Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8YJTNFS0Q88JE77ZCGZSYG

Run Details

Duration:
9.5s
Cost:
$0.002756
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain drummed a frantic rhythm against the asphalt, turning the Soho backstreets into a smeared canvas of obsidian and neon. Harlow Quinn ignored the soak of her trench coat, her boots striking the uneven pavement with military cadence. Fifty yards ahead, the hooded figure banked hard around a corner, the silhouette sharpening against a wash of amber light before vanishing into the shadows of an alley. Harlow adjusted the pace, the leather watch on her left wrist catching a sliver of streetlight as she checked the time. Eighteen years of service had taught her that suspects didn't run unless they had a destination worth the risk. "Stop right there, Herrera. I’m not losing you tonight." The man reached the iron grate of an abandoned Tube station vent, his fingers fumbling with a jagged, bleach-white token. He didn't turn. His shoulders hunched against the gale, the Saint Christopher medallion hanging from his neck catching a glint as he twisted his frame, exposing the jagged scar stretching across his left forearm. He glanced back, breath hitching, eyes wide and desperate as he pressed the bone piece into the rusted lock mechanism. The heavy grating groaned, retracting into the earth with a sound like grinding teeth. Cold, stagnant air billowed upward, carrying the scent of ozone, dried herbs, and rot. He descended into the black throat of the stairwell without once breaking stride. Harlow skidded to a halt at the precipice of the descent, her hand dropping instinctively to the holster at her hip. The stairs dropped into an abyss where the usual city grime gave way to something older, something that tasted like copper and wet stone. Below, a dim, unnatural violet glow pulsed from deep within the bowels of the decommissioned station. She stood at the edge, the weight of her service weapon anchoring her to the rational world. She remembered the empty stare of DS Morris, the way the light had simply drained from his eyes three years ago, leaving behind a husk that science could never explain. This was the same scent. The same impossible gravity. "You’re heading into a grave, Tomás. Turn around and we talk about your license. Turn around and we keep this between the living." The voice echoed back, thin and swallowed by the dark. There was no argument, no plea, just the frantic scuff of boots against grit as the man spiraled deeper. She drew a breath, the damp air clawing at her lungs, and looked at the encroaching darkness. A hundred yards down, the violet pulse revealed the silhouette of stalls packed with crates that hummed with a low, sub-audible vibration. Figures—some too tall, some shifting in ways that defied human anatomy—shouldered through the murk of the Veil Market. This wasn't a crime scene she was trained to investigate; it was an intersection of realities she had spent years pretending didn't exist. Harlow shifted her footing, the serrated edge of the stairwell biting into her boot sole. She thought of Morris. She closed her eyes for a fleeting second, the image of his broken pocket watch seared into her eyelids, and exhaled. "Dammit all to hell." She descended. The stairs were slick with a slick, translucent film, and the temperature plummeted until her breath hung in thick, white plumes before her. Her pulse hammered against her throat, a frantic, steady rhythm that set the pace for her descent. Every strike of her heel echoed against the vaulted ceiling of the underground tunnel, a declaration of presence in a space that demanded invisibility. She kept her back pressed to the cold, weeping tiles of the station wall, eyes darting between the rhythmic flicker of the violet lamps. The market unfolded. It was a sprawling, subterranean scar, a jagged subterranean cavern constructed of rusted girders and crates marked with symbols that made her vision swim. Vendors with eyes like polished obsidian glass bartered with patrons whose faces shifted between human and something far more predatory. The air thrummed with the sound of a thousand muttered conversations, a cacophony of languages that felt like sandpaper against her ears. She spotted him near a stall draped in heavy, moth-eaten velvet. Herrera stood hunched over, his hands trembling as he swapped a handful of silver vials for a scrap of parchment. He looked haggard, his curly hair matted with rain, his jaw set in a line of profound exhaustion. He wasn't a kingpin; he was a desperate man hunting for a cure that no NHS hospital would ever authorize. "The deal is over, Herrera. Hand over the vials." Tomás stiffened, the parchment fluttering from his grip. He turned, the movement fluid and defensive, his eyes locking onto hers with a mixture of terror and resignation. He didn't bolt this time. Maybe the weight of his own secrets had finally anchored him to the spot, or maybe he knew the geography of this place better than she did and recognized the futility of a sprint. "You have no idea what you’re standing in, Detective. Leave this, or you won't walk back to the surface. Some things aren't meant to be filed in a ledger." "I’ve spent three years filing reports on ghosts and cold cases that didn't stay cold. I’m tired of reading between the lines." She stepped forward, the heel of her boot popping a stray piece of glass. The entire market seemed to breathe, the shifting crowd freezing in a sudden, synchronized motion. Hundreds of eyes turned toward the intruder, a wave of pale yellow and iridescent blues converging on her position. The low hum of the environment deepened into a vibration that rattled her teeth. Herrera took a frantic step backward, his back hitting a crate that groaned under his weight. He clutched the vials to his chest, the medallion swaying against his throat. "Look at the walls, Quinn. Look at the shadows casting themselves. You think you’re hunting a man? You’re walking into a slaughterhouse." She ignored the prickle on the back of her neck, the ancient instinct telling her to turn and run for the warmth of the rainy street above. Her hand tightened on the grip of her weapon, the cold steel a reminder of her purpose. She moved forward, closing the distance, her focus narrowed to the man who held the missing pieces of Morris’s final hour. "I’ve already seen the slaughter, Tomás. I was there when they took him. I’m the one who cleaned up the mess." The air between them curdled. One of the nearby vendors, a creature whose skin looked like layers of wet leather, leaned over the counter, the violet light playing across its face. It didn't speak, but the vibration in the room reached a fever pitch, shaking dust from the ceiling beams. Harlow didn't blink. She stepped into the merchant’s space, forcing a path through the suffocating atmosphere. She didn't have a plan beyond the arrest, but she had the training to manufacture one. She looked at Herrera, at the way the light died in the corners of his eyes, and she saw the mirror of her own grief. It was an ugly, heavy thing, but it was at least real. "Put the vials down. Hands where I can see them. Now." Herrera’s mouth worked, no sound coming out. He looked past her, toward the tunnel entrance she had just navigated. His expression shifted, the fear replaced by a sudden, sharp clarity. "They don't want you here, Detective. They don't even want me here anymore." A sound emanated from the darkness behind her, a wet, clicking drag of something heavy being pulled over stone. Harlow began to pivot, her training overriding the paralysis, but the shifting shadows in the stalls began to spill outward, blocking the path back to the stairs. The market was closing its doors, and it seemed they were looking for a scapegoat to leave, or a victim to stay.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1319
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1319
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"grave"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"fleeting"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"constructed"
count1
10
word"cacophony"
count1
11
word"velvet"
count1
12
word"profound"
count1
13
word"synchronized"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count1
16
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"pulsed"
2"weight"
3"grave"
4"echoed"
5"pulse"
6"fleeting"
7"rhythmic"
8"flicker"
9"constructed"
10"cacophony"
11"velvet"
12"profound"
13"synchronized"
14"warmth"
15"reminder"
16"navigated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
58.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1317
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1154
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Morris"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Quinn1
Tube1
Saint1
Christopher1
Morris3
Veil1
Market1
Herrera4
Harlow6
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Saint"
2"Christopher"
3"Morris"
4"Market"
5"Herrera"
6"Harlow"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
22.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like copper and wet stone"
1"felt like sandpaper against her ears"
2"looked like layers of wet leather, leaned"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1317
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean48.78
std32.34
cv0.663
sampleLengths
0106
19
274
341
4117
523
6109
740
84
990
1069
1169
129
1366
1429
1522
1662
1729
1822
1965
2021
2150
2269
2311
2430
2513
2668
94.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"was trained"
1"being pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs185
matches
0"were looking"
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences78
ratio0.038
matches
0"Figures—some too tall, some shifting in ways that defied human anatomy—shouldered through the murk of the Veil Market."
1"This wasn't a crime scene she was trained to investigate; it was an intersection of realities she had spent years pretending didn't exist."
2"He wasn't a kingpin; he was a desperate man hunting for a cure that no NHS hospital would ever authorize."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1158
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"jagged, bleach-white token."
1"heavy, moth-eaten velvet."
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.018998272884283247
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004317789291882556
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean16.88
std7.37
cv0.436
sampleLengths
020
118
228
321
419
59
620
73
831
920
1014
1114
1213
1321
1424
1516
1617
1730
185
194
2023
2110
2219
2317
2422
2518
2623
2715
284
2921
304
312
3223
3317
3424
3524
363
3724
3820
3922
4011
4120
4218
4320
449
458
4619
475
4834
4929
56.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners30
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Maybe the weight of his"
ratio0.015
46.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences67
matches
0"He didn't turn."
1"His shoulders hunched against the"
2"He glanced back, breath hitching,"
3"He descended into the black"
4"She stood at the edge,"
5"She remembered the empty stare"
6"She drew a breath, the"
7"She thought of Morris."
8"She closed her eyes for"
9"Her pulse hammered against her"
10"She kept her back pressed"
11"It was a sprawling, subterranean"
12"She spotted him near a"
13"He looked haggard, his curly"
14"He wasn't a kingpin; he"
15"He turned, the movement fluid"
16"He didn't bolt this time."
17"She stepped forward, the heel"
18"He clutched the vials to"
19"She ignored the prickle on"
ratio0.433
12.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences67
matches
0"Rain drummed a frantic rhythm"
1"Harlow Quinn ignored the soak"
2"Harlow adjusted the pace, the"
3"The man reached the iron"
4"He didn't turn."
5"His shoulders hunched against the"
6"He glanced back, breath hitching,"
7"The heavy grating groaned, retracting"
8"He descended into the black"
9"Harlow skidded to a halt"
10"The stairs dropped into an"
11"She stood at the edge,"
12"She remembered the empty stare"
13"This was the same scent."
14"The same impossible gravity."
15"The voice echoed back, thin"
16"She drew a breath, the"
17"A hundred yards down, the"
18"Figures—some too tall, some shifting"
19"This wasn't a crime scene"
ratio0.896
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"His shoulders hunched against the gale, the Saint Christopher medallion hanging from his neck catching a glint as he twisted his frame, exposing the jagged scar…"
1"The stairs dropped into an abyss where the usual city grime gave way to something older, something that tasted like copper and wet stone."
2"A hundred yards down, the violet pulse revealed the silhouette of stalls packed with crates that hummed with a low, sub-audible vibration."
3"Her pulse hammered against her throat, a frantic, steady rhythm that set the pace for her descent."
4"Every strike of her heel echoed against the vaulted ceiling of the underground tunnel, a declaration of presence in a space that demanded invisibility."
5"It was a sprawling, subterranean scar, a jagged subterranean cavern constructed of rusted girders and crates marked with symbols that made her vision swim."
6"The air thrummed with the sound of a thousand muttered conversations, a cacophony of languages that felt like sandpaper against her ears."
7"Herrera took a frantic step backward, his back hitting a crate that groaned under his weight."
8"She moved forward, closing the distance, her focus narrowed to the man who held the missing pieces of Morris’s final hour."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.1117%