| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.684 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1297 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 11.33% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1297 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "chilling" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "fractured" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "velvet" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "dance" | | 15 | "perfect" | | 16 | "chill" | | 17 | "scanning" | | 18 | "racing" | | 19 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seem to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1290 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.39% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1196 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.67 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Rory | 20 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 2 | | Nyx | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.664 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed captivated" | | 1 | "hum that seemed to vibrate in her marrow, a frequency that felt less like a noise and more like a physical weight" | | 2 | "something like glass bells, though there was" | | 3 | "looked like a sheet of black obsidian" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.775 | | wordCount | 1290 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just between the worlds, but between the breaths of the living" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 40.31 | | std | 20.67 | | cv | 0.513 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 70 | | 12 | 73 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 67 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 68 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 59 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 33 |
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| 92.43% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "were frayed" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "being trapped" |
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| 59.65% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 190 | | matches | | 0 | "was like walking" | | 1 | "were standing" | | 2 | "was overwhelming" | | 3 | "was beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter pulled her jacket tighter, her fingers grazing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a mindless habit when her nerves were frayed." | | 1 | "It wasn't just heat; it was a heartbeat." | | 2 | "This was the Veil—the membrane between the world Rory understood and the things that lived in the cracks." | | 3 | "For a heartbeat, the world went silent—a vacuum of sound that made Rory’s ears pop." | | 4 | "The sky above wasn't the bruised purple of a London dusk; it was a swirling canopy of twilight hues—indigo, soft rose, and gold—that seemed to move in time with a wind Rory couldn't feel." | | 5 | "The scent was overwhelming—a heavy, intoxicating mixture of crushed jasmine, ancient cedar, and something sweet and fermented, like overripe peaches." | | 6 | "The light didn't seem to fall in straight lines; it curved around the trees, pooling in strange, luminous eddies on the forest floor." | | 7 | "The reflection wasn't just a picture; it was a window." | | 8 | "A ripple moved across the surface of the black pool, and for a second, Rory thought she saw a shape moving beneath the surface—something large, something that moved with the slow, predatory grace of a creature that had never known hunger because it had never known lack." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1209 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.023986765922249794 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008271298593879239 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 14.66 | | std | 7.91 | | cv | 0.539 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 53.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3977272727272727 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 85.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the world rushed back" | | 1 | "Instead, it showed a different" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice didn't carry so" | | 1 | "Her silver hair reached her" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes flickered with" | | 3 | "It wasn't just heat; it" | | 4 | "It wasn't a physical barrier," | | 5 | "It rippled and folded, turning" | | 6 | "She reached for the hilt" | | 7 | "It was all wrong." | | 8 | "They were standing in the" | | 9 | "She drifted forward, her silver" | | 10 | "It wasn't the absence of" | | 11 | "She felt a sudden, sharp" | | 12 | "They reached a clearing where" | | 13 | "She stepped toward the obsidian" | | 14 | "She saw grand, sprawling orchards" | | 15 | "She shifted her stance, her" | | 16 | "She simply tightened her grip" |
| | ratio | 0.218 | |
| 56.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp, heavy air of" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter pulled her jacket" | | 2 | "Her voice didn't carry so" | | 3 | "Rory looked at the half-Fae" | | 4 | "Her silver hair reached her" | | 5 | "Isolde moved with a ghostly" | | 6 | "Rory asked, her voice sounding" | | 7 | "A shadow detached itself from" | | 8 | "Nyx didn't walk so much" | | 9 | "Their violet eyes flickered with" | | 10 | "The voice was a whisper" | | 11 | "Rory reached into her pocket," | | 12 | "The moment she touched it," | | 13 | "It wasn't just heat; it" | | 14 | "The rhythm accelerated, mirroring the" | | 15 | "It wasn't a physical barrier," | | 16 | "It rippled and folded, turning" | | 17 | "This was the Veil—the membrane" | | 18 | "Rory said, though she knew" | | 19 | "She reached for the hilt" |
| | ratio | 0.808 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the dim twilight," | | 1 | "If time didn't move linearly" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde moved with a ghostly grace, her feet pressing into the mulch and fallen leaves without leaving so much as a depression in the soil." | | 1 | "Nyx didn't walk so much as bleed into existence, a humanoid silhouette of living darkness that made the surrounding gloom feel bright by comparison." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in every direction, an endless carpet of petals that shouldn't have been able to exist in the same space." | | 3 | "Some were translucent, glowing with a soft bioluminescence, while others were so vibrant they hurt to look at, their hues shifting from deep cobalt to burning o…" | | 4 | "Rory followed, her boots sinking into moss that felt more like velvet than vegetation." | | 5 | "She saw grand, sprawling orchards and golden sunlight that felt heavy and decadent even through the dark water." | | 6 | "A ripple moved across the surface of the black pool, and for a second, Rory thought she saw a shape moving beneath the surface—something large, something that m…" | | 7 | "The Grove was a masterpiece, but it was a masterpiece painted on a canvas that was beginning to tear." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her voice sounding unnaturally loud in the stillness" | | 1 | "Rory whispered, the word feeling inadequate" | | 2 | "Rory said, her voice tight" | | 3 | "Nyx breathed, their violet eyes widening" | | 4 | "Isolde warned, her lavender eyes darkening" | | 5 | "Rory said, her voice steady despite the racing of her heart" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Isolde warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.579 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.455 | |