| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1261 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.73% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1261 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "flicked" | | 4 | "navigate" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "loomed" | | 7 | "sentinels" | | 8 | "tinged" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "footfall" | | 11 | "echoing" | | 12 | "traced" | | 13 | "chill" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "shattered" | | 16 | "raced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "t with warmth" | | 1 | "felt the chill" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1260 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 1195 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.42 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 2 | | London | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Aurora | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 41.27% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.587 | | wordCount | 1260 | | matches | | 0 | "not with warmth, but with a rhythmic, agitated vibration" | | 1 | "not behind her, but somewhere high up in the dense, twisted branches" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 45 | | std | 25.91 | | cv | 0.576 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 77 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 83 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 69 | | 17 | 49 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 66 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 76 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 68 | | 26 | 85 | | 27 | 58 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 203 | | matches | | 0 | "were burrowing" | | 1 | "was breathing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "A twig snapped—not behind her, but somewhere high up in the dense, twisted branches." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1203 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "damp, moss-covered earth." |
| | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.022443890274314215 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010806317539484621 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 14 | | std | 6.51 | | cv | 0.465 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 35.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.28888888888888886 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 82.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the clearing, the ash-covered" | | 1 | "Only the distant, muffled pulse" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 37.28% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "It hummed against her skin," | | 2 | "Her breath hitched, turning into" | | 3 | "She flicked her torch toward" | | 4 | "It stood motionless, yet her" | | 5 | "She extinguished the light, trusting" | | 6 | "She tipped her head back," | | 7 | "It possessed the suffocating density" | | 8 | "She reached for the silver" | | 9 | "It started as a low," | | 10 | "It circled her, keeping exactly" | | 11 | "She walked toward the center" | | 12 | "They looked vibrant in the" | | 13 | "Her gait faltered." | | 14 | "She spun, her voice sounding" | | 15 | "She watched a clump of" | | 16 | "It didn't walk so much" | | 17 | "It possessed no face, only" | | 18 | "It tilted its head, a" | | 19 | "It took a single step," |
| | ratio | 0.457 | |
| 9.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park swallowed the moonlight" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped over the gnarled" | | 2 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 3 | "It hummed against her skin," | | 4 | "The air inside the boundary" | | 5 | "Her breath hitched, turning into" | | 6 | "She flicked her torch toward" | | 7 | "The beam sliced through the" | | 8 | "It stood motionless, yet her" | | 9 | "She extinguished the light, trusting" | | 10 | "A twig snapped—not behind her," | | 11 | "She tipped her head back," | | 12 | "Nothing moved, yet the space" | | 13 | "It possessed the suffocating density" | | 14 | "She reached for the silver" | | 15 | "The crescent-shaped mark tingled." | | 16 | "The sound returned, different this" | | 17 | "It started as a low," | | 18 | "It circled her, keeping exactly" | | 19 | "Every time she whipped her" |
| | ratio | 0.901 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath hitched, turning into a plume of pale vapor that hung motionless in the air instead of dissipating." | | 1 | "It possessed the suffocating density of a room filled with too many people who refused to speak." | | 2 | "The Heartstone erupted with a frantic, pulsing heat, burning through her shirt, digging into her chest." | | 3 | "The figure stood impossibly thin, its limbs dangling past its knees, swaying despite the absence of a breeze." | | 4 | "The gap between them narrowed, the creature moving with a predatory, disjointed grace that defied anatomy." | | 5 | "Its arms extended, fingers elongated into spindly, translucent needles that traced the air in hypnotic patterns." | | 6 | "She scrambled to regain her footing, the pendant now radiating an intense, stinging heat that forced her to gasp." | | 7 | "The air around the creature hummed, distorting the light, appearing as if the space surrounding it were made of liquid glass." | | 8 | "Only the clearing, the ash-covered grass, and the thing that clicked behind her." | | 9 | "It mirrored her posture, tilting its featureless face toward her, sensing the heat from the pendant." | | 10 | "Aurora felt the chill of the Fae realm seep through the soil, creeping up her legs, turning her blood to ice." | | 11 | "The trees began to groan, the wood twisting painfully as if something massive were burrowing inside the trunks, trying to force its way out into the world." | | 12 | "She looked at the scar on her wrist, expecting it to fade, to disappear as if she had never existed at all." | | 13 | "The sensation burned, leaving a trail of frigid numbness that raced toward her heart, battling the heat of the Heartstone." | | 14 | "She spun around, gasping, her lungs seizing in the cold night air." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, the words barely escaping her throat" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |