| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.478 | | leniency | 0.957 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1162 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1162 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "electric" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "cascading" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "enigmatic" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "resonated" | | 14 | "shattered" | | 15 | "flickered" | | 16 | "gloom" | | 17 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.22% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1158 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 865 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.97 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Shade | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | London | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.517 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "golds that seemed to pulse in time with her own heartbeat" | | 1 | "something like grief passing through her lav" | | 2 | "sounded like metal grinding on bone" | | 3 | "looked like a bruised orange" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.864 | | wordCount | 1158 | | matches | | 0 | "not just the girl, but the ghosts of the choices she had made to get here" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 42.89 | | std | 22.45 | | cv | 0.523 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 82 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 78 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 79 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 79 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 75 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "was staring" | | 1 | "were absorbing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.099 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in defiant, impossible colors—electric blues and deep, shimmering golds that seemed to pulse in time with her own heartbeat." | | 1 | "There were no birds, no insects—only the soft thrum of the earth beneath her feet." | | 2 | "Rory noticed a stream cutting through the meadow, but the water didn't flow; it drifted in slow, undulating ribbons of liquid mercury, swirling into spheres that floated a few inches above the riverbed before merging back into the current." | | 3 | "The warmth wasn't just heat; it was a vibration, a low-frequency hum that resonated in her teeth." | | 4 | "A sudden, discordant sound shattered the peace of the grove—a screech that sounded like metal grinding on bone." | | 5 | "She looked at the tear in the sky—a shimmering distortion that revealed a glimpse of another place." | | 6 | "She wasn't a lawyer or a delivery driver anymore; she was the only thing standing between the shimmering peace of the grove and the insatiable void of the pits." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 875 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.021714285714285714 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 16.31 | | std | 8.75 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 41 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 36 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 58.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.39436619718309857 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, her boots sinking" | | 1 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly," | | 2 | "She was staring at the" | | 3 | "It was a shimmering iridescent" | | 4 | "She felt the Heartstone pendant" | | 5 | "They reached a central clearing" | | 6 | "Her pale lavender eyes fixed" | | 7 | "She moved with a fluid," | | 8 | "Her voice was melodic, but" | | 9 | "She gasped, clutching the crimson" | | 10 | "She looked at the tear" | | 11 | "She didn't move to help," | | 12 | "She wasn't a lawyer or" | | 13 | "She stepped forward, her boots" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 40.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped through the ancient" | | 1 | "The damp, biting chill of" | | 2 | "She paused, her boots sinking" | | 3 | "The Shade’s form was a" | | 4 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly," | | 5 | "Nyx whispered, the voice sounding" | | 6 | "Rory didn't answer." | | 7 | "She was staring at the" | | 8 | "It was a shimmering iridescent" | | 9 | "Nyx warned, their voice barely" | | 10 | "Rory shifted her grip to" | | 11 | "The moonsilver was ice-cold against" | | 12 | "She felt the Heartstone pendant" | | 13 | "Every step felt lighter, as" | | 14 | "Rory noticed a stream cutting" | | 15 | "Rory murmured, her voice sounding" | | 16 | "Nyx replied, gliding beside her" | | 17 | "They reached a central clearing" | | 18 | "Isolde Varga sat upon a" | | 19 | "Her pale lavender eyes fixed" |
| | ratio | 0.839 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp, biting chill of Richmond Park vanished, replaced by a heavy, floral warmth that smelled of crushed jasmine and ozone." | | 1 | "She paused, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in defiant, impossible colors—electric blues and deep, shimmering golds that seemed to p…" | | 2 | "The Shade’s form was a jagged silhouette of living shadow, a void in the shape of a man that absorbed the vibrant light of the grove." | | 3 | "Glowing vines coiled around the trunks of the oaks like sleeping serpents, and translucent ferns unfurled as they passed, releasing clouds of glittering spores …" | | 4 | "Rory noticed a stream cutting through the meadow, but the water didn't flow; it drifted in slow, undulating ribbons of liquid mercury, swirling into spheres tha…" | | 5 | "Nyx shifted, their form expanding and contracting like a dying flame." | | 6 | "The warmth wasn't just heat; it was a vibration, a low-frequency hum that resonated in her teeth." | | 7 | "Nyx reacted instantly, their form snapping from a humanoid silhouette into a swirling vortex of shadow that surged forward to shield Rory." | | 8 | "The cold of the blade surged up her arm, grounding her, clearing the floral haze from her mind." | | 9 | "For a split second, she saw a horizon of warm amber, sprawling vineyards of twisted, blackened grapes, and a sky that looked like a bruised orange." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, the voice sounding like wind rushing through a narrow canyon" | | 1 | "Nyx warned, their voice barely a ripple in the silence" | | 2 | "Rory murmured, her voice sounding strange and distant to her own ears" | | 3 | "Rory snapped, though the frustration felt muted, as if the grove were absorbing her anger" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice no longer melodic, but commanding" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 2 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Rory snapped (snap)" | | 4 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" | | 6 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.478 | | leniency | 0.957 | | rawRatio | 0.636 | | effectiveRatio | 0.609 | |