| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1114 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1114 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "flicker" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "navigated" | | 5 | "tracing" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "chaotic" | | 8 | "tapestry" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "constructed" | | 13 | "crystal" | | 14 | "stark" | | 15 | "fleeting" | | 16 | "silence" | | 17 | "predator" | | 18 | "crystalline" | | 19 | "shattered" | | 20 | "gloom" | | 21 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of the moment" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1110 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1110 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.99 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Dymasian | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Wardens | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Dymas | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 38.28 | | std | 26.6 | | cv | 0.695 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 92 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 80 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 69 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 74 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 66 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 53 |
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| 97.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "get harvested" | | 1 | "were laced" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees—they aren't trees, not really." | | 1 | "The ground beneath them hummed with a low, thrumming sound—the collective vibration of millions of roots drawing sustenance from the strange earth." | | 2 | "She watched as one of the figures peeled a fruit—a sphere of liquid gold that dripped light onto the soil." | | 3 | "The figure didn't swallow; the fruit simply dissolved against their skin, absorbed directly into the flesh." | | 4 | "The hum of the earth, the rustle of the weeping trees, the distant, discordant music of the banquet—all of it vanished, sucked into a vacuum of absolute stillness." | | 5 | "It wasn't a monster; it was a void, a humanoid absence of light that tore through the air like a jagged blade." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1119 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.01876675603217158 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006255585344057194 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 12.91 | | std | 7.49 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 54.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.36046511627906974 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 98.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "They are breathing." | | 1 | "It’s an appetite." | | 2 | "They stopped before a shimmering" | | 3 | "It would peel you like" | | 4 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 5 | "I didn't travel this far" | | 6 | "They pushed deeper into the" | | 7 | "They sank into the dark" | | 8 | "They flickered, the violet glow" | | 9 | "We aren't in a pocket." | | 10 | "We're in the gut of" | | 11 | "She climbed a ridgeline, the" | | 12 | "They’ve been eating for centuries." | | 13 | "She watched as one of" | | 14 | "It’s reacting to the proximity" | | 15 | "They gestured toward a cluster" | | 16 | "She didn't hesitate, diving into" | | 17 | "She felt phantom touches against" | | 18 | "They passed a fountain that" | | 19 | "She didn't look at it." |
| | ratio | 0.305 | |
| 88.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted from the" | | 1 | "Rory stepped through the circle" | | 2 | "The violet flicker of their" | | 3 | "The trees—they aren't trees, not" | | 4 | "They are breathing." | | 5 | "Rory reached out, fingers hovering" | | 6 | "The crimson gem hummed against" | | 7 | "Every breath she dragged into" | | 8 | "This isn't just a clearing." | | 9 | "It’s an appetite." | | 10 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form" | | 11 | "They stopped before a shimmering" | | 12 | "A tear in the fabric" | | 13 | "It would peel you like" | | 14 | "Rory pulled her hand back," | | 15 | "The contrast between the familiar" | | 16 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 17 | "The moonsilver metal bit into" | | 18 | "I didn't travel this far" | | 19 | "They pushed deeper into the" |
| | ratio | 0.744 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "If there’s a breach this" | | 1 | "If we stay on the" | | 2 | "If we descend into the" | | 3 | "If I lose sight of" | | 4 | "Even for this place." |
| | ratio | 0.061 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped through the circle of ancient oaks, her boots pressing into soil that felt less like dirt and more like velvet cushioning." | | 1 | "The crimson gem hummed against her collarbone, a low-frequency vibration that rattled her teeth." | | 2 | "Every breath she dragged into her lungs tasted of overripe nectar and fermented grapes, a cloying sweetness that threatened to coat her throat." | | 3 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form stretching and narrowing as they navigated the twisted thicket of vines that snaked across the path." | | 4 | "Flowers with translucent, pulsating petals unfurled in their wake, tracking their movement with heads that looked disturbingly like weeping faces." | | 5 | "They flickered, the violet glow of their eyes dimming, then flaring wide." | | 6 | "She climbed a ridgeline, the ground turning to cracked, obsidian-like stone that crunched under her soles." | | 7 | "Thousands of silhouettes moved between the rows of orchards, figures that lacked the distinctive, jagged edges of a shade, yet moved with a sluggish, drunken gr…" | | 8 | "They passed a fountain that flowed with a substance thicker than wine, smelling of crushed violets and copper." | | 9 | "The moonsilver glowed, casting a stark, pale light that carved a path through the suffocating gloom." | | 10 | "She stepped forward, her heels digging into the soft, velvet soil, bracing herself against the unnatural pressure of the realm." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |