Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8XHM57FYB1RZ5HYJ8BE70E

Run Details

Duration:
8.2s
Cost:
$0.002337
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts clicked back in quick succession, a metallic rhythm echoing off the cramped hallway. Rory swung the door open, the scent of old paper and lukewarm tea rushing out to greet the landing. She gripped the edge of the frame, her knuckles turning white against the peeling paint. Standing in the dim corridor, silhouetted by the flickering orange hue of the stairwell bulb, Lucien leaned heavily on his ivory-handled cane. His charcoal suit absorbed the light, tailored to fit with an precision that mocked the disarray of the flat behind her. It has been exactly six months since you decided I was a liability you no longer cared to manage. Lucien shifted his weight, the obsidian eye unblinking while the amber one caught a stray sliver of light. He stepped into the threshold without waiting for an invitation, his presence crowding the narrow entrance hall. The air between them sharpened, thick with the smell of expensive cologne and the metallic bite of the blade concealed within his wood-wrought prop. Rory stepped back, retreating toward the stack of research notes that threatened to topple from a side table. The business in Avaros demanded a certain level of detachment, one I imagine you still find impossible to fathom. He pulled a folded parchment from his breast pocket, flicking it onto the sea of books covering the floor. His movements possessed an unnatural fluidity, a grace inherited from an ancestry he usually kept behind a wall of cold, calculated indifference. Rory stared at the paper but did not reach for it. She watched the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist throb, a phantom ache that prickled whenever Lucien stood close enough to alter the gravity of a room. I did not come to argue about the past, nor did I come to discuss the fallout of the Cardiff incident. A tabby cat, Ptolemy, wound through Lucien’s legs, tail twitching in rhythmic annoyance. Lucien swerved his cane, missing the cat by a mere fraction, his eyes locked on the space just above Rory’s shoulder. She crossed her arms, the fabric of her worn sweater bunching beneath her grip. She remembered the heat of his hand against the small of her back in the velvet-lined private booths of the underground markets, a memory she had spent months trying to scrub from her skin. Then state your business and return to the shadows, Lucien. He stepped closer, invading the tiny island of carpet she claimed as her own. The platinum blond hair, slicked back with obsessive care, caught the light of the desk lamp, a halo of pale ice. He looked down at her, his gaze sweeping over her face with a hunger he refused to put into words. The tension tightened like a bowstring, vibrating with a frequency that made the very air hum. The underworld in London is bleeding out, and your clever little games have attracted the attention of predators who do not share my sense of theatrical restraint. Move back. You are suffocating the room. He did not move back. Instead, he reached out, his gloved fingers grazing the air inches from her jawline before he curled them into a fist at his side. The restraint he held over himself felt like a physical weight, a dam holding back a torrent that would drown them both if he ever truly let go. Rory could hear the rustle of the cat settling onto a pile of scrolls, the only sound in the sudden, suffocating quiet. I warned you once, back when we were still sharing secrets in the dark, that curiosity usually ends in a shallow grave. You were always so fond of threats wrapped in metaphors, yet here you are, standing in my hallway, uninvited and desperate enough to seek out the woman you supposedly discarded. Lucien let out a sharp, jagged laugh, his eyes darkening to the color of bruised plums. He placed a hand on the back of a wooden chair, his fingers drumming a frantic, syncopated rhythm against the wood. The refined facade of the fixer cracked, just for a moment, revealing the raw, jagged edges of the half-demon beneath. He looked at her not with the clinical detachment of a broker, but with the desperate scrutiny of a man trying to solve a puzzle that was actively tearing him apart. I do not discard what I cannot replicate, Rory. His voice dropped, losing its melodic lilt and settling into a gravelly whisper that crawled up her spine. He moved closer, the tip of his cane tapping once, twice against the floorboards. She stayed rooted to the spot, unable to flee, trapped by the magnetic pull of his heterochromatic eyes. The space between them ceased to be a room and became an arena, a vacuum where every breath felt like a theft. You could have sent a message, a note, anything other than this theatrical display of concern. Messages can be intercepted, read, and twisted by the very people who wish to see you broken. He leaned in until the tip of his nose brushed against her temple, the scent of him—ozone, old leather, and a faint, sweet rot—overwhelming her senses. He lingered there, a static charge sparking between them, the proximity pushing the boundaries of the distance they had built with such meticulous care. Rory closed her eyes, her pulse thundering in her ears, her own resolve fraying under the relentless pressure of his presence. Is that what you are, Lucien? My protector? I am whatever keeps you breathing long enough to realize that I am the only person who knows exactly how fragile you truly are. He pulled away, but not far enough. His hand shifted to the wall beside her head, trapping her against the shelves. He peered down at her, his expression unreadable, a mixture of rage and something far more dangerous. He traced the line of her cheekbone with the edge of his free hand, his touch searing, despite the velvet glove. You always were too smart for your own good, and it’s going to be the death of us. She leaned into the touch, a confession she hadn't meant to make, her breath hitching in her throat. The walls felt like they were closing in, the books closing around them like the ramparts of a fortress, locking the world outside to focus on the fire smoldering between them. Then stop trying to save me from myself and see if we can survive the fallout together. Lucien froze, his fingers stalling against her skin. He leaned down further, his forehead resting against hers, their breathing synchronization locking into place. The air hung thick with unsaid apologies and the sharp, jagged edges of a connection they had both sworn to sever. Every movement felt like a surrender, a quiet admission that the silence between them had been the loudest thing they had ever shared.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
82.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1152
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"truly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1152
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"calculated"
count1
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count2
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"grave"
count1
9
word"facade"
count1
10
word"lilt"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"magnetic"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"resolve"
count1
15
word"unreadable"
count1
16
word"traced"
count1
17
word"searing"
count1
18
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"weight"
2"calculated"
3"throb"
4"rhythmic"
5"velvet"
6"tension"
7"sense of"
8"grave"
9"facade"
10"lilt"
11"whisper"
12"magnetic"
13"pulse"
14"resolve"
15"unreadable"
16"traced"
17"searing"
18"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1150
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1150
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien9
Avaros1
Cardiff1
Ptolemy1
Rory7
London1
You4
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
3"You"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a physical weight, a dam hold"
1"felt like a theft"
2"felt like they were closing in, the boo"
3"felt like a surrender, a quiet admissio"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.87
wordCount1150
matches
0"not with the clinical detachment of a broker, but with the desperate scrutiny of a man trying to solve a puzzl"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"realize that I"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean42.59
std29.4
cv0.69
sampleLengths
093
119
277
319
478
521
682
710
871
927
107
1179
1222
1330
1488
159
1672
1716
1817
1971
208
2124
2259
2318
2449
2517
2667
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
96.37% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs193
matches
0"were still sharing"
1"was actively tearing"
2"were closing"
97.51% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences63
ratio0.016
matches
0"He leaned in until the tip of his nose brushed against her temple, the scent of him—ozone, old leather, and a faint, sweet rot—overwhelming her senses."
95.67% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1157
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.0449438202247191
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010371650821089023
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
88.98% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean18.25
std6.8
cv0.372
sampleLengths
016
119
215
322
421
519
618
717
824
918
1019
1119
1222
1311
1426
1521
1613
1721
1814
1934
2010
2114
2221
2320
2416
2527
262
275
285
2924
3028
3122
3222
3330
3416
3521
3620
3731
389
3918
4014
4118
4222
4316
4417
4526
4624
4721
486
492
43.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners18
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences61
matches
0"Then state your business and"
1"Instead, he reached out, his"
2"Then stop trying to save"
ratio0.049
3.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences61
matches
0"She gripped the edge of"
1"His charcoal suit absorbed the"
2"It has been exactly six"
3"He stepped into the threshold"
4"He pulled a folded parchment"
5"His movements possessed an unnatural"
6"She watched the crescent-shaped scar"
7"I did not come to"
8"She crossed her arms, the"
9"She remembered the heat of"
10"He stepped closer, invading the"
11"He looked down at her,"
12"You are suffocating the room."
13"He did not move back."
14"I warned you once, back"
15"You were always so fond"
16"He placed a hand on"
17"He looked at her not"
18"I do not discard what"
19"His voice dropped, losing its"
ratio0.541
9.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences61
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked back"
1"Rory swung the door open,"
2"She gripped the edge of"
3"His charcoal suit absorbed the"
4"It has been exactly six"
5"Lucien shifted his weight, the"
6"He stepped into the threshold"
7"The air between them sharpened,"
8"Rory stepped back, retreating toward"
9"The business in Avaros demanded"
10"He pulled a folded parchment"
11"His movements possessed an unnatural"
12"Rory stared at the paper"
13"She watched the crescent-shaped scar"
14"I did not come to"
15"A tabby cat, Ptolemy, wound"
16"Lucien swerved his cane, missing"
17"She crossed her arms, the"
18"She remembered the heat of"
19"He stepped closer, invading the"
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"He stepped into the threshold without waiting for an invitation, his presence crowding the narrow entrance hall."
1"She watched the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist throb, a phantom ache that prickled whenever Lucien stood close enough to alter the gravity of a room."
2"The tension tightened like a bowstring, vibrating with a frequency that made the very air hum."
3"The underworld in London is bleeding out, and your clever little games have attracted the attention of predators who do not share my sense of theatrical restrai…"
4"He looked at her not with the clinical detachment of a broker, but with the desperate scrutiny of a man trying to solve a puzzle that was actively tearing him a…"
5"Rory closed her eyes, her pulse thundering in her ears, her own resolve fraying under the relentless pressure of his presence."
6"I am whatever keeps you breathing long enough to realize that I am the only person who knows exactly how fragile you truly are."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.2803%