| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.923 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 71.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1247 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1247 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "shattered" | | 11 | "crystalline" | | 12 | "silk" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "tapestry" | | 15 | "dancing" | | 16 | "stark" | | 17 | "resonated" | | 18 | "stomach" | | 19 | "perfect" | | 20 | "flickered" | | 21 | "searing" | | 22 | "shimmered" | | 23 | "sense of" | | 24 | "fractured" | | 25 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1238 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.45% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1164 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.03 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 12 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Shade | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.985 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "shadow that seemed to absorb what little moonlight filtered through the clouds" | | 1 | "sounded like silk rubbing against silk, an" | | 2 | "gold that seemed to move like slow-moving currents in an ocean" | | 3 | "looked like a mirror of solid silver" | | 4 | "felt like minutes before finally touchi" |
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| 38.45% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.616 | | wordCount | 1238 | | matches | | 0 | "not with eyes, but with the blood,” Nyx murmured" | | 1 | "not on mud, but on a carpet of wildflowers so thick" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 42.69 | | std | 23.91 | | cv | 0.56 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 94 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 57 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 70 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 64 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 66 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 63 |
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| 85.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "was replaced" | | 1 | "was shattered" | | 2 | "was bathed" | | 3 | "were draped" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | | 0 | "was thrumming" | | 1 | "were standing" | | 2 | "were walking" | | 3 | "was tightening" | | 4 | "were watching" | | 5 | "was searing" | | 6 | "were spinning" | | 7 | "were holding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.169 | | matches | | 0 | "There was no sound of footsteps from the Shade—no crunch of dried leaves, no rustle of fabric." | | 1 | "The voice didn't come from a throat; it was a sound carried on a draft, a soft sibilance that made the hair on Aurora’s arms stand up." | | 2 | "She reached up, her thumb tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit that had returned the moment they left the safety of the city streets." | | 3 | "The smell of wet earth and decaying leaves was replaced by something intoxicating—a heady, cloying scent of crushed jasmine, honeysuckle, and something metallic, like the air right before a lightning strike." | | 4 | "As she stepped through the space between two massive, lichen-crusted oak standing stones, the world didn't just change; it inverted." | | 5 | "The heavy, oppressive silence of the park was shattered by a sudden, vibrant chorus of sounds—the chime of crystalline insects, the low hum of wind moving through leaves that sounded like silk rubbing against silk, and a distant, melodic rushing, like a waterfall made of glass." | | 6 | "It was a swirling tapestry of twilight hues—deep indigo, bruised plum, and streaks of gold that seemed to move like slow-moving currents in an ocean." | | 7 | "As they pushed through a thicket of weeping willow-like trees—whose branches were draped in glowing, translucent filaments—the terrain began to slope downward into a wide, sunken basin." | | 8 | "It wasn't just warm now; it was searing." | | 9 | "Surrounding the pool were ancient ruins—crumbling pillars of a stone that shimmered with a pearlescent sheen, half-swallowed by creeping vines that moved with a slow, serpentine intent." | | 10 | "Aurora watched a petal fall from a nearby flower; it drifted through the air with agonizing slowness, circling and spinning for what felt like minutes before finally touching the ground." | | 11 | "The wonder of the grove remained, but the unease had blossomed into something sharper—a realization that they were no longer mere observers." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1182 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "massive, lichen-crusted oak" | | 2 | "distant, melodic rushing, like" | | 3 | "broad, silver-veined leaf," |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.031302876480541454 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00676818950930626 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 17.44 | | std | 8.93 | | cv | 0.512 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 46 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 46.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3380281690140845 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the faint, rhythmic pulse" | | 1 | "Then, the Veil hit her." |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 51.25% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her hand near" | | 1 | "They didn't so much walk" | | 2 | "She squinted through the gloom," | | 3 | "She reached up, her thumb" | | 4 | "She closed her eyes and" | | 5 | "She stopped trying to pierce" | | 6 | "It wasn't a wall, but" | | 7 | "They were impossible things: petals" | | 8 | "she breathed, the word catching" | | 9 | "It was a swirling tapestry" | | 10 | "They were standing perfectly still," | | 11 | "She reached out to touch" | | 12 | "she said, though a knot" | | 13 | "It felt predatory, as if" | | 14 | "Their violet eyes flickered, catching" | | 15 | "Their bark was white as" | | 16 | "It wasn't just warm now;" | | 17 | "She gripped the pendant through" | | 18 | "They crested the ridge and" | | 19 | "She looked at her watch," |
| | ratio | 0.422 | |
| 53.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp chill of a" | | 1 | "Richmond Park was mostly dark," | | 2 | "She kept her hand near" | | 3 | "They didn't so much walk" | | 4 | "The voice didn't come from" | | 5 | "Aurora said, her breath blooming" | | 6 | "She squinted through the gloom," | | 7 | "She reached up, her thumb" | | 8 | "She closed her eyes and" | | 9 | "She stopped trying to pierce" | | 10 | "The Heartstone was thrumming now," | | 11 | "The smell of wet earth" | | 12 | "It wasn't a wall, but" | | 13 | "The grey mist vanished." | | 14 | "The heavy, oppressive silence of" | | 15 | "Aurora stumbled, her boots landing" | | 16 | "They were impossible things: petals" | | 17 | "she breathed, the word catching" | | 18 | "The sky above wasn't the" | | 19 | "It was a swirling tapestry" |
| | ratio | 0.813 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park was mostly dark, the sprawling expanse of grass and ancient trees swallowed by a thick, grey mist that muffled the distant hum of city traffic." | | 1 | "They didn't so much walk as drift, a silhouette of living shadow that seemed to absorb what little moonlight filtered through the clouds." | | 2 | "She squinted through the gloom, her bright blue eyes searching for the jagged outlines of the ancient oaks that marked the boundary." | | 3 | "She reached up, her thumb tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit that had returned the moment they left the safety of the cit…" | | 4 | "The Heartstone was thrumming now, a steady, rhythmic heat that grew stronger with every step they took toward the center of the park." | | 5 | "They were impossible things: petals of iridescent violet that pulsed with a soft inner light, ferns that unfurled in slow, rhythmic loops, and blossoms the size…" | | 6 | "It was a swirling tapestry of twilight hues—deep indigo, bruised plum, and streaks of gold that seemed to move like slow-moving currents in an ocean." | | 7 | "She reached out to touch a broad, silver-veined leaf, and as her finger brushed it, the plant shivered, emitting a soft, musical note that resonated in her very…" | | 8 | "It felt predatory, as if the landscape itself were watching her, waiting to see if she would trip, or if she would stay." | | 9 | "Surrounding the pool were ancient ruins—crumbling pillars of a stone that shimmered with a pearlescent sheen, half-swallowed by creeping vines that moved with a…" | | 10 | "It was a woman, her silver hair trailing behind her like a comet’s tail, catching the ambient light and throwing it back in dazzling arcs." | | 11 | "She didn't speak, but the air around them seemed to vibrate with a sudden, heavy tension, as if the very atmosphere were holding its breath." | | 12 | "They were intruders in a place where the rules of men, of physics, and of time held no dominion, and the lady in the silver hair looked as though she had been w…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora said, her breath blooming in a white cloud" | | 1 | "she breathed, the word catching in her throat" | | 2 | "Nyx replied, their voice losing its airy quality and turning sharp, alert" | | 3 | "Aurora asked, her voice trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.923 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |