Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8XB89787VVEQG0YEBD7KY6

Run Details

Duration:
11.5s
Cost:
$0.003328
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon hum of The Raven's Nest bled through the condensation on the front window, painting the puddles on the sidewalk in sickly electric hues. Aurora shifted the heat-sealed bag of Golden Empress takeout, the cardboard biting into her palm. She pushed the heavy oak door open. Inside, the scent of stale ale and pipe tobacco hung thick, a familiar, suffocating blanket. She scanned the room, looking for the back stairwell, but a figure detached itself from the shadows near the bar. "Need a hand with that shipment, or are you just here to decorate the foyer, Rory?" Silas leaned against the mahogany, his hazel eyes tracking the movement of her scarred wrist. He dragged his left leg, the rhythmic tap of his heel hitting the floorboards like a metronome. He twirled the heavy silver ring on his finger, his gaze heavy with the weight of someone who spent decades reading rooms instead of living in them. "Just dropping off the food, Silas. The kitchen back home is having a busy night." "The city moves faster than the people living in it, don't you think?" Aurora moved toward the counter, set the bag down, and caught sight of a man nursing a whiskey at the end of the bar. He wore a crisp, tailored suit that looked entirely out of place amidst the peeling wallpaper and framed black-and-white photos of forgotten intelligence ops. He turned, his face caught in the low amber light of a wall sconce. The angular lines of his jaw stayed the same, but the softness in his eyes had hardened into something cold and analytical. It was Julian, her former partner from the firm at Cardiff, the one who had watched her dismantle her own life with the detached curiosity of an autopsy technician. "Rory? Is that actually you?" He stood, the chair scraping sharply against the wood. He didn't look like the man who played rugby in the quad; he looked like someone who had spent his adult life erasing people from existence for the highest bidder. Aurora felt the familiar, dull ache in her wrist, a reflex of nerves and trapped history. She took a half-step back, her fingers curling into her palm to hide the crescent scar. "Julian. It’s been five years. What brings a high-priced London shark to a place where the floorboards smell like misery?" "I heard the rumors. A barrister in training who walked out on her final moot, left the Welsh countryside in the middle of the night, and never looked back. I honestly thought you had burned out completely." He set his glass down, the ice clinking against tempered crystal. He didn't blink when he looked at her, his posture rigid. The air between them thickened with the friction of everything left unsaid during their final semester. "Some of us prefer the air in Soho to the sterile humidity of a courtroom, Julian. You didn't answer the question." "I work for firms that don't advertise on neon signs. I’m here because Silas and I have business that predates your arrival in this city. You look different. Harder, maybe. Less prone to those grand, sweeping gestures about justice we used to waste our weekends debating." Aurora gestured to the bar, toward Silas, who stood observing them with his arms crossed, a neutral expression masking the calculations surely running behind his eyes. "Justice is a luxury item, and I’m just a delivery driver now. I don't trade in ideals. I trade in hot lo mein and the occasional secret that finds its way into the wrong hands." "You were smarter than that, Rory. You were going to be the best of us. Instead, you're hiding in a basement with a retired spook and a stack of menus." He took a step closer. The scent of ozone and expensive cologne clung to him, a sharp contrast to the damp, earthy smell of the pub. He looked down at the bag on the counter, then back at her face, searching for a mirror image of the woman he once thought he knew. "I’m not hiding. I’m simply choosing which traps I walk into. You used to understand the distinction." "You weren't this cynical in Cardiff. You still had that pathetic flicker of hope that the law actually corrected the balance." "The law is a blunt instrument, Julian. You know that better than anyone, considering who writes your paychecks now." Silas cleared his throat, the sound a low gravelly rumble that silenced the tension for a fleeting second. He leaned off the bar, his hobbled walk bringing him into the small radius of their standoff. "Julian has a habit of looking at the board instead of the pieces, Rory. It’s his primary flaw. He sees the strategy but misses the blood on the floor." "The blood is irrelevant if the objective is secured, Silas. You taught me that yourself in Prague, remember? Or has the drink finally softened the edges of your memory?" Silas didn't flinch. He adjusted his cuff, the silver signet ring catching the light. "Prague was for keeping the world turning. This? This is just two people who got lost on the road to somewhere else." Julian laughed, a sharp, humorless sound that sent a shiver through the room. "We were never going to be simple, were we? Even back then, you had that frantic, searching energy. Like you were trying to outrun your own shadow. And that was before you met Evan." Aurora felt her pulse jump. The name hit her like a physical blow. She forced herself to stay still, to keep her features as blank as a page of fresh stationery. "Don't mention him. We're here, we're miles away from that life, and I'd like to keep it that way." "He's asking about you, you know. Not that he's looking, but the questions circulate. People notice when someone like you just stops existing in professional circles." "I stopped existing for him, not for the world. There's a difference." "Is there? Because from where I’m sitting, you're still carrying the weight of that exit like it’s a physical load. You're still protecting yourself, still watching the exits." She moved past him, her shoulder brushing his expensive wool suit. The contact felt electric, a jolt of static from a past she had spent years burying in the back of her mind. She walked to the bar, pulled a small rag from her apron pocket, and began to wipe down a grease spot near the register. "You analyze everything to death, Julian. It’s why you're a excellent lawyer, and why you're a completely insufferable human being. Go back to your drink. The world doesn't end just because we happened to occupy the same square footage for ten minutes." "It’s not just by chance, Rory. We don't live in a world governed by coincidence. You know that. I’m here because your father finally stopped playing the quiet barrister and started asking exactly how deep you went into the underworld." Aurora stopped wiping. The rag hung limply in her hand. The ambient noise of the bar—the hum of the fridge, the distant murmur of street traffic—seemed to drop away. "Leave my father out of this. He doesn't know anything, and he doesn't need to." "He knows his daughter is working for a man who is legally dead in three countries. Do you really think he's that blind?" "He's a man who prefers his reality curated. As long as he doesn't see the mess, he pretends the floor is clean." Silas stepped forward, his expression unreadable, though his hand rested near the shelf where the bottles sat, his posture alert. "The conversation has reached its useful conclusion, Julian. Rory has deliveries to finish, and I have a bar to run. Your presence is beginning to disrupt the atmosphere." Julian stood his ground for a long, heavy moment. He flicked a speck of imaginary lint from his sleeve, his eyes darting from Silas to Aurora one last time. The pity was gone, replaced by a cold, calculating mask of professional indifference. "I’ll be in London for three days. My number hasn't changed, though I suspect you deleted it the moment you stepped off that train." He turned on his heel, his strides precise and silent against the worn floorboards. The bell above the door chimed—a bright, incongruous sound—as he stepped out into the night. The rain lashed against the glass anew. Aurora leaned against the bar, her breath hitching in her chest. The silence roared after he left. "He's not wrong about the mess, is he?" Silas reached down, pulled a glass from the rack, and filled it with a dark, amber liquid. He slid it toward her. "He's a lawyer, Rory. He’s trained to find the rot in the foundation. It doesn't mean the house is going to collapse." "He knows about the firm, about Evan, about everything I tried to scrub clean." "Then we make sure he doesn't have a reason to take that knowledge anywhere that matters." Aurora picked up the glass. The liquid burned as it hit her throat, a sharp reminder of the present. She traced the crescent scar on her wrist with her thumb, the skin raised and pale under the flickering light. "He didn't come here by accident, did he?" "No," Silas admitted, his voice quiet, almost lost in the soft drone of the neon. "Nobody ever does."
created_at"2026-05-10T12:21:13.647Z" 5/10/2026, 12:21:13 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1576
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"completely"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1576
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"electric"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"amidst"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"fleeting"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"disrupt"
count1
13
word"flicked"
count1
14
word"calculating"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count1
17
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"familiar"
2"scanned"
3"rhythmic"
4"weight"
5"amidst"
6"crystal"
7"flicker"
8"tension"
9"fleeting"
10"pulse"
11"unreadable"
12"disrupt"
13"flicked"
14"calculating"
15"silence"
16"reminder"
17"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
88.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1572
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount812
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Julian3
Cardiff1
Silas8
Aurora9
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Julian"
3"Silas"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.946
windowScore1
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like someone who had spent his adu"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.636
wordCount1572
matches
0"Not that he's looking, but the questions circulate"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean29.66
std19.3
cv0.651
sampleLengths
083
116
259
315
413
5113
65
771
820
937
1038
1121
1246
1326
1435
1530
1653
1717
1821
1919
2035
2129
2229
2314
2422
2513
2634
2731
2819
2926
3012
3128
3257
3342
3440
3529
3615
3723
3822
3920
4028
4142
4224
4336
4417
458
4622
4722
4814
4916
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
44.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences87
ratio0.034
matches
0"He didn't look like the man who played rugby in the quad; he looked like someone who had spent his adult life erasing people from existence for the highest bidder."
1"The ambient noise of the bar—the hum of the fridge, the distant murmur of street traffic—seemed to drop away."
2"The bell above the door chimed—a bright, incongruous sound—as he stepped out into the night."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount820
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.015853658536585366
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007317073170731708
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean18.07
std9.13
cv0.505
sampleLengths
026
115
27
315
420
516
615
717
827
915
1013
1124
1224
1314
1422
1529
165
179
1830
1916
2016
2120
2237
2311
2411
2516
2621
2746
2826
2935
3030
315
3221
3327
3417
3521
3619
3718
3817
3929
4029
413
4211
4322
4413
4534
465
478
4818
4919
39.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.26436781609195403
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences53
matches
0"She pushed the heavy oak"
1"She scanned the room, looking"
2"He dragged his left leg,"
3"He twirled the heavy silver"
4"He wore a crisp, tailored"
5"He turned, his face caught"
6"It was Julian, her former"
7"He stood, the chair scraping"
8"He didn't look like the"
9"She took a half-step back,"
10"He set his glass down,"
11"He didn't blink when he"
12"He took a step closer."
13"He looked down at the"
14"He leaned off the bar,"
15"He adjusted his cuff, the"
16"She forced herself to stay"
17"She moved past him, her"
18"She walked to the bar,"
19"He flicked a speck of"
ratio0.434
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences53
matches
0"The green neon hum of"
1"Aurora shifted the heat-sealed bag"
2"She pushed the heavy oak"
3"She scanned the room, looking"
4"Silas leaned against the mahogany,"
5"He dragged his left leg,"
6"He twirled the heavy silver"
7"Aurora moved toward the counter,"
8"He wore a crisp, tailored"
9"He turned, his face caught"
10"The angular lines of his"
11"It was Julian, her former"
12"He stood, the chair scraping"
13"He didn't look like the"
14"Aurora felt the familiar, dull"
15"She took a half-step back,"
16"He set his glass down,"
17"He didn't blink when he"
18"The air between them thickened"
19"Aurora gestured to the bar,"
ratio0.981
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He twirled the heavy silver ring on his finger, his gaze heavy with the weight of someone who spent decades reading rooms instead of living in them."
1"He wore a crisp, tailored suit that looked entirely out of place amidst the peeling wallpaper and framed black-and-white photos of forgotten intelligence ops."
2"He didn't look like the man who played rugby in the quad; he looked like someone who had spent his adult life erasing people from existence for the highest bidd…"
3"Aurora gestured to the bar, toward Silas, who stood observing them with his arms crossed, a neutral expression masking the calculations surely running behind hi…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Silas admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.057
79.9890%