| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "I spun around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.045 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |
| 77.43% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1329 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "ever so slightly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "ever so slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "really" | | 5 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 28.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1329 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "spectral" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "stark" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "beacon" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1326 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 3 | | wordCount | 777 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 0.26 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1326 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 37.89 | | std | 20.66 | | cv | 0.545 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 42 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 71 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 63 | | 19 | 70 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 72 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 61 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 57 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 25 |
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| 98.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 119 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "His gaze wasn't on the room or the research, but entirely on me, searching for something—a weakness, a confession, or perhaps just a spark of the rage he knew I harboured." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 788 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "cramped, paper-strewn state" | | 1 | "cold, dual-coloured eyes." | | 2 | "small, silver-bound book" |
| | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.0266497461928934 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01015228426395939 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 17.68 | | std | 8.06 | | cv | 0.456 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 31 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 47 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 49.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.36 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 64.10% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the dark hallway" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "I yanked the door open," | | 1 | "My heart hammered against my" | | 2 | "I snapped, the words catching" | | 3 | "He leaned against the doorframe," | | 4 | "His heterochromatic eyes, one warm" | | 5 | "he said, his voice a" | | 6 | "I didn't lower the pan" | | 7 | "He stepped inside, unbidden, the" | | 8 | "He tapped the head of" | | 9 | "he remarked, stepping over a" | | 10 | "I slammed the entry shut," | | 11 | "He turned, his gaze lingering" | | 12 | "He reached out, his fingers" | | 13 | "I walked past him, needing" | | 14 | "My hands shook, ever so" | | 15 | "he muttered, following me into" | | 16 | "He moved with that predatory" | | 17 | "I spun around, the kettle" | | 18 | "He gestured to the room," | | 19 | "I stilled, my back to" |
| | ratio | 0.808 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt slid back" | | 1 | "I yanked the door open," | | 2 | "My heart hammered against my" | | 3 | "I snapped, the words catching" | | 4 | "Lucien didn’t flinch at the" | | 5 | "He leaned against the doorframe," | | 6 | "His heterochromatic eyes, one warm" | | 7 | "he said, his voice a" | | 8 | "I didn't lower the pan" | | 9 | "He stepped inside, unbidden, the" | | 10 | "He tapped the head of" | | 11 | "he remarked, stepping over a" | | 12 | "I slammed the entry shut," | | 13 | "He turned, his gaze lingering" | | 14 | "He reached out, his fingers" | | 15 | "I walked past him, needing" | | 16 | "My hands shook, ever so" | | 17 | "The room suddenly felt suffocatingly" | | 18 | "he muttered, following me into" | | 19 | "He moved with that predatory" |
| | ratio | 0.981 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned against the doorframe, a faint, lopsided smile ghosting over lips that had haunted my dreams for three months." | | 1 | "He reached out, his fingers hovering just a fraction of an inch from the mark before he pulled back, his hand falling to the silver grip of his cane." | | 2 | "The room suddenly felt suffocatingly small, the air thick with the history of late nights and whispered secrets that had curdled into something bitter." | | 3 | "His heart beat there, strong and rhythmic, a steady pulse that mocked my own chaos." | | 4 | "I stared at the book, its worn leather cover holding secrets that should have died alongside my innocence." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his voice a smooth, velvet rasp" | | 1 | "I slammed, the frame rattling under the force" | | 2 | "I spun around, the kettle clattering on the stove burner" | | 3 | "I told, fighting to keep my voice steady" | | 4 | "He shifted, the ivory cane clattering against his leg" | | 5 | "I said, my voice barely audible over the boiling water" | | 6 | "I said, my voice trembling" | | 7 | "He leaned, his eyes flashing with a sudden, sharp hunger" |
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| 13.64% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I snapped (snap)" | | 1 | "he muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "I whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "He laughed (laugh)" | | 4 | "I breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "he agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.545 | | effectiveRatio | 0.273 | |