Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8YMKY82Q7A5FM874W1J6W9

Run Details

Duration:
9.6s
Cost:
$0.003001
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed, casting a sickly fluorescence over the wet London pavement. Aurora pushed through the heavy oak door, the smell of stale stout and old mahogany pulling her into the warmth. She shook the rain from her hair, her crescent-shaped scar tracing a cool line against her wrist as she adjusted her bag. The bar was quiet, a few regulars hunched over pints in the dim corners, their faces obscured by the shadows of faded maps lining the walls. Silas stood behind the counter, rubbing a polishing cloth over a tarnished brass rail. He glanced up, his hazel eyes narrowing before a familiar, measured calm smoothed his features. He stopped, his left leg shifting as he braced his weight, the rhythmic scrape of his boot against the floorboards filling the sudden lull in the jazz music. A stool scraped near the end of the bar. A man turned, the amber light of the sconces catching the jagged white line of a surgical repair running from his collarbone to his jaw. He wore a sharp, tailored navy coat that seemed entirely out of place amidst the grime of Soho. He held a neat whiskey, his fingers steady, though his gaze locked onto Aurora with an intensity that made the air in the room thicken. "Rory? It has been a long time since I saw you in Cardiff." Aurora froze. The voice belonged to the past, a ghost she had buried beneath layers of city traffic and double shifts. She gripped the edge of the bar, her knuckles white. She looked at the man—at the way his shoulders held a new, rigid martial tension, at the way the boyish softness of his face had evaporated, replaced by a granite-like stillness. "Evan. You have a long commute from the valley." He traced the rim of his glass, the liquid swirling. The scent of expensive cologne fought against the stale tobacco clinging to the curtains. "Business dictates the geography. I never expected to find you pouring drinks in a hole like this. I thought you were supposed to be arguing cases in the High Court, not dodging traffic on a moped with delivery boxes strapped to your back." She stepped forward, dropping her bag onto the floor. The thud sounded like a gunshot in the near-empty room. She walked to the bar, ignoring Silas’s silent, watchful presence, and signaled for a glass of water. "Law doesn't pay the rent when you’re starting from zero. Besides, the city has a way of stripping away pretenses. You should know that, given the new scenery you’ve decorated your throat with." He laughed, a short, dry sound that lacked any warmth. He tipped his head, letting the light catch the ruin of his skin. "A souvenir from a disagreement in a warehouse in Birmingham two winters ago. Some debts don't get settled with a checkbook. How is the life of a delivery girl? Does it provide the freedom you were so desperate to find? Or is it just another set of bars, only with better lighting?" Aurora watched Silas out of the corner of her eye. He moved with practiced lethargy, picking up a stack of coasters, his signet ring catching the light. He knew exactly who stood before them. The atmosphere felt sharp enough to draw blood. "Freedom is rarely about the job, Evan. It’s about not having to look over my shoulder every time a door opens. A lesson you seem to have missed, given that you’re sitting in an underground haunt in Soho instead of a boardroom." He leaned forward, the stool groaning under his weight. He didn't blink. The blue in her eyes seemed to darken as she held his stare, refusing to look away, refusing to let the old, familiar terror return. She remembered the bruising, the way he would tighten his hold on her arm until the nerves burned, the way he would promise her the world right before he crushed it. "I’m looking for someone, Rory. A contact who claims to have information regarding a shipment that went missing off the docks. Imagine my surprise to find a familiar face standing in the shadows of the very place I was told to wait." She took the water from Silas, her hand steady, though her heart hammered against her ribs like a trapped bird. "If that’s your mission, you’re in the wrong place. This bar serves drinks, not secrets. Why don't you take your business back to Birmingham and leave the street-level work to those who aren't afraid of the rain?" "You were always the clever one. Sharp. Quick to find the hole in the wall before anyone else saw it. But you’re playing a different game now, aren't you? Living above a place like this? You’re smarter than to think you can just vanish." Silas cleared his throat, the sound like gravel underfoot. He didn't look at Evan, but he stood closer now, his presence acting as a physical bulwark between the stool and the door. "The tab is paid, stranger. The night is drawing to a close, and I have a policy about lingering past midnight. It ruins the atmosphere for my regulars." Evan looked at Silas, his eyes darting to the signet ring, then back to Aurora. The realization flickered across his face—a sudden, sharp comprehension of who exactly he was dealing with, and where he stood in the hierarchy of the room. The arrogance that had defined his posture for the last ten minutes faltered, replaced by a flicker of genuine caution. "I suppose it is. I have a long drive ahead." He stood up, his coat flaring behind him. He reached into his pocket and placed a crisp note on the wood, a deliberate, arrogant gesture. He leaned in toward Aurora, his voice a low, vibrating hum that barely reached her ears. "You look different, Aurora. Less like the girl I held, and more like something that has been tempered in fire. I wonder if you still break as easily under pressure." She didn't flinch. She took a slow sip of the water, the cold glass steady against her lips. "The fire didn't break me, Evan. It burnt away everything that belonged to you. Don't look for me again, because there is nothing left for you to collect." He hovered for a heartbeat, his gaze lingering on the scar on her wrist, a silent, mocking acknowledgment of the past. Then, he turned. The heavy door groaned as he shoved it open, bringing a gust of wet, frigid air into the bar. The green neon sign buzzed in the silence that followed his departure. Aurora let out a breath she hadn't realized she was holding. She slumped against the bar, the strength draining from her limbs. Silas leaned over, sliding a second glass toward her, this one containing a dark, amber liquid. "He wasn't waiting for a contact," Silas muttered, his voice gravelly and low. "He was waiting for a reaction. You played it well." "He looked for a weak spot," she whispered, her hands shaking now that the theater of the moment had collapsed. "He looked to see if the fear still controlled the narrative." Silas watched the door, his hand resting near the hidden latch of the bookshelf built into the rear wall. "The fear is a ghost, Rory. It only has the weight you give it. You’ve become proficient at walking through walls without leaving a mark. He didn't see the woman who fled Cardiff; he saw the one who survived it." She looked at the glass, the liquid reflecting the dim, flickering light of the Nest. The maps on the wall seemed to shift in the gloom, ancient routes and forgotten boundaries surrounding them. She thought of the ride home, the wet pavement, the way she would have to change her route, always anticipating the turn, always waiting for the trap to spring. "He won't stay away, Silas. He needs to own the things that don't belong to him." "Then let him come," the old man said, his voice hard as iron. "He has no idea what happens when he walks into a house that has already been fortified against his kind." She finished the drink, the heat of the spirit grounding her, pulling the focus back into the room. She looked at her wrist, at the crescent scar, and for the first time, it didn't feel like a mark of a crime, but a map of a victory she had claimed for herself. Outside, the rain continued its rhythmic assault against the green glass, but inside, the air remained still, held in place by the silent, watchful weight of the room.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:43:49.071Z" 5/10/2026, 12:43:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1457
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1457
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"weight"
count4
5
word"rhythmic"
count2
6
word"amidst"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"gloom"
count1
14
word"anticipating"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"tracing"
2"familiar"
3"measured"
4"weight"
5"rhythmic"
6"amidst"
7"intensity"
8"tension"
9"traced"
10"flickered"
11"flicker"
12"silence"
13"gloom"
14"anticipating"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1455
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount931
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
London1
Soho1
Aurora7
Silas9
Evan2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a gunshot in the near-empty r"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1455
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
98.18% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean39.32
std19.41
cv0.494
sampleLengths
086
157
277
313
462
59
624
743
836
933
1023
1152
1242
1342
1468
1542
1620
1737
1844
1932
2028
2161
2210
2341
2430
2518
2628
2755
2838
2923
3031
3119
3240
3362
3416
3533
3680
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs147
matches
0"was dealing"
1"was holding"
30.08% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences76
ratio0.039
matches
0"She looked at the man—at the way his shoulders held a new, rigid martial tension, at the way the boyish softness of his face had evaporated, replaced by a granite-like stillness."
1"The realization flickered across his face—a sudden, sharp comprehension of who exactly he was dealing with, and where he stood in the hierarchy of the room."
2"\"The fear is a ghost, Rory. It only has the weight you give it. You’ve become proficient at walking through walls without leaving a mark. He didn't see the woman who fled Cardiff; he saw the one who survived it.\""
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount935
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"new, rigid martial tension,"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.016042780748663103
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006417112299465241
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean19.14
std10.67
cv0.557
sampleLengths
018
120
222
326
414
515
628
79
825
918
1025
1113
122
1319
1410
1531
169
1710
1814
1943
209
2110
2217
2333
2410
2513
2652
2710
2817
297
308
3142
329
333
3425
3531
3642
3720
3837
3944
409
4123
4228
4315
4426
4520
4610
478
4817
4916
28.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.21052631578947367
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners16
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Then, he turned."
ratio0.018
2.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences57
matches
0"She shook the rain from"
1"He glanced up, his hazel"
2"He stopped, his left leg"
3"He wore a sharp, tailored"
4"He held a neat whiskey,"
5"She gripped the edge of"
6"She looked at the man—at"
7"He traced the rim of"
8"She stepped forward, dropping her"
9"She walked to the bar,"
10"He laughed, a short, dry"
11"He tipped his head, letting"
12"He moved with practiced lethargy,"
13"He knew exactly who stood"
14"He leaned forward, the stool"
15"He didn't blink."
16"She remembered the bruising, the"
17"She took the water from"
18"He didn't look at Evan,"
19"He stood up, his coat"
ratio0.544
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences57
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora pushed through the heavy"
2"She shook the rain from"
3"The bar was quiet, a"
4"Silas stood behind the counter,"
5"He glanced up, his hazel"
6"He stopped, his left leg"
7"A stool scraped near the"
8"A man turned, the amber"
9"He wore a sharp, tailored"
10"He held a neat whiskey,"
11"The voice belonged to the"
12"She gripped the edge of"
13"She looked at the man—at"
14"He traced the rim of"
15"The scent of expensive cologne"
16"She stepped forward, dropping her"
17"The thud sounded like a"
18"She walked to the bar,"
19"He laughed, a short, dry"
ratio0.965
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The blue in her eyes seemed to darken as she held his stare, refusing to look away, refusing to let the old, familiar terror return."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Silas muttered, his voice gravelly and low"
1"the old man said, his voice hard as iron"
54.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.19
75.4967%