Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8Y7K5FNR8A2JBH0GQ6B59D

Run Details

Duration:
1m 45s
Cost:
$0.001741
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the cobblestones of Camden, turning the street into a mirror of neon reds and bruised purples. Harlow Quinn lunged forward, her boots splashing through oil-streaked puddles. A few yards ahead, a man in a drenched charcoal overcoat tore through the crowd, shoving a tourist aside. "Police! Stop!" Quinn’s voice cut through the roar of the downpour. The man didn't break stride. He pivoted around a corner, his heels skidding on a wet metal grate. Quinn didn't slow. She banked hard, her shoulder clipping a stack of plastic crates that clattered across the alley. Lactic acid burned in her thighs, a sharp contrast to the freezing rain that soaked through her blazer. She glanced at the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Midnight. The suspect vaulted a low brick wall, disappearing into a narrow gap between two warehouses. Quinn hit the wall at a sprint, her hand gripping the rough brick to propel herself over the ledge. She landed in a crouch, the impact jarring her spine. The alley ended in a dead-end court, dominated by a rusted iron shutter and a concrete stairwell leading downward. The man was already halfway down the stairs, his silhouette flickering under a single, dying yellow bulb. "Get on the ground! Now!" The man paused, looking back over his shoulder. His face remained a blur in the shadows, but his chest heaved in jagged rhythms. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, pale object. "You don't want to come down here, Detective." Quinn stepped toward the stairwell, her hand resting on the grip of her sidearm. Her jaw tightened, the sharp line of it set in a grim mask. "I'll ask you one more time. Hands where I can see them." The man chuckled, a wet, rattling sound. He pressed the object against a heavy steel door at the bottom of the stairs. The object was a sliver of bone, carved with jagged runes that seemed to swallow the light. As it touched the metal, the door didn't creak or swing; it dissolved, the steel rippling like water to create a shimmering aperture. The man stepped through the liquid metal and vanished. Quinn reached the threshold. The ripple began to solidify, the steel closing back into a seamless slab. She thrust her arm forward, her fingers catching the edge of the portal just before it sealed. She tumbled through, the sensation akin to being pulled through a straw. She hit a hard, dusty floor. The air shifted instantly. The smell of rain and exhaust vanished, replaced by the scent of ozone, old parchment, and something metallic, like dried blood. Quinn stood, brushing grit from her trousers. She found herself in an abandoned Tube station. The tiles on the walls were cracked and yellowed, peeling away in long strips like dead skin. But the station wasn't empty. Beyond a row of rusted turnstiles, the platform glowed with a thousand floating lanterns. Stalls of dark mahogany and salvaged iron lined the tracks. Figures moved through the haze—some draped in heavy silks, others wearing masks carved from obsidian or animal bone. They didn't walk so much as glide, their voices a low, dissonant hum that vibrated in Quinn's teeth. This was the Veil Market. She stayed in the shadows of the entryway, her back pressed against the cold tile. Her military precision kicked in; she scanned the perimeter, noting the exits. There were none. The only way out was the way she had come, and the steel door was now a solid wall of iron. The man in the charcoal coat stood fifty feet away, talking to a creature whose skin looked like wet river stone. The creature held a ledger bound in human leather, scribbling with a quill made from a crow's wing. Quinn shifted her weight, her boot scuffing the floor. A woman in a veil of black lace appeared beside her. The woman didn't make a sound, her presence announced only by the sudden smell of lilies and formaldehyde. "No token, no passage." Quinn spun, her hand flying to her holster. The veiled woman didn't flinch. She stood perfectly still, her eyes hidden, though Quinn felt a gaze boring into her soul. "I'm a police officer. Step aside." "The law of the surface is a ghost here, Detective Quinn." Quinn froze. She hadn't given her name. She hadn't shown a badge. "Who are you?" "A collector of debts. You carry a heavy one." The woman pointed a thin, porcelain finger toward the center of the market. The suspect was handing over a briefcase to the stone-skinned creature. The exchange was fast. The briefcase vanished into a fold of the creature's skin, absorbed entirely. Quinn looked at the suspect, then back at the veiled woman. If she moved now, she could tackle him, but she was one woman in a den of things that didn't follow the rules of biology. She thought of DS Morris, the way his eyes had looked blank and hollow in that basement three years ago. The same unnatural chill now crept up her spine. "If I go after him, do I get out?" The veiled woman tilted her head. "That depends on what you're willing to leave behind." Quinn gripped the leather strap of her watch, her knuckles white. The suspect turned to leave, heading deeper into the tunnels where the lanterns flickered and died. She stepped out of the shadows and into the amber light of the market. "I'm not leaving without him." The veiled woman stepped aside, her lace veil fluttering in a wind that didn't exist. "Then walk fast, Detective. The merchants here haven't tasted fresh blood in a fortnight." Quinn broke into a run, her boots thudding against the subterranean concrete. She ignored the whispers of the crowd and the sight of jars containing pulsing organs. She focused on the charcoal coat disappearing into the dark. As she chased him further into the belly of the station, the ceiling began to lower. The walls narrowed, the tiles giving way to raw, damp earth. The hum of the market faded, replaced by a rhythmic thumping, like a giant heart beating beneath the floor. The man stopped abruptly. He didn't turn around. "You're persistent, Quinn. I'll give you that." "Turn around. Hands behind your head." The man turned. He wasn't the same man she had chased through the rain. His skin was translucent now, showing veins that glowed with a faint, sickly green light. His eyes had widened, the pupils swallowing the iris entirely. "You think you're the hunter?" He smiled, revealing rows of needle-thin teeth. Quinn drew her weapon and leveled it at his chest. The weight of the gun felt wrong in this place, as if the metal were becoming brittle. "I don't think. I know." The man stepped forward, his movements jerky, like a puppet on strings. Behind him, the shadows of the tunnel began to detach themselves from the walls, rising as tall, featureless shapes. Quinn didn't blink. She centered the sights on his heart. "Last warning." The man laughed, and the sound was mirrored by a hundred voices echoing from the darkness behind her.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:36:42.295Z" 5/10/2026, 12:36:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1197
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1197
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"scanned"
2"weight"
3"porcelain"
4"chill"
5"flickered"
6"rhythmic"
7"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
47.62% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1196
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1074
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Quinn17
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Morris1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.709
windowScore0.667
81.51% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like wet river stone"
1"appeared beside her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1196
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean22.57
std17.82
cv0.79
sampleLengths
047
12
227
349
444
536
65
735
88
927
1012
1162
129
1346
1431
1537
1660
175
1851
1939
209
2129
224
2329
246
2511
2612
273
289
2940
3065
319
326
339
3427
3514
365
3715
3814
3937
4046
418
427
436
4439
455
467
4727
485
4931
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences90
matches
0"being pulled"
1"were cracked"
2"was mirrored"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was handing"
63.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences108
ratio0.028
matches
0"As it touched the metal, the door didn't creak or swing; it dissolved, the steel rippling like water to create a shimmering aperture."
1"Figures moved through the haze—some draped in heavy silks, others wearing masks carved from obsidian or animal bone."
2"Her military precision kicked in; she scanned the perimeter, noting the exits."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1079
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, sickly green light."
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.021316033364226137
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008341056533827619
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean11.07
std5.61
cv0.507
sampleLengths
018
110
219
32
49
55
613
73
816
918
1011
111
1215
1319
1410
1519
1617
175
188
1915
2012
218
2214
2313
2412
257
2615
2717
2823
299
304
3113
3217
3312
346
354
3621
377
388
3917
405
4114
4210
4318
4418
455
4615
4712
483
4921
37.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.28703703703703703
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
92.73% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences88
matches
0"He pivoted around a corner,"
1"She banked hard, her shoulder"
2"She glanced at the worn"
3"She landed in a crouch,"
4"His face remained a blur"
5"He reached into his pocket"
6"Her jaw tightened, the sharp"
7"He pressed the object against"
8"She thrust her arm forward,"
9"She tumbled through, the sensation"
10"She hit a hard, dusty"
11"She found herself in an"
12"They didn't walk so much"
13"She stayed in the shadows"
14"Her military precision kicked in;"
15"She stood perfectly still, her"
16"She hadn't given her name."
17"She hadn't shown a badge."
18"She thought of DS Morris,"
19"She stepped out of the"
ratio0.318
11.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences88
matches
0"Rain slicked the cobblestones of"
1"Harlow Quinn lunged forward, her"
2"Quinn’s voice cut through the"
3"The man didn't break stride."
4"He pivoted around a corner,"
5"Quinn didn't slow."
6"She banked hard, her shoulder"
7"She glanced at the worn"
8"The suspect vaulted a low"
9"Quinn hit the wall at"
10"She landed in a crouch,"
11"The alley ended in a"
12"The man was already halfway"
13"The man paused, looking back"
14"His face remained a blur"
15"He reached into his pocket"
16"Quinn stepped toward the stairwell,"
17"Her jaw tightened, the sharp"
18"The man chuckled, a wet,"
19"He pressed the object against"
ratio0.898
56.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"If she moved now, she"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"If she moved now, she could tackle him, but she was one woman in a den of things that didn't follow the rules of biology."
1"His skin was translucent now, showing veins that glowed with a faint, sickly green light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.4267%