Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8YA4M4D871RJE008FGW4FB

Run Details

Duration:
40.2s
Cost:
$0.003057
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts clicked home with a rhythmic, metallic finality that echoed off the cramped walls of Eva’s hallway. Rory stood frozen in the narrow gap between the threshold and the kitchen, her grip tight on a lukewarm delivery bag. The scent of stale curry clung to the air, mingling with the sharp, acidic tang of parchment and old ink. Lucien leaned against the doorframe, his charcoal coat absorbing the dim light of the landing. One amber eye tracked the rise and fall of her chest, while the other—that void of pitch black—looked past her toward the overflowing bookshelves. He tapped the ivory handle of his cane against the floorboards, a slow, deliberate sound that set her teeth on edge. You have a flair for the dramatic, don’t you? She shifted the weight of the thermal bag, her knuckles whitening against the red nylon straps. The small crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed, a phantom sensation tied to memories she preferred to keep buried under the stack of legal textbooks clogging the entryway. The flat is full, Lucien. My patience is even thinner. He stepped inside, unbidden, invading the small radius of her personal space. The scent of ozone and expensive cologne filled the room, replacing the smell of the restaurant. He closed the door behind him with a soft thud that vibrated through the floorboards, effectively sealing them into the suffocating intimacy of the flat. Ptolemy the tabby cat bolted from a pile of research notes, tail puffed in alarm before vanishing into the shadows beneath the sofa. Patience was never your strong suit, Aurora. Neither was foresight. He ran a gloved hand along the edge of a mahogany desk, picking up a stray scroll and turning it over in his fingers. His platinum hair looked jarringly bright against the chaos of the room. He didn’t look at her, yet the weight of his presence pressed against her like a physical force. You left Cardiff without a word, and London hasn't exactly been a sanctuary for you, has it? I hear the delivery business is grueling for a woman with such expensive taste in literature. She set the bag on the counter, the clatter of plastic containers cutting through the tense silence. Rory stepped away, pulling her sweater tighter across her chest. How did you find me? He turned then, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers. There was no warmth in his gaze, only a piercing, analytical intensity that saw right through the bravado she cultivated for the streets. He walked toward her, the rhythmic click of his cane punctuating the silence of the flat. He stopped when he was inches away, close enough that she felt the unnatural cold radiating from him. The underworld is smaller than you think. And you, darling, have a habit of leaving breadcrumbs. A signature on a lease here, a name whispered in a back-alley bar downstairs. Did you think hiding behind a curry house would keep the past from catching up? She stared up at him, resisting the urge to take a step back. She saw the familiar arc of his jaw, the way his lips thinned when he was annoyed, the precise, rigid posture he maintained even when he was clearly out of his comfort zone. She remembered the nights in Marseille, the way his hands felt against her waist, the dangerous heat that accompanied every secret he shared. That history sat between them now, a jagged, unhealed thing. I left because the life you offered was a cage. Even if it was gilded. He laughed, a dry, humorless sound that didn't reach his eyes. He leaned down, his face hovering just above hers, his breath cold against her cheek. Every room is a cage if you’re looking for a lock. You didn’t run for freedom, Rory. You ran for safety. There is a difference. Her hand drifted to her wrist, her thumb tracing the scar. And you? Why are you here? To check on your investment? To see if I'm finally broken? He reached out, his gloved thumb hooking beneath her chin to tilt her face upward. His touch was clinical, yet his gaze held a flicker of something raw, something that defied the composed veneer of the fixer. He looked older, tired, lines etched faintly around his eyes that hadn't been there when he helped her navigate the docks. I’m here because the work in Avaros has become unstable. You know the politics. You know how quickly the balance tilts when the board loses a few pieces. I need eyes on the ground, and you were always the sharpest blade I knew. She swatted his hand away, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. She stepped into the kitchen, creating space, turning her back to him to reach for a mug. Her hands shook just enough that the porcelain rattled against the stone counter. I’m not a blade, Lucien. I’m a delivery driver. I handle orders, I navigate traffic, and I sleep without checking for threats under my bed every night. Find someone else to play your games. He followed her, his stride long and effortless. He leaned against the counter, blocking her exit path. The kitchen suddenly felt microscopic. He reached out and snagged the strap of her bag, pulling it aside to clear a spot on the counter. Then, he placed his own hand down, right next to hers. You’re lying to yourself. I can see the fear, yes, but it’s not for yourself. It’s for what you’ve built here. For the simple life you’re so desperate to believe in. She turned, pinning him with a glare. What right do you have to decide what I am? You walked away too. Don't act like I’m the only one who turned their back. The air shifted. The playful, dark arrogance vanished from his face, replaced by a sudden, jagged vulnerability. He looked at the window, then back at her, his posture losing its stiff rigidity. I didn't walk away. I left you behind because the danger was closing in, and I knew you wouldn't survive the transition unless you were miles from the fallout. You never understood the debt I was paying. Debt? She laughed, a harsh, jagged sound. You don't get to rewrite history. You left because it was easier to cut the cord than to fight for it. He moved then, swift and sudden, crowding her into the corner between the fridge and the counter. He didn't touch her, but the sheer gravity of him made it impossible to move. He placed his hands on the counter on either side of her, boxing her in. His eyes went dark, the amber and black blending into a swirling, stormy mess. I never stopped fighting for it. Why do you think I’m in this God-forsaken flat in East London, arguing with a woman who treats me like a parasite? Rory looked at him, searching for the mask, the fixer, the demon-blooded broker. Instead, she found only memories—the taste of salt air, the scent of lavender and musk, the feeling of his forehead pressed against hers in the quiet moments before the chaos broke their world apart. She wanted to scream at him for the intrusion, for the mess he’d made of her controlled, predictable life, but the words died in her throat. Because you’re arrogant enough to think I’d want to see you again? His lips quirked, a ghost of a smirk. Because I’m arrogant enough to know you wouldn’t have locked that third bolt if you didn’t expect trouble. And you, Rory, have always been addicted to the kind of trouble I bring. He leaned in further, his nose brushing against hers. The scent of him—sharp, clean, dangerously familiar—clouded her thoughts. She felt the warmth of his body radiating against her, a stark contrast to the chill of the room. She held her ground, refusing to be the one to back down, even as her pulse hammered in her ears. Get out, Lucien. Before I make you. His gaze flickered to her lips, a brief, hungry motion, before he pulled back just enough to create an agonizing distance. Make me, then. He didn't move an inch. He simply waited, his presence a challenge, a dare, and a promise all wrapped into one. The silence hung between them, thick and heavy, punctuated only by the distant, muffled sound of a siren wailing somewhere out on Brick Lane. Rory stared at the pulse point in his neck, the temptation of reaching out a weight that settled deep in the marrow of her bones. She held the gaze, fighting the urge to lean into the space he’d carved out for them, knowing that if she did, the carefully constructed walls of her life would come crashing down.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
89.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1476
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"suddenly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1476
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"sanctuary"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count2
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"navigate"
count2
14
word"porcelain"
count1
15
word"effortless"
count1
16
word"predictable"
count1
17
word"stark"
count1
18
word"chill"
count1
19
word"pulse"
count2
20
word"flickered"
count1
21
word"constructed"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"echoed"
2"weight"
3"throbbed"
4"vibrated"
5"sanctuary"
6"silence"
7"warmth"
8"intensity"
9"familiar"
10"tracing"
11"flicker"
12"etched"
13"navigate"
14"porcelain"
15"effortless"
16"predictable"
17"stark"
18"chill"
19"pulse"
20"flickered"
21"constructed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
67.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount6
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences113
filterMatches
0"hear"
1"think"
2"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1471
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1471
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Lucien4
Aurora1
Cardiff1
London2
Marseille1
Rory6
Avaros1
God-forsaken1
East1
Brick1
Lane1
You11
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"You"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Marseille"
3"East"
4"Brick"
5"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1471
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean34.21
std24.31
cv0.711
sampleLengths
060
160
29
345
410
576
610
754
833
927
105
1166
1245
1379
1415
1526
1625
1711
1817
1958
2043
2145
2234
2353
2431
257
2625
2732
2837
291
306
3121
3261
3328
3473
3512
368
3732
3857
397
4021
413
42103
95.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences113
matches
0"was annoyed"
1"was gilded"
2"been addicted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs258
matches
0"was closing"
67.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences113
ratio0.027
matches
0"One amber eye tracked the rise and fall of her chest, while the other—that void of pitch black—looked past her toward the overflowing bookshelves."
1"Instead, she found only memories—the taste of salt air, the scent of lavender and musk, the feeling of his forehead pressed against hers in the quiet moments before the chaos broke their world apart."
2"The scent of him—sharp, clean, dangerously familiar—clouded her thoughts."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1479
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.032454361054766734
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.010141987829614604
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean13.02
std7.44
cv0.571
sampleLengths
019
121
220
315
424
521
69
716
829
95
105
1112
1216
1325
1423
157
163
1724
1812
1918
2017
2116
2217
2310
245
259
2623
2716
2818
297
309
3114
3215
3313
3433
3523
3610
3710
385
3911
4015
4111
426
434
444
4511
462
474
485
496
36.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.3185840707964602
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners36
60.06% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"Then, he placed his own"
1"Instead, she found only memories—the"
ratio0.018
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount66
totalSentences111
matches
0"He tapped the ivory handle"
1"You have a flair for"
2"She shifted the weight of"
3"My patience is even thinner."
4"He stepped inside, unbidden, invading"
5"He closed the door behind"
6"He ran a gloved hand"
7"His platinum hair looked jarringly"
8"He didn’t look at her,"
9"You left Cardiff without a"
10"I hear the delivery business"
11"She set the bag on"
12"He turned then, his heterochromatic"
13"He walked toward her, the"
14"He stopped when he was"
15"She stared up at him,"
16"She saw the familiar arc"
17"She remembered the nights in"
18"I left because the life"
19"He laughed, a dry, humorless"
ratio0.595
63.60% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences111
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked home"
1"Rory stood frozen in the"
2"The scent of stale curry"
3"Lucien leaned against the doorframe,"
4"He tapped the ivory handle"
5"You have a flair for"
6"She shifted the weight of"
7"The small crescent scar on"
8"The flat is full, Lucien."
9"My patience is even thinner."
10"He stepped inside, unbidden, invading"
11"The scent of ozone and"
12"He closed the door behind"
13"Ptolemy the tabby cat bolted"
14"Patience was never your strong"
15"Neither was foresight."
16"He ran a gloved hand"
17"His platinum hair looked jarringly"
18"He didn’t look at her,"
19"You left Cardiff without a"
ratio0.793
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences111
matches
0"Even if it was gilded."
1"To check on your investment?"
2"To see if I'm finally"
3"Because you’re arrogant enough to"
4"Because I’m arrogant enough to"
5"Before I make you."
ratio0.054
73.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked home with a rhythmic, metallic finality that echoed off the cramped walls of Eva’s hallway."
1"He tapped the ivory handle of his cane against the floorboards, a slow, deliberate sound that set her teeth on edge."
2"He closed the door behind him with a soft thud that vibrated through the floorboards, effectively sealing them into the suffocating intimacy of the flat."
3"She remembered the nights in Marseille, the way his hands felt against her waist, the dangerous heat that accompanied every secret he shared."
4"His touch was clinical, yet his gaze held a flicker of something raw, something that defied the composed veneer of the fixer."
5"He looked older, tired, lines etched faintly around his eyes that hadn't been there when he helped her navigate the docks."
6"Why do you think I’m in this God-forsaken flat in East London, arguing with a woman who treats me like a parasite?"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.5495%