" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "marble" | | 9 | "sense of" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "beacon" | | 13 | "unreadable" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "oppressive" | | 17 | "silence" | | 18 | "throb" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.20% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1242 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1101 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Rory | 18 | | Shade | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | London | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.683 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 34.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "hum that seemed to vibrate in the marrow of her bones" | | 1 | "looked like a deer, but its antlers were" | | 2 | "energy that seemed to pull her toward the marble threshold" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.805 | | wordCount | 1242 | | matches | | 0 | "not a bleat, but a chord of three distinct musical notes" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 35.49 | | std | 24.27 | | cv | 0.684 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 85 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 70 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 86 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 57 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "The sound didn't come from a throat; it drifted like a draft through the trees, chilling the back of Rory's neck." | | 1 | "As they crossed the threshold of the standing stones, the sound of the city—the distant roar of traffic and the cry of crows—vanished." | | 2 | "The water wasn't blue or clear; it was a swirling liquid mercury, reflecting images of things that weren't there." | | 3 | "The scale of the place shifted unpredictably; one moment the ferns seemed like blades of grass, and the next, they towered like skyscrapers, their fronds blotting out the light." | | 4 | "The deer let out a sound—not a bleat, but a chord of three distinct musical notes." | | 5 | "The archway didn't lead anywhere; it stood alone, framing a view of a different landscape entirely—a vista of sprawling vineyards under a warm amber sky, where gold-plated towers pierced the clouds." | | 6 | "The Heartstone was no longer pulsing; it was vibrating, a frantic, humming energy that seemed to pull her toward the marble threshold." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1110 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.025225225225225224 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007207207207207207 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 14.79 | | std | 6.69 | | cv | 0.452 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 38.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.2976190476190476 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 91.32% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she saw a flickering" | | 1 | "Then, it looked directly at" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, her hand instinctively" | | 1 | "She didn't leave a single" | | 2 | "Her pale lavender eyes scanned" | | 3 | "They emerged into a valley" | | 4 | "She recoiled, the Heartstone pulsing" | | 5 | "It looked like a deer," | | 6 | "It tilted its head, observing" | | 7 | "It sniffed the air, its" | | 8 | "She stepped back, her boot" | | 9 | "It let out a hiss" | | 10 | "Her palm was damp with" | | 11 | "They continued their descent into" | | 12 | "They reached a clearing centered" | | 13 | "She could see the distant" | | 14 | "She looked down and saw" | | 15 | "She gripped the Fae blade," |
| | ratio | 0.219 | |
| 49.04% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted from the" | | 1 | "Rory stepped over a twisted" | | 2 | "She paused, her hand instinctively" | | 3 | "The crimson gem pulsed against" | | 4 | "The sound didn't come from" | | 5 | "The Shade hovered a few" | | 6 | "Nyx looked less like a" | | 7 | "The ancient oak standing stones," | | 8 | "Isolde walked ahead, her silver" | | 9 | "She didn't leave a single" | | 10 | "Her pale lavender eyes scanned" | | 11 | "Isolde murmured, her voice airy" | | 12 | "Rory followed, her fingers tightening" | | 13 | "The moonsilver pommel remained ice-cold," | | 14 | "They emerged into a valley" | | 15 | "Nyx drifted closer to a" | | 16 | "Rory stepped deeper into the" | | 17 | "The water wasn't blue or" | | 18 | "She recoiled, the Heartstone pulsing" | | 19 | "Isolde warned without turning around" |
| | ratio | 0.822 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 37.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped over a twisted root of an oak tree, her boot sinking into soil that shimmered with a metallic, iridescent sheen." | | 1 | "The crimson gem pulsed against her skin, a rhythmic heat that mirrored her own quickening heartbeat." | | 2 | "One of the flowers leaned toward the Shade, its petals pulsing in time with Nyx's flickering form." | | 3 | "Rory stepped deeper into the grove, her eyes tracking a stream that flowed upward, defying gravity to wind its way toward a floating island of rock and moss." | | 4 | "The water wasn't blue or clear; it was a swirling liquid mercury, reflecting images of things that weren't there." | | 5 | "It looked like a deer, but its antlers were made of living coral that glowed with a rhythmic orange light, and its eyes were multifaceted, like those of a drago…" | | 6 | "She looked down and saw that the iridescent soil beneath the archway had turned black, charred as if by an invisible fire." | | 7 | "The Heartstone was no longer pulsing; it was vibrating, a frantic, humming energy that seemed to pull her toward the marble threshold." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx observed, their voice sharpening" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her expression unreadable" | | 2 | "Rory said, her voice trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 4 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 5 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 7 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.611 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.727 | | effectiveRatio | 0.727 | |