| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 88.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1301 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "precisely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 7.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1301 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "flicked" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "scanned" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "resonance" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "echoing" | | 16 | "porcelain" | | 17 | "shattered" | | 18 | "searing" | | 19 | "sentinel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.41% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1299 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 1250 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.24 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 3 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.77 | | wordCount | 1299 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 49.96 | | std | 28.63 | | cv | 0.573 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 75 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 88 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 55 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 60 | | 16 | 69 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 65 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 68 | | 23 | 79 | | 24 | 79 | | 25 | 70 |
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| 93.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "being ripped" | | 2 | "was faded" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 203 | | matches | | |
| 49.69% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't walk; it simply existed a foot closer." | | 1 | "The figure flickered, its form blurring like an old film reel, and for a second, she saw through it—saw miles of black, empty space, saw stars burning out in the dark, saw the absolute void that waited for all things." | | 2 | "The ground beneath her turned to liquid air, and she fell—not down, but out." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1253 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.02314445331205108 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006384676775738229 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 14.12 | | std | 7.43 | | cv | 0.526 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 29.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.1956521739130435 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Once, twice, then total stillness." | | 1 | "Then, from somewhere behind her" | | 2 | "Instead, a series of dark," | | 3 | "Then, the world tipped." |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 20.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She traced the crescent scar" | | 1 | "She looked for the path" | | 2 | "Her voice hit the air" | | 3 | "It did not carry." | | 4 | "It had a strange, hitching" | | 5 | "She paused, her breath hitching" | | 6 | "She stared at the darkness" | | 7 | "She checked the pendant." | | 8 | "It pulsed faster now, the" | | 9 | "She drew it away from" | | 10 | "It was a wet, rhythmic" | | 11 | "It possessed an intelligence, a" | | 12 | "They had shifted." | | 13 | "She reached into her bag" | | 14 | "She flicked the switch, but" | | 15 | "She threw the light down," | | 16 | "It was no longer behind" | | 17 | "It was all around her," | | 18 | "She scanned the clearing, pivoting" | | 19 | "She caught another shape in" |
| | ratio | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind died the moment" | | 1 | "She traced the crescent scar" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant beneath her" | | 3 | "The wildflowers here possessed a" | | 4 | "She looked for the path" | | 5 | "Tree roots curled like frozen" | | 6 | "Her voice hit the air" | | 7 | "It did not carry." | | 8 | "The atmosphere drank the sound" | | 9 | "Movement flickered at the very" | | 10 | "It had a strange, hitching" | | 11 | "She paused, her breath hitching" | | 12 | "She stared at the darkness" | | 13 | "The brush rustled, a dry," | | 14 | "She checked the pendant." | | 15 | "It pulsed faster now, the" | | 16 | "She drew it away from" | | 17 | "The silence deepened." | | 18 | "It was a wet, rhythmic" | | 19 | "It possessed an intelligence, a" |
| | ratio | 0.93 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant beneath her coat bloomed against her collarbone, a dull, thrumming heat that beat in sync with a pulse that was not her own." | | 1 | "The wildflowers here possessed a color that defied the gloom, petals white as bone and petals bruised purple, drinking in the sliver of moonlight that filtered …" | | 2 | "Tree roots curled like frozen snakes, blocking the way forward, forcing her to pick her way through mud that sucked at her boots with a wet, insistent hunger." | | 3 | "The atmosphere drank the sound before it could travel two feet, leaving her ears ringing with the lack of feedback." | | 4 | "She drew it away from her skin, hoping to quell the warmth, but the stone remained hot, vibrating with a high-pitched hum that set her teeth on edge." | | 5 | "It possessed an intelligence, a deliberate cadence that moved from the canopy down to the forest floor." | | 6 | "She reached into her bag for her flashlight, her fingers brushing the cold metal casing." | | 7 | "The trees seemed to lean inward, their branches heavy with leaves that didn't sway, despite the unnatural chill snaking down her neck." | | 8 | "It had no face, only a vertical slit where a mouth should be, weeping a thin, black vapor that dissolved before it touched the ground." | | 9 | "Her own words came out distorted, deeper, vibrating with a resonance that rattled her ribcage." | | 10 | "The earth groaned beneath her, a tectonic shifting that lacked any geological cause." | | 11 | "The forest began to breathe, expanding and contracting with a slow, agonizing inhale that pulled the oxygen from her lungs." | | 12 | "The reflection held up its hand, mirroring her own involuntary motion of shielding her eyes." | | 13 | "The hatred radiating from it was a physical pressure, a blunt force that bruised her skin." | | 14 | "The clicking noise returned, amplified, a deafening swarm of sound that made her ears bleed." | | 15 | "The figure reached out, its fingers lengthening, skin stretching into translucent needles that reached for her throat." | | 16 | "The figure flickered, its form blurring like an old film reel, and for a second, she saw through it—saw miles of black, empty space, saw stars burning out in th…" | | 17 | "She stood, trembling, her clothes soaked in sweat, her breath coming in ragged, painful gasps." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |