Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8YX2ZVGHRBTX2BNTD28W74

Run Details

Duration:
2m 28s
Cost:
$0.001405
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The city lights of London bled into a dull, amber haze behind her, dying out as the manicured paths of Richmond Park surrendered to the encroaching dark. Aurora pushed a stray lock of black hair behind her ear, her fingers trembling just enough to notice. The air grew heavy, thick with the scent of damp earth and something cloyingly sweet, like lilies left too long in a vase. She gripped the strap of her bag, her knuckles white. "Just the boundary." The words felt thin against the oppressive silence. The urban hum—the distant groan of traffic, the siren’s wail—had vanished, replaced by a stillness so absolute it hummed in her ears. She stepped over a protruding root, her boots sinking into moss that felt unnaturally plush, almost like velvet. The moonlight struggled to penetrate the canopy, casting long, distorted shadows that danced across the path. Every time she blinked, the shadows seemed to reposition themselves, stretching toward her heels. The Heartstone pendant grew warm against her chest. It wasn't the warmth of a sun-soaked stone, but a rhythmic, thrumming heat that mimicked a heartbeat. It pulsed through the silver chain, a steady *thump-thump* against her sternum. She reached the first of the ancient oak standing stones. The bark looked like wrinkled skin, grey and textured with deep, jagged fissures. The stones stood in a crooked line, marking the threshold where the world felt skewed. "You're in the wrong place, Rory." She ignored her own voice, focusing on the path ahead. The wildflowers here defied the season. Pale, translucent blossoms drifted in the darkness, glowing with a faint, sickly luminescence. They swayed even though the air remained motionless. A snap echoed from the thicket to her left. Aurora froze. She held her breath, her lungs burning. The sound hadn't been the brittle crack of a twig under a deer’s weight. It had been heavy, a deliberate splintering of wood. She peered into the gloom. The dark between the trees felt dense, a physical barrier that refused to let light pass. "Who's there?" No answer came, but the silence changed. It lost its emptiness and gained a weight, as if the atmosphere itself were pressing against her skin. The pulse of the Heartstone intensified, the crimson light of the gem bleeding through the fabric of her shirt. She took a step forward, then another. The ground beneath her feet felt different—less like soil, more like something yielding and soft. The time felt distorted. She had walked for what felt like an hour, yet her watch indicated only minutes had passed since she entered the park gates. A movement flickered in her peripheral vision. A tall, spindly shape drifted between two oaks, gone before she could turn her head. She spun around, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. "Show yourself." The woods offered nothing but the scent of rot and the mocking glow of the wildflowers. She forced her legs to move, her pace quickening toward the center of the grove. The deeper she went, the more the trees seemed to lean inward, their branches interlacing like skeletal fingers. The oaks no longer looked like plants; they looked like sentinels, frozen in mid-stride. The Heartstone surged with heat, a sudden, searing bloom of temperature that made her gasp. She reached up, clutching the pendant through her jacket. The crimson glow was unmistakable now, casting a bloody hue onto her pale hands. A low, melodic hum drifted through the air. It wasn't a song, but a vibration that settled deep in her marrow. It sounded like dozens of voices whispering just out of reach, a cacophony of sibilant sounds that lacked any recognizable language. She stopped. The humming stopped. She took a breath. The humming resumed, louder this time, coming from directly behind her. Aurora bolted. She lunged through the undergrowth, thorns tearing at her jacket and scratching her forearms. She didn't look back, but she could feel the air shifting behind her, a displacement of weight that suggested something large and limping was following her stride for stride. She tripped over a stone, tumbling into the dirt. The impact knocked the wind from her lungs. She scrambled to her knees, her eyes wide, scanning the darkness. The wildflowers brushed against her legs. They were taller than she remembered, their glowing petals stroking her skin like cold, wet tongues. "Stay away." She scrambled backward, her palms scraping against the grit. In the dim light, she saw them. Eyes. Not the reflective glint of a predator in the night, but soft, bioluminescent orbs peering from the hollows of the oak trees. They didn't blink. They sat at various heights—some low to the ground, others peering down from the high branches—all fixed on her. The Heartstone pulsed with such violence she thought the silver chain might snap. The crimson light flared, illuminating the space in front of her. A figure stood ten feet away. It lacked a face, possessing only a smooth, pale expanse of skin where features should have been. It stood unnaturally still, its limbs too long, its joints bending at angles that defied human anatomy. The creature tilted its head, a slow, mechanical movement. The humming reached a crescendo, a deafening roar of whispers that drowned out the sound of her own ragged breathing. The shadows at the edge of the light began to peel away from the trees, rising like smoke, coalescing into more of the faceless shapes. Aurora gripped the pendant, the heat of it the only thing anchoring her to the ground. "I didn't mean to come here." The figure stepped into the crimson glow, its movements fluid and silent. It raised a hand, the fingers tapering into long, needle-like points. The ground beneath her began to vibrate. The very earth felt as though it were breathing, a slow, rhythmic heaving that tossed her off balance. The boundary was gone. There was no park, no London, no way back. There was only the grove, the pulsing red light, and the encroaching circle of silent, watching things.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1013
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1013
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"oppressive"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"sentinels"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
13
word"cacophony"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"scanning"
count1
16
word"glint"
count1
17
word"predator"
count1
18
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"oppressive"
1"silence"
2"velvet"
3"warmth"
4"rhythmic"
5"pulsed"
6"echoed"
7"weight"
8"gloom"
9"pulse"
10"flickered"
11"sentinels"
12"searing"
13"cacophony"
14"could feel"
15"scanning"
16"glint"
17"predator"
18"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
53.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1009
ratio0.001
matches
0"thump-thump"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount988
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
London2
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone4
Aurora4
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
7.14% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like wrinkled skin, grey and textu"
1"felt like an hour, yet her watch indica"
2"looked like plants; they looked like sent"
3"looked like sentinels, frozen in mid-stri"
4"sounded like dozens of voices whispering j"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.991
wordCount1009
matches
0"Not the reflective glint of a predator in the night, but soft, bioluminescent orbs peering from the hollows of the oa"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean25.87
std17.98
cv0.695
sampleLengths
068
110
23
330
448
537
638
76
837
99
1032
1121
122
1344
1449
1522
1612
172
1816
1947
2038
2142
225
234
2411
2545
2628
2722
282
299
3052
3124
3240
339
3445
3516
366
3723
3855
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was following"
1"were breathing"
9.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences86
ratio0.047
matches
0"The urban hum—the distant groan of traffic, the siren’s wail—had vanished, replaced by a stillness so absolute it hummed in her ears."
1"The ground beneath her feet felt different—less like soil, more like something yielding and soft."
2"The oaks no longer looked like plants; they looked like sentinels, frozen in mid-stride."
3"They sat at various heights—some low to the ground, others peering down from the high branches—all fixed on her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount994
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03319919517102616
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01006036217303823
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean11.73
std6.37
cv0.543
sampleLengths
027
118
223
310
43
58
622
718
816
914
108
1117
1212
1310
1413
1515
166
1710
186
1913
208
219
222
237
2414
259
265
2716
282
297
3018
3119
327
3315
344
3523
367
3715
3812
392
4016
4115
4218
4314
4415
459
4614
478
4813
4921
29.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.22093023255813954
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners19
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Pale, translucent blossoms drifted in"
ratio0.013
62.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences76
matches
0"She gripped the strap of"
1"She stepped over a protruding"
2"It wasn't the warmth of"
3"It pulsed through the silver"
4"She reached the first of"
5"She ignored her own voice,"
6"They swayed even though the"
7"She held her breath, her"
8"It had been heavy, a"
9"She peered into the gloom."
10"It lost its emptiness and"
11"She took a step forward,"
12"She had walked for what"
13"She spun around, her heart"
14"She forced her legs to"
15"She reached up, clutching the"
16"It wasn't a song, but"
17"It sounded like dozens of"
18"She took a breath."
19"She lunged through the undergrowth,"
ratio0.395
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences76
matches
0"The city lights of London"
1"Aurora pushed a stray lock"
2"The air grew heavy, thick"
3"She gripped the strap of"
4"The words felt thin against"
5"The urban hum—the distant groan"
6"She stepped over a protruding"
7"The moonlight struggled to penetrate"
8"Every time she blinked, the"
9"The Heartstone pendant grew warm"
10"It wasn't the warmth of"
11"It pulsed through the silver"
12"She reached the first of"
13"The bark looked like wrinkled"
14"The stones stood in a"
15"She ignored her own voice,"
16"The wildflowers here defied the"
17"They swayed even though the"
18"A snap echoed from the"
19"She held her breath, her"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She stepped over a protruding root, her boots sinking into moss that felt unnaturally plush, almost like velvet."
1"The moonlight struggled to penetrate the canopy, casting long, distorted shadows that danced across the path."
2"It wasn't the warmth of a sun-soaked stone, but a rhythmic, thrumming heat that mimicked a heartbeat."
3"It lost its emptiness and gained a weight, as if the atmosphere itself were pressing against her skin."
4"The Heartstone surged with heat, a sudden, searing bloom of temperature that made her gasp."
5"It stood unnaturally still, its limbs too long, its joints bending at angles that defied human anatomy."
6"The humming reached a crescendo, a deafening roar of whispers that drowned out the sound of her own ragged breathing."
7"The very earth felt as though it were breathing, a slow, rhythmic heaving that tossed her off balance."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.2340%