| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 87.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1243 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1243 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "racing" | | 4 | "unreadable" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "kaleidoscope" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "marble" | | 12 | "tangible" | | 13 | "pang" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "mechanical" | | 16 | "intensity" | | 17 | "synchronized" | | 18 | "dance" | | 19 | "stomach" | | 20 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1238 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.73% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1094 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.65 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Aurora | 18 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Shade | 3 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Dymas | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Half-Fae" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Shade" | | 7 | "Fae" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.677 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like oil on water, a translucent r" | | 1 | "shadow that seemed to drink the light around them" | | 2 | "felt like stepping through a curtain of" | | 3 | "void that seemed to open up in the center of her chest" | | 4 | "looked like melted rubies" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.808 | | wordCount | 1238 | | matches | | 0 | "not the usual emptiness of a missed meal, but a ravenous, aching void" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 38.69 | | std | 20.05 | | cv | 0.518 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 80 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 68 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 66 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 55 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 80 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 51 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 64 | | 31 | 46 |
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| 92.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "were fixed" | | 1 | "been given" | | 2 | "were stained" |
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| 1.59% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "was following" | | 1 | "were standing" | | 2 | "was vibrating" | | 3 | "wasn't running" | | 4 | "was hunting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant didn’t just pulse; it throbbed against Aurora’s collarbone, a rhythmic heat that mirrored the racing beat of her own heart." | | 1 | "She didn't know why she had been given these things, or why she was following a riddle-speaking exile and a shadow-being into a tear in reality, but the logic of her old life—the law books, the delivery routes, the crushing weight of Cardiff—felt a million miles away." | | 2 | "She felt a sudden, sharp pang of hunger—not the usual emptiness of a missed meal, but a ravenous, aching void that seemed to open up in the center of her chest." | | 3 | "The flowers weren't just colorful; they were fleshy." | | 4 | "When a breeze drifted through, the flowers didn't rustle; they sighed." | | 5 | "Beyond it lay a series of grand, open-air kitchens—colossal structures of white stone and gold leaf." | | 6 | "The amber sky wasn't a sunset; it was a glow of fermentation and decay." | | 7 | "It was no longer throbbing; it was vibrating, a frantic signal guiding them toward the heart of the kitchens." | | 8 | "As they moved toward the white stone spires, the sound of distant music began to drift toward them—a lush, orchestral swell that felt too rich, too heavy." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1107 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "Massive, trumpet-shaped blooms" |
| | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.028003613369467027 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008130081300813009 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 13.76 | | std | 7.27 | | cv | 0.528 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 51.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.34444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 42.74% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the faint, violet glow" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 81.54% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She gripped the silver chain," | | 1 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 2 | "She didn't leave footprints in" | | 3 | "She didn't know why she" | | 4 | "She stepped forward, bracing for" | | 5 | "It felt like stepping through" | | 6 | "She gasped, her lungs filling" | | 7 | "They were standing on the" | | 8 | "It was a garden the" | | 9 | "She felt a sudden, sharp" | | 10 | "She noticed the vegetation changing" | | 11 | "They reached a crossroads marked" | | 12 | "They were humans, or had" | | 13 | "They moved with a sluggish," | | 14 | "Their skin was a pale," | | 15 | "They wore fine linen clothes" | | 16 | "He simply placed the berries" | | 17 | "She found herself stepping toward" | | 18 | "She was inches away from" | | 19 | "She stepped back, her heart" |
| | ratio | 0.346 | |
| 62.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant didn’t just" | | 1 | "She gripped the silver chain," | | 2 | "The Veil looked like oil" | | 3 | "The Half-Fae’s silver hair caught" | | 4 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 5 | "She didn't leave footprints in" | | 6 | "Isolde murmured, her voice sounding" | | 7 | "Aurora frowned, glancing at Nyx." | | 8 | "The Shade was barely a" | | 9 | "The voice wasn't a voice" | | 10 | "Aurora took a deep breath," | | 11 | "The moonsilver hilt was ice-cold" | | 12 | "She didn't know why she" | | 13 | "Aurora said, her voice steadier" | | 14 | "She stepped forward, bracing for" | | 15 | "It felt like stepping through" | | 16 | "Aurora stumbled, her boots landing" | | 17 | "She gasped, her lungs filling" | | 18 | "They were standing on the" | | 19 | "The sky was a seamless," |
| | ratio | 0.795 | |
| 64.10% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Even from a distance, Aurora" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant didn’t just pulse; it throbbed against Aurora’s collarbone, a rhythmic heat that mirrored the racing beat of her own heart." | | 1 | "Aurora stumbled, her boots landing on soil that felt unnervingly soft, like crushed velvet." | | 2 | "She gasped, her lungs filling with air that was thick, humid, and cloyingly sweet." | | 3 | "Vast vineyards stretched toward the horizon, the vines heavy with grapes that glowed with an inner, iridescent light." | | 4 | "Massive, tiered fountains erupted from the earth, but instead of water, they spewed thick, golden honey and deep violet wines that cascaded into marble basins." | | 5 | "She felt a sudden, sharp pang of hunger—not the usual emptiness of a missed meal, but a ravenous, aching void that seemed to open up in the center of her chest." | | 6 | "They wore fine linen clothes that were stained and tattered, their movements synchronized in a grotesque dance of servitude." | | 7 | "She found herself stepping toward the vine, her hand reaching out instinctively." | | 8 | "The Shade shifted, their form expanding into a towering wall of darkness that blocked her path." | | 9 | "As they moved toward the white stone spires, the sound of distant music began to drift toward them—a lush, orchestral swell that felt too rich, too heavy." | | 10 | "She was a delivery girl from London, a dropout from Cardiff, a woman who had spent years running from shadows." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her voice sounding like wind through chimes" | | 1 | "Aurora said, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 2 | "Isolde warned, her voice devoid of its usual playfulness" | | 3 | "Aurora said, her voice tight" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "the Shade whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 5 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.6 | |