| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Miller stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.517 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 96.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1439 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.36% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1439 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shattered" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "standard" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "chaotic" | | 7 | "intricate" | | 8 | "furrowed" | | 9 | "charged" | | 10 | "tension" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "echoing" | | 13 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 9.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1435 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.75% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1038 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.45 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 15 | | Miller | 10 | | Sergeant | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | North | 1 | | South | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Compass | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Miller" | | 3 | "Sergeant" | | 4 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.777 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 42.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "atmosphere that seemed to cling to the lungs, thick with the scent of damp concrete and something sharper, something metallic" | | 1 | "sigils that seemed to shift if she looked at them too long" | | 2 | "seemed denser here" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.697 | | wordCount | 1435 | | matches | | 0 | "not touching the wall, but hovering her hand just inches from the blood" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 36.79 | | std | 21.83 | | cv | 0.593 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 80 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 83 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 70 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 45 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 70 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 26 |
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| 97.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "was crouched" | | 1 | "was dressed" |
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| 85.71% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't spreading" | | 1 | "was pointing" | | 2 | "was waiting" |
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| 28.57% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a sensation she hadn't felt since the night Morris died—a cold, creeping dread that defied logic." | | 1 | "It hummed—a low, subsonic vibration that she felt in her teeth." | | 2 | "She noticed something then—a faint, shimmering residue on the rusted ironwork, a fine dust that glittered like crushed pearls in her flashlight beam." | | 3 | "She didn't pick it up; instead, she knelt and inspected the ground around it." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1043 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.024928092042186004 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00862895493767977 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 14.35 | | std | 8.29 | | cv | 0.578 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 40.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.36 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 81.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it seemed to be" | | 1 | "Somewhere deep in that blackness," |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 15.12% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a heavy, stagnant" | | 1 | "She adjusted the collar of" | | 2 | "She checked her left wrist." | | 3 | "He looked up as she" | | 4 | "Her voice was a low," | | 5 | "He was dressed in a" | | 6 | "His eyes were open, staring" | | 7 | "He pointed to a discarded," | | 8 | "She didn't look at the" | | 9 | "She looked at the blood." | | 10 | "It was a sensation she" | | 11 | "she said softly" | | 12 | "She pointed to the way" | | 13 | "It wasn't spreading naturally toward" | | 14 | "She reached into her pocket" | | 15 | "It was a brass compass," | | 16 | "She had confiscated it from" | | 17 | "She set the Veil Compass" | | 18 | "It didn't point toward the" | | 19 | "It spun violently, a frantic," |
| | ratio | 0.512 | |
| 8.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned" | | 1 | "It was a heavy, stagnant" | | 2 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over" | | 3 | "She adjusted the collar of" | | 4 | "She checked her left wrist." | | 5 | "The worn leather strap of" | | 6 | "The beam of her flashlight" | | 7 | "Detective Miller was crouched near" | | 8 | "He looked up as she" | | 9 | "Her voice was a low," | | 10 | "Miller said, gesturing with a" | | 11 | "Quinn stepped into the circle" | | 12 | "The victim lay sprawled on" | | 13 | "He was dressed in a" | | 14 | "His eyes were open, staring" | | 15 | "Quinn asked, her brown eyes" | | 16 | "He pointed to a discarded," | | 17 | "Quinn knelt by the body," | | 18 | "She didn't look at the" | | 19 | "She looked at the blood." |
| | ratio | 0.902 | |
| 60.98% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 45.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a heavy, stagnant atmosphere that seemed to cling to the lungs, thick with the scent of damp concrete and something sharper, something metallic." | | 1 | "She adjusted the collar of her coat, her movements governed by a military precision that refused to buckle, even in the gloom of a subterranean tomb." | | 2 | "It was a sensation she hadn't felt since the night Morris died—a cold, creeping dread that defied logic." | | 3 | "She had confiscated it from a crime scene months ago, a piece of evidence that had sat in her desk, unclassified, because she couldn't explain it." | | 4 | "She noticed something then—a faint, shimmering residue on the rusted ironwork, a fine dust that glittered like crushed pearls in her flashlight beam." | | 5 | "It was colder, charged with a static tension that made her skin itch." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn asked, her brown eyes narrowing" | | 1 | "Quinn countered, her eyes tracing the trajectory of the spray" | | 2 | "Miller offered, though his voice lacked conviction" | | 3 | "Miller stepped back, his brow furrowed" | | 4 | "Quinn whispered, more to herself than to Miller" | | 5 | "Miller said, a nervous laugh escaping him" | | 6 | "Quinn snapped, her eyes flashing" | | 7 | "Quinn ordered, her voice hardening into a blade" | | 8 | "Miller called out, his voice echoing uncomfortably in the hollow station" |
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| 12.07% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Quinn snapped (snap)" | | 2 | "Quinn ordered (order)" | | 3 | "Miller called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.379 | | leniency | 0.759 | | rawRatio | 0.364 | | effectiveRatio | 0.276 | |