| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 82.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1440 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1440 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "intensity" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "navigated" | | 4 | "velvet" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "tension" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "reminder" | | 12 | "tracing" | | 13 | "facade" | | 14 | "unreadable" | | 15 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1431 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "You have a hell of a nerve, she said, her voice dropping into the cool, practiced stillness that had become her armor si…" | | 1 | "Talk, she said, crossing her arms over her chest." | | 2 | "I traded the contract for your life, he whispered." | | 3 | "I am here for both, he said softly." | | 4 | "You ask for the impossible, Aurora, he said, his voice barely a murmur." | | 5 | "Stay, she whispered, the word escaping her before she could call it back." | | 6 | "I never really left, he breathed against her skin." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1431 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.77 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "You" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | Cardiff | 3 | | Aurora | 4 | | Rory | 10 | | Lucien | 11 | | London | 2 | | You | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "You" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 61.76% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like an angel but spoke like a dev" | | 1 | "not quite touching his hand as he reached for it" | | 2 | "felt like a grounding wire" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1431 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 27.78% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "choose that moment" | | 1 | "know that you" | | 2 | "closed that door" | | 3 | "longing that it" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 43.36 | | std | 22.09 | | cv | 0.509 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 69 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 68 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 86 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 43 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 113 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 253 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't pulling" | | 1 | "was playing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked exactly as he had the night they had parted—impeccable, tailored, and entirely out of place in a tenement smelling of stale cumin and damp." | | 1 | "His heterochromatic eyes locked onto hers—the amber side burning with a familiar, predatory intensity, the black side an abyss that she still struggled to map." | | 2 | "She felt the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throb—a phantom ache triggered by his proximity." | | 3 | "He carried the scent of cold rain and expensive tobacco—a sharp, dizzying contrast to the dust and aged paper of Eva’s flat." | | 4 | "He looked tired—a weariness that sat deep in his bones, hidden behind the tailored facade." | | 5 | "Rory looked at the piles of paper, then back to the man who represented everything she had tried to flee—the danger, the magic, the blurred lines between right and wrong." | | 6 | "Lucien took the book, his fingers brushing the back of hers—a spark of contact that felt like a grounding wire." | | 7 | "It wasn't the look of a fixer or a broker; it was the look of a man who had finally run out of reasons to pretend he didn't care." | | 8 | "The city outside, the books, the threat in Cardiff—it all dissolved." | | 9 | "When he finally kissed her, it was a collision of everything unsaid—the frustration, the fear, and the undeniable, wretched pull that had trapped them both in this orbit long before the trouble began." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1445 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "weathered leather-bound notebook" |
| | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.03806228373702422 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009688581314878892 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 14.91 | | std | 8.19 | | cv | 0.55 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 41.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.2708333333333333 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 70.18% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Always a pleasure, Aurora." | | 1 | "Instead, he gripped her hand," |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked exactly as he" | | 1 | "His charcoal suit jacket was" | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes locked onto" | | 3 | "She felt the small, crescent-shaped" | | 4 | "You have a hell of" | | 5 | "He leaned slightly on the" | | 6 | "She stepped aside, feeling the" | | 7 | "He carried the scent of" | | 8 | "She turned to find him" | | 9 | "He didn't look like a" | | 10 | "I found something." | | 11 | "It leads back to Cardiff." | | 12 | "My father’s firm?" | | 13 | "She had spent enough time" | | 14 | "His eyes flickered, the black" | | 15 | "It goes deeper than your" | | 16 | "It goes back to the" | | 17 | "She laughed, a harsh, jagged" | | 18 | "You’re the broker of secrets," | | 19 | "You make your living by" |
| | ratio | 0.568 | |
| 38.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts on Eva's" | | 1 | "Rory pulled the door open," | | 2 | "Lucien stood in the narrow" | | 3 | "He looked exactly as he" | | 4 | "His charcoal suit jacket was" | | 5 | "His heterochromatic eyes locked onto" | | 6 | "Rory gripped the edge of" | | 7 | "She felt the small, crescent-shaped" | | 8 | "You have a hell of" | | 9 | "Lucien offered a thin, practiced" | | 10 | "He leaned slightly on the" | | 11 | "Ptolemy choose that moment to" | | 12 | "She stepped aside, feeling the" | | 13 | "He carried the scent of" | | 14 | "The space was a disaster" | | 15 | "Scrolls spilled over the sides" | | 16 | "Lucien navigated the clutter with" | | 17 | "Rory closed the door, sliding" | | 18 | "She turned to find him" | | 19 | "He didn't look like a" |
| | ratio | 0.842 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "If you’re here instead of" | | 1 | "Even then, the attraction was" | | 2 | "If I give you this," |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts on Eva's door slid back with a series of metallic cracks that sounded too loud in the quiet of the landing." | | 1 | "Lucien stood in the narrow hallway, framed by the dim, flickering light of an overhead bulb that was long overdue for a change." | | 2 | "You have a hell of a nerve, she said, her voice dropping into the cool, practiced stillness that had become her armor since leaving Cardiff." | | 3 | "Lucien offered a thin, practiced half-smile that didn't reach his eyes." | | 4 | "Lucien navigated the clutter with the grace of a man who moved through velvet curtains, his keen gaze scanning the mess before settling back on her." | | 5 | "I don’t sell information that involves your safety, he said, his voice dropping into a low, resonant register that vibrated in her chest." | | 6 | "He looked tired—a weariness that sat deep in his bones, hidden behind the tailored facade." | | 7 | "Rory looked at the piles of paper, then back to the man who represented everything she had tried to flee—the danger, the magic, the blurred lines between right …" | | 8 | "The anger that had sustained her during his absence flickered, dampened by the familiar magnetism he exerted." | | 9 | "She walked over to the desk, her reflection in the dark glass of the window showing a woman worn thin by London’s shadows and the memory of a man who looked lik…" | | 10 | "Lucien took the book, his fingers brushing the back of hers—a spark of contact that felt like a grounding wire." | | 11 | "He stared at her, the mixture of colors in his eyes shifting, swirling with a strange, unreadable depth." | | 12 | "He leaned in the rest of the way, his lips ghosting over hers with a hesitation that was more terrifying than any of his threats." | | 13 | "Rory let go of the notebook, letting it fall to the floor with a dull thud, and pulled him closer, her hands finding the sharp set of his shoulders." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |