Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8XXNNRPX457B1715XVM0K6

Run Details

Duration:
2m 20s
Cost:
$0.000622
Provider:
DekaLLM

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gates of Richmond Park groaned, a low, metallic rasp that sliced through the heavy stillness of the London night. Aurora gripped the handlebars of her bicycle, her knuckles white against the worn rubber. The streetlights ended abruptly at the park's perimeter, swallowed by a darkness so thick it felt viscous. She pedaled slowly, the chain clicking rhythmically, a lonely cadence in the void. She shouldn't have come. The thought looped in her mind, rhythmic as the pedaling. But the Heatstone pendant, heavy against her collarbone, had begun to thrum. It wasn't a vibration so much as a heartbeat, a rhythmic pulse of warmth that seeped through her thin jacket. It guided her toward the ancient oak standing stones, a destination she had only heard of in whispers. The path beneath her tires turned from paved asphalt to gravel, then to soft, yielding earth. The air changed. The city’s distant, comforting hum of traffic and sirens evaporated. In its place, a silence descended—not a true silence, but a vacuum that seemed to suck the breath from her lungs. She braked near the first standing stone. The oak was gnarled, its bark looking like stretched, weathered skin under the moonlight. Aurora dismounted, her boots crunching too loudly on the dried leaves. Every sound felt amplified, an intrusion upon a space that demanded stillness. She reached for the pendant. The crimson gemstone glowed with a faint, internal light, casting a bruised hue over her hands. The warmth intensified, radiating a heat that felt unnatural against the sudden chill of the clearing. A twig snapped. Aurora froze. She turned her head toward the dense thicket of ferns to her left. Nothing moved. The moonlight filtered through the canopy in jagged shards, illuminating patches of wildflowers that seemed far too vibrant for the season. They glowed with a sickly, iridescent sheen. "Hello?" Her voice sounded thin, stripped of its usual confidence. No one answered. The shadows between the trees seemed to thicken, pooling like spilled ink. She walked toward the center of the grove, drawn by the heat of the stone. The air grew heavy, smelling of damp earth and something cloyingly sweet, like lilies left too long in a vase of stagnant water. The deeper she moved into the clearing, the more the landscape felt skewed. The trees leaned inward, their branches interlocking overhead to form a ribcage of wood and leaf. A movement flickered at the edge of her vision. A quick, sweeping motion behind a silver birch. Aurora spun around, her breath hitching. The silver bark stood motionless. She forced herself to exhale, watching the white mist of her breath dissipate in the air. "Just a fox." She gripped the pendant tighter. The stone pulsed harder now, a frantic, staccato rhythm that mimicked a panicked heart. It wasn't just warmth anymore; it was a warning. She stepped over a protruding root, her eyes scanning the perimeter. The wildflowers she had noticed earlier seemed closer now. They weren't just blooming; they were swaying, though there was no breeze to move them. They bobbed in a synchronized, rhythmic motion, as if breathing in unison. A soft, wet sound drifted from the darkness. A sliding noise, like something heavy being dragged through mud. Aurora stepped back, her heel catching on a stone. She stumbled, her heart hammering against her ribs. She steadied herself against the rough bark of an oak, the texture feeling disturbingly like flesh beneath her fingertips. The sound came again. Closer. A rhythmic *schlick-schlick-schlick*. She peered into the gloom. Two pale shapes hovered just beyond the reach of the pendant’s crimson light. They weren't eyes; they were too large, too flat. They looked like discs of bone peering out from the shadows. They didn't blink. She didn't scream. Her throat felt constricted, as if an invisible hand had tightened around her windpipe. She stood perfectly still, her eyes wide, watching the spots where the shapes had been. They were gone. The silence returned, but it was different now. It felt expectant. It felt like a breath held too long. Aurora turned to leave, her intention to reach the bicycle and ride until the sun rose. She took three steps before the pendant flared. The heat became a searing burn against her chest. The crimson light surged, illuminating the grove in a sudden, violent flash. In that momentary brilliance, the grove transformed. The trees weren't oaks anymore. They were twisted, elongated limbs, reaching upward with frantic, desperate energy. The wildflowers weren't flowers; they were clusters of small, pale mouths, all turned toward her, gaping in silent unison. The light died as quickly as it had come, plunging her back into the oppressive dark. A whisper brushed against her ear. It wasn't a word, just a soft, sibilant exhale that tasted of copper and old dust. She bolted. She didn't care about the path or the roots. She lunged through the undergrowth, the briars tearing at her clothes and skin. The scent of lilies became overwhelming, a suffocating sweetness that filled her nose and throat. *Schlick-schlick-schlick.* The dragging sound was right behind her. It was faster now, keeping pace with her frantic strides. She reached the standing stones, the ancient oaks looming like sentinels. The pendant was a brand against her skin, the heat so intense she feared it would scorch her. The crimson glow was no longer a faint pulse; it was a rhythmic strobe, casting long, distorted shadows that danced wildly across the clearing. She tripped. Her hands slammed into the dirt, the grit biting into her palms. She scrambled to turn over, her breath coming in jagged, sobbing gasps. The shadows had coalesced. Something stood just beyond the ring of light cast by the pendant. It was tall, impossibly thin, its limbs folding at angles that defied human anatomy. It didn't have a face, only a smooth, pale expanse of skin that reflected the crimson light like polished bone. It didn't move toward her. It simply stood there, vibrating with a low, subsonic hum that she felt in her teeth. Aurora pushed herself backward, her eyes locked on the featureless entity. She felt the cold dampness of the earth against her spine. "What do you want?" The entity tilted its head. The movement was fluid, devoid of the jerky mechanics of bone and muscle. From the darkness around the entity, other shapes began to emerge. They drifted from behind the trees, sliding through the tall grass with that same wet, dragging sound. They were more of the same—pale, elongated, faceless. They formed a wide, slow-moving circle around her. The wildflowers began to chatter. A soft, clicking sound, like thousands of fingernails tapping on glass. Aurora felt the pendant go cold. The warmth vanished instantly, leaving a hollow, aching chill in its wake. The crimson light flickered, dimmed, and finally died. The darkness became absolute. She sat in the void, the only sound her own frantic, shallow breathing. Then, the tapping began. It wasn't just the flowers anymore. It was the sound of something hard hitting the ground, encircling her, closing the gap. *Tap. Tap. Tap.* A cold, damp pressure brushed against her ankle. She pulled her leg back, a strangled gasp escaping her lips. She reached out blindly, her fingers searching for the bike, the gate, anything solid. Her hand met something smooth and cold. It wasn't the bike. It was a limb, long and slender, resting motionless on the ground beside her. The tapping stopped. The silence that followed was heavier than the darkness. It was a weight, pressing down on her shoulders, stifling her movements. Then, a single, soft whisper, right against her temple. "Stay."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
88.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"perfectly"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count5
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count4
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"chill"
count2
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"synchronized"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"oppressive"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count2
14
word"looming"
count1
15
word"sentinels"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"comforting"
4"silence"
5"chill"
6"flickered"
7"pulsed"
8"scanning"
9"synchronized"
10"gloom"
11"searing"
12"oppressive"
13"whisper"
14"looming"
15"sentinels"
16"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
97.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences126
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords5
totalWords1278
ratio0.004
matches
0"schlick-schlick-schlick"
1"Schlick-schlick-schlick."
2"Tap. Tap. Tap."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount1269
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Heatstone1
Aurora8
persons
0"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"vacuum that seemed to suck the breath from her lungs"
1"seemed far too vibrant for the season"
2"seemed closer now"
3"as if breathing in unison"
4"looked like discs of bone peering out fro"
5"felt like a breath held too long"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.782
wordCount1278
matches
0"not a true silence, but a vacuum"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean25.56
std18.88
cv0.739
sampleLengths
065
164
250
344
437
53
645
71
824
967
1017
1127
123
1328
1447
1518
1636
178
1841
1935
2019
2145
227
2335
2416
2522
262
2737
281
2917
3053
312
3224
3350
3421
3522
364
3718
3844
3916
4026
414
4238
433
448
4550
463
4721
489
491
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences126
matches
0"was gnarled"
1"being dragged"
2"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs215
matches
0"were swaying"
1"weren't just blooming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences130
ratio0.054
matches
0"In its place, a silence descended—not a true silence, but a vacuum that seemed to suck the breath from her lungs."
1"It wasn't just warmth anymore; it was a warning."
2"They weren't just blooming; they were swaying, though there was no breeze to move them."
3"They weren't eyes; they were too large, too flat."
4"The wildflowers weren't flowers; they were clusters of small, pale mouths, all turned toward her, gaping in silent unison."
5"The crimson glow was no longer a faint pulse; it was a rhythmic strobe, casting long, distorted shadows that danced wildly across the clearing."
6"They were more of the same—pale, elongated, faceless."
79.17% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1272
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"was right behind her."
1"wide, slow-moving circle"
2"own frantic, shallow breathing."
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.04323899371069182
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.014937106918238994
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean9.83
std5.48
cv0.558
sampleLengths
021
114
217
313
44
510
612
720
818
916
103
1110
1221
137
1414
1511
1612
175
1816
1916
203
212
2213
232
2421
257
261
279
283
2912
3015
3123
3213
3316
349
358
366
375
3816
393
405
4114
429
4311
449
4515
4612
478
4810
499
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats33
diversityRatio0.17692307692307693
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners23
56.98% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences117
matches
0"Then, the tapping began."
1"Then, a single, soft whisper,"
ratio0.017
35.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences117
matches
0"She pedaled slowly, the chain"
1"She shouldn't have come."
2"It wasn't a vibration so"
3"It guided her toward the"
4"She braked near the first"
5"She reached for the pendant."
6"She turned her head toward"
7"They glowed with a sickly,"
8"Her voice sounded thin, stripped"
9"She walked toward the center"
10"She forced herself to exhale,"
11"She gripped the pendant tighter."
12"It wasn't just warmth anymore;"
13"She stepped over a protruding"
14"They weren't just blooming; they"
15"They bobbed in a synchronized,"
16"She stumbled, her heart hammering"
17"She steadied herself against the"
18"She peered into the gloom."
19"They weren't eyes; they were"
ratio0.462
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount109
totalSentences117
matches
0"The iron gates of Richmond"
1"Aurora gripped the handlebars of"
2"The streetlights ended abruptly at"
3"She pedaled slowly, the chain"
4"She shouldn't have come."
5"The thought looped in her"
6"It wasn't a vibration so"
7"It guided her toward the"
8"The path beneath her tires"
9"The air changed."
10"The city’s distant, comforting hum"
11"She braked near the first"
12"The oak was gnarled, its"
13"Aurora dismounted, her boots crunching"
14"Every sound felt amplified, an"
15"She reached for the pendant."
16"The crimson gemstone glowed with"
17"The warmth intensified, radiating a"
18"A twig snapped."
19"She turned her head toward"
ratio0.932
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"The iron gates of Richmond Park groaned, a low, metallic rasp that sliced through the heavy stillness of the London night."
1"It wasn't a vibration so much as a heartbeat, a rhythmic pulse of warmth that seeped through her thin jacket."
2"Every sound felt amplified, an intrusion upon a space that demanded stillness."
3"The warmth intensified, radiating a heat that felt unnatural against the sudden chill of the clearing."
4"The moonlight filtered through the canopy in jagged shards, illuminating patches of wildflowers that seemed far too vibrant for the season."
5"They bobbed in a synchronized, rhythmic motion, as if breathing in unison."
6"Her throat felt constricted, as if an invisible hand had tightened around her windpipe."
7"The scent of lilies became overwhelming, a suffocating sweetness that filled her nose and throat."
8"The crimson glow was no longer a faint pulse; it was a rhythmic strobe, casting long, distorted shadows that danced wildly across the clearing."
9"She scrambled to turn over, her breath coming in jagged, sobbing gasps."
10"It was tall, impossibly thin, its limbs folding at angles that defied human anatomy."
11"It didn't have a face, only a smooth, pale expanse of skin that reflected the crimson light like polished bone."
12"It was a weight, pressing down on her shoulders, stifling her movements."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
72.6409%