Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8Y10G9A3NQ3TGSWEMKCZ0T

Run Details

Duration:
3m 20s
Cost:
$0.001126
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped across the threshold of the ancient oak standing stones, and the air shifted. The damp, biting chill of Richmond Park vanished. In its place, a breeze smelling of crushed mint and ozone brushed against her cheeks. Wildflowers erupted from the soil in a riot of neon indigos and searing yellows, their petals pulsing like slow-beating hearts. Above, the canopy of towering, silver-barked trees knit together, filtering the sunlight into shimmering shards of opal and gold. "Keep your feet light." Isolde glided forward. The Half-Fae’s silver hair trailed behind her like a frozen waterfall, brushing the tops of the iridescent grass. She left no imprint on the earth. Rory looked down. Her own boots sank into the loam, leaving deep, muddy craters in the pristine velvet of the grove. The contrast made her feel clumsy, a smudge of charcoal on a watercolor painting. "Is this where time breaks?" Isolde paused, tilting her head. Her pale lavender eyes seemed to track something moving in the air, something invisible. "The clock is a human leash, Aurora Carter. Here, the leash snaps." Beside them, Nyx drifted. The Shade remained a humanoid silhouette, a hole ripped into the brightness of the world. Where the sunlight hit the grass, Nyx absorbed it, casting a void that flickered with faint violet sparks. The creature’s form blurred at the edges, merging with the long shadows cast by the silver trees. Rory felt a sudden, sharp heat against her chest. She reached inside her jacket and gripped the Heartstone Pendant. The deep crimson gem throbbed against her palm, the warmth intensifying with every step they took deeper into the clearing. "The stone is reacting." Nyx’s voice sounded like a dry wind rattling through a graveyard. The Shade pivoted, their glowing violet eyes scanning the horizon of the grove. "Something breathes beneath the roots. Something heavy." Rory scanned the perimeter. To her left, a stream flowed upward, defying gravity to spiral into a floating pool of liquid mercury. Small, translucent fish darted through the sphere, leaving trails of glitter in their wake. She reached out to touch the water, but a sudden, sharp crack echoed through the grove. The group froze. The sound hadn't come from the woods, but from the air itself. A shimmering distortion, like heat haze on a summer highway, rippled across the path ahead. "The Veil," Rory whispered. The distortion wavered, revealing a glimpse of another place. For a heartbeat, the opal sky of the grove vanished. In its place, a horizon of warm amber stretched infinitely. She saw sprawling vineyards where the grapes glowed like embers and orchards laden with fruit that looked like polished gemstones. The scent of roasting meats and heavy spices wafted through the tear, thick enough to taste. "Dymas," Isolde murmured. Her expression remained neutral, but her fingers tightened around the hilt of the moonsilver blade she had previously gifted to Rory. Rory instinctively gripped the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. The metal was ice-cold, sending a shiver up her arm that snapped her out of the trance. The amber vista flickered and vanished, the Veil snapping shut with a sound like a closing book. "Why is a rift opening here?" Isolde didn't look back. She continued walking toward the center of the grove, where a single, massive willow wept crystalline tears that tinkled like wind chimes upon hitting the ground. "The solstice approaches. The walls between worlds grow thin, and the hungry begin to sniff the air." Rory followed, her boots crunching on minerals that looked like crushed diamonds. As they moved deeper, the silence of the grove became oppressive. The singing of the crystal willow drowned out the natural sounds of the park they had left behind. She felt a prickle of unease on the back of her neck. The wonder of the floating water and neon flora began to feel like a lure, a beautiful skin stretched over something predatory. Nyx suddenly lunged forward, their form stretching into a thin, jagged needle of shadow. They sliced through a thicket of shimmering ferns, revealing a hidden altar of black basalt. The stone was carved with runes that bled a slow, viscous gold. In the center of the altar sat a bowl of clear water, though the reflection staring back at Rory wasn't her own. She leaned in. The reflection showed her in a different life—wearing a barrister's robe, standing in a courtroom in Cardiff, her father's proud face beaming from the gallery. She recoiled, her heart hammering against her ribs. "Don't look too long," Isolde warned. "The grove shows you the paths you abandoned. It feeds on the ache of what might have been." Rory stepped back, shaking her head. The image of her father flickered and dissolved into a swirl of grey smoke. "I didn't come here for ghosts." "You are a ghost in your own life, Rory," Nyx whispered, appearing instantly at her shoulder. The Shade's violet glow cast long, distorted shadows across the basalt altar. "You fled a city to hide in a bar. You carry a stone from Hel and a blade from the Fae. You are becoming a bridge." Rory glared at the silhouette. "I'm a delivery driver." "A delivery driver who can see the seams of the universe." Isolde reached the willow tree and stopped. She turned to face them, the silver of her hair blending into the iridescent mist that had begun to roll in across the grass. "The rift you saw was not a random tear. Dymas does not open its doors without an invitation." Rory felt the Heartstone Pendant pulse violently, almost burning through the fabric of her shirt. The crimson glow was no longer faint; it cast a blood-red light onto her chin. "I didn't invite anyone." "The stone did," Isolde replied. "It is a key, and something on the other side has just turned the lock." A low, guttural vibration shook the ground. The crystalline tears of the willow tree shattered simultaneously, raining shards of glass upon the loam. From the shadows of the silver trees, things began to emerge. They weren't solid, but rather ripples in the air—predatory shapes that mirrored the shimmering distortion of the Veil. Nyx expanded, their shadow spreading across the ground like an ink spill, blotting out the neon flowers. "They are scenting the stone." Rory drew the Fae-Forged Blade. The moonsilver glowed with a pale, lunar light, cutting through the mist. The cold of the hilt seeped into her bones, sharpening her focus. She stepped forward, placing herself between Isolde and the encroaching ripples. "If they want the stone," Rory said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands, "they can try and take it." Isolde smiled, a thin, enigmatic expression that didn't reach her lavender eyes. "Careful, Aurora. In this place, bravery is often mistaken for an appetite."
created_at"2026-05-10T12:33:06.577Z" 5/10/2026, 12:33:06 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.261
leniency0.522
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"searing"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count3
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"wavered"
count1
11
word"crystalline"
count2
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"oppressive"
count1
14
word"crystal"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"shattered"
count1
17
word"enigmatic"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"searing"
2"pristine"
3"velvet"
4"flickered"
5"throbbed"
6"warmth"
7"scanning"
8"scanned"
9"echoed"
10"wavered"
11"crystalline"
12"silence"
13"oppressive"
14"crystal"
15"pulse"
16"shattered"
17"enigmatic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences76
matches
0"felt a prickle"
67.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1140
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount936
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Half-Fae1
Nyx6
Shade3
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Rory14
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Veil2
Cardiff1
Isolde9
persons
0"Half-Fae"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"Rory"
4"Veil"
5"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.752
windowScore1
29.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like a dry wind rattling through a"
1"looked like polished gemstones"
2"looked like crushed diamonds"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1140
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean24.78
std18.73
cv0.756
sampleLengths
038
139
24
328
435
55
619
712
854
939
104
1124
127
1352
143
1527
164
1765
1824
1943
206
2130
2217
2375
2429
2562
268
2724
2820
296
3054
315
324
3311
3431
3518
3630
374
3820
3952
4017
415
4240
4322
4412
4512
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"was carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
50.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences93
ratio0.032
matches
0"The reflection showed her in a different life—wearing a barrister's robe, standing in a courtroom in Cardiff, her father's proud face beaming from the gallery."
1"The crimson glow was no longer faint; it cast a blood-red light onto her chin."
2"They weren't solid, but rather ripples in the air—predatory shapes that mirrored the shimmering distortion of the Veil."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount945
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.025396825396825397
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007407407407407408
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean12.26
std6.07
cv0.495
sampleLengths
015
18
215
320
419
54
63
718
87
93
1018
1114
125
135
1414
1512
164
1715
1818
1917
209
2110
2220
234
2411
2513
267
274
2818
2914
3016
313
3212
3315
344
359
3610
3710
3820
3916
403
4121
429
4317
4417
456
464
4726
4817
4912
46.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3118279569892473
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences72
matches
0"She left no imprint on"
1"Her own boots sank into"
2"Her pale lavender eyes seemed"
3"She reached inside her jacket"
4"She reached out to touch"
5"She saw sprawling vineyards where"
6"Her expression remained neutral, but"
7"She continued walking toward the"
8"She felt a prickle of"
9"They sliced through a thicket"
10"She leaned in."
11"She recoiled, her heart hammering"
12"She turned to face them,"
13"They weren't solid, but rather"
14"She stepped forward, placing herself"
ratio0.208
36.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences72
matches
0"Rory stepped across the threshold"
1"The damp, biting chill of"
2"Wildflowers erupted from the soil"
3"Isolde glided forward."
4"The Half-Fae’s silver hair trailed"
5"She left no imprint on"
6"Rory looked down."
7"Her own boots sank into"
8"The contrast made her feel"
9"Isolde paused, tilting her head."
10"Her pale lavender eyes seemed"
11"The Shade remained a humanoid"
12"The creature’s form blurred at"
13"Rory felt a sudden, sharp"
14"She reached inside her jacket"
15"The deep crimson gem throbbed"
16"Nyx’s voice sounded like a"
17"The Shade pivoted, their glowing"
18"Rory scanned the perimeter."
19"She reached out to touch"
ratio0.847
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"To her left, a stream"
ratio0.014
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Wildflowers erupted from the soil in a riot of neon indigos and searing yellows, their petals pulsing like slow-beating hearts."
1"She saw sprawling vineyards where the grapes glowed like embers and orchards laden with fruit that looked like polished gemstones."
2"The metal was ice-cold, sending a shiver up her arm that snapped her out of the trance."
3"She continued walking toward the center of the grove, where a single, massive willow wept crystalline tears that tinkled like wind chimes upon hitting the groun…"
4"The reflection showed her in a different life—wearing a barrister's robe, standing in a courtroom in Cardiff, her father's proud face beaming from the gallery."
5"They weren't solid, but rather ripples in the air—predatory shapes that mirrored the shimmering distortion of the Veil."
6"Nyx expanded, their shadow spreading across the ground like an ink spill, blotting out the neon flowers."
7"Isolde smiled, a thin, enigmatic expression that didn't reach her lavender eyes."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
2"Isolde warned (warn)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.261
leniency0.522
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.348
75.1115%