Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8XXNJ9YR14A239HF30C4AY

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest hummed, casting a sickly emerald glow over the wet cobblestones of the Soho alley. Aurora pushed through the heavy oak door, the bell chiming a lonely note against the muffled thump of bass from inside. The scent of stale hops, expensive gin, and old paper hit her instantly. She wiped a smear of rain from her cheek and adjusted the strap of her delivery bag. The bar lived up to its name. Dim amber lights clung to the corners, struggling against the shadows that pooled under the dark wood of the bar top. Old maps, yellowed and frayed at the edges, mapped out territories long since lost to history across the walls. Aurora navigated the narrow space between stools, her boots clicking softly on the floorboards. A figure sat at the far end of the bar, hunched over a tumbler of amber liquid. The silhouette was familiar—the breadth of the shoulders, the way the head tilted slightly to the left—but the stillness felt wrong. "Eva?" The man turned. It wasn't Eva. The man possessed a face etched with lines that hadn't existed five years ago. His hair, once a chestnut brown, now bore streaks of silver at the temples. He looked older, not just in years, but in the way he occupied his skin, as if the weight of the atmosphere pressed harder on him than it did on anyone else. "Rory?" His voice lacked the bright, melodic lilt that used to anchor her during their long nights in Cardiff. It was gravel and smoke. Aurora froze, her hand still gripping the strap of her bag. She traced the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she hadn't quite broken. "You look... different." He let out a dry, breathless sound that might have been a laugh. He gestured to the empty stool beside him. "Time tends to do that. Sit. Please." She sat, the leather of the stool creaking under her weight. The proximity felt intrusive, a sudden breach of the distance she had carefully maintained between her past and her present. "I thought you moved to Bristol. After the university graduation." He swirled the ice in his glass, the clinking sound sharp in the low hum of the room. "I did. For a while. Then the world got larger, and I got smaller." "That sounds like a riddle for a philosophy seminar. We aren't in lecture halls anymore." He turned his gaze toward her, his eyes searching hers. They were the same eyes, but the light behind them had dimmed, replaced by a weary calculation. "No. We aren't. You’re delivering food for the Golden Empress. I saw the logo on your bag." Aurora tightened her grip on the strap. "It pays the rent. It keeps me moving." "Is that what you're doing? Moving?" She looked away, focusing on a black-and-white photograph of a fog-drenched London street pinned to the wall. "I'm living, Elias. There's a difference." "There used to be a difference for you. You used to chase things. Ideas. People. Now you just... deliver them." He leaned closer, the smell of sandalwood and whiskey drifting toward her. "You left without a word. No letter. No call. Just a void where a person used to be." "I had to leave. You know why I had to leave Cardiff. You know why I had to leave Evan." "I knew you were running. I didn't realize you were running from everything." Aurora felt the heat rise in her neck. She reached for a coaster, tracing the embossed pattern with her fingernail. "Running is a survival instinct. You should understand that better than anyone." "I understand consequences." He took a long swallow of his drink, his throat working heavily. "I spent three years looking for you. I went to your parents' house. Your mother cried, Rory. She thought you were dead." "I wasn't dead. I was just gone." "There's a distinction that matters to the people left behind." The silence that followed stretched, thick and suffocating. A jazz record played softly from a speaker somewhere in the rafters, a mournful saxophone melody that seemed to mourn the very air between them. "What happened to you?" Aurora asked, her voice barely a whisper. "The Elias I knew wouldn't sit in a dark bar looking like he's waiting for a sentence to be carried out." He looked down at his hands. They were scarred, the knuckles thickened. "Life isn't a series of planned events, Aurora. It's a series of collisions. Some of them leave marks." "You're bleeding through the cracks, Elias. You can't hide it behind a glass of scotch." He straightened his spine, a flicker of the old defiance sparking in his eyes before dying out. "And you? You've built a life out of shadows and quick exits. You live in a flat above a bar. You work odd hours. You stay in the periphery." "It's safe here." "Safety is just another word for stagnation." She stood up, the movement sudden and sharp. The stool scraped loudly against the floor. "I didn't come here for a lecture on my life choices. I came here to get a drink and go home." "You didn't come here for a drink. You saw me from the door. You saw a ghost and you couldn't help but walk toward it." Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs. She hated how easily he read her, even now, even through the layers of callousness she had spent years cultivating. "Maybe I just wanted to see if you were still real." "I'm real. I'm just not the person you remember." "I don't think I remember that person either." She reached into her pocket for her wallet, the leather cool against her skin. "I have a delivery to finish. Yu-Fei doesn't like late orders." "The world won't stop turning if the noodles get cold, Rory." "The world doesn't care if they do." She turned to leave, but his voice caught her at the edge of the light. "Do you ever regret it? Not just leaving Cardiff. But leaving us?" Aurora paused. She looked back over her shoulder. The amber light caught the bright blue of her eyes, making them look like ice. "I regret that I had to choose between staying and surviving. I don't regret the survival." She walked toward the door, her stride purposeful. The cool London air hit her face as she stepped out onto the street, but the warmth of the confrontation lingered, a dull ache in her chest that no amount of rain could wash away. She didn't look back at the green neon sign. She just kept walking, a shadow among shadows.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.027
leniency0.054
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"familiar"
2"etched"
3"weight"
4"lilt"
5"traced"
6"tracing"
7"silence"
8"whisper"
9"flicker"
10"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
86.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences51
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1117
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.83% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount676
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Eva1
Cardiff1
London2
Aurora8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.908
windowScore1
43.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite broken"
1"melody that seemed to mourn the very air between them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.895
wordCount1117
matches
0"not just in years, but in the way he occupied his skin, as if the weight of the atm"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean18.31
std14.61
cv0.798
sampleLengths
073
161
238
31
46
560
61
723
828
93
1021
117
1231
1310
1418
1514
1615
1727
1817
197
208
216
2217
236
2420
2512
2618
2720
2813
2920
3012
313
3212
3322
347
3510
3633
3732
3812
3918
4015
4117
4229
433
447
4515
4621
4725
4826
4911
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"were scarred"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs101
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences87
ratio0.011
matches
0"The silhouette was familiar—the breadth of the shoulders, the way the head tilted slightly to the left—but the stillness felt wrong."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount682
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02932551319648094
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.016129032258064516
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean12.84
std6.91
cv0.538
sampleLengths
022
121
213
317
47
521
619
714
817
921
101
113
123
1314
1414
1532
161
1718
185
1911
2017
213
2213
238
247
2511
2620
2710
2818
2914
3015
3110
3217
3317
347
358
366
3717
386
3920
4012
4118
4220
4313
448
4512
4612
473
4812
4922
43.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2988505747126437
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences50
matches
0"She wiped a smear of"
1"It wasn't Eva."
2"His hair, once a chestnut"
3"He looked older, not just"
4"His voice lacked the bright,"
5"It was gravel and smoke."
6"She traced the small crescent-shaped"
7"He let out a dry,"
8"He gestured to the empty"
9"She sat, the leather of"
10"He swirled the ice in"
11"He turned his gaze toward"
12"They were the same eyes,"
13"She looked away, focusing on"
14"He leaned closer, the smell"
15"She reached for a coaster,"
16"He took a long swallow"
17"He looked down at his"
18"They were scarred, the knuckles"
19"He straightened his spine, a"
ratio0.56
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences50
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora pushed through the heavy"
2"The scent of stale hops,"
3"She wiped a smear of"
4"The bar lived up to"
5"Aurora navigated the narrow space"
6"A figure sat at the"
7"The silhouette was familiar—the breadth"
8"The man turned."
9"It wasn't Eva."
10"The man possessed a face"
11"His hair, once a chestnut"
12"He looked older, not just"
13"His voice lacked the bright,"
14"It was gravel and smoke."
15"Aurora froze, her hand still"
16"She traced the small crescent-shaped"
17"He let out a dry,"
18"He gestured to the empty"
19"She sat, the leather of"
ratio0.96
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Dim amber lights clung to the corners, struggling against the shadows that pooled under the dark wood of the bar top."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora asked, her voice barely a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.027
leniency0.054
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.0269%