Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8XC65NHDFFNJAQ9AG8GX8N

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4.3
Duration:
30.5s
Cost:
$0.004565
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended the maintenance stairwell of the disused Camden station with her torch cutting a narrow path through the gloom, leather watchband cool against her wrist as she checked the time. Six hours since the call-out. The air thickened the deeper she went—damp brick, stale electricity, and something sharper, like scorched herbs. She moved with the same parade-ground economy she’d learned on the beat, boots striking each step in measured rhythm. Halfway down the final flight an arc of blue-white light flickered from below, then steadied; someone had rigged portable floods. She emerged onto the eastbound platform. The tiles were cracked, the advertising panels long since stripped, yet a motif of sigils had been chalked in loops along the discolored wall. At the centre of the platform a shape lay under a white sheet that was already darkening at the edges. Another officer—young, new name-tape, easy name to forget—stood by the body. He looked up and started forward, but Harlow’s raised palm stopped him three paces short. “Stay where you are, Constable,” she said. “Tell me what you see, not what you think we want.” He swallowed. “Male, late twenties. No ID, no wallet. Multiple contusions and some… unusual burn patterns around the neck. Nothing in the pockets except a torn ticket stub from an old Northern Line service. We’ve got river water on the shoes though, which is odd down here. And there’s this.” He pointed at a small disc of brass half-hidden under the corpse’s left shoulder. “Found it during the preliminary search. Looks like an antique compass, but when I shine light through it the needle doesn’t hold north. Kept twitching toward the far wall.” Harlow knelt. She lifted the sheet corner with gloved fingers. The deceased’s skin was grey-blue where it wasn’t blistered, eyes fixed on a point somewhere left of the tunnel mouth. Around the throat the burns traced concentric circles rather than random contact. Not ligature marks. Not electrical. She bent closer and caught a whiff of myrrh and iron filings. The same combination that the forensics lab had been failing to identify in three overdose cases in Hackney last month. Coincidence, her Superintendent would say. She recorded the coincidence anyway, thumbing it into her notebook with a precise tick. She moved two metres along the platform and studied the tile pattern beneath the corpse. The chalkings repeated every fourth tile in a spiral that seemed to draw the eye toward the compass. When she shifted her weight the compass’s needle turned a degree toward her own boots. She pocketed it, aware of the younger officer’s stare. “Evidence chain?” she asked. He cleared his throat. “Bagged the ticket stub. We haven’t touched anything else pending forensics. DI Renford’s running the log topside, but he said the coroner won’t move the scene until daylight because something about structural risk on the stairs.” “DI Renford’s interpretation?” “He thinks it’s another Tunnel Boy overdose. Fentanyl cut with whatever they’re cooking in those warehouses. He says the burns are cigarette-type contact from a struggle.” Harlow stood. She walked to the wall where the chalk symbols converged. Up close they showed fine white dust, not the cheap construction chalk used by graffiti crews but something grainier, almost crystalline. She scraped a sample onto a card and sealed it. The symbols were nothing she recognized from gang graffiti files, yet fractions of them appeared in the margins of an occult text Eva had once left open on her kitchen table—Eva who worked nights in the British Museum stacks and who’d once muttered that markets moved every full moon and that bone tokens bought more than antiques down here. The ticket stub was in the Constable’s tray. Harlow examined it under torchlight. The paper was too heavy, the perforations too clean, the ink still glossy where a modern machine ticket would have faded. Date punched: 3rd March 1904, Northern Line. Yet the body above it had been dead fewer than twelve hours. She turned to the constable. “Tell DI Renford I want the full tox screen plus histology on those neck burns. And tell him I’m keeping the compass.” “Mine’s on record, Detective,” the Constable said. “I logged the location.” “Noted.” She moved the floodlight so that its beam raked across the tiles nearest the body. A faint scuff mark, half-moon in shape, showed where someone had recently dragged weight. The arc terminated beneath the nearest stair riser. Harlow crouched and ran her torch along the baseboard until she found what she sought: a hair-thin line of the same crystalline dust running under the metal lip of the step. When she pressed, the step moved—fractionally, but enough to let a sliver of darker air escape. A sub-passage. Not on any maintenance map she’d seen. She straightened. From down the tunnel came the distant drip of water and, beneath it, a low metallic ticking. The brass compass, freed from her pocket, pointed dead toward the hidden opening. Its patina glinted verdigris under the lights. “DI Renford says suicide or misadventure, but that ticket’s older than both of us combined,” she said quietly. “You see the river water on the shoes? Camden has no river access above ground within half a mile. Unless he walked straight here from somewhere the river was recently accessible.” The Constable shifted. “Maybe he came in from the Thames tunnel work site? Contractors sometimes use old access.” Harlow shook her head once. “Look again at the burns. These are etch marks, not contact. They follow the same radial pattern as the chalk on the wall. Somebody opened something with this compass, then either closed it too late or used it wrong. Either way, the evidence chain Renford’s writing up won’t pass when the carvings on the wall light up under UV and match the residue in the burns.” She returned the sheet to cover the face, then stepped back and slipped the compass into her coat. The needle resisted, tugging at the leather like a living thing. After a moment it settled on her pulse point, the salt-and-pepper edge of her hair brushing the collar as she bent to sign the scene log. Somewhere above, the full moon would soon crest the rooftops. By then she wanted to know exactly what kind of market had operated beneath Camden station this month and what price it had taken for the brass-and-sigil relic now in her pocket. She would call Eva tonight with the crystalline dust and the impossible ticket. For now she walked the platform once more, counting tile spirals under the flood’s glare, building the next question she would ask the dead man’s body when the coroner finally cut it open.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:21:44.252Z" 5/10/2026, 12:21:44 PM
model"x-ai/grok-4.3-20260430"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency753
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time30427
tokens_prompt923
tokens_completion1750
native_tokens_prompt932
native_tokens_completion1387
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached64
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"completed"
service_tier"default"
usage0.0045653
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"45623cb8-18e5-4b32-8fc4-85d05439982d"
id"204526a6-3664-d2bb-c6f4-806a424d378b"
is_byokfalse
latency127
model_permaslug"x-ai/grok-4.3-20260430"
provider_name"xAI"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.1; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1778415704-6eFaUTfFYifRrkI26Il0"
session_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1778415704-mmTONTAAFNAQ6DFgMA96"
upstream_id"204526a6-3664-d2bb-c6f4-806a424d378b"
total_cost0.0045653
cache_discount0.0000672
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"xAI"
response_cache_source_id(null)

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.125
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1120
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1120
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"crystalline"
count3
6
word"etch"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"measured"
2"flickered"
3"traced"
4"weight"
5"crystalline"
6"etch"
7"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1115
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount797
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow7
Quinn1
Camden2
Hackney1
Superintendent1
Eva3
British1
Museum1
Constable3
March1
Northern1
Line1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Superintendent"
3"Eva"
4"Museum"
5"Constable"
places
0"Hackney"
1"British"
globalScore1
windowScore1
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"spiral that seemed to draw the eye toward the compass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.897
wordCount1115
matches
0"not the cheap construction chalk used by graffiti crews but something grainier, almost crystalline"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"muttered that markets"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean55.75
std38.3
cv0.687
sampleLengths
093
176
218
393
498
557
64
740
83
926
10102
1158
1222
1311
1494
1539
1649
1718
1871
19143
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"were cracked"
1"been chalked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs127
matches
0"was already darkening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences72
ratio0.069
matches
0"The air thickened the deeper she went—damp brick, stale electricity, and something sharper, like scorched herbs."
1"Halfway down the final flight an arc of blue-white light flickered from below, then steadied; someone had rigged portable floods."
2"Another officer—young, new name-tape, easy name to forget—stood by the body."
3"The symbols were nothing she recognized from gang graffiti files, yet fractions of them appeared in the margins of an occult text Eva had once left open on her kitchen table—Eva who worked nights in the British Museum stacks and who’d once muttered that markets moved every full moon and that bone tokens bought more than antiques down here."
4"When she pressed, the step moved—fractionally, but enough to let a sliver of darker air escape."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount814
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.030712530712530713
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006142506142506142
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean15.49
std13.16
cv0.85
sampleLengths
033
15
216
319
420
56
624
720
811
915
107
1111
122
1362
1429
152
168
1720
1812
193
202
2112
2220
235
2414
2515
2618
2715
289
294
304
3136
323
3326
342
3510
3621
3710
3859
398
405
4121
427
4312
445
4522
467
474
4816
4914
79.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners36
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Somewhere above, the full moon"
ratio0.019
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences54
matches
0"She moved with the same"
1"She emerged onto the eastbound"
2"He looked up and started"
3"He pointed at a small"
4"She lifted the sheet corner"
5"She bent closer and caught"
6"She recorded the coincidence anyway,"
7"She moved two metres along"
8"She pocketed it, aware of"
9"He cleared his throat."
10"She walked to the wall"
11"She scraped a sample onto"
12"She turned to the constable."
13"She moved the floodlight so"
14"Its patina glinted verdigris under"
15"she said quietly"
16"She returned the sheet to"
17"She would call Eva tonight"
ratio0.333
89.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences54
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
1"The air thickened the deeper"
2"She moved with the same"
3"Halfway down the final flight"
4"She emerged onto the eastbound"
5"The tiles were cracked, the"
6"Another officer—young, new name-tape, easy"
7"He looked up and started"
8"He pointed at a small"
9"She lifted the sheet corner"
10"The deceased’s skin was grey-blue"
11"She bent closer and caught"
12"The same combination that the"
13"Coincidence, her Superintendent would say."
14"She recorded the coincidence anyway,"
15"She moved two metres along"
16"The chalkings repeated every fourth"
17"She pocketed it, aware of"
18"He cleared his throat."
19"She walked to the wall"
ratio0.741
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"At the centre of the platform a shape lay under a white sheet that was already darkening at the edges."
1"For now she walked the platform once more, counting tile spirals under the flood’s glare, building the next question she would ask the dead man’s body when the …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.8623%