| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.484 | | leniency | 0.968 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1562 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 74.39% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1562 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicked" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "charged" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1557 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1247 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.92 | | worstName | "Eva" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 23 | | Dublin-soft | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Eva | 24 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.538 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1557 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 50.23 | | std | 32.26 | | cv | 0.642 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 112 | | 1 | 95 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 89 | | 5 | 73 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 60 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 86 | | 15 | 87 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 69 | | 18 | 71 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 68 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 131 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 62 |
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| 96.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "was replaced" | | 1 | "been tossed" |
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| 74.21% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | | 0 | "was already leaking" | | 1 | "was trying" | | 2 | "was still standing" | | 3 | "was starting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory lifted her hand, hesitated with her knuckles an inch from the paint-chipped door, then knocked once—three short raps, the pattern they’d always used when one of them was already half-drunk or half-angry and needed to say something before it burned through her tongue." | | 1 | "The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the lamplight as she hung the coat on the hook; Eva’s gaze flicked to it and stayed there a second too long." | | 2 | "The flat’s heat was starting to steam the rain from her hair; strands clung to her cheek." | | 3 | "She could smell Eva’s shampoo—something herbal and familiar—and underneath it the faint trace of the curry house below." | | 4 | "The rain outside had softened to a steady drizzle; water still ran in thin streams down the window pane and dripped into the small tin bucket Eva kept beneath it." | | 5 | "She didn’t touch Eva—not yet—but the distance between them felt newly fragile, like the surface of a pond after a stone has been tossed." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1259 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, self-aware thing." |
| | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.035742652899126294 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005559968228752979 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 16.92 | | std | 11.89 | | cv | 0.702 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 39 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 37 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 45.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.29347826086956524 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she studied Rory’s face" | | 1 | "Then Eva reached for the" | | 2 | "Eventually Eva leaned back in" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She shifted the slim folder" | | 1 | "It was replaced by something" | | 2 | "Her voice was low, Dublin-soft" | | 3 | "She held up the small" | | 4 | "She offered the folder." | | 5 | "She toed off her boots" | | 6 | "She rubbed the back of" | | 7 | "she added, though the lie" | | 8 | "She had read every line." | | 9 | "She reached for her mug" | | 10 | "She could smell Eva’s shampoo—something" | | 11 | "Her eyes were darker than" | | 12 | "She lifted her hands in" | | 13 | "She turned toward the coat" | | 14 | "She left the coat where" | | 15 | "She didn’t touch Eva—not yet—but" | | 16 | "They stood like that for" |
| | ratio | 0.254 | |
| 12.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain had soaked through" | | 1 | "Rory lifted her hand, hesitated" | | 2 | "She shifted the slim folder" | | 3 | "The door swung inward on" | | 4 | "Eva stood not three feet" | | 5 | "The surprise in her face" | | 6 | "It was replaced by something" | | 7 | "Her voice was low, Dublin-soft" | | 8 | "She held up the small" | | 9 | "Water dripped from the hem" | | 10 | "She offered the folder." | | 11 | "Eva didn’t take it." | | 12 | "The flat behind her was" | | 13 | "Rory stepped inside anyway." | | 14 | "The door clicked shut behind" | | 15 | "She toed off her boots" | | 16 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 17 | "Eva set the mug down" | | 18 | "The steam rose between them" | | 19 | "She rubbed the back of" |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 59.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung inward on the cluttered little hallway that smelled of cumin and old paper." | | 1 | "Eva stood not three feet away, barefoot on the scuffed floorboards, wearing an oversized jumper that had once belonged to Rory’s father and clutching a steaming…" | | 2 | "It was replaced by something tighter, older, the kind of stillness that came right before a person decided whether to slam the door or walk away from it." | | 3 | "The memory of other nights in this flat rose uninvited: the two of them half-dressed on the sagging sofa, whispering about futures neither of them believed woul…" | | 4 | "Outside, the rain kept falling on Brick Lane, and above the curry house the flat held its breath, waiting to see what would happen when the papers were finally …" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She rubbed, the movement tugging at the damp collar of her shirt" | | 1 | "she added, though the lie felt thin even as she spoke it" | | 2 | "Rory’s voice stayed, but her hands betrayed her: one thumb tracing the scar on her wrist in a nervous loop" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.194 | | leniency | 0.387 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |