Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8YR8MS010A0ZPTKAE01B8C

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Duration:
2m 12s
Cost:
$0.000624
Provider:
DekaLLM

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The damp chill of a London evening clung to Aurora’s skin, the kind of pervasive cold that seeped through her jacket and settled in her marrow. Richmond Park was mostly dark, the sprawling expanse of grass and ancient trees swallowed by a thick, grey mist that muffled the distant hum of city traffic. She kept her hand near the hilt of the moonsilver dagger at her hip, the Fae-forged blade a constant, freezing weight against her thigh. Beside her, Nyx moved with a fluidity that defied the uneven terrain. They didn't so much walk as drift, a silhouette of living shadow that seemed to absorb what little moonlight filtered through the clouds. There was no sound of footsteps from the Shade—no crunch of dried leaves, no rustle of fabric. Only the faint, rhythmic pulse of the Heartstone pendant against Aurora’s chest, its warmth a small, frantic heartbeat against her skin. “The stones are close,” Nyx whispered. The voice didn't come from a throat; it was a sound carried on a draft, a soft sibilance that made the hair on Aurora’s arms stand up. “I don't see them,” Aurora said, her breath blooming in a white cloud. She squinted through the gloom, her bright blue eyes searching for the jagged outlines of the ancient oaks that marked the boundary. She reached up, her thumb tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit that had returned the moment they left the safety of the city streets. “Look not with eyes, but with the blood,” Nyx murmured. Aurora paused. She closed her eyes and let her focus shift. She stopped trying to pierce the fog and instead leaned into the sensation in her chest. The Heartstone was thrumming now, a steady, rhythmic heat that grew stronger with every step they took toward the center of the park. As she moved forward, guided by the warmth, the air began to change. The smell of wet earth and decaying leaves was replaced by something intoxicating—a heady, cloying scent of crushed jasmine, honeysuckle, and something metallic, like the air right before a lightning strike. Then, the Veil hit her. It wasn't a wall, but a sudden, shimmering distortion in the air, like heat rising from asphalt on a summer day. As she stepped through the space between two massive, lichen-crusted oak standing stones, the world didn't just change; it inverted. The grey mist vanished. The heavy, oppressive silence of the park was shattered by a sudden, vibrant chorus of sounds—the chime of crystalline insects, the low hum of wind moving through leaves that sounded like silk rubbing against silk, and a distant, melodic rushing, like a waterfall made of glass. Aurora stumbled, her boots landing not on mud, but on a carpet of wildflowers so thick and colorful they looked painted. They were impossible things: petals of iridescent violet that pulsed with a soft inner light, ferns that unfurled in slow, rhythmic loops, and blossoms the size of dinner plates that glowed with a pale, amber hue. “Gods,” she breathed, the word catching in her throat. The sky above wasn't the dark, overcast canopy of London. It was a swirling tapestry of twilight hues—deep indigo, bruised plum, and streaks of gold that seemed to move like slow-moving currents in an ocean. There was no sun, yet the entire grove was bathed in a soft, sourceless luminescence that cast long, dancing shadows. “Welcome to the seam,” Nyx said. They were standing perfectly still, their dark form a stark, unsettling contrast against the riot of color. In this light, the Shade looked even less human, a void carved out of a masterpiece. Aurora moved deeper into the clearing, her senses reeling. Every step felt strange, as if the very gravity of the place were slightly tilted. The air felt thick, almost viscous, as if she were walking through a dream made of honey. She reached out to touch a broad, silver-veined leaf, and as her finger brushed it, the plant shivered, emitting a soft, musical note that resonated in her very bones. “It’s beautiful,” she said, though a knot of unease was tightening in her stomach. The beauty was too perfect, too intense. It felt predatory, as if the landscape itself were watching her, waiting to see if she would trip, or if she would stay. “Beauty is a mask the Fae wear to hide the teeth,” Nyx warned. Their violet eyes flickered, catching the light of the glowing flora. As they pushed through a thicket of weeping willow-like trees—whose branches were draped in glowing, translucent filaments—the terrain began to slope downward into a wide, sunken basin. In the center of the basin sat a grove of trees so old they seemed to be made of stone rather than wood. Their bark was white as bone, and their leaves were shards of pure moonlight. Aurora felt the Heartstone pulse violently against her chest. It wasn't just warm now; it was searing. She gripped the pendant through her shirt, her knuckles white. “Something is here,” she whispered. “The Seer is near,” Nyx replied, their voice losing its airy quality and turning sharp, alert. They crested the ridge and looked down into the hollow. In the center of the bone-white trees sat a small, circular pool of water so still it looked like a mirror of solid silver. Surrounding the pool were ancient ruins—crumbling pillars of a stone that shimmered with a pearlescent sheen, half-swallowed by creeping vines that moved with a slow, serpentine intent. The sense of time here was fractured. Aurora watched a petal fall from a nearby flower; it drifted through the air with agonizing slowness, circling and spinning for what felt like minutes before finally touching the ground. She looked at her watch, but the hands were spinning wildly, a blur of silver metal. “How long have we been walking?” Aurora asked, her voice trembling. “In the world outside? Minutes,” Nyx said, stepping beside her. “In here? Perhaps an age. Do not trust the rhythm of your pulse, Aurora. The Grove breathes on its own clock.” A sudden movement near the silver pool caught her eye. A figure was moving among the ruins, appearing and disappearing behind the pillars with an ethereal grace. It was a woman, her silver hair trailing behind her like a comet’s tail, catching the ambient light and throwing it back in dazzling arcs. She moved without sound, leaving no impression on the soft moss beneath her feet. Aurora felt the weight of the Fae-forged blade at her hip, the coldness of it a grounding reality against the feverish magic of the grove. She took a tentative step forward, her boots sinking into the glowing moss. “Isolde?” she called out, her voice sounding thin and fragile in the vast, singing space. The silver-haired woman stopped. She turned slowly, her pale lavender eyes catching Aurora's gaze from across the clearing. She didn't speak, but the air around them seemed to vibrate with a sudden, heavy tension, as if the very atmosphere were holding its breath. The wonder of the grove remained, but the unease had blossomed into something sharper—a realization that they were no longer mere observers. They were intruders in a place where the rules of men, of physics, and of time held no dominion, and the lady in the silver hair looked as though she had been waiting a very long time for them to arrive.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.923
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
71.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1247
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count4
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1247
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count3
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"oppressive"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"crystalline"
count1
12
word"silk"
count2
13
word"pulsed"
count1
14
word"tapestry"
count1
15
word"dancing"
count1
16
word"stark"
count1
17
word"resonated"
count1
18
word"stomach"
count1
19
word"perfect"
count1
20
word"flickered"
count1
21
word"searing"
count1
22
word"shimmered"
count1
23
word"sense of"
count1
24
word"fractured"
count1
25
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"weight"
2"footsteps"
3"rhythmic"
4"pulse"
5"warmth"
6"gloom"
7"tracing"
8"oppressive"
9"silence"
10"shattered"
11"crystalline"
12"silk"
13"pulsed"
14"tapestry"
15"dancing"
16"stark"
17"resonated"
18"stomach"
19"perfect"
20"flickered"
21"searing"
22"shimmered"
23"sense of"
24"fractured"
25"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1238
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.45% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1164
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London2
Aurora12
Park1
Fae-forged2
Nyx7
Shade2
Heartstone3
Veil1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Veil"
places
0"London"
1"Park"
globalScore0.985
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"shadow that seemed to absorb what little moonlight filtered through the clouds"
1"sounded like silk rubbing against silk, an"
2"gold that seemed to move like slow-moving currents in an ocean"
3"looked like a mirror of solid silver"
4"felt like minutes before finally touchi"
38.45% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.616
wordCount1238
matches
0"not with eyes, but with the blood,” Nyx murmured"
1"not on mud, but on a carpet of wildflowers so thick"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"leaves that sounded"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean42.69
std23.91
cv0.56
sampleLengths
077
173
233
364
410
594
65
741
850
957
109
1155
1239
1370
1444
1524
1664
1727
185
1916
2061
2153
2211
2331
2466
2538
2615
2743
2863
85.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences70
matches
0"was replaced"
1"was shattered"
2"was bathed"
3"were draped"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs184
matches
0"was thrumming"
1"were standing"
2"were walking"
3"was tightening"
4"were watching"
5"was searing"
6"were spinning"
7"were holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences71
ratio0.169
matches
0"There was no sound of footsteps from the Shade—no crunch of dried leaves, no rustle of fabric."
1"The voice didn't come from a throat; it was a sound carried on a draft, a soft sibilance that made the hair on Aurora’s arms stand up."
2"She reached up, her thumb tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit that had returned the moment they left the safety of the city streets."
3"The smell of wet earth and decaying leaves was replaced by something intoxicating—a heady, cloying scent of crushed jasmine, honeysuckle, and something metallic, like the air right before a lightning strike."
4"As she stepped through the space between two massive, lichen-crusted oak standing stones, the world didn't just change; it inverted."
5"The heavy, oppressive silence of the park was shattered by a sudden, vibrant chorus of sounds—the chime of crystalline insects, the low hum of wind moving through leaves that sounded like silk rubbing against silk, and a distant, melodic rushing, like a waterfall made of glass."
6"It was a swirling tapestry of twilight hues—deep indigo, bruised plum, and streaks of gold that seemed to move like slow-moving currents in an ocean."
7"As they pushed through a thicket of weeping willow-like trees—whose branches were draped in glowing, translucent filaments—the terrain began to slope downward into a wide, sunken basin."
8"It wasn't just warm now; it was searing."
9"Surrounding the pool were ancient ruins—crumbling pillars of a stone that shimmered with a pearlescent sheen, half-swallowed by creeping vines that moved with a slow, serpentine intent."
10"Aurora watched a petal fall from a nearby flower; it drifted through the air with agonizing slowness, circling and spinning for what felt like minutes before finally touching the ground."
11"The wonder of the grove remained, but the unease had blossomed into something sharper—a realization that they were no longer mere observers."
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1182
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"massive, lichen-crusted oak"
2"distant, melodic rushing, like"
3"broad, silver-veined leaf,"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.031302876480541454
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00676818950930626
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean17.44
std8.93
cv0.512
sampleLengths
026
127
224
312
423
517
621
76
827
913
1022
1129
1210
132
149
1516
1623
1713
1831
195
2021
2120
224
2346
2421
2536
269
2710
2825
2920
306
3117
3216
339
3415
3517
3629
3714
387
3923
4013
4111
4227
4323
4414
459
468
4710
485
4916
46.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3380281690140845
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"Only the faint, rhythmic pulse"
1"Then, the Veil hit her."
ratio0.031
51.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences64
matches
0"She kept her hand near"
1"They didn't so much walk"
2"She squinted through the gloom,"
3"She reached up, her thumb"
4"She closed her eyes and"
5"She stopped trying to pierce"
6"It wasn't a wall, but"
7"They were impossible things: petals"
8"she breathed, the word catching"
9"It was a swirling tapestry"
10"They were standing perfectly still,"
11"She reached out to touch"
12"she said, though a knot"
13"It felt predatory, as if"
14"Their violet eyes flickered, catching"
15"Their bark was white as"
16"It wasn't just warm now;"
17"She gripped the pendant through"
18"They crested the ridge and"
19"She looked at her watch,"
ratio0.422
53.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences64
matches
0"The damp chill of a"
1"Richmond Park was mostly dark,"
2"She kept her hand near"
3"They didn't so much walk"
4"The voice didn't come from"
5"Aurora said, her breath blooming"
6"She squinted through the gloom,"
7"She reached up, her thumb"
8"She closed her eyes and"
9"She stopped trying to pierce"
10"The Heartstone was thrumming now,"
11"The smell of wet earth"
12"It wasn't a wall, but"
13"The grey mist vanished."
14"The heavy, oppressive silence of"
15"Aurora stumbled, her boots landing"
16"They were impossible things: petals"
17"she breathed, the word catching"
18"The sky above wasn't the"
19"It was a swirling tapestry"
ratio0.813
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"Richmond Park was mostly dark, the sprawling expanse of grass and ancient trees swallowed by a thick, grey mist that muffled the distant hum of city traffic."
1"They didn't so much walk as drift, a silhouette of living shadow that seemed to absorb what little moonlight filtered through the clouds."
2"She squinted through the gloom, her bright blue eyes searching for the jagged outlines of the ancient oaks that marked the boundary."
3"She reached up, her thumb tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit that had returned the moment they left the safety of the cit…"
4"The Heartstone was thrumming now, a steady, rhythmic heat that grew stronger with every step they took toward the center of the park."
5"They were impossible things: petals of iridescent violet that pulsed with a soft inner light, ferns that unfurled in slow, rhythmic loops, and blossoms the size…"
6"It was a swirling tapestry of twilight hues—deep indigo, bruised plum, and streaks of gold that seemed to move like slow-moving currents in an ocean."
7"She reached out to touch a broad, silver-veined leaf, and as her finger brushed it, the plant shivered, emitting a soft, musical note that resonated in her very…"
8"It felt predatory, as if the landscape itself were watching her, waiting to see if she would trip, or if she would stay."
9"Surrounding the pool were ancient ruins—crumbling pillars of a stone that shimmered with a pearlescent sheen, half-swallowed by creeping vines that moved with a…"
10"It was a woman, her silver hair trailing behind her like a comet’s tail, catching the ambient light and throwing it back in dazzling arcs."
11"She didn't speak, but the air around them seemed to vibrate with a sudden, heavy tension, as if the very atmosphere were holding its breath."
12"They were intruders in a place where the rules of men, of physics, and of time held no dominion, and the lady in the silver hair looked as though she had been w…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Aurora said, her breath blooming in a white cloud"
1"she breathed, the word catching in her throat"
2"Nyx replied, their voice losing its airy quality and turning sharp, alert"
3"Aurora asked, her voice trembling"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
3"Nyx warned (warn)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.923
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
60.7176%