Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8YF0WXK7R3BQSS6X7HD4Q8

Run Details

Duration:
28.1s
Cost:
$0.003149
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sharp rhythmic thud against the wood announced a visitor before the sequence of heavy locks even groaned under protest. Rory stood with a half-empty mug of cooling tea in her hands, her knuckles white against the ceramic. She threw the final deadbolt back. The door swung inward to reveal Lucien Moreau, standing beneath the dim yellow glow of the hallway light, his charcoal coat collar turned up against the damp London drizzle. He smelled of rain and sandalwood, a scent that cut through the stale air of the flat like a razor. You should check the peephole before assuming guests are welcome, especially when it is well past midnight. Rory stepped back, her gaze snagging on the ivory handle of the cane balanced in his grip. The amber eye of his face tracked her movement, hungry and sharp, while the pitch-black void of the other seemed to drain the light from the cramped landing. She set her tea on a stack of research papers, the liquid sloshing over the brim onto a map of the East End. I stopped checking for you the moment you decided to vanish without a word. Lucien crossed the threshold, his polished Oxfords clicking against the uneven floorboards. He navigated the narrow lane between piles of scrolls and heavy tomes with the grace of a predator walking through tall grass. His presence expanded to fill every corner of the room, crowding out the shelves, the stacks of notes, and even Ptolemy, who hissed from the safety of the kitchenette before darting under the sofa. Lucien stopped near the center of the room and draped his cane across a stack of leather-bound volumes. The silence grew heavy, anchored in the space between the bookshelves and the rhythmic drip of a leaking pipe in the bathroom. He looked around, eyes scanning the chaotic walls of data, observing the mess of a life she had attempted to build in his absence. He reached out, fingers hovering above a frayed edge of a notebook, but he pulled his hand back as if the paper burned his skin. This place smells of desperation and cheap curry, Aurora. She pulled her sleeve down over the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, turning the fabric over and over between her thumb and forefinger. She looked at the floorboards, counting the scuffs and the scratches left by heavy transit, anything to avoid the heterochromatic gaze that seemed to peel back layers of skin and muscle to see the heartbeat beneath. She felt the urge to throw him out, to slam the door and shove the deadbolts home, yet her feet stayed planted in the center of the room. If you came here to critique the rent-controlled amenities, you could have left a review on the door. Otherwise, spill it. Lucien moved closer, closing the distance until the heat radiating from him became a tangible burden. He reached out to tuck a stray lock of her black hair behind her ear, his thumb lingering for a heartbeat against the shell of her earlobe. His touch felt like a ghost, a remnant of a season she had forced herself to outrun. She flinched, not out of fear, but because his proximity scrambled her thoughts, making the walls of the small room seem to shrink until they pressed tight against her spine. You look tired, despite the frantic energy you emit like a lighthouse beacon. He dipped his head, his face inches from hers. The shadow of his lashes cast jagged marks along his high cheekbones, and the black eye flared with a faint, infernal luminescence. He didn't wait for her permission to step into her space, and he didn't wait for her to acknowledge the history that hung between them like a shroud. She looked up, meeting his stare, holding her breath until her chest throbbed. I am tired of waiting for the other shoe to drop, Lucien. You walk out, you stay gone for months, and now you appear on my doorstep as if we are still mid-sentence. He shifted, the movement fluid and predatory. He caught her wrist, the one marred by the scar, and his thumb traced the indentation of the mark. His skin felt unnervingly cold compared to her feverish pulse. He didn't pull her closer, but he didn't let go, and the contact sent a jolt of static through her, a reminder of the nights when the divide between them had been much thinner. Some sentences do not finish, Aurora. They merely stop until the grammar of the situation forces a return to the topic. She stepped into him, closing the final inch of space. She placed a hand flat against his chest, feeling the steady, rhythmic thump of a heart that didn't beat quite like a human’s. She could feel the fabric of his tailored suit, crisp and expensive, a stark contrast to the threadbare sweater she wore to combat the chill of the drafty flat. She pushed, trying to create distance, but he stood firm, a monument of stone and shadows. The situation is entirely of your own making. I don't recall asking for an intermission. Lucien chuckled, a low, resonant sound that vibrated through the palms of her hands. He released her wrist and shifted his grip, one hand finding the small of her back to pull her against the front of his coat. The pressure was firm, demanding, and utterly familiar. She felt the sharp point of the blade hidden within his cane poking at her thigh as he stepped forward, forcing her back until she hit the edge of the mahogany desk. Books toppled, cascading onto the floor in a muffled thud, but neither of them broke the contact. There were things you never understood about the nature of my departure, things that would have shattered the very calm you seem so desperate to maintain. Maybe you should have let me decide what I was capable of bearing. Rory looked up at him, her heart drumming against her ribs. She could see his reflection in the dark, hungry eye, a tiny, distorted figure trapped in a cage made of his own design. She didn't want the truth, not really, because the truth would demand a reaction she wasn't ready to give. She wanted the distraction. She wanted the fire that always accompanied him, the way he blurred the lines between the life she had left behind in Cardiff and the survivalist game she played in London. She gripped the lapels of his coat, bunching the fabric tight in her fists. She felt the sharp prick of anger, layered underneath the attraction that still flared like a pilot light whenever he entered a room. He bent his head, his nose grazing the line of her jaw, a deliberate, lingering contact that sent a shiver racing down her spine. Tell me the truth, then. Tell me why you felt disappearing was a kindness instead of a wound. Lucien didn't answer with words. He shifted his weight, his hands sliding up to frame her face, his thumbs brushing over her cheekbones. The air in the flat grew static, a hum in the rafters that made the lightbulbs flicker. He pressed his forehead against hers, closing his eyes, the two colors of his gaze hidden from her view. She kept her eyes open, watching the pulse jump in his throat, smelling the ozone and the rain that clung to his skin. The truth is that I am a coward in your presence, Aurora. I fear the way you see through the suits and the cane and the brokered deals, straight to the ugly marrow of me. He leaned in, his lips brushing against the corner of hers. The contact was tentative, a departure from his usual arrogance, and it unsettled her more than any threat. She leaned into the movement, her hands sliding from his coat to his neck, her fingers tangling in the slicked-back blonde hair. She felt the drag of his intent, the way the history between them pulled both of them toward a precipice neither had the strength to climb back from. She didn't speak. She let the pressure of his lips answer for her. The kiss was sharp, lacking any pretense of sweetness, a collision of teeth and frustration that tasted like iron and cold autumn air. He moved with a hungry, desperate fluidity, his hands sliding down to her waist, anchoring her against the desk. She could feel the hard angle of his hip, the weight of him against her body, and every doubt she had gathered over the months of his absence evaporated, replaced by the instinct to hold on until the world outside the flat ceased to exist. She pulled back, breaking the seal for a single, gasping second, her breath ragged. She looked at him, searching for the bridge between the fixer who walked London’s shadows and the man who clung to her as if she were a lifeline. He looked back, the heterochromatic eyes wide and dark with a hunger that defied any logic. If you walk out that door again, Lucien, do not look back. If you stay, you are tethered to all of this. To the questions, to the chaos, to the things you are too afraid to say. Lucien reached out, tucking a loose piece of hair behind her ear once more, his hand lingering on the line of her neck. He leaned down, his voice a vibration against her skin, low and thick with a promise that terrified her. Tether me then, Rory. Stop asking for permission.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:40:45.734Z" 5/10/2026, 12:40:45 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1602
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"very"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1602
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count3
1
word"navigated"
count1
2
word"predator"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"tangible"
count1
7
word"beacon"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count2
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count2
13
word"stark"
count1
14
word"chill"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
16
word"familiar"
count1
17
word"cascading"
count1
18
word"shattered"
count1
19
word"racing"
count1
20
word"down her spine"
count1
21
word"weight"
count2
22
word"flicker"
count1
23
word"unsettled"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"navigated"
2"predator"
3"silence"
4"scanning"
5"chaotic"
6"tangible"
7"beacon"
8"throbbed"
9"traced"
10"pulse"
11"reminder"
12"could feel"
13"stark"
14"chill"
15"vibrated"
16"familiar"
17"cascading"
18"shattered"
19"racing"
20"down her spine"
21"weight"
22"flicker"
23"unsettled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
46.55% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"look"
1"decide"
2"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1602
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1602
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien9
Moreau1
London3
East1
End1
Oxfords1
Ptolemy1
Aurora3
Cardiff1
Rory4
You3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Oxfords"
3"Rory"
4"You"
places
0"London"
1"East"
2"End"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
58.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"gaze that seemed to peel back layers of skin and muscle to see the heartbeat beneath"
1"felt like a ghost, a remnant of a seaso"
2"tasted like iron and cold autumn air"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.624
wordCount1602
matches
0"not out of fear, but because his proximity scrambled her thoughts, making the wal"
91.76% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"is that I"
1"out that door"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean51.68
std31.24
cv0.605
sampleLengths
093
117
268
314
486
571
69
788
821
990
1013
1172
1233
1370
1421
1578
1615
1796
1826
1913
2088
2161
2218
2382
2435
2592
2687
2758
2837
2942
308
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"are tethered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs255
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences89
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1609
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.023617153511497825
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00435052827843381
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean18
std8.49
cv0.472
sampleLengths
020
118
26
329
420
517
617
728
823
914
1012
1122
1234
1318
1422
1524
1625
179
1824
1936
2028
2118
223
2316
2427
2517
2630
2713
289
2922
3028
3113
3212
3321
347
3519
3610
3734
386
3915
4010
4123
4229
4316
448
457
4614
4725
488
4932
28.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.2247191011235955
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners20
37.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Maybe you should have let"
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences89
matches
0"She threw the final deadbolt"
1"He smelled of rain and"
2"You should check the peephole"
3"She set her tea on"
4"I stopped checking for you"
5"He navigated the narrow lane"
6"His presence expanded to fill"
7"He looked around, eyes scanning"
8"He reached out, fingers hovering"
9"She pulled her sleeve down"
10"She looked at the floorboards,"
11"She felt the urge to"
12"He reached out to tuck"
13"His touch felt like a"
14"She flinched, not out of"
15"You look tired, despite the"
16"He dipped his head, his"
17"He didn't wait for her"
18"She looked up, meeting his"
19"I am tired of waiting"
ratio0.618
21.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences89
matches
0"The sharp rhythmic thud against"
1"Rory stood with a half-empty"
2"She threw the final deadbolt"
3"The door swung inward to"
4"He smelled of rain and"
5"You should check the peephole"
6"Rory stepped back, her gaze"
7"The amber eye of his"
8"She set her tea on"
9"I stopped checking for you"
10"Lucien crossed the threshold, his"
11"He navigated the narrow lane"
12"His presence expanded to fill"
13"Lucien stopped near the center"
14"The silence grew heavy, anchored"
15"He looked around, eyes scanning"
16"He reached out, fingers hovering"
17"This place smells of desperation"
18"She pulled her sleeve down"
19"She looked at the floorboards,"
ratio0.876
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences89
matches
0"If you came here to"
1"Otherwise, spill it."
2"If you walk out that"
3"If you stay, you are"
4"To the questions, to the"
ratio0.056
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences74
technicalSentenceCount15
matches
0"He reached out, fingers hovering above a frayed edge of a notebook, but he pulled his hand back as if the paper burned his skin."
1"She looked at the floorboards, counting the scuffs and the scratches left by heavy transit, anything to avoid the heterochromatic gaze that seemed to peel back …"
2"She looked up, meeting his stare, holding her breath until her chest throbbed."
3"She placed a hand flat against his chest, feeling the steady, rhythmic thump of a heart that didn't beat quite like a human’s."
4"She felt the sharp point of the blade hidden within his cane poking at her thigh as he stepped forward, forcing her back until she hit the edge of the mahogany …"
5"There were things you never understood about the nature of my departure, things that would have shattered the very calm you seem so desperate to maintain."
6"He bent his head, his nose grazing the line of her jaw, a deliberate, lingering contact that sent a shiver racing down her spine."
7"He shifted his weight, his hands sliding up to frame her face, his thumbs brushing over her cheekbones."
8"She kept her eyes open, watching the pulse jump in his throat, smelling the ozone and the rain that clung to his skin."
9"She leaned into the movement, her hands sliding from his coat to his neck, her fingers tangling in the slicked-back blonde hair."
10"The kiss was sharp, lacking any pretense of sweetness, a collision of teeth and frustration that tasted like iron and cold autumn air."
11"He moved with a hungry, desperate fluidity, his hands sliding down to her waist, anchoring her against the desk."
12"He looked back, the heterochromatic eyes wide and dark with a hunger that defied any logic."
13"Lucien reached out, tucking a loose piece of hair behind her ear once more, his hand lingering on the line of her neck."
14"He leaned down, his voice a vibration against her skin, low and thick with a promise that terrified her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.4958%