Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8YQVNMZXJXA2K8JARTZ8ZS

Run Details

Duration:
9.7s
Cost:
$0.003769
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a metallic screech that set my teeth on edge. I yanked the door open, my hand wrapped tight around the handle of a heavy frying pan. My heart hammered against my ribs like a trapped bird. "If that’s the landlord again, he can wait until my shift ends," I snapped, the words catching in my throat as my eyes locked onto the tall, charcoal-clad silhouette looming in the hallway. Lucien didn’t flinch at the sight of the iron cookware. He leaned against the doorframe, a faint, lopsided smile ghosting over lips that had haunted my dreams for three months. His heterochromatic eyes, one warm amber and one cold as a void, scanned the cramped, paper-strewn state of the flat. "I trust the hospitality in East London has improved since my last visit," he said, his voice a smooth, velvet rasp. "Or do you always greet your guests with such enthusiastic weaponry?" "Only the ones who don't deserve an invitation." I didn't lower the pan. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" He stepped inside, unbidden, the scent of expensive sandalwood and something sharp and metallic following him like a spectral trail. He tapped the head of his ivory-handled cane against the floorboards, the click-clack sound perfectly timed with the frantic purr of Ptolemy the tabby, who wound himself around Lucien’s designer trousers. "I heard the delivery routes in Shoreditch were becoming... hazardous," he remarked, stepping over a stack of half-finished research notes. "I thought you might appreciate an escort. Or perhaps a lesson in better security measures. Three deadbolts, Aurora? You’re preparing for a siege, not a night’s sleep." "I’m preparing for people who don't know how to respect a locked door." I slammed the entry shut, the frame rattling under the force. "You and I, we ended this. My life in Cardiff ended, my life with you in Marseille ended. I’m a delivery girl on a bicycle now. My biggest thrill is dodging tourist traffic." "A riveting career progression." He turned, his gaze lingering on the crescent-shaped scar tracing my left wrist. He reached out, his fingers hovering just a fraction of an inch from the mark before he pulled back, his hand falling to the silver grip of his cane. "Yet, you still look over your shoulder when the wind picks up. You still check the exits in every room. You haven't forgotten, have you?" "I chose to forget." I walked past him, needing the distance, heading toward the small, chipped kitchenette to put the kettle on. My hands shook, ever so slightly, as I reached for the mugs. The room suddenly felt suffocatingly small, the air thick with the history of late nights and whispered secrets that had curdled into something bitter. "A lie doesn't become truth just because you whisper it to yourself at midnight," he muttered, following me into the cramped space. He moved with that predatory grace of his, a shadow reclaiming a corner it believed belonged to it. "You left with nothing but what you could carry. But you took my blade’s edge with you, didn't you?" "I took my freedom." I spun around, the kettle clattering on the stove burner. "There’s a difference in this town. Some of us actually work for our keep." "Is that what this is? Work?" He gestured to the room, to the piles of books and the frantic scribblings on the walls detailing supernatural ley lines and local folklore. "This isn't the life of a delivery girl. This is a hunt. You’re tracking them, aren't you?" "I’m minding my business." "You never had the capacity for subtlety, Laila." The use of the name hit me like a slap. I stilled, my back to him, the steam from the kettle starting to hiss. The silence between us stretched, filled with the hum of the city outside and the erratic heartbeat thud-thumping in my ears. "Don't call me that," I whispered. "Change your name, change your hair, move to a city that thrives on anonymity," he said, stepping into my personal space. The heat radiating off him was overwhelming, a reminder of the fire that usually burned behind his cold, dual-coloured eyes. "But you’re still the woman who stood on a cliff edge in Marseille and told a demon exactly where he could go." I turned, backing into the counter until the edge bit into my hips. He was close enough now that I could see the faint, almost imperceptible lines of exhaustion around his eyes, a stark contrast to his impeccable suit. His gaze wasn't on the room or the research, but entirely on me, searching for something—a weakness, a confession, or perhaps just a spark of the rage he knew I harboured. "I wouldn't make the same mistake twice," I told him, fighting to keep my voice steady. "I wouldn't choose a side that requires me to lose myself." "And yet, here you are, knee-deep in the very filth you claimed to despise." He shifted his weight, the ivory cane clattering against his leg. "You need help, Aurora. This flat is a tomb. The wards you’ve scratched into the window frames are amateur at best. If the people hunting you—and we both know they are hunting you—ever decide to look past the front door, your little frying pan won't save you." "Why are you here, really?" I reached out, my fingers brushing against the cold, smooth fabric of his lapel. The contact sent a jolt of static through my skin, a cruel, familiar ache. "Because you miss the challenge? Or because you left something behind in my head that you need to retrieve?" "I left nothing that wasn't already yours." His hand settled over mine, holding it gently against his chest. His heart beat there, strong and rhythmic, a steady pulse that mocked my own chaos. "I am here because the territory is changing. The vacuum left by your departure in Marseille is being filled by things that don't value your brand of defiance." "I can handle myself." "You’re handling a wildfire with a wooden spoon." He leaned down, his lips brushing against the shell of my ear, his breath hot and dangerous. "You think you’re hidden, but you’re a beacon. And when they come, they won't knock, they won't ask for a delivery, and they certainly won't care about the laws of this city." I pulled away, breathless, and snatched the boiling kettle, splashing water into the waiting mugs. The sudden steam obscured my vision, a thick, white shroud of safety. "Go back to your underworld, Lucien," I said, my voice barely audible over the boiling water. "I have a life here. A real one." "A real one?" He laughed, a short, sharp sound devoid of humour. He reached into his coat pocket and slid a small, silver-bound book onto the counter. It was one I hadn't seen in years, one I thought had been lost in the fire. "Then why is this still in your possession?" My stomach dropped. I stared at the book, its worn leather cover holding secrets that should have died alongside my innocence. "I didn't bring that," I said, my voice trembling. "You didn't have to." He leaned his back against the counter, his eyes flashing with a sudden, sharp hunger. "It followed you. It knows you. And as long as it's in this room, those deadlocks on your door are merely placeholders for the inevitable." The floorboards groaned under a weight that didn't belong to either of us. Somewhere in the dark hallway outside, the rhythmic thud-thud of boots echoed, slow and deliberate, moving toward the flat. My grip on the mug tightened until the ceramic groaned in protest. "You weren't the only one who followed," I breathed, realizing the silence in the apartment had shifted. "No," he agreed, his hand moving to the hilt of the blade concealed within his cane. "It seems we are both running out of time."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"I spun around [around]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.045
77.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1329
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"ever so slightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"ever so slightly"
2"suddenly"
3"very"
4"really"
5"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1329
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"looming"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"spectral"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count2
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"beacon"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"looming"
1"scanned"
2"velvet"
3"spectral"
4"tracing"
5"whisper"
6"silence"
7"reminder"
8"stark"
9"weight"
10"familiar"
11"rhythmic"
12"pulse"
13"beacon"
14"stomach"
15"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1326
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions3
wordCount777
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity0.26
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien2
Ptolemy1
persons
0"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1326
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean37.89
std20.66
cv0.545
sampleLengths
042
133
250
332
419
551
647
757
871
94
1054
1159
1228
1347
144
158
1645
176
1863
1970
2027
2172
2252
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244
2557
2627
2724
2852
2921
309
3144
3244
3317
3425
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"been lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs119
matches
0"was overwhelming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences75
ratio0.013
matches
0"His gaze wasn't on the room or the research, but entirely on me, searching for something—a weakness, a confession, or perhaps just a spark of the rage he knew I harboured."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount788
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"cramped, paper-strewn state"
1"cold, dual-coloured eyes."
2"small, silver-bound book"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.0266497461928934
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.01015228426395939
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean17.68
std8.06
cv0.456
sampleLengths
015
117
210
333
410
520
620
721
811
913
106
1120
1231
1320
1427
1524
1633
1717
1829
1925
204
2118
2212
2324
2422
2518
2619
2714
2814
2930
3017
314
328
3310
3414
3521
366
3721
3820
3922
4013
4126
4231
4316
4411
4525
4647
4719
4814
4919
49.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.36
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners27
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Somewhere in the dark hallway"
ratio0.019
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences52
matches
0"I yanked the door open,"
1"My heart hammered against my"
2"I snapped, the words catching"
3"He leaned against the doorframe,"
4"His heterochromatic eyes, one warm"
5"he said, his voice a"
6"I didn't lower the pan"
7"He stepped inside, unbidden, the"
8"He tapped the head of"
9"he remarked, stepping over a"
10"I slammed the entry shut,"
11"He turned, his gaze lingering"
12"He reached out, his fingers"
13"I walked past him, needing"
14"My hands shook, ever so"
15"he muttered, following me into"
16"He moved with that predatory"
17"I spun around, the kettle"
18"He gestured to the room,"
19"I stilled, my back to"
ratio0.808
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences52
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"I yanked the door open,"
2"My heart hammered against my"
3"I snapped, the words catching"
4"Lucien didn’t flinch at the"
5"He leaned against the doorframe,"
6"His heterochromatic eyes, one warm"
7"he said, his voice a"
8"I didn't lower the pan"
9"He stepped inside, unbidden, the"
10"He tapped the head of"
11"he remarked, stepping over a"
12"I slammed the entry shut,"
13"He turned, his gaze lingering"
14"He reached out, his fingers"
15"I walked past him, needing"
16"My hands shook, ever so"
17"The room suddenly felt suffocatingly"
18"he muttered, following me into"
19"He moved with that predatory"
ratio0.981
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He leaned against the doorframe, a faint, lopsided smile ghosting over lips that had haunted my dreams for three months."
1"He reached out, his fingers hovering just a fraction of an inch from the mark before he pulled back, his hand falling to the silver grip of his cane."
2"The room suddenly felt suffocatingly small, the air thick with the history of late nights and whispered secrets that had curdled into something bitter."
3"His heart beat there, strong and rhythmic, a steady pulse that mocked my own chaos."
4"I stared at the book, its worn leather cover holding secrets that should have died alongside my innocence."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"he said, his voice a smooth, velvet rasp"
1"I slammed, the frame rattling under the force"
2"I spun around, the kettle clattering on the stove burner"
3"I told, fighting to keep my voice steady"
4"He shifted, the ivory cane clattering against his leg"
5"I said, my voice barely audible over the boiling water"
6"I said, my voice trembling"
7"He leaned, his eyes flashing with a sudden, sharp hunger"
13.64% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"I snapped (snap)"
1"he muttered (mutter)"
2"I whispered (whisper)"
3"He laughed (laugh)"
4"I breathed (breathe)"
5"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.545
effectiveRatio0.273
74.5823%