Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8XZ19HDYHT49BACQYHQ54C

Run Details

Duration:
8.0s
Cost:
$0.002221
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement of Camden, turning the street grid into a series of slick, black mirrors. Detective Harlow Quinn ignored the stinging needles against her salt-and-pepper hair, her boots splashing through deep puddles with military cadence. Ahead, a figure ducked into the jagged shadow of a boarded-up façade. She recognized the carriage, the frantic twitch of the shoulder, the unmistakable silhouette of a man who dealt in forbidden things. The suspect skidded toward a rusted grate, his hands trembling as he produced a sliver of polished, yellowed bone. Keep your distance, Detective. You have no idea what waits in the dark beneath these tracks. Quinn planted her feet, the worn leather watch on her left wrist catching the erratic flicker of a dying streetlight. She saw the desperation in his wide, brown eyes. He clutched the medallion at his throat, his fingers white-knuckled against the metal. The grate groaned, sliding open with the sound of grinding teeth against stone. You think that scrap of bone gives you sanctuary, Tomás? I’ve chased criminals through every precinct in London, and none of them found salvation in a sewer. The man turned, his face ghostly pale against the soot-stained brick of the entrance. He glanced at the gaping hole leading down into the bowels of the abandoned Tube station. Cold, stale air rushed up from the darkness, carrying the metallic scent of old ozone and something rotting. This isn't a precinct, and you aren't the law here. Stay in your world, Quinn. If you follow, you become part of the inventory. He didn't wait for a reply. He slipped into the abyss, his form dissolving into the heavy, suffocating gloom. Quinn stepped to the edge of the descent. Below, the ancient tunnel glowed with a sickly, iridescent light—the Veil Market, a place mentioned only in the files of cold cases that ended in madness. She touched the cold steel of her service weapon, feeling the familiar weight of it against her hip. The memory of DS Morris flashed behind her eyes, a sharp, jagged puncture of grief she usually buried under mountains of paperwork. The air grew heavy and pressurized, humming against her eardrums like a swarm of angry hornets. She descended the first few stairs, the iron steps slick with some viscous, bioluminescent sludge. Below, the market opened up like a wound in the earth. Stalls fashioned from salvaged subway seats and rusted railings overflowed with wares that defied physics. Jars filled with swirling, captive smoke lined shelves bolted to the tunnel walls. Peddlers with hollow eyes and elongated limbs shifted in the shadows, their voices a dissonant chorus of clicks and whistles. Tomás was already weaving through the throng, his shoulder brushing against a vendor selling glass vials encased in frozen lightning. He moved with the frantic grace of a man who knew exactly which shadow offered the best cover. You’re walking into a slaughterhouse, Detective. Turn around while your blood is still warm. Quinn ignored the warning, forcing her way through a throng of figures draped in heavy, moth-eaten furs. She kept her eyes locked on the back of Tomás’s jacket. He ducked behind a pillar marked with fading, yellow warning signs from the last century. Her hand hovered over her holster as she navigated a path between a display of humming, crystalline daggers and a crate of black-market alchemical sludge that bubbled in rhythm with the tunnel’s strange, low-frequency pulse. Every instinct honed over eighteen years of service screamed at her to retreat. The tunnels felt alive, the damp walls weeping a thick, oily fluid that smelled of copper and ozone. She saw the way the market patrons watched her, their gazes devoid of human warmth. They didn't see an officer of the Metropolitan Police; they saw prey. Stop where you are, Herrera! I have enough evidence to bury you, even with your hidden friends. Tomás stepped out from behind a pile of discarded tracks, his arms spread wide as if presenting the chaotic horror of the market to her. A scar on his left forearm stood out, pale and angry against his olive skin. He looked less like a criminal now and more like a man caught in the gears of a machine he couldn't stop. Evidence? You talk about laws written by men who have never looked beyond the veil. Look at this place, Quinn. Look at the shadows stretching in directions the sun can't reach. Are you going to handcuff the nightmares? Are you going to read Miranda rights to the things that eat your memories? Quinn kept her distance, watching his breathing. He was terrified, not of her, but of what lurked just behind the reach of the flickering neon. She noticed a group of cloaked figures detaching themselves from the darkness near a tunnel mouth, their movements synchronized, predatory. They circled, their feet moving soundlessly over the detritus of the forgotten station. You’re a medic. You spent your life patching people up, not feeding them to whatever exists down here. Talk to me, Tomás. What happened to Morris? The mention of the name caused Tomás to flinch, his gaze darting to a dark alcove where the shadows seemed to bleed into the air itself. He stepped back, closer to the edge of an electrified pool that swirled with oily, prismatic colors. He didn't die in that alley, Detective. He just stopped being here. And if you don't turn around right now, your name is next on the ledger. The cloaked figures moved closer, the temperature in the tunnel plummeting until Quinn’s breath clouded the air in white puffs. She gauged the distance between her and the exit, a steep, treacherous climb back toward the surface and the rain. She could turn now, gather a team, and return with force, or she could push further into the tunnel’s throat, risking the loss of her badge and perhaps her mind. She tightened her grip on her sidearm, her sharp jaw set tight. The tunnel walls seemed to shrink, the ceiling weeping darker, thicker sludge. She looked at Tomás, then at the shifting shapes circling them both. The choice sat between them like a held breath.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:32:01.851Z" 5/10/2026, 12:32:01 PM
model"google/gemini-3.1-flash-lite-20260507"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency456
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time7884
tokens_prompt1140
tokens_completion1572
native_tokens_prompt1042
native_tokens_completion1307
native_tokens_completion_images0
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"STOP"
service_tier"standard"
usage0.002221
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"237af107-d2e9-46c7-b146-c74d75980dee"
id"wnoAarS6AsDlqtsPxrb1uQU"
is_byokfalse
latency456
model_permaslug"google/gemini-3.1-flash-lite-20260507"
provider_name"Google AI Studio"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.1; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1778416321-rBWYvVAQMWfRHuJ51FON"
session_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1778416321-gqYBtqaHHDaMz8mAc74N"
upstream_id"wnoAarS6AsDlqtsPxrb1uQU"
total_cost0.002221
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Google AI Studio"
response_cache_source_id(null)

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"navigated"
count1
6
word"crystalline"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"chaotic"
count1
10
word"synchronized"
count1
11
word"treacherous"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"sanctuary"
2"gloom"
3"familiar"
4"weight"
5"navigated"
6"crystalline"
7"pulse"
8"warmth"
9"chaotic"
10"synchronized"
11"treacherous"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences74
matches
0"was terrified"
46.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1030
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1030
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn8
Detective4
Tomás7
London1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Morris2
Metropolitan1
Police1
Herrera1
Miranda1
You6
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Tomás"
4"Market"
5"Morris"
6"Herrera"
7"Miranda"
8"You"
places
0"London"
1"Veil"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if presenting the chaotic horror of the market to her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.971
wordCount1030
matches
0"not of her, but of what lurked just behind the reach of the flickering neon"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"think that scrap"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean46.82
std23.5
cv0.502
sampleLengths
070
119
216
355
427
548
624
793
890
938
1014
1178
1258
1317
1462
1552
1658
1726
1843
1927
2070
2145
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"was terrified"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was already weaving"
65.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences74
ratio0.027
matches
0"Below, the ancient tunnel glowed with a sickly, iridescent light—the Veil Market, a place mentioned only in the files of cold cases that ended in madness."
1"They didn't see an officer of the Metropolitan Police; they saw prey."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1039
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, moth-eaten furs."
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.017324350336862367
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008662175168431183
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean13.92
std6.49
cv0.466
sampleLengths
017
120
212
321
419
54
612
720
89
913
1013
1110
1217
1314
1416
1518
1610
175
189
196
2013
218
2226
2318
2422
2516
2615
2711
2815
2913
3020
3120
3218
336
348
3517
3611
3715
3835
3913
4018
4115
4212
435
4412
4525
4615
4722
481
4914
57.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4189189189189189
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
39.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences73
matches
0"She recognized the carriage, the"
1"You have no idea what"
2"She saw the desperation in"
3"He clutched the medallion at"
4"You think that scrap of"
5"I’ve chased criminals through every"
6"He glanced at the gaping"
7"He didn't wait for a"
8"He slipped into the abyss,"
9"She touched the cold steel"
10"She descended the first few"
11"He moved with the frantic"
12"You’re walking into a slaughterhouse,"
13"She kept her eyes locked"
14"He ducked behind a pillar"
15"Her hand hovered over her"
16"She saw the way the"
17"They didn't see an officer"
18"I have enough evidence to"
19"He looked less like a"
ratio0.452
69.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences73
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ignored the"
1"She recognized the carriage, the"
2"The suspect skidded toward a"
3"You have no idea what"
4"Quinn planted her feet, the"
5"She saw the desperation in"
6"He clutched the medallion at"
7"The grate groaned, sliding open"
8"You think that scrap of"
9"I’ve chased criminals through every"
10"The man turned, his face"
11"He glanced at the gaping"
12"This isn't a precinct, and"
13"He didn't wait for a"
14"He slipped into the abyss,"
15"Quinn stepped to the edge"
16"She touched the cold steel"
17"The memory of DS Morris"
18"The air grew heavy and"
19"She descended the first few"
ratio0.781
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"If you follow, you become"
ratio0.014
51.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She recognized the carriage, the frantic twitch of the shoulder, the unmistakable silhouette of a man who dealt in forbidden things."
1"Below, the ancient tunnel glowed with a sickly, iridescent light—the Veil Market, a place mentioned only in the files of cold cases that ended in madness."
2"Tomás was already weaving through the throng, his shoulder brushing against a vendor selling glass vials encased in frozen lightning."
3"Her hand hovered over her holster as she navigated a path between a display of humming, crystalline daggers and a crate of black-market alchemical sludge that b…"
4"The tunnels felt alive, the damp walls weeping a thick, oily fluid that smelled of copper and ozone."
5"Tomás stepped out from behind a pile of discarded tracks, his arms spread wide as if presenting the chaotic horror of the market to her."
6"He stepped back, closer to the edge of an electrified pool that swirled with oily, prismatic colors."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.4880%