| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.7 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1156 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 13.49% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1156 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "searing" | | 3 | "cascading" | | 4 | "oppressive" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "silk" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "kaleidoscope" | | 14 | "sanctuary" | | 15 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.89% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1150 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.27% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 992 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.81 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Aurora | 18 | | Shade | 3 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Grove | 5 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Unease | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Veil | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Half-Fae" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Unease" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae-Forged" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.593 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "melody that seemed to echo inside Aurora’s skull rather than her ears" | | 1 | "looked like a floating jellyfish made of" | | 2 | "felt like a summer afternoon in Cardiff" | | 3 | "looked like a piece of a broken mirror" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 39.66 | | std | 21.93 | | cv | 0.553 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 78 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 59 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 61 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 57 | | 20 | 43 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 56 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 41 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.39% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "was warming" | | 1 | "were towering" | | 2 | "was holding" | | 3 | "was already drifting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 73 | | ratio | 0.123 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped between the two ancient oak standing stones, and the world didn't just change—it snapped." | | 1 | "She felt the weight of the blade and the faint, rhythmic pulse against her chest—the Heartstone Pendant." | | 2 | "The trees weren't oaks anymore; they were towering spires of translucent white wood, their leaves shimmering like shards of frosted glass." | | 3 | "Every time a breeze passed through them, they didn't rustle—they sang, a discordant, haunting melody that seemed to echo inside Aurora’s skull rather than her ears." | | 4 | "The water didn't flow downward; it spiraled in a gentle, lazy helix, suspended a few inches above a bed of polished obsidian pebbles." | | 5 | "She saw it then—a distortion, like heat rising from asphalt." | | 6 | "It didn't move through the air; it simply shifted from one point to another, appearing inches from Aurora's face." | | 7 | "She didn't swing the blade; she stepped back and pivoted, using the momentum to shove the Heartstone Pendant forward." | | 8 | "The creature—if it was a creature—let out a sound like grinding glass, a shrill frequency that made Aurora wince." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1004 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.03187250996015936 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00796812749003984 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 73 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 73 | | mean | 15.75 | | std | 6.62 | | cv | 0.421 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 44.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3424657534246575 | | totalSentences | 73 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She stumbled, her boots sinking" | | 1 | "They were iridescent, petals shifting" | | 2 | "She turned back to look" | | 3 | "She felt the weight of" | | 4 | "It was warming up, a" | | 5 | "She noticed that the light" | | 6 | "She saw it then—a distortion," | | 7 | "It was a ripple in" | | 8 | "It wasn't a creature so" | | 9 | "It didn't move through the" | | 10 | "She reacted with the quick," | | 11 | "She didn't swing the blade;" | | 12 | "She looked at the scale" | | 13 | "She looked at Isolde, who" |
| | ratio | 0.222 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped between the two" | | 1 | "The next, the sound vanished," | | 2 | "She stumbled, her boots sinking" | | 3 | "They were iridescent, petals shifting" | | 4 | "Aurora froze, her breath catching" | | 5 | "The air here tasted of" | | 6 | "The Half-Fae stood a few" | | 7 | "She turned back to look" | | 8 | "Aurora looked down at the" | | 9 | "Isolde simply existed upon the" | | 10 | "Aurora asked, her voice sounding" | | 11 | "Isolde replied, her voice like" | | 12 | "A smudge of ink drifted" | | 13 | "Nyx materialized from the shadow" | | 14 | "The Shade’s violet eyes glowed" | | 15 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a" | | 16 | "Aurora instinctively reached for the" | | 17 | "The moonsilver hilt was ice-cold" | | 18 | "She felt the weight of" | | 19 | "It was warming up, a" |
| | ratio | 0.921 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "She stumbled, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that shouldn't have existed in the dead of autumn." | | 1 | "The air here tasted of ozone and crushed mint, thick and sweet, vibrating with a frequency that made the small hairs on her arms stand up." | | 2 | "The Shade’s violet eyes glowed faintly, scanning the perimeter with a restlessness that made Aurora uneasy." | | 3 | "It was warming up, a slow, steady thrum that signaled the presence of something powerful, though she couldn't tell if it was a portal or simply the concentrated…" | | 4 | "The trees weren't oaks anymore; they were towering spires of translucent white wood, their leaves shimmering like shards of frosted glass." | | 5 | "The Shade seemed to be absorbing the light around them, creating a void of absolute blackness that carved a hole in the vibrant landscape." | | 6 | "Nyx stopped abruptly, their form expanding, blurring into a wider, more menacing shadow." | | 7 | "It was a ripple in the atmosphere, a shimmering translucence that moved with a predatory grace." | | 8 | "The pendant pulsed again, more aggressively this time, radiating a heat that felt like a summer afternoon in Cardiff." | | 9 | "The creature—if it was a creature—let out a sound like grinding glass, a shrill frequency that made Aurora wince." | | 10 | "The ripple shuddered and collapsed in on itself, vanishing with a soft pop, leaving behind nothing but a scent of burnt sugar and a single, shimmering scale tha…" | | 11 | "Aurora let out a breath she hadn't realized she was holding, her heart hammering against her ribs." | | 12 | "She looked at Isolde, who was already drifting further into the white woods, her silver hair glowing in the violet light." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora asked, her voice sounding strange and thin in the oppressive quiet" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a gust of wind through dry leaves" | | 2 | "Isolde remarked, not looking back" | | 3 | "Aurora asked, her voice tight" | | 4 | "Isolde said, though her expression remained guarded" | | 5 | "Isolde replied, her voice trailing off into a riddle" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.455 | |