Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8XBP70E4AZ7B5F498R2XJM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.001080
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, and the air changed instantly. The damp, biting chill of Richmond Park vanished, replaced by a heavy, floral warmth that smelled of crushed jasmine and ozone. She paused, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in defiant, impossible colors—electric blues and deep, shimmering golds that seemed to pulse in time with her own heartbeat. Behind her, Nyx drifted through the threshold. The Shade’s form was a jagged silhouette of living shadow, a void in the shape of a man that absorbed the vibrant light of the grove. Their violet eyes glowed faintly, scanning the perimeter with a detached, predatory curiosity. "The Veil is thin here," Nyx whispered, the voice sounding like wind rushing through a narrow canyon. "Tattered. I can feel the seams fraying." Rory didn't answer. She was staring at the sky. Above the canopy of towering, silver-barked trees, the atmosphere wasn't the grey overcast of a London afternoon. It was a shimmering iridescent haze, shifting from pale mint to soft amethyst. There was no sun, yet the light was everywhere, emanating from the flora itself. Glowing vines coiled around the trunks of the oaks like sleeping serpents, and translucent ferns unfurled as they passed, releasing clouds of glittering spores that drifted upward, defying gravity. "Keep your hand on the blade," Nyx warned, their voice barely a ripple in the silence. Rory shifted her grip to the hilt of the Fae-Forged blade tucked into her belt. The moonsilver was ice-cold against her palm, a sharp contrast to the oppressive warmth of the grove. She felt the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt pulse with a sudden, rhythmic heat against her chest, a warning or a greeting, she wasn't sure. As they moved deeper, the silence became absolute. There were no birds, no insects—only the soft thrum of the earth beneath her feet. Every step felt lighter, as if the gravity here were a suggestion rather than a law. Rory noticed a stream cutting through the meadow, but the water didn't flow; it drifted in slow, undulating ribbons of liquid mercury, swirling into spheres that floated a few inches above the riverbed before merging back into the current. "It's beautiful," Rory murmured, her voice sounding strange and distant to her own ears. "And completely wrong." "Wrong is a human word," Nyx replied, gliding beside her without disturbing a single petal. "Here, the logic of the waking world is an intruder." They reached a central clearing where the trees curved inward, forming a natural cathedral of living wood. In the center sat a woman who looked as though she had been carved from moonlight and memory. Isolde Varga sat upon a throne of woven roots, her silver hair cascading down her back like a frozen waterfall. Her pale lavender eyes fixed on Rory, seeing not just the girl, but the ghosts of the choices she had made to get here. As Isolde rose, Rory realized the woman left no footprints in the iridescent grass. She moved with a fluid, ethereal grace, her presence filling the clearing with a scent of ancient rain and old parchment. "The delivery girl brings a shadow to my door," Isolde said. Her voice was melodic, but it carried a weight that made the air feel thick. "A curious pairing. One who runs from the past, and one who is the past." Rory stiffened, her hand tightening on the moonsilver hilt. "I was told you could see things. Things that haven't happened yet." Isolde tilted her head, a small, enigmatic smile playing on her lips. "I see the threads, Aurora Carter. I see the crimson string tied to your heart, and the dark void that follows in your wake. You seek a door that is currently locked, but the key is already rusting in your pocket." "I don't have time for riddles," Rory snapped, though the frustration felt muted, as if the grove were absorbing her anger. "Time is a circle in the Grove," Isolde replied, gliding closer. "An hour here may be a heartbeat in London, or a decade of longing. You are standing in the gap between the breath and the word. Be careful where you step, for the ground here remembers everything you wish to forget." Nyx shifted, their form expanding and contracting like a dying flame. "The Veil is weakening, Seer. The solstices approach. The boundaries are blurring." Isolde’s expression shifted, a flicker of something like grief passing through her lavender eyes. "The Winter Solstice is a hungry mouth. It pulls at the edges of the world. The wards of the Fae Courts are crumbling, and the lords of Hel are tasting the air of Earth once more." Rory felt the Heartstone pendant flare hot against her skin, almost searing. She gasped, clutching the crimson gem. The warmth wasn't just heat; it was a vibration, a low-frequency hum that resonated in her teeth. "It's reacting," Rory whispered. Isolde looked at the pendant, her gaze sharpening. "A piece of Dymas. A fragment of Gluttony’s heart. To carry such a thing in a place of Fae purity is like carrying a torch into a library of parchment. It is an invitation, Aurora. Or a target." A sudden, discordant sound shattered the peace of the grove—a screech that sounded like metal grinding on bone. The iridescent sky flickered, a jagged streak of obsidian black tearing through the amethyst haze. The flowers beneath Rory's feet instantly wilted, turning a charred, soot-grey. Nyx reacted instantly, their form snapping from a humanoid silhouette into a swirling vortex of shadow that surged forward to shield Rory. "A rift," Nyx hissed. "Someone is trying to force the Veil." Rory drew the Fae-Forged blade. The moonsilver glowed with a sudden, fierce luminescence, cutting through the gathering gloom. The cold of the blade surged up her arm, grounding her, clearing the floral haze from her mind. She looked at the tear in the sky—a shimmering distortion that revealed a glimpse of another place. For a split second, she saw a horizon of warm amber, sprawling vineyards of twisted, blackened grapes, and a sky that looked like a bruised orange. "Dymas," Rory whispered, the word tasting like copper and ash. "The invitation has been accepted," Isolde said, her voice no longer melodic, but commanding. She didn't move to help, but her eyes remained fixed on Rory. "The question is, Little Bird, do you have the strength to shut the door, or will you let the hunger in?" Rory stood her ground, the silver blade humming in her hand and the crimson stone burning against her chest. The alien wonder of the grove had vanished, replaced by a primal, predatory tension. She wasn't a lawyer or a delivery driver anymore; she was the only thing standing between the shimmering peace of the grove and the insatiable void of the pits. She stepped forward, her boots crushing the dead flowers, and faced the rift.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:21:27.912Z" 5/10/2026, 12:21:27 PM
model"google/gemma-4-31b-it-20260402"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency550
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time74263
tokens_prompt1590
tokens_completion1752
native_tokens_prompt1624
native_tokens_completion1511
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
service_tier(null)
usage0.0010803
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"576fca5b-f09c-4bda-b560-9989c39ac3ab"
id"oiXWG3m-zfFMX-9f98e761905bc4d5"
is_byokfalse
latency550
model_permaslug"google/gemma-4-31b-it-20260402"
provider_name"Together"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.1; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1778415687-QcavB9ws1yQPmEcWLZLJ"
session_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1778415687-sWvWccrQZggKwEkP9uFd"
upstream_id"oiXWG3m-zfFMX-9f98e761905bc4d5"
total_cost0.0010803
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Together"
response_cache_source_id(null)

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.478
leniency0.957
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"electric"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"oppressive"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"cascading"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"enigmatic"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
13
word"resonated"
count1
14
word"shattered"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"gloom"
count1
17
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"warmth"
2"electric"
3"pulse"
4"scanning"
5"silence"
6"oppressive"
7"rhythmic"
8"cascading"
9"weight"
10"enigmatic"
11"flicker"
12"searing"
13"resonated"
14"shattered"
15"flickered"
16"gloom"
17"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
70.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1158
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount865
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx7
Shade1
Rory17
London1
Fae-Forged2
Heartstone2
Varga1
Isolde8
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Shade"
2"Rory"
3"Varga"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.517
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"golds that seemed to pulse in time with her own heartbeat"
1"something like grief passing through her lav"
2"sounded like metal grinding on bone"
3"looked like a bruised orange"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.864
wordCount1158
matches
0"not just the girl, but the ghosts of the choices she had made to get here"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean42.89
std22.45
cv0.523
sampleLengths
065
146
224
382
416
557
678
717
825
979
1035
1141
1221
1353
1421
1552
1623
1750
1835
194
2046
2144
2233
2379
2410
2547
2675
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"been carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs144
matches
0"was staring"
1"were absorbing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences71
ratio0.099
matches
0"She paused, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in defiant, impossible colors—electric blues and deep, shimmering golds that seemed to pulse in time with her own heartbeat."
1"There were no birds, no insects—only the soft thrum of the earth beneath her feet."
2"Rory noticed a stream cutting through the meadow, but the water didn't flow; it drifted in slow, undulating ribbons of liquid mercury, swirling into spheres that floated a few inches above the riverbed before merging back into the current."
3"The warmth wasn't just heat; it was a vibration, a low-frequency hum that resonated in her teeth."
4"A sudden, discordant sound shattered the peace of the grove—a screech that sounded like metal grinding on bone."
5"She looked at the tear in the sky—a shimmering distortion that revealed a glimpse of another place."
6"She wasn't a lawyer or a delivery driver anymore; she was the only thing standing between the shimmering peace of the grove and the insatiable void of the pits."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount875
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ice-cold against her"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.021714285714285714
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean16.31
std8.75
cv0.537
sampleLengths
013
121
231
37
426
513
617
77
83
96
1017
1113
1214
1329
1416
1515
1617
1725
188
1915
2016
2139
2214
233
2415
2510
2617
2718
2820
2924
3014
3121
3211
3315
3415
359
3612
3712
3841
3921
4011
4141
4211
4312
4414
4536
4612
476
4817
494
58.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.39436619718309857
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences56
matches
0"She paused, her boots sinking"
1"Their violet eyes glowed faintly,"
2"She was staring at the"
3"It was a shimmering iridescent"
4"She felt the Heartstone pendant"
5"They reached a central clearing"
6"Her pale lavender eyes fixed"
7"She moved with a fluid,"
8"Her voice was melodic, but"
9"She gasped, clutching the crimson"
10"She looked at the tear"
11"She didn't move to help,"
12"She wasn't a lawyer or"
13"She stepped forward, her boots"
ratio0.25
40.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences56
matches
0"Rory stepped through the ancient"
1"The damp, biting chill of"
2"She paused, her boots sinking"
3"The Shade’s form was a"
4"Their violet eyes glowed faintly,"
5"Nyx whispered, the voice sounding"
6"Rory didn't answer."
7"She was staring at the"
8"It was a shimmering iridescent"
9"Nyx warned, their voice barely"
10"Rory shifted her grip to"
11"The moonsilver was ice-cold against"
12"She felt the Heartstone pendant"
13"Every step felt lighter, as"
14"Rory noticed a stream cutting"
15"Rory murmured, her voice sounding"
16"Nyx replied, gliding beside her"
17"They reached a central clearing"
18"Isolde Varga sat upon a"
19"Her pale lavender eyes fixed"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The damp, biting chill of Richmond Park vanished, replaced by a heavy, floral warmth that smelled of crushed jasmine and ozone."
1"She paused, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in defiant, impossible colors—electric blues and deep, shimmering golds that seemed to p…"
2"The Shade’s form was a jagged silhouette of living shadow, a void in the shape of a man that absorbed the vibrant light of the grove."
3"Glowing vines coiled around the trunks of the oaks like sleeping serpents, and translucent ferns unfurled as they passed, releasing clouds of glittering spores …"
4"Rory noticed a stream cutting through the meadow, but the water didn't flow; it drifted in slow, undulating ribbons of liquid mercury, swirling into spheres tha…"
5"Nyx shifted, their form expanding and contracting like a dying flame."
6"The warmth wasn't just heat; it was a vibration, a low-frequency hum that resonated in her teeth."
7"Nyx reacted instantly, their form snapping from a humanoid silhouette into a swirling vortex of shadow that surged forward to shield Rory."
8"The cold of the blade surged up her arm, grounding her, clearing the floral haze from her mind."
9"For a split second, she saw a horizon of warm amber, sprawling vineyards of twisted, blackened grapes, and a sky that looked like a bruised orange."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Nyx whispered, the voice sounding like wind rushing through a narrow canyon"
1"Nyx warned, their voice barely a ripple in the silence"
2"Rory murmured, her voice sounding strange and distant to her own ears"
3"Rory snapped, though the frustration felt muted, as if the grove were absorbing her anger"
4"Isolde said, her voice no longer melodic, but commanding"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx warned (warn)"
2"Rory murmured (murmur)"
3"Rory snapped (snap)"
4"Rory whispered (whisper)"
5"Nyx hissed (hiss)"
6"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.478
leniency0.957
rawRatio0.636
effectiveRatio0.609
67.1203%