| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1394 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1394 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "mosaic" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "apprehension" | | 6 | "glinting" | | 7 | "lilt" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "electric" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "dancing" | | 13 | "surreal" | | 14 | "cacophony" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "without second thought" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "without a second thought" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1390 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1275 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.41 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 18 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Tomás | 4 | | Herrera | 1 | | London | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Saint" | | 4 | "Christopher" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Tomás" | | 7 | "Herrera" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "Market" |
| | globalScore | 0.794 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 86.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed unnatural for his frame" | | 1 | "sounded like grinding stones or whistling" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.719 | | wordCount | 1390 | | matches | | 0 | "not at the suspect, but at the silence of the universe" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 90.31% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 43.44 | | std | 20.25 | | cv | 0.466 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 71 | | 7 | 68 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 88 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 61 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 54 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 47 |
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| 97.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "was plastered" | | 1 | "been transformed" |
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| 42.02% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | | 0 | "was wearing" | | 1 | "was currently clutching" | | 2 | "was stepping" | | 3 | "was entering" | | 4 | "was willing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain didn't just fall; it hammered the Soho pavement, turning the city into a blurred mosaic of charcoal grey and neon smear." | | 1 | "She didn't waste time searching for a key; she stepped back and drove her shoulder into the metal with a concentrated burst of force." | | 2 | "They didn't look at her with curiosity; they looked at her with a quiet, knowing apprehension." | | 3 | "He glanced at the suspect—the man Quinn had been chasing—who was currently clutching a bleeding shoulder and gasping for air." | | 4 | "Her mind flashed back to three years ago—to the blood on the pavement, the smell of ozone, and the empty space where DS Morris should have been." | | 5 | "The \"off-the-books\" nature of this operation wasn't just criminal; it was something else." | | 6 | "He didn't run for the door; he dove toward a heavy iron grate set into the floor, ripping it open with a strength that seemed unnatural for his frame." | | 7 | "It wasn't the steady glow of electric lights; it was a shifting, iridescent shimmer." | | 8 | "She felt a sudden, sharp surge of anger—not at the suspect, but at the silence of the universe that had swallowed her partner." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1285 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.021011673151750974 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008560311284046693 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 14.48 | | std | 6.75 | | cv | 0.466 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 56.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.375 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he vanished behind a" | | 1 | "Instead, he shifted his weight," | | 2 | "Then, she saw the hooded" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 76.18% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt only the rhythmic," | | 1 | "She kept her center of" | | 2 | "Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair" | | 3 | "She knew the place." | | 4 | "She didn't waste time searching" | | 5 | "She moved through the bar," | | 6 | "They didn't look at her" | | 7 | "She spotted the suspect disappearing" | | 8 | "It was a clumsy concealment," | | 9 | "She stepped forward, her hand" | | 10 | "He was wearing a stained" | | 11 | "He didn't look up from" | | 12 | "His warm brown eyes were" | | 13 | "He glanced at the suspect—the" | | 14 | "She saw syringes filled with" | | 15 | "Her mind flashed back to" | | 16 | "She recognized the signs now." | | 17 | "He didn't run for the" | | 18 | "He plummeted into the darkness" | | 19 | "She reached the grate just" |
| | ratio | 0.36 | |
| 49.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain didn't just fall;" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn didn't feel" | | 2 | "She felt only the rhythmic," | | 3 | "Quinn’s breath came in sharp," | | 4 | "She kept her center of" | | 5 | "Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair" | | 6 | "The suspect banked hard left," | | 7 | "Quinn followed, her boots splashing" | | 8 | "The Raven's Nest." | | 9 | "She knew the place." | | 10 | "Silas’s bar was a known" | | 11 | "The suspect didn't enter the" | | 12 | "Quinn reached the door and" | | 13 | "She didn't waste time searching" | | 14 | "The frame groaned and gave" | | 15 | "The air was thick with" | | 16 | "Quinn scanned the corridor." | | 17 | "The suspect had moved fast," | | 18 | "She moved through the bar," | | 19 | "The Raven's Nest was a" |
| | ratio | 0.82 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Quinn could react, the" | | 1 | "If she let him vanish" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 52.15% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her center of gravity low, her movements dictated by a military precision that hadn't faded with time." | | 1 | "Quinn followed, her boots splashing through oily puddles that reflected the flickering lights of the district." | | 2 | "The Raven's Nest was a cavern of shadow, its walls plastered with yellowing maps and grainy black-and-white photographs of places that didn't appear on any mode…" | | 3 | "She stepped forward, her hand resting instinctively on the grip of her sidearm, and pushed against the shelving." | | 4 | "She saw syringes filled with iridescent fluids and jars of things that defied biological classification." | | 5 | "He didn't run for the door; he dove toward a heavy iron grate set into the floor, ripping it open with a strength that seemed unnatural for his frame." | | 6 | "She felt a sudden, sharp surge of anger—not at the suspect, but at the silence of the universe that had swallowed her partner." | | 7 | "Stalls made of driftwood and rusted iron lined the tracks, illuminated by floating lanterns that cast dancing shadows against the soot-stained tiles." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "the man said, his voice carrying a soft, melodic lilt" | | 1 | "Quinn demanded, her voice a low rasp" | | 2 | "Quinn said, her voice hard as flint" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "Tomás whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Tomás warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.462 | |