| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 91.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1208 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1208 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "electric" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "footfall" | | 11 | "predator" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "chaotic" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "stark" | | 16 | "scanning" | | 17 | "velvet" | | 18 | "racing" | | 19 | "echo" | | 20 | "throb" | | 21 | "kaleidoscope" | | 22 | "footsteps" | | 23 | "navigate" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.25% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1206 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.23% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1021 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.18 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Nyx | 9 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Aurora | 12 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.912 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a second heartbeat" | | 1 | "shadows that seemed to move independently of the light sources" | | 2 | "looked like liquid gold" | | 3 | "felt like velvet soaked in warm oil" | | 4 | "looked like a person made of refracted li" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1206 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 27.41 | | std | 19.46 | | cv | 0.71 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 81 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 61 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 43 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 55 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 66 |
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| 95.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "was amplified" | | 1 | "was bathed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | | |
| 14.45% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of damp earth and city smog vanished, replaced instantly by an overwhelming sweetness—cloying jasmine, crushed mint, and something spiced and heavy, like cinnamon soaked in honey." | | 1 | "Every sound was amplified—the hum of invisible insects, the rhythmic thud of something heavy moving deep within the violet thickets, and the unsettling silence of a world that had never known a human footfall." | | 2 | "The water didn't flow; it drifted in lazy, glowing ribbons of cerulean, defying gravity as it looped through the air in small, liquid spheres before splashing back into a bed of translucent pebbles." | | 3 | "The warmth was no longer a comfort; it was a compass, pulling her toward the dark heart of the forest." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1026 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.030214424951267055 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007797270955165692 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 13.55 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.512 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 40.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3146067415730337 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "They reached out a hand," | | 1 | "She felt a sudden, sharp" | | 2 | "It lacked the messy, chaotic" | | 3 | "She reached for the weight" | | 4 | "Their form had become more" | | 5 | "She unsheathed the dagger." | | 6 | "It wasn't a creature of" | | 7 | "It moved with a jerky," | | 8 | "It turned, a faceless mask" | | 9 | "It raised a hand, pointing" | | 10 | "It looked small." | | 11 | "She looked at the dagger" | | 12 | "She stepped off the path" |
| | ratio | 0.186 | |
| 24.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora brushed a strand of" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against" | | 3 | "Aurora nodded, her eyes fixed" | | 4 | "The atmosphere shimmered, a faint," | | 5 | "Nyx moved beside her, a" | | 6 | "The Shade didn't walk so" | | 7 | "Nyx’s voice drifted through the" | | 8 | "Aurora stepped forward." | | 9 | "The scent of damp earth" | | 10 | "The Richmond Park woods died" | | 11 | "Trees with bark like polished" | | 12 | "Flowers the size of dinner" | | 13 | "Aurora reached out to touch" | | 14 | "Nyx drifted toward a cluster" | | 15 | "They reached out a hand," | | 16 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter." | | 17 | "The warmth from the Heartstone" | | 18 | "Every sound was amplified—the hum" | | 19 | "Aurora pointed toward the canopy." |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 71.43% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the presence of" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against her collarbone, a rhythmic, thrumming heat that felt like a second heartbeat." | | 1 | "The atmosphere shimmered, a faint, oily distortion in the air that made the Richmond Park trees look as though they were underwater." | | 2 | "Nyx moved beside her, a silhouette of shifting ink that swallowed the moonlight." | | 3 | "Flowers the size of dinner plates pulsed with internal light, shedding glowing pollen that drifted through the air like slow-motion snow." | | 4 | "They reached out a hand, their fingers blurring at the edges, as if the shadows themselves were trying to pull them back into the void." | | 5 | "Giant lilies acted as lanterns, casting long, dancing shadows that seemed to move independently of the light sources." | | 6 | "Every sound was amplified—the hum of invisible insects, the rhythmic thud of something heavy moving deep within the violet thickets, and the unsettling silence …" | | 7 | "The pebbles hummed beneath her touch, a vibration that traveled up her arm and settled in her chest." | | 8 | "The coldness of the metal seeped into her palm, steadying her racing heart." | | 9 | "Nyx stepped in front of her, their body expanding, the shadows stretching toward the trees like grasping fingers." | | 10 | "The shimmering distortion of the Veil was visible in the distance, a translucent wall of rippling air that marked the exit back to the mundane world of London." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |