Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8YQBR2RM0NA47QE226C36S

Run Details

Duration:
24.4s
Cost:
$0.000999
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The heavy thud of the deadbolts echoing through the hallway signaled the final barrier falling. Rory pulled the door open, the hinge giving a sharp, metallic shriek. Lucien stood in the dim light of the Brick Lane corridor. Rainwater clung to his platinum blond hair, turning the sharp lines of his silhouette into a blurred smudge of charcoal grey. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his weight shifted slightly to the left. One amber eye caught the flickering overhead light; the other remained a void of absolute black. Rory froze. Her hand tightened on the doorframe, knuckles whitening. "The locks are an improvement." Lucien didn't move. He simply watched her, his gaze scanning her face with the clinical precision of a man who dealt in secrets. A single drop of rain tracked down his jawline. "You don't have a key." "I didn't expect one." He stepped forward, not waiting for an invitation. The scent of ozone and expensive cologne surged into the cramped entryway, clashing with the lingering aroma of garlic and turmeric from the curry house downstairs. Rory retreated, her shoulder brushing against a stack of leather-bound grimoires that threatened to topple. Ptolemy, the tabby, leaped from a bookshelf and hissed, the sound a low vibrate in his throat. The cat arched his back, fur standing in jagged peaks. "Still keeping pets that hate me, I see." Lucien closed the door behind him. The click of the latch sounded like a gunshot in the small space. He paused, his eyes lingering on the crescent-shaped scar on Rory's left wrist. "You look tired, Rory." "I work. Some of us do." She turned her back to him, walking toward the kitchenette. The flat felt smaller than it ever had, the walls closing in under the weight of his presence. Every surface groaned under the burden of Eva’s research—scrolls unrolled across the dining table, ink-stained notes taped to the walls. Lucien navigated the minefield of papers with a grace that felt offensive, his cane clicking rhythmically against the hardwood. "I heard about the Golden Empress. Delivery work is a far cry from the bar exams." Rory slammed a kettle onto the stove. "The law is a lie told by people in better suits than yours." "Lies are the only currency that never loses value." He stopped just behind her. He didn't touch her, but the heat radiating from him was a physical pressure, a reminder of the Avaros blood humming beneath his skin. Rory could feel the pull, a magnetic tug in her gut that she had spent months trying to bury. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "Information. And perhaps a misplaced sense of nostalgia." Rory spun around, her chest heaving. "Nostalgia is for people who didn't leave a trail of wreckage behind them. You vanished." Lucien’s expression didn't flicker, but his grip tightened on the ivory handle of his cane. The amber eye flared. "I removed a threat you weren't equipped to handle." "I didn't ask for a protector. I asked for you to stay." The silence that followed was thick, suffocating. Lucien stepped closer, invading her personal space until the lapel of his charcoal suit brushed her shoulder. He tilted his head, his voice dropping to a low, gravelly vibration. "Staying would have been the easiest thing in the world. The most selfish, too." Rory laughed, a harsh, jagged sound. "You love the nobility of your own martyrdom. It fits the aesthetic." He reached out. His fingers didn't graze her skin; instead, he hooked a lock of her straight black hair, tucking it behind her ear. The gesture was agonizingly slow. His touch was cool, yet it left a trail of phantom fire across her temple. "Your hair has grown." "Get out." "You're shaking." "I'm freezing." Lucien let the hair slip from his fingers. He leaned in, his breath ghosting over her cheek. For a moment, the fixer, the broker, the half-demon vanished, leaving only the man who had once whispered promises into the hollow of her throat in the dead of night. "I spent three months scrubbing your name from every ledger in the underworld. Do you have any idea how difficult it is to make a human disappear from the sight of the High Courts of Avaros?" Rory pushed against his chest. It was like trying to move a mountain of granite. "I didn't ask you to scrub me. I asked you to love me." The admission hung between them, raw and bleeding. Lucien’s mask finally cracked. His jaw tightened, a muscle leaping in his cheek. He didn't pull away; instead, he closed the distance, his hand sliding from the cane to the nape of her neck. His palm was broad, grounding. He pulled her forward, crashing his lips against hers with a desperation that bordered on violent. Rory gasped into the kiss, her hands flying up to clutch the wool of his coat. She pulled him closer, needing the weight of him to anchor her. It wasn't a gentle reunion. It was a collision of resentment and longing, a battle fought with teeth and tongue. Lucien groaned, a sound deep in his chest that vibrated through her own ribs. He backed her into the kitchen counter, the impact sending a jar of cinnamon crashing to the floor. The scent of spice exploded around them, sharp and sweet. He broke the kiss to press his forehead against hers. Both of them were breathing hard, the air in the flat suddenly too thin. "I couldn't leave you to the wolves," he whispered. "I'm not a lamb, Luc." "I know. That's why I'm terrified of you." He shifted his weight, his leg sliding between hers, pinning her against the laminate surface. His hand moved from her neck to her waist, pulling her flush against him. The tailored fabric of his suit felt rough against her palms. Rory tilted her head back, exposing the line of her throat. "You think you can just walk back in here? After the silence? After everything?" "I don't think I can." He kissed the pulse point beneath her jaw, his lips searing. "I know I can't. But I'm here anyway." Rory’s fingers tangled in his platinum blond hair, pulling him back to her lips. The anger was still there, simmering beneath the surface, but the attraction was a flood, sweeping away the debris of the last few months. "You're an arrogant, infuriating bastard." "And you are a stubborn, brilliant disaster." Lucien lifted her, her legs instinctively locking around his waist. He carried her away from the spilled cinnamon, moving toward the bedroom where the light of the streetlamps filtered through the thin curtains in slats of gold and grey. He set her down on the edge of the bed, the mattress dipping under their combined weight. He didn't let go. He couldn't. "I didn't come for the information," he admitted, his voice barely audible over the sound of the rain drumming against the glass. Rory reached for the buttons of his charcoal jacket. "I figured."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"weight"
count5
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"magnetic"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
13
word"simmering"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"weight"
2"scanning"
3"navigated"
4"reminder"
5"could feel"
6"magnetic"
7"sense of"
8"flicker"
9"silence"
10"vibrated"
11"pulse"
12"searing"
13"simmering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1170
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.70% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount899
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Rory13
Eva1
Avaros1
Lucien10
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.777
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a gunshot in the small space"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1170
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean19.18
std16.48
cv0.859
sampleLengths
027
161
210
35
432
55
64
749
827
98
1032
114
126
1367
1416
157
1613
179
1848
195
208
216
2215
2319
249
2512
2636
2714
286
2912
3044
314
322
332
342
3547
3636
3715
3813
3942
4021
4148
4242
4324
449
455
468
4740
4811
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs148
matches
0"was like trying"
1"were breathing"
31.90% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences103
ratio0.039
matches
0"One amber eye caught the flickering overhead light; the other remained a void of absolute black."
1"Every surface groaned under the burden of Eva’s research—scrolls unrolled across the dining table, ink-stained notes taped to the walls."
2"His fingers didn't graze her skin; instead, he hooked a lock of her straight black hair, tucking it behind her ear."
3"He didn't pull away; instead, he closed the distance, his hand sliding from the cane to the nape of her neck."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount905
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02983425414364641
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011049723756906077
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean11.36
std6.7
cv0.59
sampleLengths
015
112
211
321
413
516
62
78
85
93
1020
119
125
134
148
1526
1615
1717
1810
198
206
2113
2213
234
246
2510
2618
2720
2819
2916
307
3113
329
335
3424
3519
365
378
386
3915
4015
414
429
4312
447
4517
4612
4714
486
4912
42.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2524271844660194
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences70
matches
0"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
1"Her hand tightened on the"
2"He simply watched her, his"
3"He stepped forward, not waiting"
4"He paused, his eyes lingering"
5"She turned her back to"
6"He stopped just behind her."
7"He didn't touch her, but"
8"He tilted his head, his"
9"He reached out."
10"His fingers didn't graze her"
11"His touch was cool, yet"
12"He leaned in, his breath"
13"It was like trying to"
14"His jaw tightened, a muscle"
15"He didn't pull away; instead,"
16"His palm was broad, grounding."
17"He pulled her forward, crashing"
18"She pulled him closer, needing"
19"It wasn't a gentle reunion."
ratio0.429
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences70
matches
0"The heavy thud of the"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"Lucien stood in the dim"
3"Rainwater clung to his platinum"
4"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
5"Her hand tightened on the"
6"Lucien didn't move."
7"He simply watched her, his"
8"A single drop of rain"
9"He stepped forward, not waiting"
10"The scent of ozone and"
11"Rory retreated, her shoulder brushing"
12"Ptolemy, the tabby, leaped from"
13"The cat arched his back,"
14"Lucien closed the door behind"
15"The click of the latch"
16"He paused, his eyes lingering"
17"She turned her back to"
18"The flat felt smaller than"
19"Every surface groaned under the"
ratio0.971
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He simply watched her, his gaze scanning her face with the clinical precision of a man who dealt in secrets."
1"Rory retreated, her shoulder brushing against a stack of leather-bound grimoires that threatened to topple."
2"Lucien navigated the minefield of papers with a grace that felt offensive, his cane clicking rhythmically against the hardwood."
3"For a moment, the fixer, the broker, the half-demon vanished, leaving only the man who had once whispered promises into the hollow of her throat in the dead of …"
4"He pulled her forward, crashing his lips against hers with a desperation that bordered on violent."
5"He shifted his weight, his leg sliding between hers, pinning her against the laminate surface."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.125
78.2642%