| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.261 | | leniency | 0.522 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1142 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 8.06% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1142 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "searing" | | 2 | "pristine" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "scanned" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "wavered" | | 11 | "crystalline" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "oppressive" | | 14 | "crystal" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "shattered" | | 17 | "enigmatic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 67.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1140 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.21% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 936 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Shade | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Rory | 14 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Veil | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Isolde | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Half-Fae" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Veil" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.752 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 29.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a dry wind rattling through a" | | 1 | "looked like polished gemstones" | | 2 | "looked like crushed diamonds" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 24.78 | | std | 18.73 | | cv | 0.756 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 65 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 43 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 75 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 62 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 54 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 52 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 40 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.69% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "The reflection showed her in a different life—wearing a barrister's robe, standing in a courtroom in Cardiff, her father's proud face beaming from the gallery." | | 1 | "The crimson glow was no longer faint; it cast a blood-red light onto her chin." | | 2 | "They weren't solid, but rather ripples in the air—predatory shapes that mirrored the shimmering distortion of the Veil." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 945 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.025396825396825397 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007407407407407408 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 12.26 | | std | 6.07 | | cv | 0.495 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 46.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3118279569892473 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She left no imprint on" | | 1 | "Her own boots sank into" | | 2 | "Her pale lavender eyes seemed" | | 3 | "She reached inside her jacket" | | 4 | "She reached out to touch" | | 5 | "She saw sprawling vineyards where" | | 6 | "Her expression remained neutral, but" | | 7 | "She continued walking toward the" | | 8 | "She felt a prickle of" | | 9 | "They sliced through a thicket" | | 10 | "She leaned in." | | 11 | "She recoiled, her heart hammering" | | 12 | "She turned to face them," | | 13 | "They weren't solid, but rather" | | 14 | "She stepped forward, placing herself" |
| | ratio | 0.208 | |
| 36.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped across the threshold" | | 1 | "The damp, biting chill of" | | 2 | "Wildflowers erupted from the soil" | | 3 | "Isolde glided forward." | | 4 | "The Half-Fae’s silver hair trailed" | | 5 | "She left no imprint on" | | 6 | "Rory looked down." | | 7 | "Her own boots sank into" | | 8 | "The contrast made her feel" | | 9 | "Isolde paused, tilting her head." | | 10 | "Her pale lavender eyes seemed" | | 11 | "The Shade remained a humanoid" | | 12 | "The creature’s form blurred at" | | 13 | "Rory felt a sudden, sharp" | | 14 | "She reached inside her jacket" | | 15 | "The deep crimson gem throbbed" | | 16 | "Nyx’s voice sounded like a" | | 17 | "The Shade pivoted, their glowing" | | 18 | "Rory scanned the perimeter." | | 19 | "She reached out to touch" |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 69.44% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers erupted from the soil in a riot of neon indigos and searing yellows, their petals pulsing like slow-beating hearts." | | 1 | "She saw sprawling vineyards where the grapes glowed like embers and orchards laden with fruit that looked like polished gemstones." | | 2 | "The metal was ice-cold, sending a shiver up her arm that snapped her out of the trance." | | 3 | "She continued walking toward the center of the grove, where a single, massive willow wept crystalline tears that tinkled like wind chimes upon hitting the groun…" | | 4 | "The reflection showed her in a different life—wearing a barrister's robe, standing in a courtroom in Cardiff, her father's proud face beaming from the gallery." | | 5 | "They weren't solid, but rather ripples in the air—predatory shapes that mirrored the shimmering distortion of the Veil." | | 6 | "Nyx expanded, their shadow spreading across the ground like an ink spill, blotting out the neon flowers." | | 7 | "Isolde smiled, a thin, enigmatic expression that didn't reach her lavender eyes." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.261 | | leniency | 0.522 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.348 | |