Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8XC20ED1KCAHRE19WQ51VY

Run Details

Duration:
8.8s
Cost:
$0.003130
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement of Camden Town, turning the gutters into churning veins of grime and oil. Harlow Quinn rounded the corner, her boots skidding on slick granite. Ahead, a hooded figure darted through the mouth of an alley, shoulders hunched against the biting wind. The silhouette matched Tomás Herrera’s height, his erratic stride betraying his panicked state. Harlow checked the leather watch on her left wrist. Midnight. "Stop moving, Herrera. The running ends now." She reached for the holster at her hip, the cold steel biting into her palm. Her brown eyes tracked the man as he vaulted a rusted chain-link fence, his left forearm catching the edge of a jagged metal plate—the same arm scarred by a blade years ago. He tumbled onto the wet concrete on the other side, scrambling up like a wounded animal. Harlow didn't break her stride. She cleared the fence with military grace, her breath hitching in the frigid air. Her mind screamed of the case three years prior, the way DS Morris had simply vanished into a fog of the unknown. She tightened her grip on the pistol. This time, there would be answers. Herrera bolted toward an abandoned Tube station entrance, the iron gates mangled and pushed aside. A faint, bioluminescent glow pulsed from the darkness below, casting sickly green shadows against the soot-stained tiles of the wall. He did not look back. He plunged into the stairwell, his footsteps echoing like rhythmic gunshots against the arched ceiling. Harlow paused at the top of the stairs, the stench of ozone and rot wafting upward. A bone token lay discarded on the landing, chipped and ivory-white, vibrating with a low-frequency hum that set her teeth on edge. This place wasn't meant for her. It was the Veil Market, a place of outlawed alchemy and shadowed deals, the kind of territory where police badges carried no weight and laws of physics bent until they snapped. "I have you right where I want you, Tomás. Don't make me drag you out of there." The descent pulled at her, an unnatural draft curling around her ankles. She bypassed the token, her heels clicking deliberately on the cracked stairs. Every step felt like a breach of contract, a trespass into a realm that smelled of scorched parchment and ozone. Below, the forgotten platform opened into a cavernous expanse. Stalls constructed of polished bone and salvaged wire stretched into the gloom, lit by flickering vials of captured light. Merchants with shifting, indistinct faces leaned over display cases filled with twitching roots and silver vials that swirled with captured smoke. Herrera stood near a merchant draped in heavy, velvet robes, his hand hovering over a display of daggers. He looked at her, his warm brown eyes wide, the Saint Christopher medallion jumping against his chest as he shook. He pushed a stack of coins across the surface of the counter, his tongue darting out to lick dry, cracked lips. "You have no idea what you're stepping into, Detective. Turn around before the air catches you." Harlow swept her gaze across the platform. A hooded brute near a crate of jars hissed at her presence, his skin translucent enough to reveal the slow churning of black bile in his veins. She leveled her gaze at Herrera, keeping her pistol tucked low, ready to move in a heartbeat. The marketplace felt alive, the floorboards vibrating with the collective heartbeat of creatures that existed in the cracks of the city. "Drop the trinkets. You’re coming back to the station for questions about Morris. End of discussion." Her voice remained steady, a sharp contrast to the murmuring, disjointed whispers that drifted from the shadows. The local denizens halted their trades, their collective focus sharpening on the woman in the trench coat. The ambient noise dropped to an uncomfortable silence, save for the rhythmic dripping of stagnant water somewhere deep in the tunnel. Herrera stepped back, his back hitting a pillar etched with glowing, archaic sigils. He gripped the edge of the display, his knuckles turning white under the dim light. He seemed to be weighing his options, his gaze darting toward a narrow crawlspace obscured by hanging tapestries. "Morris wasn't just a partner, Harlow. He was a meal. What you call a case, I call a death sentence. Keep pushing, and you’ll find out exactly where he went." A spindly hand reached from beneath the counter, fingers long and multi-jointed, clutching at Herrera’s sleeve. He didn't flinch. The air temperature plummeted. Frost spider-webbed across the floor, creeping toward the tip of Harlow’s boots. She felt the weight of her duty shifting against the instinct to flee, the old familiar dread of her partner’s disappearance clawing at the back of her throat. "I don't care about your stories. I care about the law. You’re under arrest for obstruction and evasion." She stepped forward, boots crunching on the rising frost. The merchant in the velvet robe tilted his head, his face a smooth, featureless surface of pale skin. He raised a hand, and the vials on his table began to glow with a blinding, prismatic intensity. Herrera took the opening, ducking behind the veil of tapestries and disappearing into the darkness of the service tunnels. Harlow sprinted to the stall, the heat of the vials singeing the air. She shoved the velvet-clad merchant aside, the fabric tearing like dry parchment. Her hand brushed against a jar that felt like frozen glass. The transition between the mundane world and this subterranean nightmare churned in her gut, a dizzying tilt of the senses that threatened to pull her under. She ignored the nausea. She ignored the encroaching frost. She pushed through the hanging tapestries, her weapon held out as an anchor to reality. The tunnel beyond was pitch black, humid and thick with the scent of damp earth and something metallic, like blood. Her heartbeat thudded against her ribs, a frantic drum in the silence. Herrera’s breathing hitched somewhere ahead, ragged and stifled. "There's no tunnel long enough to hide in, Herrera. I move faster than your fear." She adjusted her grip on the pistol, the leather of her watch strap digging into her skin. Ahead, she caught the metallic glint of a discarded medical kit, sprawled open against the mud. Herrera had shed his weight, but the trail remained. She followed the scuff marks on the floor, the damp walls closing in until the ceiling dipped dangerously low. The air here pulsated with a low, thrumming sound, like a giant heart beating beneath the foundations of London. She slowed, scanning the dark corners for any sign of his silhouette. A trickle of water splashed against her neck, icy and singular. She froze. The silence changed, shifting from hollow emptiness to the heavy, thick presence of something waiting. "You're chasing ghosts, Detective. You always were." The voice didn't come from behind; it whispered directly into her ear, though the tunnel was empty. Harlow spun, her barrel pointed at the nothingness, the iron sights trained on empty air. Her jaw set, her military training warring with the unexplainable reality pressing against her senses. She held her ground, refusing to blink, refusing to let the shadows dictate her path. "Come out. Now." The response was a rustle of fabric, distant and echoing, bouncing off the damp tunnel walls. She followed the sound, the rhythm of her footsteps becoming a challenge, a declaration of intent directed at the dark. She reached a junction where three rusted pipes burst through the wall, spilling black liquid into the basin of the floor. The graffiti here was fresh, painted in something that shimmered with an oily, iridescent sheen. Harlow stepped over the sludge. The tunnel opened into an expansive circular chamber, the ceiling lost to the dark. At the center stood a pedestal of twisted iron, topped with a flickering lantern. Herrera was nowhere in sight, but a pair of silver cufflinks, identical to the ones Morris wore on the day he vanished, sat dead center on the iron. The metal hummed under the lantern light, vibrating with a frequency that vibrated in her marrow. She walked toward the pedestal, the floor slick under her boots. Every instinct shrieked at her to abandon the pursuit, to leave the artifacts and the secrets of this place to the darkness. She reached for the cufflinks, her fingers hovering inches from the cold metal. The air around her began to swirl, picking up loose dust and debris into a miniature gale. "Give me a reason to stay in this hole, Herrera." From the shadows of the chamber, a soft, mocking laugh rippled, circling her, impossible to track. She didn't look for him. She picked up the cufflinks, the weight of them cooling her fingertips instantly. The lantern flame surged upward, stretching into a spire of white light that illuminated the entire chamber, revealing not an exit, but a series of stone arches leading even deeper into the earth. She looked down at the cufflinks and then at the dark, yawning threshold of the arches.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:21:39.99Z" 5/10/2026, 12:21:39 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"churning"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"echoing"
count2
4
word"rhythmic"
count2
5
word"weight"
count4
6
word"constructed"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count3
9
word"silence"
count3
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"churned"
count1
14
word"glint"
count1
15
word"scanning"
count1
16
word"shimmered"
count1
17
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"churning"
1"pulsed"
2"footsteps"
3"echoing"
4"rhythmic"
5"weight"
6"constructed"
7"gloom"
8"velvet"
9"silence"
10"etched"
11"familiar"
12"intensity"
13"churned"
14"glint"
15"scanning"
16"shimmered"
17"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
64.36% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1509
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1370
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Town1
Quinn1
Tomás1
Herrera10
Morris2
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
Harlow9
London1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Harlow"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
88.27% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a breach of contract, a tresp"
1"felt like frozen glass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.663
wordCount1509
matches
0"not an exit, but a series of stone arches leading even deeper into the earth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean48.68
std26.45
cv0.543
sampleLengths
068
17
263
354
455
575
617
793
859
916
1072
1116
1255
1346
1430
1563
1618
1764
1886
1940
2015
2161
2259
237
2462
253
2672
2777
2863
2910
3083
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs222
matches(empty)
86.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences101
ratio0.02
matches
0"Her brown eyes tracked the man as he vaulted a rusted chain-link fence, his left forearm catching the edge of a jagged metal plate—the same arm scarred by a blade years ago."
1"The voice didn't come from behind; it whispered directly into her ear, though the tunnel was empty."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1377
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.015250544662309368
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.005809731299927378
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean14.94
std6.66
cv0.446
sampleLengths
017
111
217
313
49
51
67
715
832
916
105
1114
1222
137
146
1515
1620
175
1815
1916
2022
216
2231
2317
2412
2512
2620
279
2819
2921
3018
3120
3221
3316
347
3527
3617
3721
3816
3917
4017
4121
4213
4315
4418
4530
4616
473
484
4912
42.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.26732673267326734
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.21% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences89
matches
0"She reached for the holster"
1"Her brown eyes tracked the"
2"He tumbled onto the wet"
3"She cleared the fence with"
4"Her mind screamed of the"
5"She tightened her grip on"
6"He did not look back."
7"He plunged into the stairwell,"
8"It was the Veil Market,"
9"She bypassed the token, her"
10"He looked at her, his"
11"He pushed a stack of"
12"She leveled her gaze at"
13"Her voice remained steady, a"
14"He gripped the edge of"
15"He seemed to be weighing"
16"He didn't flinch."
17"She felt the weight of"
18"She stepped forward, boots crunching"
19"He raised a hand, and"
ratio0.427
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences89
matches
0"Harlow Quinn rounded the corner,"
1"The silhouette matched Tomás Herrera’s"
2"Harlow checked the leather watch"
3"She reached for the holster"
4"Her brown eyes tracked the"
5"He tumbled onto the wet"
6"Harlow didn't break her stride."
7"She cleared the fence with"
8"Her mind screamed of the"
9"She tightened her grip on"
10"This time, there would be"
11"Herrera bolted toward an abandoned"
12"A faint, bioluminescent glow pulsed"
13"He did not look back."
14"He plunged into the stairwell,"
15"Harlow paused at the top"
16"A bone token lay discarded"
17"This place wasn't meant for"
18"It was the Veil Market,"
19"The descent pulled at her,"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"A bone token lay discarded on the landing, chipped and ivory-white, vibrating with a low-frequency hum that set her teeth on edge."
1"Merchants with shifting, indistinct faces leaned over display cases filled with twitching roots and silver vials that swirled with captured smoke."
2"The marketplace felt alive, the floorboards vibrating with the collective heartbeat of creatures that existed in the cracks of the city."
3"Her voice remained steady, a sharp contrast to the murmuring, disjointed whispers that drifted from the shadows."
4"Herrera stepped back, his back hitting a pillar etched with glowing, archaic sigils."
5"He seemed to be weighing his options, his gaze darting toward a narrow crawlspace obscured by hanging tapestries."
6"She felt the weight of her duty shifting against the instinct to flee, the old familiar dread of her partner’s disappearance clawing at the back of her throat."
7"The transition between the mundane world and this subterranean nightmare churned in her gut, a dizzying tilt of the senses that threatened to pull her under."
8"She held her ground, refusing to blink, refusing to let the shadows dictate her path."
9"The graffiti here was fresh, painted in something that shimmered with an oily, iridescent sheen."
10"The metal hummed under the lantern light, vibrating with a frequency that vibrated in her marrow."
11"The lantern flame surged upward, stretching into a spire of white light that illuminated the entire chamber, revealing not an exit, but a series of stone arches…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.4893%