| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.174 | | leniency | 0.348 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.88% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "crystalline" | | 1 | "synthetic" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "pristine" | | 4 | "aligned" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "charm" | | 8 | "chill" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "intensity" | | 11 | "dance" | | 12 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.94% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1100 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.74% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 819 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 2 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 12 | | Thorne | 8 | | North | 1 | | Morris | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Thorne" | | 3 | "Morris" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.767 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 29.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sigil that seemed to absorb the light around it" | | 1 | "looked like a brand, a shimmering ring of" | | 2 | "looked like a curtain of smoked glass, sh" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.909 | | wordCount | 1100 | | matches | | 0 | "not touching the skin, but observing the pores" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 23.4 | | std | 16.26 | | cv | 0.695 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 42 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 53 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 8 |
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| 86.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "were rusted" | | 1 | "been placed" | | 2 | "been sanded" | | 3 | "was etched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | | |
| 81.41% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "She remembered the reports from three years ago—the strange disappearances, the gaps in time, the way Morris had vanished from a secure room with the doors locked from the inside." | | 1 | "For a heartbeat, the wall didn't look like brick; it looked like a curtain of smoked glass, shimmering with the reflected lights of a city that didn't exist on any map." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 822 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.030413625304136254 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00851581508515815 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 11.83 | | std | 7.09 | | cv | 0.6 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 33.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.26881720430107525 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 57.84% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped at the edge" | | 1 | "He wore a tailored charcoal" | | 2 | "He looked less like a" | | 3 | "He gestured with a gloved" | | 4 | "She didn't look at the" | | 5 | "She looked at the dust." | | 6 | "He lay flat on his" | | 7 | "She knelt, the worn leather" | | 8 | "She leaned in, not touching" | | 9 | "She used a pair of" | | 10 | "It was a small, carved" | | 11 | "It wasn't a tooth or" | | 12 | "It had been sanded smooth," | | 13 | "She ignored the rubble and" | | 14 | "She stopped ten feet from" | | 15 | "She reached into her pocket" | | 16 | "She held it flat in" | | 17 | "It spun violently for three" | | 18 | "Her expression remained a mask" | | 19 | "She walked back to the" |
| | ratio | 0.405 | |
| 7.30% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The descent into the abandoned" | | 1 | "Water dripped from rusted overhead" | | 2 | "Detective Harlow Quinn marched past" | | 3 | "She stopped at the edge" | | 4 | "A man lay sprawled across" | | 5 | "He wore a tailored charcoal" | | 6 | "He looked less like a" | | 7 | "Sergeant Thorne stood over the" | | 8 | "He gestured with a gloved" | | 9 | "Quinn stepped closer, her brown" | | 10 | "She didn't look at the" | | 11 | "She looked at the dust." | | 12 | "Thorne frowned, glancing down." | | 13 | "A pristine circle of grey" | | 14 | "The powder was sitting on" | | 15 | "Thorne suggested, pointing upward toward" | | 16 | "Quinn looked up." | | 17 | "The catwalks were rusted through," | | 18 | "The angle was wrong." | | 19 | "He lay flat on his" |
| | ratio | 0.905 | |
| 67.57% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The casing bore a heavy patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with protective sigils that shimmered faintly in the dim light." | | 1 | "For a heartbeat, the wall didn't look like brick; it looked like a curtain of smoked glass, shimmering with the reflected lights of a city that didn't exist on …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn whispered, her voice cutting through the tunnel's hum" | | 1 | "Quinn said, her voice devoid of emotion" | | 2 | "Thorne stammered, his face pale" |
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| 19.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Thorne suggested (suggest)" | | 1 | "Quinn whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Thorne stammered (stammer)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.174 | | leniency | 0.348 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.261 | |