Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8XHTV6Y1W82E9NKNW52V19

Run Details

Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.000696
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden tasted of wet limestone and ozone. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a rusted rail, her boots clicking against the grime-slicked tiles. She paused, her gaze sweeping the cavernous space. Flickering fluorescent tubes buzzed overhead, casting erratic shadows that danced across the walls. Officer Miller stood by the yellow tape, his face pale under the harsh light. He pointed toward the center of the platform. "Found him an hour ago. Janitorial crew for the surface levels heard a scream." Quinn moved toward the body. A man lay splayed across the concrete, his limbs twisted at angles that defied anatomy. No blood stained the floor. No struggle marked the dust. The victim wore a tailored suit, now shredded as if by a thousand tiny needles, yet his skin remained pristine, devoid of a single scratch or puncture. "Homicide," Miller stated. "Likely a drug overdose. Look at the pupils." Quinn knelt, the leather watch on her left wrist ticking in the oppressive silence. She leaned in. The man's eyes were blown wide, pupils swallowing the iris, but they weren't clouded. They shimmered with a faint, iridescent gold. "Overdoses don't bleach the retinas gold, Miller." "Could be a new synthetic. The lab will find something." Quinn ignored him. She scanned the perimeter. The station was a dead end, blocked by caved-in tunnels and heavy iron gates. There were no footprints leading to the body other than their own. The dust on the platform lay undisturbed in a perfect circle around the corpse, as if the man had been dropped from a height of an inch. She reached into the victim's jacket pocket. Her fingers brushed something cold and hard. She pulled out a small, bleached fragment of bone, carved into a precise geometric hexagon. "A charm. Tribal, maybe?" Miller suggested. "It's a token." Quinn stood, her sharp jaw tightening. She remembered the files from the Morris case—the same gaps in logic, the same physical impossibilities. She walked ten paces back, her military precision guiding her steps, and looked at the ceiling. High above, a single ventilation grate hung crookedly. A thin, translucent thread of silk drifted from the vent, shimmering like a spider's web but thicker, pulsing with a slow, rhythmic light. "He didn't walk in here." "What does that mean?" "It means the entrance isn't on the map." Quinn followed the line of the silk with her eyes, tracing it back to a peculiar distortion in the air. To a casual observer, it looked like a heat haze rising from the concrete. To Quinn, it looked like a tear in a piece of charcoal paper. She stepped closer to the ripple. The air here smelled of old parchment and sulfur. As she moved, the brass casing of an object caught the light, half-buried in the soot near the edge of the distortion. She reached down and retrieved a small brass compass. A heavy patina of verdigris coated the metal, and the face was etched with sigils that seemed to shift when she blinked. The needle didn't point north. It spun violently, a silver blur that eventually locked onto the iridescent gold of the dead man's eyes. "Don't touch that evidence, Detective." Quinn spun around. A woman stood near the tunnel entrance, a worn leather satchel slung over her shoulder. She wore round glasses that magnified her green eyes, and her curly red hair escaped a messy bun in wild spirals. She was tucking a stray lock of hair behind her left ear, her expression a mixture of anxiety and professional curiosity. "Who the hell are you?" Quinn's hand dropped to her belt. "Eva Kowalski. I'm a researcher at the British Museum. The archives." "This is a restricted crime scene. Get out." Eva didn't move. She looked at the bone token in Quinn's hand, then at the compass. "That's a Veil token. And the compass is Shade-work. If you try to bag those in standard plastic, the residue will evaporate within ten minutes." Quinn stepped toward her, her presence looming. "Explain." "The man wasn't murdered by a person. Not a physical one, anyway." Eva pointed to the circle of undisturbed dust. "He tried to enter the Veil Market without a valid transit. The wards don't like imposters. They strip the soul out through the optic nerve. That's why his eyes are gold. It's the color of a vacated vessel." Miller scoffed, stepping forward. "This is nonsense. He's a dead guy in a basement. We're calling the coroner." "The coroner will find his organs have turned to salt," Eva countered. "It's a common side effect of rift-collapse." Quinn looked from the researcher to the compass. The needle remained fixed on the body. She felt a cold prickle at the base of her neck. This was the same silence that had swallowed Morris. The same refusal of the world to make sense. "How do you know about the Market?" Quinn asked. "I study the things the museum prefers to keep in the basement." Eva adjusted her glasses. "The Market moves every full moon. It's currently anchored to this station. If you stay here too long without protection, you'll start seeing things that aren't there. Or worse, things that are." Quinn gripped the compass tighter. The metal felt warm, almost vibrating against her palm. She looked at the distortion in the air again. It was widening, the edges fraying like an old rug. "You're telling me there's a black market for the supernatural beneath Camden?" "And it's currently open for business." A low, guttural hum echoed through the tunnel, vibrating in the marrow of Quinn's bones. It wasn't a sound; it was a pressure. The flickering lights above finally gave out, plunging the station into a thick, oppressive gloom. Miller fumbled for his flashlight, the beam cutting through the dark. He gasped. The circle of dust around the body had vanished. In its place, a doorway of swirling violet smoke had opened, and a pale, elongated hand with too many knuckles was gripping the edge of the concrete platform. "He wants his token back," Eva whispered. Quinn didn't flinch. She shifted her stance, her eyes locking onto the creature emerging from the rift. She didn't believe in ghosts, but she believed in evidence. And the evidence was currently trying to climb into her world. "Miller, get behind me." "Detective, what is that?" "A witness," Quinn replied, her voice cold. "And I'm going to make it talk."
created_at"2026-05-10T12:24:49.261Z" 5/10/2026, 12:24:49 PM
model"google/gemma-4-31b-it-20260402"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency161
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time67467
tokens_prompt1149
tokens_completion1659
native_tokens_prompt1089
native_tokens_completion1460
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
service_tier(null)
usage0.00069637
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"576fca5b-f09c-4bda-b560-9989c39ac3ab"
is_byokfalse
latency5142
model_permaslug"google/gemma-4-31b-it-20260402"
provider_name"Together"
status429
1
endpoint_id"69279254-6a96-4e9d-abc6-ea76e6bf8e97"
is_byokfalse
latency61
model_permaslug"google/gemma-4-31b-it-20260402"
provider_name"Novita"
status429
2
endpoint_id"4149ab03-3b69-45a0-b94c-6c253b8641a1"
id"chatcmpl-RxHSHsA1GylONKR5NrZhAX3Q"
is_byokfalse
latency43
model_permaslug"google/gemma-4-31b-it-20260402"
provider_name"DeepInfra"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.1; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1778415889-iCtHvMm6KYQx1ixUIIrW"
session_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1778415889-UTgTvKCHsRWzclo2y0BR"
upstream_id"chatcmpl-RxHSHsA1GylONKR5NrZhAX3Q"
total_cost0.00069637
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"DeepInfra"
response_cache_source_id(null)

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.29
leniency0.581
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1079
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1079
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"blown wide"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"synthetic"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"charm"
count1
9
word"silk"
count2
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"standard"
count1
14
word"looming"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"gloom"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
1"oppressive"
2"silence"
3"blown wide"
4"shimmered"
5"synthetic"
6"scanned"
7"perfect"
8"charm"
9"silk"
10"rhythmic"
11"tracing"
12"etched"
13"standard"
14"looming"
15"echoed"
16"gloom"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1078
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount787
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.16
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn17
Miller5
Morris2
Eva5
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Miller"
4"Morris"
5"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.42
windowScore0.333
13.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a heat haze rising from the c"
1"looked like a tear in a piece of charcoal"
2"sigils that seemed to shift when she blinked"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1078
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean23.96
std18.85
cv0.787
sampleLengths
051
122
214
357
411
538
67
710
860
929
106
113
1238
1331
145
154
168
1747
1868
1923
205
2160
2211
2311
248
2516
2625
278
2858
2918
3019
3144
329
3348
3433
3512
366
3738
3813
3937
407
4138
424
434
4414
91.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences75
matches
0"were blown"
1"been dropped"
2"was etched"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs131
matches
0"was tucking"
1"was widening"
2"was gripping"
3"was currently trying"
83.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences97
ratio0.021
matches
0"She remembered the files from the Morris case—the same gaps in logic, the same physical impossibilities."
1"It wasn't a sound; it was a pressure."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount791
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.018963337547408345
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007585335018963337
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean11.11
std6.98
cv0.628
sampleLengths
015
115
28
313
414
58
614
75
815
95
105
1127
123
138
1414
153
1614
177
187
1910
203
214
2214
2312
2427
257
267
2715
286
293
306
3116
3216
338
3423
355
364
378
3820
3914
4013
416
429
4322
449
4522
465
4718
485
493
53.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.35051546391752575
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
92.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences69
matches
0"She paused, her gaze sweeping"
1"He pointed toward the center"
2"She leaned in."
3"They shimmered with a faint,"
4"She scanned the perimeter."
5"She reached into the victim's"
6"Her fingers brushed something cold"
7"She pulled out a small,"
8"She remembered the files from"
9"She walked ten paces back,"
10"She stepped closer to the"
11"She reached down and retrieved"
12"It spun violently, a silver"
13"She wore round glasses that"
14"She was tucking a stray"
15"She looked at the bone"
16"She felt a cold prickle"
17"She looked at the distortion"
18"It was widening, the edges"
19"It wasn't a sound; it"
ratio0.319
32.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences69
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"She paused, her gaze sweeping"
3"Officer Miller stood by the"
4"He pointed toward the center"
5"Quinn moved toward the body."
6"A man lay splayed across"
7"The victim wore a tailored"
8"Quinn knelt, the leather watch"
9"She leaned in."
10"The man's eyes were blown"
11"They shimmered with a faint,"
12"Quinn ignored him."
13"She scanned the perimeter."
14"The station was a dead"
15"The dust on the platform"
16"She reached into the victim's"
17"Her fingers brushed something cold"
18"She pulled out a small,"
19"Quinn stood, her sharp jaw"
ratio0.855
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"To a casual observer, it"
1"To Quinn, it looked like"
ratio0.029
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Flickering fluorescent tubes buzzed overhead, casting erratic shadows that danced across the walls."
1"The victim wore a tailored suit, now shredded as if by a thousand tiny needles, yet his skin remained pristine, devoid of a single scratch or puncture."
2"She wore round glasses that magnified her green eyes, and her curly red hair escaped a messy bun in wild spirals."
3"She shifted her stance, her eyes locking onto the creature emerging from the rift."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn replied, her voice cold"
53.23% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Miller stated (state)"
1"Miller suggested (suggest)"
2"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.161
leniency0.323
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.194
76.3051%