| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2030 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2030 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "quickened" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "depths" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "resolved" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "gloom" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "shimmered" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "constructed" | | 16 | "silk" | | 17 | "cacophony" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of that silence" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 164 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2023 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 65 | | wordCount | 2001 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.3 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 12 | | Isolde | 12 | | Aurora | 26 | | Fae | 5 | | Leaves | 3 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Leaves" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.85 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if receiving instruction from unseen voices" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.494 | | wordCount | 2023 | | matches | | 0 | "not physically but in perception: distances stretched, colors inverted for one" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 59.5 | | std | 30.64 | | cv | 0.515 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 89 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 97 | | 5 | 97 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 95 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 68 | | 13 | 99 | | 14 | 77 | | 15 | 73 | | 16 | 71 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 83 | | 19 | 61 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 82 | | 22 | 72 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 75 | | 25 | 77 | | 26 | 92 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 71 | | 30 | 62 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 54 | | 33 | 90 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 344 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 164 | | ratio | 0.055 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora caught one on her palm; the spark dissolved into cool mist and left a faint residue that smelled of frost and honey." | | 1 | "Cold rushed up her arm and the image below rippled, revealing a second layer beneath the city—a gate of iron thorns half-submerged in the reflected depths." | | 2 | "Aurora’s eyes adjusted slowly; every detail sharpened." | | 3 | "Steps emerged from the passage—broad, shallow, descending out of sight." | | 4 | "Sound returned in a rush—the drip of unseen water, the faint creak of settling roots, her own pulse loud in both ears." | | 5 | "Footprints none of them made appeared in the fine dust on the floor ahead—broad and clawed, leading deeper." | | 6 | "The vaulted ceiling displayed constellations she did not recognize—patterns that formed shifting faces, some snarling, others laughing, all watching the three intruders with patient, ancient eyes." | | 7 | "Through it Aurora glimpsed movement—vast vineyards stretching beneath an amber sky, figures in shadow robes harvesting fruit that wept red juice, and beyond them a throne constructed of bones and living vines occupied by a silhouette too large to be human." | | 8 | "New stars wheeled overhead—slow, deliberate, alive with their own slow thoughts." |
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| 91.26% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2017 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "half-formed: half laughter," |
| | adverbCount | 87 | | adverbRatio | 0.04313336638572137 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0034705007436787306 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 164 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 164 | | mean | 12.34 | | std | 7.11 | | cv | 0.577 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 49.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3170731707317073 | | totalSentences | 164 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 63.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead the surface showed the" | | 1 | "Further in, the grove changed" | | 2 | "Then she placed her foot" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed ahead." | | 1 | "They whispered once without words," | | 2 | "They halted together." | | 3 | "She unclasped the Heartstone." | | 4 | "She stepped between two stones" | | 5 | "Her skin tingled as though" | | 6 | "They emerged into a clearing" | | 7 | "Her wrist scar itched beneath" | | 8 | "She rubbed it once against" | | 9 | "They followed the path until" | | 10 | "She dipped one finger into" | | 11 | "They reached toward the water" | | 12 | "She took three careful steps" | | 13 | "She felt its pulse through" | | 14 | "She paused, then extended the" | | 15 | "She turned away." | | 16 | "It resolved into the slow" | | 17 | "She stepped forward once, blade" | | 18 | "She inhaled the spiced air" | | 19 | "She kept the blade ready" |
| | ratio | 0.203 | |
| 54.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 128 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "The chain warmed against her" | | 2 | "She pushed ahead." | | 3 | "The air pressed close, thick" | | 4 | "Nyx drifted just behind her" | | 5 | "They whispered once without words," | | 6 | "Aurora felt the weight of" | | 7 | "The half-Fae’s pale eyes reflected" | | 8 | "They halted together." | | 9 | "The standing stones hummed now," | | 10 | "Aurora drew a breath and" | | 11 | "She unclasped the Heartstone." | | 12 | "The pendant brightened, its crimson" | | 13 | "Nyx said, the whisper threading" | | 14 | "She stepped between two stones" | | 15 | "The moment her foot crossed" | | 16 | "Her skin tingled as though" | | 17 | "They emerged into a clearing" | | 18 | "Trees that had not been" | | 19 | "Leaves the color of fresh" |
| | ratio | 0.81 | |
| 31.65% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could stand, movement" |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 27.42% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | technicalSentenceCount | 16 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted just behind her shoulder, their silhouette stretching across the stones in long violet shadows that moved independent of the moonlight." | | 1 | "Behind Nyx came Isolde, silver hair drifting as though underwater, feet never quite brushing the moss." | | 2 | "The pendant brightened, its crimson heart flaring once before settling into a steady glow that illuminated the ground for three paces around her boots." | | 3 | "Trees that had not been visible from outside now rose like twisted pillars of dark wood veined with luminous sap." | | 4 | "Aurora focused on placing each step, listening for the faint crunch that refused to appear." | | 5 | "The fruit shivered, then rolled off the branch into Nyx’s waiting palm before bursting into harmless shadow that reformed as a single black feather." | | 6 | "The half-Fae walked with hands clasped behind her back, head slightly tilted as if receiving instruction from unseen voices." | | 7 | "Instead the surface showed the faint outline of a city beneath still waves: towers of glass and bone, streets that twisted at impossible angles." | | 8 | "A breeze she had not felt earlier now moved through the trees, carrying words that sounded half-formed: half laughter, half lament." | | 9 | "She took three careful steps around the pool, following a winding root that served as a makeshift bridge." | | 10 | "The surface rose in a slender column that formed an image: a woman’s silhouette with straight black hair and a crescent scar on one wrist." | | 11 | "The steps vanished into shadow that swallowed light the way a sponge draws water." | | 12 | "The vaulted ceiling displayed constellations she did not recognize—patterns that formed shifting faces, some snarling, others laughing, all watching the three i…" | | 13 | "Through it Aurora glimpsed movement—vast vineyards stretching beneath an amber sky, figures in shadow robes harvesting fruit that wept red juice, and beyond the…" | | 14 | "The hall dissolved into open grove once more, yet the trees now stood farther apart, revealing a stone path that led downward toward a horizon glowing with ambe…" | | 15 | "She kept walking, each step carrying her further from the boundary stones and deeper into the wonder that refused any simple name." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, the whisper threading directly into her left ear" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured, each word ringing twice before settling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "the whisper warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |