Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8YJTEGDZ12CKB700QSZ23J

Run Details

Duration:
10.0s
Cost:
$0.002947
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Richmond Park boundary fence groaned under Aurora’s weight as she hauled her body over the cold, rusted iron. Her boots hit the damp grass with a dull thud that seemed to echo far too loud in the suffocating silence of the night. She adjusted the strap of her bag, her fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. The night air hung heavy, smelling of crushed lavender and wet rot, a scent too thick for a mid-October evening. She pulled the collar of her jacket tighter, the fabric failing to shield her from the sudden, marrow-deep chill that clung to the air. Ahead, the ancient oak standing stones pierced the darkness like jagged, rotting teeth jutting from the earth. They were not merely wood turned to gray; they looked organic, pulsating with a rhythmic, low-frequency hum that vibrated in her pelvic bone. She stared at the center of the clearing. The Heartstone pendant nestled against her chest grew warm, a steady, rhythmic heat that mirrored her own frantic pulse. The crimson gem flared with a faint, sickly glow, casting long, wavering shadows that danced across the grass like spidery fingers. Why did I come here? The note in her pocket felt like a lead weight pressing against her thigh. She took a step forward, the grass crunching underfoot, not like dried stalks, but like brittle bone. "Found the stones, you prick. Where are you?" Silence swallowed her voice. The trees surrounding the grove didn't rustle. Leaves hung motionless, as if held in suspended animation, yet the air swirled violently around her ankles, tugging at her laces. She drew a sharp breath. Something wet slapped against the trunk of a nearby oak, a meaty, sliding sound that made the hair on her arms prickle. She spun, her eyes straining against the murk, but saw only the shifting static of the dark. A shadow shifted at the edge of her vision, a tall, spindly thing that elongated as it slunk behind a stone. It moved with a jerky, disjointed gait that ignored the mechanics of joints. Aurora kept her eyes locked on the spot, her breathing hitched, shallow and jagged. She reached into her bag, fingers curling around the cold handle of a heavy flashlight, but refrained from clicking it on. Whatever lived in this pocket of reality didn't belong to the streetlights of London. "You think this is a game, showing me the way to this graveyard?" Again, the silence stretched, heavy and taut. Then came a sound from directly behind her. It wasn't a growl or a hiss. It sounded like the wet, rhythmic tearing of paper, followed by the dry rattle of a human throat attempting to inhale water. A freezing draft kissed the nape of her neck, smelling of stagnant pool water and ozone. She whipped around, swinging the flashlight in a wide, defensive arc. The beam cut through the gloom, revealing only the gnarled bark of the nearest oak. Nothing else. She took a step back, her boots scuffing the earth. The Heartstone grew hot, searing her skin through her shirt. She clawed at the pendant, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The stone pulse matched the rhythm of the wet, tearing sounds. "Step out. Let’s finish this." Instead of a reply, the stones themselves seemed to shift. They tilted inward, leaning toward the center of the circle, the gaps between them narrowing. The moonlight, filtered through the thick canopy of the grove, turned a bruised, sickly violet. Each breath she took filled her lungs with dust and ash. A soft, melodic whistling drifted through the grove—a tune she recognized from her childhood, a nursery rhyme her mother sang in the quiet hours of Cardiff. It was perfectly pitched, yet hollow, as if the singer had no chest to hold air. She squinted into the dark, her heartbeat thundering behind her ribs. A hand, pale and unnaturally long, curled around the edge of a standing stone. The fingers reached far too far, with joints that bent in three places. The skin looked translucent, like thin parchment paper stretched tightly over calcified debris. Aurora didn't scream; her throat clamped shut, fear turning her blood to ice. "My mother doesn't live here." The fingers retracted, sliding back into the shadow with a sickening, liquid squelch. The whistling abruptly cut off. A heavy, absolute silence flooded the clearing, leaving her ears ringing. She felt the ground beneath her vibrate, a subtle shift in the earth that made her stumble. The stones pulsed, their surfaces changing from wood to something slick and pebbled, like lizard hide. She turned in a slow circle, eyes scanning the perimeter. The grove had shrunk. The path she had taken through the oaks was gone, replaced by a solid wall of entwined, thorny briars that wept a thick, black sap. She reached out, her fingertips hovering inches from the wall. A low, guttural murmur rose from the ground itself, thousands of tiny voices whispering her name in a dissonant, screeching chorus. "Aurora. Aurora. Aurora." She clamped her hands over her ears, but the whispers didn't come from the air; they resonated inside her skull. She fell to her knees, the dirt damp and gritty against her palms. The Heartstone burned, turning glowing, searing red against her skin. She ripped the chain from her neck, the silver links biting into her throat, and threw the artifact onto the grass. It didn't bounce. It sank immediately into the soil, vanishing as if the earth were liquid. Darkness pooled around her knees, rising like a tide. It wasn't shadow; it was a physical weight, thick and obsidian. She watched, paralyzed, as the darkness crept up her shins, holding her in place. The whispering stopped. A figure materialized in the center of the clearing, tall and draped in tattered, charcoal-colored rags that drifted as if underwater. The entity had no face, only a smooth, featureless surface where eyes and mouth should have been. It tilted its head, a motion that sent a ripple of shadow across the grove. The air grew so cold it stung her lungs. "You brought the key home, little bird." The voice sounded like grinding stones, scraping together deep underground. It echoed inside her mind, clear and predatory. Aurora squeezed her eyes shut, fighting the vertigo that threatened to pull her under. She clutched the scar on her wrist, digging her nails into the puckered skin until the sharp, stinging pain pulled her back to the present. "You're not real. This is just a pocket of air. Just light reflected on leaves." "Step into the dark, and see if I’m air." The figure reached out, its elongated, multi-jointed hand inches from her forehead. The air around its touch rippled, distorting the view of everything behind it like a heat haze. Aurora surged upward, her legs numbed by the encroaching shadows. She lunged for the nearest standing stone, hooking her arms around the cold, slick surface, desperate for an anchor to reality. The stone felt like flesh, warm and trembling under her grip. It hummed against her chest, a low, demanding vibration that synchronized with her racing heart. She pressed her cheek against the stone, the grain rough and biting. The entity paused, its featureless face inches from her own neck. It inhaled, a long, rattling sound that drained the oxygen from the immediate area. Aurora’s vision blurred. The edges of her sight turned deep indigo, then black, as the lack of air began to cloud her mind. "The grove keeps what it finds, Aurora Carter." She kicked out, her boot connecting with something solid yet yielding, like thick, rotted fruit. The entity recoiled, the sound of its movement like heavy silk dragging over gravel. The wall of thorns trembled and drew back, revealing a sliver of the actual night sky. Cold, honest air rushed into the clearing, smelling of London soot and distant traffic. She didn't hesitate. She scrambled over the rotted earth, her lungs screaming for oxygen, and threw herself toward the gap. The thorns reached for her, snagging her jacket, stitching her path with thin, bleeding lines of red. She tore herself free, leaving a scrap of fabric behind, and sprinted until her lungs burned like fire and the standing stones faded into the impenetrable black of the park. She didn't look back until the sound of her own ragged breathing became the only thing left in the world.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:42:50.2Z" 5/10/2026, 12:42:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1407
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1407
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"silence"
count4
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count3
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"wavering"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"searing"
count2
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"resonated"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"synchronized"
count1
15
word"racing"
count1
16
word"silk"
count1
17
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"echo"
2"silence"
3"chill"
4"rhythmic"
5"vibrated"
6"pulse"
7"wavering"
8"gloom"
9"searing"
10"pulsed"
11"scanning"
12"resonated"
13"echoed"
14"synchronized"
15"racing"
16"silk"
17"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
97.74% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1406
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount1333
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.45
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora6
Heartstone3
London2
Cardiff1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"thud that seemed to echo far too loud in the suffocating silence of the night"
1"felt like a lead weight pressing agains"
2"sounded like the wet, rhythmic tearing of"
3"sounded like grinding stones, scraping tog"
4"felt like flesh, warm and trembling und"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.711
wordCount1406
matches
0"not like dried stalks, but like brittle bone"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean50.21
std32.72
cv0.652
sampleLengths
0103
188
236
38
476
583
613
760
870
95
1093
1164
125
1362
1470
153
1680
1775
1824
197
2057
2115
229
2371
2475
258
2659
2787
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs222
matches(empty)
5.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences104
ratio0.048
matches
0"They were not merely wood turned to gray; they looked organic, pulsating with a rhythmic, low-frequency hum that vibrated in her pelvic bone."
1"A soft, melodic whistling drifted through the grove—a tune she recognized from her childhood, a nursery rhyme her mother sang in the quiet hours of Cardiff."
2"Aurora didn't scream; her throat clamped shut, fear turning her blood to ice."
3"She clamped her hands over her ears, but the whispers didn't come from the air; they resonated inside her skull."
4"It wasn't shadow; it was a physical weight, thick and obsidian."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1339
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.024645257654966394
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01194921583271098
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean13.52
std6
cv0.444
sampleLengths
019
124
216
320
424
517
623
78
819
921
105
1114
1217
138
144
157
1621
175
1822
1917
2021
2113
2214
2321
2414
2513
267
278
287
2922
3016
3111
3215
332
3410
3510
3611
3711
385
3910
4015
4115
4211
4326
4416
4511
4614
4713
4813
4913
38.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.23076923076923078
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences94
matches
0"Again, the silence stretched, heavy"
1"Then came a sound from"
2"Instead of a reply, the"
ratio0.032
49.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences94
matches
0"Her boots hit the damp"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"She pulled the collar of"
3"They were not merely wood"
4"She stared at the center"
5"She took a step forward,"
6"She drew a sharp breath."
7"She spun, her eyes straining"
8"It moved with a jerky,"
9"She reached into her bag,"
10"It wasn't a growl or"
11"It sounded like the wet,"
12"She whipped around, swinging the"
13"She took a step back,"
14"She clawed at the pendant,"
15"They tilted inward, leaning toward"
16"It was perfectly pitched, yet"
17"She squinted into the dark,"
18"She felt the ground beneath"
19"She turned in a slow"
ratio0.426
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences94
matches
0"The Richmond Park boundary fence"
1"Her boots hit the damp"
2"She adjusted the strap of"
3"The night air hung heavy,"
4"She pulled the collar of"
5"They were not merely wood"
6"She stared at the center"
7"The Heartstone pendant nestled against"
8"The crimson gem flared with"
9"The note in her pocket"
10"She took a step forward,"
11"Silence swallowed her voice."
12"The trees surrounding the grove"
13"Leaves hung motionless, as if"
14"She drew a sharp breath."
15"Something wet slapped against the"
16"She spun, her eyes straining"
17"A shadow shifted at the"
18"It moved with a jerky,"
19"Aurora kept her eyes locked"
ratio0.936
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
22.26% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences77
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"Her boots hit the damp grass with a dull thud that seemed to echo far too loud in the suffocating silence of the night."
1"They were not merely wood turned to gray; they looked organic, pulsating with a rhythmic, low-frequency hum that vibrated in her pelvic bone."
2"The Heartstone pendant nestled against her chest grew warm, a steady, rhythmic heat that mirrored her own frantic pulse."
3"The crimson gem flared with a faint, sickly glow, casting long, wavering shadows that danced across the grass like spidery fingers."
4"Leaves hung motionless, as if held in suspended animation, yet the air swirled violently around her ankles, tugging at her laces."
5"Something wet slapped against the trunk of a nearby oak, a meaty, sliding sound that made the hair on her arms prickle."
6"A heavy, absolute silence flooded the clearing, leaving her ears ringing."
7"The path she had taken through the oaks was gone, replaced by a solid wall of entwined, thorny briars that wept a thick, black sap."
8"A figure materialized in the center of the clearing, tall and draped in tattered, charcoal-colored rags that drifted as if underwater."
9"It tilted its head, a motion that sent a ripple of shadow across the grove."
10"It hummed against her chest, a low, demanding vibration that synchronized with her racing heart."
11"She kicked out, her boot connecting with something solid yet yielding, like thick, rotted fruit."
12"The thorns reached for her, snagging her jacket, stitching her path with thin, bleeding lines of red."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.1212%